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Mc-Itty
05-16-2006, 10:46 AM
Due On Friday...Fuck A timing since y'all bitch, ima close it by Saturday.
4 bars - 8 lines.
Ima vote.
No biting/recyclin
No flippin or feedin either.

Pm me with any questions, dont flood this thread :)

Slim Shady 22
05-16-2006, 12:08 PM
checkin in...........g/l serenity:)

Slim Shady 22
05-19-2006, 07:43 PM
aight soz it so late but i ttl forgoy bout it lol


yo ima fuck ure mind up, send ya to an insane asylum,
drive u fuckin crazy, u cant escape the violence,

dont be fuckin wid me bitch, coz i bin causin atrocities,
slicin out ya eyes, ya gon be in pain constantly,

serenity dont stand no chance, u aint got expierience,
u think u gon battle me, u must be delirious,


ye w/e lol

DKB_Serenity
05-19-2006, 09:20 PM
Thanks Slim But I won't Hold Back Jus 2 Let u Know....Checkin in..Welcome 2 DkB

DKB_Serenity
05-19-2006, 09:36 PM
So many of these fake slims but i'll show u a real duece-duece(22), shattered ya frame. have you shook screaming till your body's battered-and-hanged

crazier den drinkin soup wit a fork , you can't beat me, bet -fifteen
creep in ya room stab you with tha same fork in ya sleep, then convince you your having wet-dreams

slim dick mutha fucka i could'a murked u with this one line,
if i castrated you put ya penis on my chain , that's tha only way ya dick could have hangtime.

Mc-Itty
05-20-2006, 05:06 AM
..Both Drops are late....

Slim:

yo ima fuck ure mind up, send ya to an insane asylum,
drive u fuckin crazy, u cant escape the violence,

dont be fuckin wid me bitch, coz i bin causin atrocities,
slicin out ya eyes, ya gon be in pain constantly,

serenity dont stand no chance, u aint got expierience,
u think u gon battle me, u must be delirious,

Ur last battle, i broke it down and said everything was cool but u lacked personals which is one the main things in battles....U still dont have any personals >_<


Serenity:


So many of these fake slims but i'll show u a real duece-duece(22), shattered ya frame. have you shook screaming till your body's battered-and-hanged
...no..those werent multis..this was ur worst bar, completely needa re word this.

crazier den drinkin soup wit a fork , you can't beat me, bet -fifteen
creep in ya room stab you with tha same fork in ya sleep, then convince you your having wet-dreams
Flow is horrible on this, so u stabbing him with a fork but tellin him its a wet dream?...

slim dick mutha fucka i could'a murked u with this one line,
if i castrated you put ya penis on my chain , that's tha only way ya dick could have hangtime
Decent, this was coo



Flow: Slim
Structure: Slim
Punches: Tie
Personals: None
Multis: Serenity
Humour: Serenity
Vocab: Tie


I think Serenity Edged this.