TheExhibitionist vs. Falix (3-5)

[TheExhibitionist]

4-5 Bars
24 hours to post

I'll let Falix go first, if thats alright...if not, lemme know.

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=17109
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16953

[Falix]

sure ill go

[Falix]

i dont have any personals....
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=17094
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=213335#post213335


you must really fuckin hate your life to challenge and meet me in combat
i bomb cats, my skill is like the core of the sun, to hot to palm that

so this is my consent im sending you, im rear ending you
our skill on a track? i lapped you twice, im at the ending dude

mess with this, and its like metal to fist
ill break every fuckin bone in your body and rupture discs

battlin me is like trying to out math a calculator, im flawless
truth is, im mix between Tupac Shakur and Christopher Wallace

this aint that Millionare show but i got your lifeline, ready to snip it
i dont use condoms to fuck ur girl, cuz if you found it, you'd prolly sip it

[TheExhibitionist]

Great verse, cant really top it. Been about a year since I even rapped. thanks for the oppurtunity...


So you think, Im the weakest of us two?
I can beat you with my lips closed, and givin you plus two

I bust you, politically dust you, prove to you, you were conceieved in a test tube
So, im gonna take a page from your book, why you accept a challenge with the best newb?

IN this battle, im gonna prove I can throw you down like Chuck Norris
You might be "flawless" but you stuck in front of a moving Taurus

You stepped up, wanted me to fess up, but you were the one who messed up
I textually shot you, you got more red stuff comin out you then a bottle of ketchup

So keep this in the back of your head along with that other faggot shit
I aint seen shit this weak, since i last heard the "Magic Stick"

[Mavro]

Falix got this....Ill break it down if you want

[Red Devyl]

FALIX:
you must really fuckin hate your life to challenge and meet me in combat
i bomb cats, my skill is like the core of the sun, to hot to palm that
k realli played out opener but ite

so this is my consent im sending you, im rear ending you
our skill on a track? i lapped you twice, im at the ending dude
the onli part nice hea is i lapped you twice the rest is not good

mess with this, and its like metal to fist
ill break every fuckin bone in your body and rupture discs
lol nice but discs and fist arnt suppose to b rhymed in text

battlin me is like trying to out math a calculator, im flawless
truth is, im mix between Tupac Shakur and Christopher Wallace
shit best bar hea funny but no diss so never mind i take that back

this aint that Millionare show but i got your lifeline, ready to snip it
i dont use condoms to fuck ur girl, cuz if you found it, you'd prolly sip it
huh???

exhib:
So you think, Im the weakest of us two?
I can beat you with my lips closed, and givin you plus two
duznt that ,mean he is good?

I bust you, politically dust you, prove to you, you were conceieved in a test tube
So, im gonna take a page from your book, why you accept a challenge with the best newb?
u called urself a newb so u suck??

IN this battle, im gonna prove I can throw you down like Chuck Norris
You might be "flawless" but you stuck in front of a moving Taurus
nice bar..........compared to others

You stepped up, wanted me to fess up, but you were the one who messed up
I textually shot you, you got more red stuff comin out you then a bottle of ketchup
hell a betta metaphor

So keep this in the back of your head along with that other faggot shit
I aint seen shit this weak, since i last heard the "Magic Stick"
weak

Flow: exhib
Punches: Exhib
Personals: NEtierh
Vocab: tie
enjoyable: exhib
overall: exhib

Falix: its obvious u r havin a block cuz i kno u can write hella betta
Exhib: i neva seen u before but this is good if u r jus a newb

[Kaotik D]

ECH:
So you think, Im the weakest of us two?
I can beat you with my lips closed, and givin you plus two
I H8 it when people use the same words twice,weak

I bust you, politically dust you, prove to you, you were conceieved in a test tube
So, im gonna take a page from your book, why you accept a challenge with the best newb?
Yea i liked the first line nice flow structure a bit of though

IN this battle, im gonna prove I can throw you down like Chuck Norris
You might be "flawless" but you stuck in front of a moving Taurus
Heard the concept..ok bar

You stepped up, wanted me to fess up, but you were the one who messed up
I textually shot you, you got more red stuff comin out you then a bottle of ketchup
Structure all over the place Ehh bar....

So keep this in the back of your head along with that other faggot shit
I aint seen shit this weak, since i last heard the "Magic Stick"
yea Decent closer
Falix
you must really fuckin hate your life to challenge and meet me in combat
i bomb cats, my skill is like the core of the sun, to hot to palm that
Ok opener

so this is my consent im sending you, im rear ending you
our skill on a track? i lapped you twice, im at the ending dude
Same as Ech double wordin again,decent bar

mess with this, and its like metal to fist
ill break every fuckin bone in your body and rupture discs
Yea nice vocab

battlin me is like trying to out math a calculator, im flawless
truth is, im mix between Tupac Shakur and Christopher Wallace
Same concept as Ech not really orginal...

this aint that Millionare show but i got your lifeline, ready to snip it
i dont use condoms to fuck ur girl, cuz if you found it, you'd prolly sip it
Nice bar,best in the rhyme....

Cats:
structure:Falix
Flow:Ech
Punches:Falix
Multis:falix
Vocab:TIe
Metas:None
Overall vote:falix...

[mattSMD]

i know me and falix are crew but nothin bout no crew votes, discount it if u want.

falix took it :)

[D-ManD]

Flow:Falix
Personals:Exib
Puches:Exib
Overall:Exib


Sry i didn't show my other cats but either way I think exib got this

[Con5ept]

FALIX:
you must really fuckin hate your life to challenge and meet me in combat
i bomb cats, my skill is like the core of the sun, to hot to palm that
k realli played out opener but ite

so this is my consent im sending you, im rear ending you
our skill on a track? i lapped you twice, im at the ending dude
the onli part nice hea is i lapped you twice the rest is not good

mess with this, and its like metal to fist
ill break every fuckin bone in your body and rupture discs
lol nice but discs and fist arnt suppose to b rhymed in text

battlin me is like trying to out math a calculator, im flawless
truth is, im mix between Tupac Shakur and Christopher Wallace
shit best bar hea funny but no diss so never mind i take that back

this aint that Millionare show but i got your lifeline, ready to snip it
i dont use condoms to fuck ur girl, cuz if you found it, you'd prolly sip it
huh???

exhib:
So you think, Im the weakest of us two?
I can beat you with my lips closed, and givin you plus two
duznt that ,mean he is good?

I bust you, politically dust you, prove to you, you were conceieved in a test tube
So, im gonna take a page from your book, why you accept a challenge with the best newb?
u called urself a newb so u suck??

IN this battle, im gonna prove I can throw you down like Chuck Norris
You might be "flawless" but you stuck in front of a moving Taurus
nice bar..........compared to others

You stepped up, wanted me to fess up, but you were the one who messed up
I textually shot you, you got more red stuff comin out you then a bottle of ketchup
hell a betta metaphor

So keep this in the back of your head along with that other faggot shit
I aint seen shit this weak, since i last heard the "Magic Stick"
weak

Flow: Ex
Punches: Ex
Personals: None
Vocab: both
enjoyable: Ex
overall: Ex

Vote- EX

[diamond in rough]

Flow:falix
personals: ex had some good ones but falix
vocab:tie
multies: didnt see any

my vote falix

[Tech Skillz]

So you think, Im the weakest of us two?
I can beat you with my lips closed, and givin you plus two
this bar was pointless....and whack

I bust you, politically dust you, prove to you, you were conceieved in a test tube
So, im gonna take a page from your book, why you accept a challenge with the best newb?
The first line started off nice, but got all misworded, the second line was weak
IN this battle, im gonna prove I can throw you down like Chuck Norris
You might be "flawless" but you stuck in front of a moving Taurus
not really gettin' it, but sounded descent

You stepped up, wanted me to fess up, but you were the one who messed up
I textually shot you, you got more red stuff comin out you then a bottle of ketchup
the rhyme's were nice, but not a punchline

So keep this in the back of your head along with that other faggot shit
I aint seen shit this weak, since i last heard the "Magic Stick"
ehhhhh, no.........that was a whack closer


Falix
you must really fuckin hate your life to challenge and meet me in combat
i bomb cats, my skill is like the core of the sun, to hot to palm that
nice rhymes, no punch, so ok bar

so this is my consent im sending you, im rear ending you
our skill on a track? i lapped you twice, im at the ending dude
you bit the first line off an eminem track, so that a no-no.

mess with this, and its like metal to fist
ill break every fuckin bone in your body and rupture discs
nice vocab but no punches, weak bar

battlin me is like trying to out math a calculator, im flawless
truth is, im mix between Tupac Shakur and Christopher Wallace
were's the punches at? you only talkin about your skill!

this aint that Millionare show but i got your lifeline, ready to snip it
i dont use condoms to fuck ur girl, cuz if you found it, you'd prolly sip it
Finally, nice bar.....only punchline in this battle.....good closer


I thought i'd never see a punch in this whole battle. You mc's need to learn that a battle is punchlines and talking all about your skill and killin somone is a punch, it a rap. punchline include metaphors, multies, personals, but not only that, it has to have something to strike at an opponenet with

Overall-Falix, for the only punch in the battle

[Venim]

PUNCHES-Falix
PERSONALS-Falix
MULTIS-Falix
WORDPLAY-Exh
OPENER-Falix
CLOSER-Tie
OVERALL-Falix

[ArchimedeZ]

FALIX:
you must really fuckin hate your life to challenge and meet me in combat
i bomb cats, my skill is like the core of the sun, to hot to palm that
average opener, nothing stood out

so this is my consent im sending you, im rear ending you
our skill on a track? i lapped you twice, im at the ending dude
second line was an attempt at a punch, just lacks somewhere


mess with this, and its like metal to fist
ill break every fuckin bone in your body and rupture discs
Flowed better, more direct, shorter bar but better

battlin me is like trying to out math a calculator, im flawless
truth is, im mix between Tupac Shakur and Christopher Wallace
No punch, just biggin yourself up, you supposed to diss him

this aint that Millionare show but i got your lifeline, ready to snip it
i dont use condoms to fuck ur girl, cuz if you found it, you'd prolly sip it
This was just wack, I seen way better from you


exhib:
So you think, Im the weakest of us two?
I can beat you with my lips closed, and givin you plus two
Nah not feelin this

I bust you, politically dust you, prove to you, you were conceieved in a test tube
So, im gonna take a page from your book, why you accept a challenge with the best newb?
Dissed yourself and more of a jab

IN this battle, im gonna prove I can throw you down like Chuck Norris
You might be "flawless" but you stuck in front of a moving Taurus
Second line was nice concept but again not hard enough

You stepped up, wanted me to fess up, but you were the one who messed up
I textually shot you, you got more red stuff comin out you then a bottle of ketchup
Second line is mad played, I must of heard that like 3 times in the past week

So keep this in the back of your head along with that other faggot shit
I aint seen shit this weak, since i last heard the "Magic Stick"
Real weak closer

Weak weak battle guys, Falix I seen better from you. You both lacked the punches and there was no personals or wordplay.

OVERALL - FALIX GOT THIS just…

[TheExhibitionist]

Aight, 5-3 I think for Falix.

Good battle, aint done this in over a year.