ElectricalXcess vs Huff (6-2)

[ArchimedeZ]

OK 3 Bars
No Order So Drop When You Like
DEADLINE FRIDAY AT THE LATEST
No Feeding / Flipping / Biting / Recycling
No Hate Votes
ALL VOTES BBB

Good Luck

[ArchimedeZ]

Let Me Get This Out Of The Way

OK...

“Your Stores Is Depleted”, Like I Huffed And Puffed And Blew This Piggy’s Bank Down/
Smack You Tight Fisted Like Scrooge Cus I Spoiled Your Pranks Now/-1

Got Him “Leaving Town“, He Elopin With His Boyfriend Like I Heard Him Flee Them/
“Indigestion”, Ate This Battle This Morning Only Broke Down His Verse In PM//-2


Make Music? People Only “Jumpin To Your Beat” When They Leapin On Hand Drums/
And You Only Be A Huff Daddy Cus Ya Sleepin With Tantrums//-3


Explanations

-1: Self Explanatory
-2: In his profile he says he “currently” from ridgetown
He PM me askin to break down one of his previous battles
-3: In his profile he says his interest is makin music
His email address is huffdaddy66


DROP BY END OF TODAY

[Huff]

aight then man ....

shit, id never leave d-ridge we's a hardcore town /
just like dem terrorist that bombed the london underground//

man ur fuckin rhymes are so fuckin tired i dont know where to begin/
cuz honestly man they fuckin stupid like blind men pissin in the wind//

im native american i beat my drums with wack rappers skulls/
like electical excess, cuz his rhymes are old and shitty like aerials//

ok i geuss since u broke it down i will...

1st.- ridgetown is were i live some ppl call it d-ridge and since hes from the uk had to thow in the sumthin bout that

2nd-self explanitory

3rd- iam native so and aerials ar the old style antennas that came before cable

[ArchimedeZ]

OK let you off with the first line, and feeding off my verse too.

UPPIN VOTES people

[Huff]

srry bout that dude im new im tryin to move away from that

[ArchimedeZ]

It's OK bro, we cool

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=17228
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=17135

my links^^

[ArchimedeZ]

Huff get ya links

UPPIN VOTES

[ArchimedeZ]

get some votes on this

[Huff]

aight then ive only voted on one battle so....

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=215019#post215019

[ArchimedeZ]

uppin votes

[ArcheType]

ElectricalXcess

“Your Stores Is Depleted”, Like I Huffed And Puffed And Blew This Piggy’s Bank Down/
Smack You Tight Fisted Like Scrooge Cus I Spoiled Your Pranks Now/-1
Aight operner, play wit name etc

Got Him “Leaving Town“, He Elopin With His Boyfriend Like I Heard Him Flee Them/
“Indigestion”, Ate This Battle This Morning Only Broke Down His Verse In PM//-2
Some personals but only jabs realy, but elevatin from last bar

Make Music? People Only “Jumpin To Your Beat” When They Leapin On Hand Drums/
And You Only Be A Huff Daddy Cus Ya Sleepin With Tantrums//-3
Some mo personal jabs realy no real hard closer, rhymed gud thou, aight

Huff

shit, id never leave d-ridge we's a hardcore town /
just like dem terrorist that bombed the london underground//
aint likin that use of them bombs in london, coulda worked but came out offensive n made ya luked gay, to deep n big a situation fo a weak emcee...ya knw..

man ur fuckin rhymes are so fuckin tired i dont know where to begin/
cuz honestly man they fuckin stupid like blind men pissin in the wind//
didnt ryme well, weak vocab, reapaetin fuckin in text aint work, elevate vocab

im native american i beat my drums with wack rappers skulls/
like electical excess, cuz his rhymes are old and shitty like aerials//
last line soundin like you was setin up a closer wit a ryme to excess? didnt flow, weak closer..n kinda dissed ya self sayn yo backwards n still not got cable?

Overall: ElectricalXcess

[ArchimedeZ]

thanks for the vote, 1-0 me UPPIN

[ArchimedeZ]

1-0 me UPPIN

[Rowe]

@ electrical x- nice drop elevated nice, nice rhythem
@ huff- dont like the opening (being english) but others might?, 2nd verse was good but didnt rhyme, last verse was the strongest out of the 3 but im confused about the arials?

my vote is .............................. X

[ArchimedeZ]

thanks b, 2-0 me UPPIN for the KO

[R>A>Y]

to x-well man i didnt really like ya verse u know i just didnt feel it it wasnt funny and shit neither it has some good rhymes...well i liked the name-game tho but thats it sry man
to huff-man ur dope as fuck man i dunno why they voted against ya i mean ur verse was funny+dope also nice bout the terrorrism thing lil mean tho ;)
i like it cuz u found a way to link it with his nationality:Pvery creative and original
my vote is for huff yo

[ArchimedeZ]

ok man that's cool. let's have some rappers voting on this now then. ;)

2-1 me UPPIN

[Jakey Boi]

ElectricalXcess

“Your Stores Is Depleted”, Like I Huffed And Puffed And Blew This Piggy’s Bank Down/
Smack You Tight Fisted Like Scrooge Cus I Spoiled Your Pranks Now/-1
Average opener 3/5

Got Him “Leaving Town“, He Elopin With His Boyfriend Like I Heard Him Flee Them/
“Indigestion”, Ate This Battle This Morning Only Broke Down His Verse In PM//-2
Like the concept in here good bar

Make Music? People Only “Jumpin To Your Beat” When They Leapin On Hand Drums/
And You Only Be A Huff Daddy Cus Ya Sleepin With Tantrums//-3
Average closer again but still enuf to take it....

Huff

shit, id never leave d-ridge we's a hardcore town /
just like dem terrorist that bombed the london underground//
nah dont like this one bit 1/5

man ur fuckin rhymes are so fuckin tired i dont know where to begin/
cuz honestly man they fuckin stupid like blind men pissin in the wind//
ok better than 1st

im native american i beat my drums with wack rappers skulls/
like electical excess, cuz his rhymes are old and shitty like aerials//
nah weak closer dawg....

Overall: ElectricalXcess easily but i seen better

[ArchimedeZ]

thanks b, 3-1 me UPPIN

[Rappone]

Multies: Xcess
Personals: Xcess
Flow: Huff
Punches: Xcess
Vocab: Excess
Enjoyment: Xcess

I can tell this aint yo full strength Xcess..
But you fuckin easily took it. I cant fuckinsee how Slimshadys vote was accepted.
W/e, I aint here to judge otha ppls votes. lol.
Keep risin son.

[ArchimedeZ]

ok man that's cool. let's have some rappers voting on this now then. ;)

thanks Rappone, I would argue against his vote when I first joined, but it's meh w/e :rolleyes:

4-1 me UPPIN to get this out the way

[ArchimedeZ]

4-1 me uppin for win

[LuDa KyLe]

aight here goes-

electrical x- 1st bar was ok so so
2nd bar was better no the best
3rd wasnt hype

huff- 1st bar pretty good man even with the terrorist thing
2nd- good i got ya on this one
3rd i understood it but it was ok not great

close vote here goes to huff

hes still a bitch tho

[ArchimedeZ]

4-2 me UPPIN for some real voters to vote on this, people who understand the idea of concepts, wordplay, NAMEPLAY, metaphors and mothafuckin structure. UPPIN

Rappone I couldn't keep it in man, my patience only goes so far :D

[L_Nino]

I dont hafta break this down...Raz all cats...Raz/Ex took this battle easy....smh @ the votes for Huff...

the dickridin' is sickenin' in here... ;)

[ArchimedeZ]

Thanks Nino, appreciate that. Luda Kyle how can you dickride when you supposed to got "beef" with Huff. Anyway it's w/e :rolleyes:

5-2 close this, this shit was like torture for me

[..Da Storm..]

Opener: Xcess
Multies: Xcess
Personals: Xcess
Flow: Tie
Punches: Xcess
Vocab: Xcess
Enjoyment: Xcess
Closer: Xcess

Overall: Xcess

[ArchimedeZ]

thanks b, 6-2