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L_Nino
11-20-2005, 07:42 PM
LP:
2 bars PER PERSON...



ME:
same amount bars u got...




regular rules....deadline's soon...that is, if however u could get even drops...
BAR BY BAR BREAKDOWNS...



LP cats drop first...

GaTmAn
11-20-2005, 07:50 PM
"corrupted" minds, force yo' "poor" ass rhymes gettin left bankrupt and destructed,
youd be better off if ud have ducked it L JUST take the KO like chess instructed,

i flow better than u when DROPPIN-KEYS, left bandy legged weakend with FLOPPIN-KNEES
actin "gangster" when its only GTA u be POPPIN-G'S, 2 bars have "owned" u like SHOPPIN-SPREES


pretty much a freestyle

Kaotik D
11-20-2005, 08:53 PM
MY BARS:
Ur Disses are LUCK~SIN~HITS,U coudnt produce a "POWERFULL" punch if ya had Barb wire Collied and STUCK~IN~it//
Ya open mics SUCK~RIN~SHITS,Boring after the Hook"SOURFULL"Stuff,Like ya Boy Boobs, Yea i noe ya FUCK~TIN~TITS//

(1:Metas,Tin tits=man tits, Self explnatory)

L_Nino, u Count hit a "Rhyme" if u were a pelican "Hummin" where that WHORE~NEMO~AT?//
Pm Me? bitch i aint got the "Time" to Murk Little Fags,Go back to ya SORE~KEMO~MAT//

(2:Kemotherpea,Nemo the moive, self explnatory)

Quick Free style Lol

L_Nino
11-20-2005, 11:32 PM
ummmm...ok...


Elec.X. / Chess are left...



http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16962
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16953

ArchimedeZ
11-21-2005, 12:46 PM
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16962
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=212568#post212568

My Links^^

OK Nino You Been Waitin For This One Eh… :D

Got This Mouse Runnin Scared, Like He Afraid Of Cats When He Simply “Statin Votes”/
Hustlin Fool? Smack You With My “Pay Attention” Only Time You “Taking Notes”//-1

Resorts To Makin Boats, That’s The Only Time His Verse “Takes Shape” And Sails(Sells)/
You Couldn’t Rumble If You Were Ali On The Mic, Still “Shake Tapes” And Fail//-2


Explanations

-1: He hardly ever breaks down his votes, “Notes” as in money.
-2: As in makin paper boats, Ali has Parkinson’s disease, “Shake”.

Chess_Intellijenc
11-21-2005, 01:52 PM
you veteran, since when? you getting *d/r* votes by SUCKING DICK
cuz truth is, we all know you're as *good as 50*, cuz you're FUCKING SHIT

if you were *pottasium in water* you still couldn't come *ferocious*
cuz looking at at my bars, got yours placed in recycle bin like they were atrocious


bar1-easy, + he gets dickriden votes in most of his battles i've seen
bar2- pottasium in water is explosive

L_Nino
11-21-2005, 06:34 PM
lol...

whatever...i'll drop soon....

ArchimedeZ
11-21-2005, 06:36 PM
How people votin on our verses? Pickin the best one or as a whole.

L_Nino
11-21-2005, 07:05 PM
dont worry, i didnt leave anybody out :D



1) PGB a GANGSTER? Plz COLONEL MUSTARD, You aint gotta CLUE, He only SPIT SICK SNEEZIN' WIT' THE FLU /
U GIVIN' PROPZ cuz MS.SHADY MADE YA SIG FOR U?? But I FORGOT, Ya already started BOWIN' DOWN TO BITCHES, When YOU PLEDGED ALLEGIANCE TO YA CREW /


2) EX responds to EVERY TOPIC I'M IN, Rite behind me ALWAYS JOCKIN, L's STEADY KNOCKIN' like a BULLY BOXIN' /
But YOU BE STOPPIN', ELECTRICAL got MINOR POWER, STICK A FORK in a LIGHT SOCKET then maybe YOU'd BE SHOCKIN' /


3) XCESS NOW, Prolly somethin' DIFFERENT NEXT TIME WE MEET, But U ALWAYS GON BE RAZ-BERRY cuz YOU A FRUIT & YOU SWEET /
LEFT FOR A WEEK, If U GON' LEAVE THEN LEAVE, & the FIRST 2 LETTERS IN YA NAME close as YOU'd GET TO BEIN' ME / (ELectrical)


4) Like ABORTION CLINCS, GAT'll GET DEADED BY CHOICE, Put U IN A GRAVE thats ONE OFF the NUMBERS OF ROYCE / (5'9)
L SOUNDPROOF, I'M KILLIN' THE NOISE, & THIS IS TEXT STUPID, Who's gon rejoice when THEY HEAR the SOUND OF YA VOICE? /


5) GATMAN's ALL BITCH, ALL RIPPED wouldnt be HALF A MAN TORN IN 2, & YOU A NOBODY so NO ONE's GON' MOURN FOR U /
Dont worry, I'll TAKE GOOOD CARE OF LAUREN TOO, U USED TO COCK anyway cuz LP FULL OF DICKHEADS like PORN FOR DUDES /


6) A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /
These PUNCHES'll leave YALL SORE and U HAVE CHESS INTELLIJENJC??, But if ya SO SMART then why YOU PLAYIN' ON THE WRONG BOARD? /


7) YOU C.I, Get put in a HOSPITAL to have YA BREATHE LESS, See CHESS, TESTIN' NOT POSITIVE FOR DOPE like a PASSED PEE-TEST /
I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES /


8) VICTORY IS PRICELESS but a ASS WHOOPIN' COSTS NUTHIN', U GUYS LYRICAL?? NOBODY FEELIN' U like YA THOUGHTS NUMBIN' /
FALL BACK, RETRACE YA STEPS like YA LOST SOMETHIN', & ya did but since YALL PROPHETS, YOU shoulda SEEN THIS LOSS COMIN' /



expo'z are obvious, if NOT, dont be shy to ask...

GaTmAn
11-21-2005, 07:46 PM
lmfao nino

wish id have wrote sumting now, nice nice drop, lol at the ender,

ill av to battle u 1 on 1 sumtime,

Red Devyl
11-21-2005, 08:32 PM
k i will jus break it down for person to person except for Lz cuz he has 8 barz:

GATMAN
i lieked the first bar but the ssecond bar had a nice multi but made no sense

PGB
k um first bar was bad, the multies were simply forced and the meta didnt make sense in any form but the second bar was pretty good but didnt understand where nemo came in frm

Electrical
ur first bar had no punch even tho i see where u were tryin to go the second bars first line was good but the second lines jus messed it up

Chess
suckin dick and fuckin shit are way too basic rhymes (or atleast wat i expected from u) 1st bar was an attempted personal but didnt work out
second bar came outta no where but was an average bar

L Nino -the best part of votin hea
1) PGB a GANGSTER? Plz COLONEL MUSTARD, You aint gotta CLUE, He only SPIT SICK SNEEZIN' WIT' THE FLU /
U GIVIN' PROPZ cuz MS.SHADY MADE YA SIG FOR U?? But I FORGOT, Ya already started BOWIN' DOWN TO BITCHES, When YOU PLEDGED ALLEGIANCE TO YA CREW /

Nice meta wit sneezin n killed him wit pledgin allegiance to the crew n had an ill flow but i wud count this as 2 barz instead of one

2) EX responds to EVERY TOPIC I'M IN, Rite behind me ALWAYS JOCKIN, L's STEADY KNOCKIN' like a BULLY BOXIN' /
But YOU BE STOPPIN', ELECTRICAL got MINOR POWER, STICK A FORK in a LIGHT SOCKET then maybe YOU'd BE SHOCKIN' /

i had no clu wat u were doin in the first line but u covered the whole thing up in the second line so yea tite endin, nice meta

3) XCESS NOW, Prolly somethin' DIFFERENT NEXT TIME WE MEET, But U ALWAYS GON BE RAZ-BERRY cuz YOU A FRUIT & YOU SWEET /
LEFT FOR A WEEK, If U GON' LEAVE THEN LEAVE, & the FIRST 2 LETTERS IN YA NAME close as YOU'd GET TO BEIN' ME / (ELectrical)

again no clue where u were goin in the first line but the second line (closest u are gonna to me) killed him

4) Like ABORTION CLINCS, GAT'll GET DEADED BY CHOICE, Put U IN A GRAVE thats ONE OFF the NUMBERS OF ROYCE / (5'9)
L SOUNDPROOF, I'M KILLIN' THE NOISE, & THIS IS TEXT STUPID, Who's gon rejoice when THEY HEAR the SOUND OF YA VOICE? /

lolz first line was killin him itsel and the second life jus buried him

5) GATMAN's ALL BITCH, ALL RIPPED wouldnt be HALF A MAN TORN IN 2, & YOU A NOBODY so NO ONE's GON' MOURN FOR U /
Dont worry, I'll TAKE GOOOD CARE OF LAUREN TOO, U USED TO COCK anyway cuz LP FULL OF DICKHEADS like PORN FOR DUDES /

yea average bar compared to othaz

6) A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /
These PUNCHES'll leave YALL SORE and U HAVE CHESS INTELLIJENJC??, But if ya SO SMART then why YOU PLAYIN' ON THE WRONG BOARD? /

the first line maden o sense to me but the wrong board part jus covered up for the first line so average bar

7) YOU C.I, Get put in a HOSPITAL to have YA BREATHE LESS, See CHESS, TESTIN' NOT POSITIVE FOR DOPE like a PASSED PEE-TEST /
I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES /

pee test and pieces is way basic rhyme i expected from u n the pawn part dissed him but dissed u as well so bad bar

8) VICTORY IS PRICELESS but a ASS WHOOPIN' COSTS NUTHIN', U GUYS LYRICAL?? NOBODY FEELIN' U like YA THOUGHTS NUMBIN' /
FALL BACK, RETRACE YA STEPS like YA LOST SOMETHIN', & ya did but since YALL PROPHETS, YOU shoulda SEEN THIS LOSS COMIN' /

nice bar dope as fuck good close

nino everythin was nice but i wud count that as 16 barz not eight they are way too long

Overall: L nino............it mite b cuz it was agianst 4 DIFFERENT people gettin so less opportunity to show

Mc-Itty
11-22-2005, 11:49 AM
Hmmm...well I'm coo with gat/pgb/chess...y'all kno i dont talk shit...can i vote :D?

L_Nino
11-22-2005, 12:02 PM
2) EX responds to EVERY TOPIC I'M IN, Rite behind me ALWAYS JOCKIN, L's STEADY KNOCKIN' like a BULLY BOXIN' /

i had no clu wat u were doin in the first line


3) XCESS NOW, Prolly somethin' DIFFERENT NEXT TIME WE MEET, But U ALWAYS GON BE RAZ-BERRY cuz YOU A FRUIT & YOU SWEET /

again no clue where u were goin in the first line

6) A GAT MAN wit' NO GUN? Ya only SWING THE 9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE, So L'll LEAVE THIS PUSSY BLOODY but its ALL GORE /

the first line maden o sense to me..

7) I'll be a PAWN TO U, Cuz U ALWAYS BE A QUEEN TO ME bitch, So watch how L FLIP THE GAME & LEAVE CHESS IN PIECES /

the pawn part dissed him but dissed u as well so bad bar




2) That was cuz damn near every topic I post in, if u look behind wat i drop, he posts &'s always on my nuts...lol...
then the "steady rockin'/bully boxin" was cuz bully beats up kids lil' then him so of course he's gonna rock 'em...

3) His name is electrical XCESS but he used to be RAZ2riches...so thats jus' sayin next time we meet it'll prolly be somethin else...
and RAZ berry...raspberry...thats like callin' him a faggot hence "u a fruit and u sweet"

6) gat is a gun..."how is he a GAT MAN wit NO GUN"...lol..thats basically the concept...
"9 IRON on a GOLF COURSE" line is a reference to a gun too...9 is type of gun, iron refers to gun...aswell as a club for golf...So, "swing the 9 nine iron on a golf course" ;)
"bloody pussy" line was jussa bitch concept...'cept they werent on their period, they're bleedin but its all gore...like they gettin cut up and shit

7) pawn thang, ehh, its in his sig, i said he's a queen cuz he a bitch, ya know...i could care less if a queen's higher than a pawn...
& the "flip the game/chess in pieces" part was reallly wat happens if u flip a chess game? u leave pieces everywhere...and that was jus' a diss off his name and a lil' wordplay/anameplay whatever...



make more sense now?? ;)