View Full Version : LP vs. L_Nino (1-5)
L_Nino
11-21-2005, 07:10 PM
LP:
"corrupted" minds, force yo' "poor" ass rhymes gettin left bankrupt and destructed,
youd be better off if ud have ducked it L JUST take the KO like chess instructed,
i flow better than u when DROPPIN-KEYS, left bandy legged weakend with FLOPPIN-KNEES
actin "gangster" when its only GTA u be POPPIN-G'S, 2 bars have "owned" u like SHOPPIN-SPREES
Ur Disses are LUCK~SIN~HITS,U coudnt produce a "POWERFULL" punch if ya had Barb wire Collied and STUCK~IN~it//
Ya open mics SUCK~RIN~SHITS,Boring after the Hook"SOURFULL"Stuff,Like ya Boy Boobs, Yea i noe ya FUCK~TIN~TITS//
L_Nino, u Count hit a "Rhyme" if u were a pelican "Hummin" where that WHORE~NEMO~AT?//
Pm Me? bitch i aint got the "Time" to Murk Little Fags,Go back to ya SORE~KEMO~MAT//
Got This Mouse Runnin Scared, Like He Afraid Of Cats When He Simply “Statin Votes”/
Hustlin Fool? Smack You With My “Pay Attention” Only Time You “Taking Notes”//-1
Resorts To Makin Boats, That’s The Only Time His Verse “Takes Shape” And Sails(Sells)/
You Couldn’t Rumble If You Were Ali On The Mic, Still “Shake Tapes” And Fail//-2
you veteran, since when? you getting *d/r* votes by SUCKING DICK
cuz truth is, we all know you're as *good as 50*, cuz you're FUCKING SHIT
if you were *pottasium in water* you still couldn't come *ferocious*
cuz looking at at my bars, got yours placed in recycle bin like they were atrocious
L_NINO:
1) PGB a GANGSTER? Plz COLONEL MUSTARD, You aint gotta CLUE, He only SPIT SICK SNEEZIN' WIT' THE FLU /
U GIVIN' PROPZ cuz MS.SHADY MADE YA SIG FOR U?? But I FORGOT, Ya already started BOWIN' DOWN TO BITCHES, When YOU PLEDGED ALLEGIANCE TO YA CREW /
2) EX responds to EVERY TOPIC I'M IN, Rite behind me ALWAYS JOCKIN, L's STEADY KNOCKIN' like a BULLY BOXIN' /
But YOU BE STOPPIN', ELECTRICAL got MINOR POWER, STICK A FORK in a LIGHT SOCKET then maybe YOU'd BE SHOCKIN' /
3) XCESS NOW, Prolly somethin' DIFFERENT NEXT TIME WE MEET, But U ALWAYS GON BE RAZ-BERRY cuz YOU A FRUIT & YOU SWEET /
LEFT FOR A WEEK, If U GON' LEAVE THEN LEAVE, & the FIRST 2 LETTERS IN YA NAME close as YOU'd GET TO BEIN' ME / (ELectrical)
4) Like ABORTION CLINCS, GAT'll GET DEADED BY CHOICE, Put U IN A GRAVE thats ONE OFF the NUMBERS OF ROYCE / (5'9)
L SOUNDPROOF, I'M KILLIN' THE NOISE, & THIS IS TEXT STUPID, Who's gon rejoice when THEY HEAR the SOUND OF YA VOICE? /
5) GATMAN's ALL BITCH, ALL RIPPED wouldnt be HALF A MAN TORN IN 2, & YOU A NOBODY so NO ONE's GON' MOURN FOR U /
Dont worry, I'll TAKE GOOOD CARE OF LAUREN TOO, U USED TO COCK anyway cuz LP FULL OF DICKHEADS like PORN FOR DUDES /
6) A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /
These PUNCHES'll leave YALL SORE and U HAVE CHESS INTELLIJENJC??, But if ya SO SMART then why YOU PLAYIN' ON THE WRONG BOARD? /
7) YOU C.I, Get put in a HOSPITAL to have YA BREATHE LESS, See CHESS, TESTIN' NOT POSITIVE FOR DOPE like a PASSED PEE-TEST /
I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES /
8) VICTORY IS PRICELESS but a ASS WHOOPIN' COSTS NUTHIN', U GUYS LYRICAL?? NOBODY FEELIN' U like YA THOUGHTS NUMBIN' /
FALL BACK, RETRACE YA STEPS like YA LOST SOMETHIN', & ya did but since YALL PROPHETS, YOU shoulda SEEN THIS LOSS COMIN' /
L_Nino
11-21-2005, 07:11 PM
bar By Bar Votes Only!!
S.W.A.T
11-21-2005, 08:03 PM
"corrupted" minds, force yo' "poor" ass rhymes gettin left bankrupt and destructed,
youd be better off if ud have ducked it L JUST take the KO like chess instructed
not really feeling this- barz didnt rhyme eight...
i flow better than u when DROPPIN-KEYS, left bandy legged weakend with FLOPPIN-KNEES
actin "gangster" when its only GTA u be POPPIN-G'S, 2 bars have "owned" u like SHOPPIN-SPREES
not feelign the 1st line but 2 was tight....
Ur Disses are LUCK~SIN~HITS,U coudnt produce a "POWERFULL" punch if ya had Barb wire Collied and STUCK~IN~it//
Ya open mics SUCK~RIN~SHITS,Boring after the Hook"SOURFULL"Stuff,Like ya Boy Boobs, Yea i noe ya FUCK~TIN~TITS//
forced multies, not seeing a punch there...
L_Nino, u Count hit a "Rhyme" if u were a pelican "Hummin" where that WHORE~NEMO~AT?//
Pm Me? bitch i aint got the "Time" to Murk Little Fags,Go back to ya SORE~KEMO~MAT//
where's the punch? wutz a kemo mat?
Got This Mouse Runnin Scared, Like He Afraid Of Cats When He Simply “Statin Votes”/
Hustlin Fool? Smack You With My “Pay Attention” Only Time You “Taking Notes”//-1
yea feeling this bar... nice use of multiez..
Resorts To Makin Boats, That’s The Only Time His Verse “Takes Shape” And Sails(Sells)/
You Couldn’t Rumble If You Were Ali On The Mic, Still “Shake Tapes” And Fail//-2
firsat was aight, nice use of wordplay, second line, wasnt feeling it, but gd use of multiez...
you veteran, since when? you getting *d/r* votes by SUCKING DICK
cuz truth is, we all know you're as *good as 50*, cuz you're FUCKING SHIT
not feeling this at all....
if you were *pottasium in water* you still couldn't come *ferocious*
cuz looking at at my bars, got yours placed in recycle bin like they were atrocious
nope, this wasnt gd, nice vocab tho...
L_NINO:
1) PGB a GANGSTER? Plz COLONEL MUSTARD, You aint gotta CLUE, He only SPIT SICK SNEEZIN' WIT' THE FLU /
U GIVIN' PROPZ cuz MS.SHADY MADE YA SIG FOR U?? But I FORGOT, Ya already started BOWIN' DOWN TO BITCHES, When YOU PLEDGED ALLEGIANCE TO YA CREW /
haha loved the second line
2) EX responds to EVERY TOPIC I'M IN, Rite behind me ALWAYS JOCKIN, L's STEADY KNOCKIN' like a BULLY BOXIN' /
But YOU BE STOPPIN', ELECTRICAL got MINOR POWER, STICK A FORK in a LIGHT SOCKET then maybe YOU'd BE SHOCKIN' /
sick as fuck again... secod line again...
3) XCESS NOW, Prolly somethin' DIFFERENT NEXT TIME WE MEET, But U ALWAYS GON BE RAZ-BERRY cuz YOU A FRUIT & YOU SWEET /
LEFT FOR A WEEK, If U GON' LEAVE THEN LEAVE, & the FIRST 2 LETTERS IN YA NAME close as YOU'd GET TO BEIN' ME / (ELectrical)
was OK, not the best... dodnt like the first line...
4) Like ABORTION CLINCS, GAT'll GET DEADED BY CHOICE, Put U IN A GRAVE thats ONE OFF the NUMBERS OF ROYCE / (5'9)
L SOUNDPROOF, I'M KILLIN' THE NOISE, & THIS IS TEXT STUPID, Who's gon rejoice when THEY HEAR the SOUND OF YA VOICE? /
not feeling this... undersyand u tho...
5) GATMAN's ALL BITCH, ALL RIPPED wouldnt be HALF A MAN TORN IN 2, & YOU A NOBODY so NO ONE's GON' MOURN FOR U /
Dont worry, I'll TAKE GOOOD CARE OF LAUREN TOO, U USED TO COCK anyway cuz LP FULL OF DICKHEADS like PORN FOR DUDES /
haha 1st line was ok but second was dope, nice use of a personal...
6) A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /
These PUNCHES'll leave YALL SORE and U HAVE CHESS INTELLIJENJC??, But if ya SO SMART then why YOU PLAYIN' ON THE WRONG BOARD? /
haha, seconmd line fucking killed it, loved the multiez in it...
7) YOU C.I, Get put in a HOSPITAL to have YA BREATHE LESS, See CHESS, TESTIN' NOT POSITIVE FOR DOPE like a PASSED PEE-TEST /
I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES /
didnt like this 2 much
8) VICTORY IS PRICELESS but a ASS WHOOPIN' COSTS NUTHIN', U GUYS LYRICAL?? NOBODY FEELIN' U like YA THOUGHTS NUMBIN' /
FALL BACK, RETRACE YA STEPS like YA LOST SOMETHIN', & ya did but since YALL PROPHETS, YOU shoulda SEEN THIS LOSS COMIN' /
fucking killed them, nice name play, nice mulktiez
vote: L_ninp
u fucking gr8 man....
mad proz..
Red Devyl
11-21-2005, 08:44 PM
k i will jus break it down for person to person except for Lz cuz he has 8 barz:
GATMAN
i lieked the first bar but the ssecond bar had a nice multi but made no sense
PGB
k um first bar was bad, the multies were simply forced and the meta didnt make sense in any form but the second bar was pretty good but didnt understand where nemo came in frm
Electrical
ur first bar had no punch even tho i see where u were tryin to go the second bars first line was good but the second lines jus messed it up
Chess
suckin dick and fuckin shit are way too basic rhymes (or atleast wat i expected from u) 1st bar was an attempted personal but didnt work out
second bar came outta no where but was an average bar
L Nino -the best part of votin hea
1) PGB a GANGSTER? Plz COLONEL MUSTARD, You aint gotta CLUE, He only SPIT SICK SNEEZIN' WIT' THE FLU /
U GIVIN' PROPZ cuz MS.SHADY MADE YA SIG FOR U?? But I FORGOT, Ya already started BOWIN' DOWN TO BITCHES, When YOU PLEDGED ALLEGIANCE TO YA CREW /
Nice meta wit sneezin n killed him wit pledgin allegiance to the crew n had an ill flow but i wud count this as 2 barz instead of one
2) EX responds to EVERY TOPIC I'M IN, Rite behind me ALWAYS JOCKIN, L's STEADY KNOCKIN' like a BULLY BOXIN' /
But YOU BE STOPPIN', ELECTRICAL got MINOR POWER, STICK A FORK in a LIGHT SOCKET then maybe YOU'd BE SHOCKIN' /
i had no clu wat u were doin in the first line but u covered the whole thing up in the second line so yea tite endin, nice meta
3) XCESS NOW, Prolly somethin' DIFFERENT NEXT TIME WE MEET, But U ALWAYS GON BE RAZ-BERRY cuz YOU A FRUIT & YOU SWEET /
LEFT FOR A WEEK, If U GON' LEAVE THEN LEAVE, & the FIRST 2 LETTERS IN YA NAME close as YOU'd GET TO BEIN' ME / (ELectrical)
again no clue where u were goin in the first line but the second line (closest u are gonna to me) killed him
4) Like ABORTION CLINCS, GAT'll GET DEADED BY CHOICE, Put U IN A GRAVE thats ONE OFF the NUMBERS OF ROYCE / (5'9)
L SOUNDPROOF, I'M KILLIN' THE NOISE, & THIS IS TEXT STUPID, Who's gon rejoice when THEY HEAR the SOUND OF YA VOICE? /
lolz first line was killin him itsel and the second life jus buried him
5) GATMAN's ALL BITCH, ALL RIPPED wouldnt be HALF A MAN TORN IN 2, & YOU A NOBODY so NO ONE's GON' MOURN FOR U /
Dont worry, I'll TAKE GOOOD CARE OF LAUREN TOO, U USED TO COCK anyway cuz LP FULL OF DICKHEADS like PORN FOR DUDES /
yea average bar compared to othaz
6) A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /
These PUNCHES'll leave YALL SORE and U HAVE CHESS INTELLIJENJC??, But if ya SO SMART then why YOU PLAYIN' ON THE WRONG BOARD? /
the first line maden o sense to me but the wrong board part jus covered up for the first line so average bar
7) YOU C.I, Get put in a HOSPITAL to have YA BREATHE LESS, See CHESS, TESTIN' NOT POSITIVE FOR DOPE like a PASSED PEE-TEST /
I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES /
pee test and pieces is way basic rhyme i expected from u n the pawn part dissed him but dissed u as well so bad bar
8) VICTORY IS PRICELESS but a ASS WHOOPIN' COSTS NUTHIN', U GUYS LYRICAL?? NOBODY FEELIN' U like YA THOUGHTS NUMBIN' /
FALL BACK, RETRACE YA STEPS like YA LOST SOMETHIN', & ya did but since YALL PROPHETS, YOU shoulda SEEN THIS LOSS COMIN' /
nice bar dope as fuck good close
nino everythin was nice but i wud count that as 16 barz not eight they are way too long
Overall: L nino............it mite b cuz it was agianst 4 DIFFERENT people gettin so less opportunity to show
slimshadyLP
11-21-2005, 09:01 PM
"corrupted" minds, force yo' "poor" ass rhymes gettin left bankrupt and destructed,
youd be better off if ud have ducked it L JUST take the KO like chess instructed
straight punch...nuttin speacial.....
i flow better than u when DROPPIN-KEYS, left bandy legged weakend with FLOPPIN-KNEES
actin "gangster" when its only GTA u be POPPIN-G'S, 2 bars have "owned" u like SHOPPIN-SPREES
GTA thing was whack....everything else was meh....
Ur Disses are LUCK~SIN~HITS,U coudnt produce a "POWERFULL" punch if ya had Barb wire Collied and STUCK~IN~it//
Ya open mics SUCK~RIN~SHITS,Boring after the Hook"SOURFULL"Stuff,Like ya Boy Boobs, Yea i noe ya FUCK~TIN~TITS//
fi8rst line wasnt speacila....second was ehh....
L_Nino, u Count hit a "Rhyme" if u were a pelican "Hummin" where that WHORE~NEMO~AT?//
Pm Me? bitch i aint got the "Time" to Murk Little Fags,Go back to ya SORE~KEMO~MAT//
......???
Got This Mouse Runnin Scared, Like He Afraid Of Cats When He Simply “Statin Votes”/
Hustlin Fool? Smack You With My “Pay Attention” Only Time You “Taking Notes”//-1
not very good punch......
Resorts To Makin Boats, That’s The Only Time His Verse “Takes Shape” And Sails(Sells)/
You Couldn’t Rumble If You Were Ali On The Mic, Still “Shake Tapes” And Fail//-2
first line was skeptical....second was iight....
you veteran, since when? you getting *d/r* votes by SUCKING DICK
cuz truth is, we all know you're as *good as 50*, cuz you're FUCKING SHIT
weak meta......bad punch....
if you were *pottasium in water* you still couldn't come *ferocious*
cuz looking at at my bars, got yours placed in recycle bin like they were atrocious
no....straight punch really....nuttin speacial at all.....
L_NINO:
1) PGB a GANGSTER? Plz COLONEL MUSTARD, You aint gotta CLUE, He only SPIT SICK SNEEZIN' WIT' THE FLU /
U GIVIN' PROPZ cuz MS.SHADY MADE YA SIG FOR U?? But I FORGOT, Ya already started BOWIN' DOWN TO BITCHES, When YOU PLEDGED ALLEGIANCE TO YA CREW /
first line was mostly straight...second was better....lil funny...
2) EX responds to EVERY TOPIC I'M IN, Rite behind me ALWAYS JOCKIN, L's STEADY KNOCKIN' like a BULLY BOXIN' /
But YOU BE STOPPIN', ELECTRICAL got MINOR POWER, STICK A FORK in a LIGHT SOCKET then maybe YOU'd BE SHOCKIN' /
ehhh..ok bar....
3) XCESS NOW, Prolly somethin' DIFFERENT NEXT TIME WE MEET, But U ALWAYS GON BE RAZ-BERRY cuz YOU A FRUIT & YOU SWEET /
LEFT FOR A WEEK, If U GON' LEAVE THEN LEAVE, & the FIRST 2 LETTERS IN YA NAME close as YOU'd GET TO BEIN' ME / (ELectrical)
the last line was coo.....
4) Like ABORTION CLINCS, GAT'll GET DEADED BY CHOICE, Put U IN A GRAVE thats ONE OFF the NUMBERS OF ROYCE / (5'9)
L SOUNDPROOF, I'M KILLIN' THE NOISE, & THIS IS TEXT STUPID, Who's gon rejoice when THEY HEAR the SOUND OF YA VOICE? /
ok...the abortion thing was coo though.......
5) GATMAN's ALL BITCH, ALL RIPPED wouldnt be HALF A MAN TORN IN 2, & YOU A NOBODY so NO ONE's GON' MOURN FOR U /
Dont worry, I'll TAKE GOOOD CARE OF LAUREN TOO, U USED TO COCK anyway cuz LP FULL OF DICKHEADS like PORN FOR DUDES /
started off coo ended simple......
6) A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /
These PUNCHES'll leave YALL SORE and U HAVE CHESS INTELLIJENJC??, But if ya SO SMART then why YOU PLAYIN' ON THE WRONG BOARD? /
the chess punch was iight.....
7) YOU C.I, Get put in a HOSPITAL to have YA BREATHE LESS, See CHESS, TESTIN' NOT POSITIVE FOR DOPE like a PASSED PEE-TEST /
I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES /
liked the ending with chess diss.......
8) VICTORY IS PRICELESS but a ASS WHOOPIN' COSTS NUTHIN', U GUYS LYRICAL?? NOBODY FEELIN' U like YA THOUGHTS NUMBIN' /
FALL BACK, RETRACE YA STEPS like YA LOST SOMETHIN', & ya did but since YALL PROPHETS, YOU shoulda SEEN THIS LOSS COMIN' /
iight......nuttin speacial...
OVERALL: L nino winns....L dont kno if ya tryin or not but recently ya punches hav gotten sum weaker........
Mc-Itty
11-22-2005, 12:27 PM
SSLP man..WTF u smokin dawg?! ...if anythin...his shit mo funny + mo direct..much better than the shit i seen when i first got on this bitch...SMH..
*puts on a DRAMA riot...I DONT WANA BAR BY BAR IT...whatchu gon do :ranting:
Gatman: ...*SLAP...u shudnt have freestyled ya shit, u comin real nicely lately, been talkin about chu with a few other heads an yea *props...but i seen way harder from u...also needa start thinkin about ideas...work on ya creativity..rest was hot.
PGB: ...woah man, this like ur 3rd week into rap or sumin? Shit was decent, fact hot fo that amount of time...u tryin too hard with ya multis, they important but u dont gotta hav em on every bar...apart from that was coo so again *propz.
Xcess: ..i love ya wordplayin, and shit wud be real killer if u made yo punches mo direct, everythin else seems aight but yea jus yo punches need workin..other that that u hot ta go, *propz
*breathes...dam im proppin everyone...<< EVIDENCE that i can be NICE.
CHESSINGTON :D: yep u got a smiley face...(so i got favourites?) ..lmfao at the potassium exp...i remember doin that shit...but yea man i seen u come WAY harder than this ish..*Slaps...first bar was aight though...(coughs...retirement?!) but yea i seen better...no proppin fo u :(
It: ...Yo i really dont kno what the kid smokin but fo real i liked this drop, yo shit got humour with the punches which impresses peeps the most, here yo highlights:
VICTORY IS PRICELESS but a ASS WHOOPIN' COSTS NUTHIN', U GUYS LYRICAL?? NOBODY FEELIN' U like YA THOUGHTS NUMBIN' /
FALL BACK, RETRACE YA STEPS like YA LOST SOMETHIN', & ya did but since YALL PROPHETS, YOU shoulda SEEN THIS LOSS COMIN'
I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES
A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /
These PUNCHES'll leave YALL SORE and U HAVE CHESS INTELLIJENJC??, But if ya SO SMART then why YOU PLAYIN' ON THE WRONG BOARD
Dont worry, I'll TAKE GOOOD CARE OF LAUREN TOO, U USED TO COCK anyway cuz LP FULL OF DICKHEADS like PORN FOR DUDES
Yep...Vote: L-Nino.
DS aka Snyperfix
11-22-2005, 12:50 PM
"corrupted" minds, force yo' "poor" ass rhymes gettin left bankrupt and destructed,
youd be better off if ud have ducked it L JUST take the KO like chess instructed,
i flow better than u when DROPPIN-KEYS, left bandy legged weakend with FLOPPIN-KNEES
actin "gangster" when its only GTA u be POPPIN-G'S, 2 bars have "owned" u like SHOPPIN-SPREES
nice punchline, hitting quite hard
Ur Disses are LUCK~SIN~HITS,U coudnt produce a "POWERFULL" punch if ya had Barb wire Collied and STUCK~IN~it//
Ya open mics SUCK~RIN~SHITS,Boring after the Hook"SOURFULL"Stuff,Like ya Boy Boobs, Yea i noe ya FUCK~TIN~TITS//
multis werent impressive, wordplay and punchline was nice tho
L_Nino, u Count hit a "Rhyme" if u were a pelican "Hummin" where that WHORE~NEMO~AT?//
Pm Me? bitch i aint got the "Time" to Murk Little Fags,Go back to ya SORE~KEMO~MAT//
haha, nice shit, wordplay was cool, punchline was nice too
Got This Mouse Runnin Scared, Like He Afraid Of Cats When He Simply “Statin Votes”/
Hustlin Fool? Smack You With My “Pay Attention” Only Time You “Taking Notes”//-1
Resorts To Makin Boats, That’s The Only Time His Verse “Takes Shape” And Sails(Sells)/
You Couldn’t Rumble If You Were Ali On The Mic, Still “Shake Tapes” And Fail//-2
ill, wordplay, multis, punchline was nice
you veteran, since when? you getting *d/r* votes by SUCKING DICK
cuz truth is, we all know you're as *good as 50*, cuz you're FUCKING SHIT
if you were *pottasium in water* you still couldn't come *ferocious*
cuz looking at at my bars, got yours placed in recycle bin like they were atrocious
multis were weak, flow was poor, punchline it every hard, wordplay was nice
l nino
1) PGB a GANGSTER? Plz COLONEL MUSTARD, You aint gotta CLUE, He only SPIT SICK SNEEZIN' WIT' THE FLU /
U GIVIN' PROPZ cuz MS.SHADY MADE YA SIG FOR U?? But I FORGOT, Ya already started BOWIN' DOWN TO BITCHES, When YOU PLEDGED ALLEGIANCE TO YA CREW /
multis were the only thing, even that were weak
2) EX responds to EVERY TOPIC I'M IN, Rite behind me ALWAYS JOCKIN, L's STEADY KNOCKIN' like a BULLY BOXIN' /
But YOU BE STOPPIN', ELECTRICAL got MINOR POWER, STICK A FORK in a LIGHT SOCKET then maybe YOU'd BE SHOCKIN' /
a bit of a brag, didnt really connect
3) XCESS NOW, Prolly somethin' DIFFERENT NEXT TIME WE MEET, But U ALWAYS GON BE RAZ-BERRY cuz YOU A FRUIT & YOU SWEET /
LEFT FOR A WEEK, If U GON' LEAVE THEN LEAVE, & the FIRST 2 LETTERS IN YA NAME close as YOU'd GET TO BEIN' ME / (ELectrical)
multis were wack, punchline was cool
) Like ABORTION CLINCS, GAT'll GET DEADED BY CHOICE, Put U IN A GRAVE thats ONE OFF the NUMBERS OF ROYCE / (5'9)
L SOUNDPROOF, I'M KILLIN' THE NOISE, & THIS IS TEXT STUPID, Who's gon rejoice when THEY HEAR the SOUND OF YA VOICE? /
flow was awful, a bit of a brag, multis were disappointing, first line concept is played, second line punchlin was ill
5) GATMAN's ALL BITCH, ALL RIPPED wouldnt be HALF A MAN TORN IN 2, & YOU A NOBODY so NO ONE's GON' MOURN FOR U /
Dont worry, I'll TAKE GOOOD CARE OF LAUREN TOO, U USED TO COCK anyway cuz LP FULL OF DICKHEADS like PORN FOR DUDES /
flow again was bad
A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /
These PUNCHES'll leave YALL SORE and U HAVE CHESS INTELLIJENJC??, But if ya SO SMART then why YOU PLAYIN' ON THE WRONG BOARD? /
haha ill punchline hit ver hard, flow was awful again, multis all wrong again
7) YOU C.I, Get put in a HOSPITAL to have YA BREATHE LESS, See CHESS, TESTIN' NOT POSITIVE FOR DOPE like a PASSED PEE-TEST /
I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES /
played,
8) VICTORY IS PRICELESS but a ASS WHOOPIN' COSTS NUTHIN', U GUYS LYRICAL?? NOBODY FEELIN' U like YA THOUGHTS NUMBIN' /
FALL BACK, RETRACE YA STEPS like YA LOST SOMETHIN', & ya did but since YALL PROPHETS, YOU shoulda SEEN THIS LOSS COMIN' /
haha, ill stuff, this shit was ill, wordplay was ill, punchline was ill, but again multis and wordplay was wrong
overral nino's flow was awful, puting words in caps that dont really mean shit, anyone can do that, ,ost of your bars were nice, but i'd give this to LP
a.i.d.s.
11-22-2005, 01:03 PM
won't breakdown man. i'll leave a comment for everyone:
LP
gat
i really liked your first bar, the rhyme was nice, content decent and flowed pretty nice. 2nd one was aight too.
pbg
liked ya first line really much, forced wit the multies in both but props for elevating like that.
xcess
evil wordplay man :D i loved ya stuff from the first day man. nuff said :cool:
chess
hmm, weakest link in the chain this time. rhymes were (kinda) weak, punch quite aight, but seen way better from you.
L NINO
cant agree with superfly. your flow is killer, yeah he right ya multies sometimes basic (from the words), but the punches kill that. you gotta be smokin some magic plant man.
:cool: <----- nuff said
VOTE: L NINO
- LP, had good stuff but it was easier for nino, cuz he was able to say more, bringin shit in 2 bars is fucked up, 3 would have been better.
L_Nino
11-22-2005, 01:16 PM
"corrupted" minds, force yo' "poor" ass rhymes gettin left bankrupt and destructed,
youd be better off if ud have ducked it L JUST take the KO like chess instructed,
i flow better than u when DROPPIN-KEYS, left bandy legged weakend with FLOPPIN-KNEES
actin "gangster" when its only GTA u be POPPIN-G'S, 2 bars have "owned" u like SHOPPIN-SPREES
nice punchline, hitting quite hard
Ur Disses are LUCK~SIN~HITS,U coudnt produce a "POWERFULL" punch if ya had Barb wire Collied and STUCK~IN~it//
Ya open mics SUCK~RIN~SHITS,Boring after the Hook"SOURFULL"Stuff,Like ya Boy Boobs, Yea i noe ya FUCK~TIN~TITS//
multis werent impressive, wordplay and punchline was nice tho
L_Nino, u Count hit a "Rhyme" if u were a pelican "Hummin" where that WHORE~NEMO~AT?//
Pm Me? bitch i aint got the "Time" to Murk Little Fags,Go back to ya SORE~KEMO~MAT//
haha, nice shit, wordplay was cool, punchline was nice too
Got This Mouse Runnin Scared, Like He Afraid Of Cats When He Simply “Statin Votes”/
Hustlin Fool? Smack You With My “Pay Attention” Only Time You “Taking Notes”//-1
Resorts To Makin Boats, That’s The Only Time His Verse “Takes Shape” And Sails(Sells)/
You Couldn’t Rumble If You Were Ali On The Mic, Still “Shake Tapes” And Fail//-2
ill, wordplay, multis, punchline was nice
you veteran, since when? you getting *d/r* votes by SUCKING DICK
cuz truth is, we all know you're as *good as 50*, cuz you're FUCKING SHIT
if you were *pottasium in water* you still couldn't come *ferocious*
cuz looking at at my bars, got yours placed in recycle bin like they were atrocious
multis were weak, flow was poor, punchline it every hard, wordplay was nice
l nino
1) PGB a GANGSTER? Plz COLONEL MUSTARD, You aint gotta CLUE, He only SPIT SICK SNEEZIN' WIT' THE FLU /
U GIVIN' PROPZ cuz MS.SHADY MADE YA SIG FOR U?? But I FORGOT, Ya already started BOWIN' DOWN TO BITCHES, When YOU PLEDGED ALLEGIANCE TO YA CREW /
multis were the only thing, even that were weak
2) EX responds to EVERY TOPIC I'M IN, Rite behind me ALWAYS JOCKIN, L's STEADY KNOCKIN' like a BULLY BOXIN' /
But YOU BE STOPPIN', ELECTRICAL got MINOR POWER, STICK A FORK in a LIGHT SOCKET then maybe YOU'd BE SHOCKIN' /
a bit of a brag, didnt really connect
3) XCESS NOW, Prolly somethin' DIFFERENT NEXT TIME WE MEET, But U ALWAYS GON BE RAZ-BERRY cuz YOU A FRUIT & YOU SWEET /
LEFT FOR A WEEK, If U GON' LEAVE THEN LEAVE, & the FIRST 2 LETTERS IN YA NAME close as YOU'd GET TO BEIN' ME / (ELectrical)
multis were wack, punchline was cool
) Like ABORTION CLINCS, GAT'll GET DEADED BY CHOICE, Put U IN A GRAVE thats ONE OFF the NUMBERS OF ROYCE / (5'9)
L SOUNDPROOF, I'M KILLIN' THE NOISE, & THIS IS TEXT STUPID, Who's gon rejoice when THEY HEAR the SOUND OF YA VOICE? /
flow was awful, a bit of a brag, multis were disappointing, first line concept is played, second line punchlin was ill
5) GATMAN's ALL BITCH, ALL RIPPED wouldnt be HALF A MAN TORN IN 2, & YOU A NOBODY so NO ONE's GON' MOURN FOR U /
Dont worry, I'll TAKE GOOOD CARE OF LAUREN TOO, U USED TO COCK anyway cuz LP FULL OF DICKHEADS like PORN FOR DUDES /
flow again was bad
A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /
These PUNCHES'll leave YALL SORE and U HAVE CHESS INTELLIJENJC??, But if ya SO SMART then why YOU PLAYIN' ON THE WRONG BOARD? /
haha ill punchline hit ver hard, flow was awful again, multis all wrong again
7) YOU C.I, Get put in a HOSPITAL to have YA BREATHE LESS, See CHESS, TESTIN' NOT POSITIVE FOR DOPE like a PASSED PEE-TEST /
I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES /
played,
8) VICTORY IS PRICELESS but a ASS WHOOPIN' COSTS NUTHIN', U GUYS LYRICAL?? NOBODY FEELIN' U like YA THOUGHTS NUMBIN' /
FALL BACK, RETRACE YA STEPS like YA LOST SOMETHIN', & ya did but since YALL PROPHETS, YOU shoulda SEEN THIS LOSS COMIN' /
haha, ill stuff, this shit was ill, wordplay was ill, punchline was ill, but again multis and wordplay was wrong
lol...ok
*ACHU*
Sorry, excuse me, dickriders make me sick...
overral nino's flow was awful, puting words in caps that dont really mean shit, anyone can do that, ,ost of your bars were nice, but i'd give this to LP
the caps is "emphasis"...*yawwwn* & yes, anybody could do that, its not very hard ;)
& as for the flow, i highly doubt u talk like i do...plus u 34 and think that shit they said was ill?...lol...c'mon b...
everybody else that doesnt like da dick, thanx for the votes...
i already won this anyway...
did that fool called my name not good? :mad: o wait.. did i murk u?
~1~
Mavro
11-23-2005, 01:27 AM
won't breakdown man. i'll leave a comment for everyone:
LP
gat
i really liked your first bar, the rhyme was nice, content decent and flowed pretty nice. 2nd one was aight too.
pbg
liked ya first line really much, forced wit the multies in both but props for elevating like that.
xcess
evil wordplay man :D i loved ya stuff from the first day man. nuff said :cool:
chess
hmm, weakest link in the chain this time. rhymes were (kinda) weak, punch quite aight, but seen way better from you.
L NINO
cant agree with superfly. your flow is killer, yeah he right ya multies sometimes basic (from the words), but the punches kill that. you gotta be smokin some magic plant man.
:cool: <----- nuff said
VOTE: L NINO
- LP, had good stuff but it was easier for nino, cuz he was able to say more, bringin shit in 2 bars is fucked up, 3 would have been better.
L Nino just merked you LP
L_Nino
11-27-2005, 02:36 AM
*ahem*
a.i.d.s.
11-27-2005, 06:21 AM
lol, you have to pm inev the result and the link to this battle so he gonna close it ;)
L_Nino
11-27-2005, 04:03 PM
lol, you have to pm inev the result and the link to this battle so he gonna close it ;)
yea i know...i was seein' if anybody else gonna vote...
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