A.I.D.S vs. L_Nino (0-4 KO)

[L_Nino]

3 bars..


a.i.d.s up first

[a.i.d.s.]

aight,

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16976

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=17038&page=2



watchin wwe cuz of guerrero, makes me think L stole his way to the wins, so ima HANG THIS THIEF/
get his mouth on the curb and STAMP HIS TEETH, so you have a real reason for thinkin bout DENTISTRY//(1)

while we battlin, you gotta explain to me how you BECAME THAT TALL/
cuz i can see ya lines gettin shorter but your punches have not CHANGED AT ALL//(2)

you shoot bullets so do i, try PARRY MINE, TERRIFYING! no backup for you so i’m SHARING SPINE/
ash is FAIRLY KIND, cuz i advice you not to mark all the structures in ya verse that BARELY RHYME//(3)

ASH PEERS a hard mask AMONG YA TEARS, when the waves wash ya dead body FROM THE PIERS/
and ya flow ain't that hot “nigga”, what means L NINO won't come too STRONG THIS YEAR//(4)

i know it's 4 but i couldn't hold back the 2nd one, guess you won't complain about it (unlike other peeps ;))


"expos": everybody does this so i will do it too :)
1) i typed his name on google and found the page of a "Dr. Sebastian L. Nino" who is a dentist in california :D , pm me if you want the link :)

2) look at 2 line cyphers and/or his battles and you see what i mean

3) look at "2)" for the last, other is clear

4) L NINO is weatherphenom which strength depends on the temperature of the seastreams.

lookin forward :)

[a.i.d.s.]

as for the votes. i'd prefer people voting who know what they sayin, like most of the members of LP, KM and NAO. don't have to breakdown bar by bar, but tell whats good and bad bout the verses :)

thx



sorry inev ;)

[L_Nino]

1) Try me? L's PRO TESTED like a ACTIVIST, & YA PUNCHES AINT SHIT but a ASS PER FIST /
ASH AINT SICK, U WHITE & SAID NIGGA?? L'll BRUISE YA BODY to a DEEP PURPLE so thats as BLACK U GET /


2) U COULDNT ELEVATE BURNIN' DRO, Ya FIRST BAR INDIRECT, EXPLANATION DUMBER cuz NOBODY KNOW THAT PERSON, yo/
2ND's MORE OF A COMPLIMENT than A PERSONAL & since when did GOOGLE HELP MCs START WRITIN' THEIR VERSES though? /


3) NO MOON, BUTT Im BAD SUN (son), EL NINO'S COMIN' must be a WEATHERMAN how U SEE TROUBLE ON THE WAY /
There's NO STRINGS ATTACHED but YA LINES ARE PLAYED & u must be a PSYHIC since YOU PREDICTED U'll SEE BAD TIMES TODAY /


4) Have to be KATRINA to SURPASS ME, & PAY FOR MY TRIP to THE MOTHER LAND cuz IN AFRICA only way A.I.D.S'll CATCH ME /
CANT SEE ME like he got BAD SEATS, U NOT CAPTAIN CHARISMA, But hey, ANYTHINGS BETTER THAN ASHLEY!! /


everythings either in his verse/sig/profile..and his names ashley :)

dont understand? dont vote or jus' ask me :D

[a.i.d.s.]

:D nice


k votes people




btw: person number 276 usin' the ashleything ;)

[L_Nino]

:D nice

btw: person number 276 usin' the ashleything ;)

word...

its not my fault...u should be proud of ppl usin' ur name :D





besides, Google didnt gimme nuthin' good :p

[a.i.d.s.]

yeah, hard to find anything about aids when typin it in google :D

[L_Nino]

yeah, hard to find anything about aids when typin it in google :D

haha...yup...its ok though, i only used one aids line...




http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16976
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16962


bar by bar votes only since its jussa few bars.....

[chappy]

AIDS:

watchin wwe cuz of guerrero, makes me think L stole his way to the wins, so ima HANG THIS THIEF/
get his mouth on the curb and STAMP HIS TEETH, so you have a real reason for thinkin bout DENTISTRY//(1)

^^Aight, 2nd line better

while we battlin, you gotta explain to me how you BECAME THAT TALL/
cuz i can see ya lines gettin shorter but your punches have not CHANGED AT ALL//(2)

^^Weakest bar in your verse, but it's still OK

you shoot bullets so do i, try PARRY MINE, TERRIFYING! no backup for you so i’m SHARING SPINE/
ash is FAIRLY KIND, cuz i advice you not to mark all the structures in ya verse that BARELY RHYME//(3)

^^Nice - best bar

ASH PEERS a hard mask AMONG YA TEARS, when the waves wash ya dead body FROM THE PIERS/
and ya flow ain't that hot “nigga”, what means L NINO won't come too STRONG THIS YEAR//(4)

^^Not bad


L_NINO:

1) Try me? L's PRO TESTED like a ACTIVIST, & YA PUNCHES AINT SHIT but a ASS PER FIST /
ASH AINT SICK, U WHITE & SAID NIGGA?? L'll BRUISE YA BODY to a DEEP PURPLE so thats as BLACK U GET /

^^Aight opener

2) U COULDNT ELEVATE BURNIN' DRO, Ya FIRST BAR INDIRECT, EXPLANATION DUMBER cuz NOBODY KNOW THAT PERSON, yo/
2ND's MORE OF A COMPLIMENT than A PERSONAL & since when did GOOGLE HELP MCs START WRITIN' THEIR VERSES though? /

^^LOL!, nice shit...2nd line was ill

3) NO MOON, BUTT Im BAD SUN (son), EL NINO'S COMIN' must be a WEATHERMAN how U SEE TROUBLE ON THE WAY /
There's NO STRINGS ATTACHED but YA LINES ARE PLAYED & u must be a PSYHIC since YOU PREDICTED U'll SEE BAD TIMES TODAY /

^^Tight


4) Have to be KATRINA to SURPASS ME, & PAY FOR MY TRIP to THE MOTHER LAND cuz IN AFRICA only way A.I.D.S'll CATCH ME /
CANT SEE ME like he got BAD SEATS, U NOT CAPTAIN CHARISMA, But hey, ANYTHINGS BETTER THAN ASHLEY!! /

^^LOL nice


a.i.d.s - Best I seen from you in here. Some good stuff in there. You need to come a lil harder tho, maybe look at their profile or history on the site, to help you. Try to introduce wordplay, it's an important part of battlin', it's clever and makes your verse better. Overall a good effort against someone who rips text. Keep goin', lemme know if you need any tips.

L - Ripped this as usual (damn, I seem to be sayin' this every time I do bar-by-bar and come to your name :) ) Keep doin' what you doin'. Good shit.

Vote - L_Nino...came harder...

Nice battle,

1.

[Falix]

A.I.D.S

watchin wwe cuz of guerrero, makes me think L stole his way to the wins, so ima HANG THIS THIEF/
get his mouth on the curb and STAMP HIS TEETH, so you have a real reason for thinkin bout DENTISTRY//(1)
^^ok opener, second line was the saver of that bar

while we battlin, you gotta explain to me how you BECAME THAT TALL/
cuz i can see ya lines gettin shorter but your punches have not CHANGED AT ALL//(2)
^^ haha this was good, and nice personal

you shoot bullets so do i, try PARRY MINE, TERRIFYING! no backup for you so i’m SHARING SPINE/
ash is FAIRLY KIND, cuz i advice you not to mark all the structures in ya verse that BARELY RHYME//(3)
^^ going from bar 2 to this bar, the flow is messed a bit, this bar is too long, but, good diss,

ASH PEERS a hard mask AMONG YA TEARS, when the waves wash ya dead body FROM THE PIERS/
and ya flow ain't that hot “nigga”, what means L NINO won't come too STRONG THIS YEAR//
^^nice ender. like the "pier" part, first line stronger then second but still good,


NINO

1) Try me? L's PRO TESTED like a ACTIVIST, & YA PUNCHES AINT SHIT but a ASS PER FIST /
ASH AINT SICK, U WHITE & SAID NIGGA?? L'll BRUISE YA BODY to a DEEP PURPLE so thats as BLACK U GET /
^^this is a real nice open

2) U COULDNT ELEVATE BURNIN' DRO, Ya FIRST BAR INDIRECT, EXPLANATION DUMBER cuz NOBODY KNOW THAT PERSON, yo/
2ND's MORE OF A COMPLIMENT than A PERSONAL & since when did GOOGLE HELP MCs START WRITIN' THEIR VERSES though? /
^^im not sure if "when did GOOGLE HELP MCs START WRITIN' THEIR VERSES though?" makes sense as a sentence... sounds funny. but if it does, good punch

3) NO MOON, BUTT Im BAD SUN (son), EL NINO'S COMIN' must be a WEATHERMAN how U SEE TROUBLE ON THE WAY /
There's NO STRINGS ATTACHED but YA LINES ARE PLAYED & u must be a PSYHIC since YOU PREDICTED U'll SEE BAD TIMES TODAY /
^^liked the concept of no strings attached and lines are played, that was nice

4) Have to be KATRINA to SURPASS ME, & PAY FOR MY TRIP to THE MOTHER LAND cuz IN AFRICA only way A.I.D.S'll CATCH ME /
CANT SEE ME like he got BAD SEATS, U NOT CAPTAIN CHARISMA, But hey, ANYTHINGS BETTER THAN ASHLEY!! /
^^lmao nice ender again, wholle bar was sick

my VOTE goes to NINO, but i have to say that... he flipped ur verse so bad AIDS, it was real good, i wonder if he woulda won if he didnt flip your verse. cuz thats mostly what NINO's verse was... so i wanna see a rebattle with NINO spitting first, and aids second, so he has the talent to flip it like NINO

[a.i.d.s.]

2:0 Nino

missin votes people :)

[Mc-Itty]

I got chu aids...soz my net been fuckin round with me, aight:

A.I.D.S:

Ight first up u gotta kno that this the best drop i seen from u...new style im likin :p

watchin wwe cuz of guerrero, makes me think L stole his way to the wins, so ima HANG THIS THIEF/
get his mouth on the curb and STAMP HIS TEETH, so you have a real reason for thinkin bout DENTISTRY//(1)
rofl...i liked this opener, ight personal if it was tru but humour i like, shit was decent..

while we battlin, you gotta explain to me how you BECAME THAT TALL/
cuz i can see ya lines gettin shorter but your punches have not CHANGED AT ALL//(2)
lmfao...again i liked this..

you shoot bullets so do i, try PARRY MINE, TERRIFYING! no backup for you so i’m SHARING SPINE/
ash is FAIRLY KIND, cuz i advice you not to mark all the structures in ya verse that BARELY RHYME//(3)
Hot personal! and im likin the use of multis :eek:

ASH PEERS a hard mask AMONG YA TEARS, when the waves wash ya dead body FROM THE PIERS/
and ya flow ain't that hot “nigga”, what means L NINO won't come too STRONG THIS YEAR//
bet this shit played but creativity needa be credited

Overall, like i said, this deff the best drop i seen from u, multis were decent, humour i liked, personals were aight as well...ya flow kinda choppy an sometimes ya bar was dragged to much, other than that...PropZZZ

L-Nino:

Try me? L's PRO TESTED like a ACTIVIST, & YA PUNCHES AINT SHIT but a ASS PER FIST /
ASH AINT SICK, U WHITE & SAID NIGGA?? L'll BRUISE YA BODY to a DEEP PURPLE so thats as BLACK U GET /
i like the first half of this

2) U COULDNT ELEVATE BURNIN' DRO, Ya FIRST BAR INDIRECT, EXPLANATION DUMBER cuz NOBODY KNOW THAT PERSON, yo/
2ND's MORE OF A COMPLIMENT than A PERSONAL & since when did GOOGLE HELP MCs START WRITIN' THEIR VERSES though? /
rofl, flipper u killin him with personals now...nice bar.

3) NO MOON, BUTT Im BAD SUN (son), EL NINO'S COMIN' must be a WEATHERMAN how U SEE TROUBLE ON THE WAY /
There's NO STRINGS ATTACHED but YA LINES ARE PLAYED & u must be a PSYHIC since YOU PREDICTED U'll SEE BAD TIMES TODAY /
Hot shit, this my fav bar

4) Have to be KATRINA to SURPASS ME, & PAY FOR MY TRIP to THE MOTHER LAND cuz IN AFRICA only way A.I.D.S'll CATCH ME /
CANT SEE ME like he got BAD SEATS, U NOT CAPTAIN CHARISMA, But hey, ANYTHINGS BETTER THAN ASHLEY!! /
lmfao!! ...loved this as well, hot ender

So when u gon announce to peeps that im yo ghost writer? lmao but fo real, hot verse...killed him with personals, same humour packed, u kno the rest

Ight:

Personals: L-Nino (nice try aids but he got flips on his side)
Punches: L-Nino (again flips helped lol)
Multis: Aids (*sniff..u make me so proud)
Nameplay: Aids
Flow: L-Nino
Structure: HMPH ..dam glue sniffers.


Vote: L-Nino....real good battle though :clap:

[313!]

L-nino
all the way it flowed alot more easerir

[a.i.d.s.]

aight 4:0 (3:0 if we don't count 313's).

cograts man, thx for the good battle.


props :cool: