Hex vs. Pgb

[Kaotik D]

4 bars
5 votes
3-0 ko
No Dikridding,hate crew votes
Ur drop first
Links up*

[Hex!]

i'll be on later, just old out plz. maybe 2 hourz or tomorrow

[Hex!]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=17038
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=212412#post212412
my linkz

[Hex!]

i'll spit tomorrow

[Kaotik D]

Ok me to

[Hex!]

i burn you crispy, like a fucking blow torch//
leave you bleeding all over the front porch//


i hit you up like rockets attached to my fist//
i leave you dead, you evaporate like mist//

an explicent spittar vs some indecent spittar//
ain't much of a match, he is a decent quittar//

that is all i can think of, so hit me with your rap.

[Kaotik D]

Dropping in a few hours i just gotta do a few jobs then i spit my verse.
thanks man

[Kaotik D]

PGB VERSE
Ill take it easy since im teachin
my rhymes Spits Curses.And sprays venim called a "HEX"
Ur playin the "PGB game,Watch me maul ya like a T"REX"

Im gonna "Boost"ma rhymes up like a Bird wit broken ~WINGS//
ur shits worse then Sunday Praies aT Church when ya mother SINGS//

"Parental adivory"cause my rhymes swear alot"FUCK~HEX"
With your dick so small,People classify it as LUCK~SEX"

Its about punches man ok dont focus on multis untill u have sorted out ya punches...
Its good for the first one if seen from u and u get good flow so keep it up man well done...
But yea ur verse was alrite

Uppin votes
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=17022
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=15843

[ArcheType]

HEX

i burn you crispy, like a fucking blow torch//
leave you bleeding all over the front porch//
not tha best operner, but was imagery was gud

i hit you up like rockets attached to my fist//
i leave you dead, you evaporate like mist//
again simple vocab n simple concept, general punche could be at neone?

an explicent spittar vs some indecent spittar//
ain't much of a match, he is a decent quittar//
weak closer, same as before

Ok, lines where to repetative, could guess tha words ur was gona ryhme wit, imagery gud thou n flow not to bad.

PGB

Ill take it easy since im teachin/
my rhymes Spits Curses.And sprays venim called a "HEX"/
Ur playin the "PGB game,Watch me maul ya like a T"REX"//
ok, gud flowed ok, simple vocab gud concept thou, little operner jab

Im gonna "Boost" ma rhymes up like a Bird wit broken ~WINGS/
ur shits worse then Sunday Praies aT Church when ya mother SINGS//
Ok, again not yuor best, same as above

"Parental adivory"cause my rhymes swear alot"FUCK~HEX"/
With your dick so small,People classify it as LUCK~SEX"//
Didnt really like this im afraid, didnt feel it so weak closer

OVERALL: PGB dont think you tried hard coz not yo best, but you didnt need to, Hex ok for starter keep at it...

[Kaotik D]

1-0,
See how he explained his vote hex have a read of it and try and improve of it man.
uppin more votes please

[Falix]

i burn you crispy, like a fucking blow torch//
leave you bleeding all over the front porch//
^^simple, short

i hit you up like rockets attached to my fist//
i leave you dead, you evaporate like mist//
^^...lol ok, ur dangerous O.O

an explicent spittar vs some indecent spittar//
ain't much of a match, he is a decent quittar//
^^...meh



my rhymes Spits Curses.And sprays venim called a "HEX"
Ur playin the "PGB game,Watch me maul ya like a T"REX"
^^meh

Im gonna "Boost"ma rhymes up like a Bird wit broken ~WINGS//
ur shits worse then Sunday Praies aT Church when ya mother SINGS//
^^...k

"Parental adivory"cause my rhymes swear alot"FUCK~HEX"
With your dick so small,People classify it as LUCK~SEX"
^^nope

lol weak. vote- hex. cuz he had a line that made me laugh

[Huff]

Hex

1st bar- simple short
2nd bar-pretty good not great tho
3rd bar-not really man

PGB
1st bar- so so
2nd bar- ok
3rd-doesnt do ne thing 4 me

[Executioner]

who did ya vote 4^^^^^ c'mon man you gotta put overall: PGB gangstar or Hex

[Executioner]

Consistency/Structure: Hex
Creativity: Pgb gangstar
Enjoyable: Hex
Flow: Hex
Metaphors: PgB gangstar
Multies: P-Gangstar
Personal: Hex, I guess
Punches: hex, i guess
Vocabulary: Pgb ganstar
Wordplay: Hex
Overall: Hex

Srry PGB gangstar, but you were off that day, your shit didn't make sense, i would go 4 hex

[ArchimedeZ]

Consistency: Tie
Structure: Hex
Flow: Tie
Multies: Neither (either not a multie or forced)
Punches: PGB (weak though)
Personals: Neither
Nameplay: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Vocab: Neither
Enjoyment/Humour: Neither

Overall: PGB, but should really be a tie

[slimshadyLP]

HEX

i burn you crispy, like a fucking blow torch//
leave you bleeding all over the front porch//
weak opner..straight punch...weak...

i hit you up like rockets attached to my fist//
i leave you dead, you evaporate like mist//
also weak..weak meta...weak punch...

an explicent spittar vs some indecent spittar//
ain't much of a match, he is a decent quittar//
WEAK punch...bad closer....


PGB

my rhymes Spits Curses.And sprays venim called a "HEX"/
Ur playin the "PGB game,Watch me maul ya like a T"REX"//
weak opner...bad punch...

Im gonna "Boost" ma rhymes up like a Bird wit broken ~WINGS/
ur shits worse then Sunday Praies aT Church when ya mother SINGS//
bad punch..bad meta...

"Parental adivory"cause my rhymes swear alot"FUCK~HEX"/
With your dick so small,People classify it as LUCK~SEX"//
nope...bad closer....

Consistency/Structure: H (PGB had random stuff)
Creativity: none
Enjoyable: none
Flow: tie
Metaphors: H (PGB had strange ones)
Multies: H
Personal: neither
Punches: tie
Vocabulary: H
Wordplay: PGB (weak though)
Overall: Hex won.......bad battle.......

[Kaotik D]

This was for nothing....
i didnt go hard cause i wanted to jelp hex with his verse..
Where not counting this as a win loss record...
thank you for votes

[D-ManD]

Damn,I wasn't expectin you to literally set up a full battle,I thaught you were gonna have him pm u a verse..Oh well Thanx Pgb for ya help,Hex actually did alot better than I thaught he was gonna at first...