Archetype.Vs.Diamond in Rougth (3-0 KO)

[ArcheType]

Aigh thanx fo acceptin battle...

5 bars
House rules
Cat Votes
(breakdown if ya want to)
il drop whenever i get back on comp again, prlly tonight....
GL

Peace

[diamond in rough]

sup bro,

ill drop soon....

[diamond in rough]

here tis man hop you like it....

you wish i was your da coz you wanna be like me/
coz as they say the apple dosnt fall far from the tree/

and then your mum can hang off me for a reason/
coz seriously who dose she think shes pleasing?/
i act as if i enjoy it but im only teasing/
on sace from dog-hot "man" shes freezin/

you say 5 bars but thats all im needing/
ill open up cuts that wont stop bleeding/
"help me help me" like a pussy youll be pleeding/
i live off fleash and its time for my feeding/

only new and still making you trip the fuck out/
no point in spitting ive already one the bout/

[diamond in rough]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=214449#post214449 http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=214450#post214450

heres my links

[RAKIM]

nar there was seriously no point (learn hot spell)

[ArcheType]

Shit!! soz man, fogot bout this wit things goin on soz fo delay il edit this wit summit now! drop links later aight..

Peace...

Checkin in n dropin links later..

Smh, you aint gona beat us, Im’a laeve you for dead in lyrical bleakness/
You’re a still a foetus, everythin you juss said provin yo lyrical weakness//

So Fuck your biblical laws, Pause, n listen to my literal clause/
My Mythical force, will obliterate your jaws, killin without a trickle of remorse//

Son you now in tha wars,,,
Do you still feel so dope n ill?, Im sendin you straight to hell n murk ya in a clean kill/
N son you still aint fo real, until I get on ma Dell n work makin ya spleen spill//

Reiterate yo rythmes, Ive heard em a million times, Im sick of ya reoccurrin lines/
Im entrapin minds, spillin your blood runin thick like ma Maturing wines//

Spittin after you im just gona keep it factual, let tha voters decide//
It don’t matter thou,
cause you already a homo died, n im just after all chokers in a Genocide//

just quick so not my best i think but w/e..
no beef..
GL
soz fo delay..lol

Peace

links:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=17152&page=2
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=17109

[diamond in rough]

nice man

[ArcheType]

Open Fo Votes Lets Get Sum Please!!


Peace

[Kaotik D]

Smh, you aint gona beat us, Im’a laeve you for dead in lyrical bleakness/
You’re a still a foetus, everythin you juss said provin yo lyrical weakness//
Two of the same words are pretty played and why beat us????

So Fuck your biblical laws, Pause, n listen to my literal clause/
My Mythical force, will obliterate your jaws, killin without a trickle of remorse//
I liked this bar nice vocab,flow,punch

Son you now in tha wars,,,
Do you still feel so dope n ill?, Im sendin you straight to hell n murk ya in a clean kill/
N son you still aint fo real, until I get on ma Dell n work makin ya spleen spill//
Decent flow good

Reiterate yo rythmes, Ive heard em a million times, Im sick of ya reoccurrin lines/
Im entrapin minds, spillin your blood runin thick like ma Maturing wines//
Vocab nice rest ehh.....

Spittin after you im just gona keep it factual, let tha voters decide//
It don’t matter thou,
cause you already a homo died, n im just after all chokers in a Genocide//
^^didnt like this

Diamond
you wish i was your da coz you wanna be like me/
coz as they say the apple dosnt fall far from the tree/
Concept would be alrite but wtf was that man??

and then your mum can hang off me for a reason/
coz seriously who dose she think shes pleasing?/
i act as if i enjoy it but im only teasing/
on sace from dog-hot "man" shes freezin/
^^^Whack man mum jokes are played

you say 5 bars but thats all im needing/
ill open up cuts that wont stop bleeding/
"help me help me" like a pussy youll be pleeding/
i live off fleash and its time for my feeding/
Ehh.....

only new and still making you trip the fuck out/
no point in spitting ive already one the bout/
Whack....

Vote to arch u elevated man

[ArcheType]

Thanx fo vote 1 - 0 to me Uppin""

[paranoia]

arc has mine

[ArcheType]

uppin votes please!!

2-0...
to Arche so one mo for KO..lets get this over wit...n sent it to tha vault...

Peace

[ArcheType]

ahh soz fo da freepost but could sumone (only needs one person fo Ko) vote on this please, cause it been here like a decade now! lol
Thanx....soz fo freepost

Peace

[ArcheType]

Uppin Votes!!!!!!!

[RAKIM]

I'm going for archtype

[CapZ]

Arche's Verse:


Smh, you aint gona beat us, Im’a laeve you for dead in lyrical bleakness/
You’re a still a foetus, everythin you juss said provin yo lyrical weakness//
~so-so see u tryin to elevate in mullties dont try to hard ight..~

So Fuck your biblical laws, Pause, n listen to my literal clause/
My Mythical force, will obliterate your jaws, killin without a trickle of remorse//
~1st line not feelin da rest got betta~

Son you now in tha wars,,,
Do you still feel so dope n ill?, Im sendin you straight to hell n murk ya in a clean kill/
N son you still aint fo real, until I get on ma Dell n work makin ya spleen spill//
~kinda off not feelin as much lil forced on multies~

Reiterate yo rythmes, Ive heard em a million times, Im sick of ya reoccurrin lines/
Im entrapin minds, spillin your blood runin thick like ma Maturing wines//
~naw..~

Spittin after you im just gona keep it factual, let tha voters decide//
It don’t matter thou,
cause you already a homo died, n im just after all chokers in a Genocide//
~1/5 ok.. well i seen ya other shit yea just keep at it..~


Diamond's Verse:

you wish i was your da coz you wanna be like me/
coz as they say the apple dosnt fall far from the tree/
~ehhh~

and then your mum can hang off me for a reason/
coz seriously who dose she think shes pleasing?/
i act as if i enjoy it but im only teasing/
on sace from dog-hot "man" shes freezin/
~nope~

you say 5 bars but thats all im needing/
ill open up cuts that wont stop bleeding/
"help me help me" like a pussy youll be pleeding/
i live off fleash and its time for my feeding/
~some stupid shit not feelin it~

only new and still making you trip the fuck out/
no point in spitting ive already one the bout/
~no punch wack~

Overall Archetype Murked ya ez.. he had all cats..but still both need work

~1~

[ArcheType]

Aight thanx Capz fo ya breakdown appreciated fo ya gud feedback, respect..
Guess dats a KO to us then Thanx D-I-R

Peace