Jakey Boi vs Austin

[Jakey Boi]

Aight 2-3 barz
Due in a hour or else DQ
I drop 1st
3 votes Ko
5 votes unless

Good luck

[Austin Cr]

Alright

[Jakey Boi]

Aight man i got thingz on, so if i dont drop in a hour you spit 1st and i will wen i can is that cool?

[Austin Cr]

Yey At 3:20 Ill Have Somthin

[Austin Cr]

[quote]your A City Slicker Milk Your Mom To Titie Slicker Your Dick Is So Small Your Pissin On Your Balls.your A Discraes To This Life This Planets To Small For A Faliure Like You So Take Out Your Dictionary And Look Your Name Up And It Will Say Wannabe White Ass Rapper I Shattered Your Dreams Show How Does That Sound

[Jakey Boi]

key'd in 2 minz

Yo austin that sound pretty damn fine/
Wannabe white rapper whos about to shine//

You cant beat me lyrically, your structures dysmal/
It's almost as bad as your rhymes i class them abysmal//

So Austin go look your name up and i can guarentee/
It will say anuva wannabe rapper whos lyrically miles below me//

uppin votes on this ppl

[Austin Cr]

That Sounded Prety Tight

[Jakey Boi]

uppin votes on this people

here ma links
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....2201#post212201
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....2204#post212204

[Kaotik D]

Yo austin that sound pretty damn fine/
Wannabe white rapper whos about to shine//
LAME weak

You cant beat me lyrically, your structures dysmal/
It's almost as bad as your rhymes i class them abysmal//
Good vocab weak though

So Austin go look your name up and i can guarentee/
It will say anuva wannabe rapper whos lyrically miles below me//
Weak but best bar in line

Not worth breaking down austins cause structure is all over the place
Vote to Jakey

Jakey_Boi=that was one of ur worst drops now ur in MIC u need to stand up
Austin= u need to learn the basics before u battle again

[Hex!]

Consistency/Structure: Jakey boi
Creativity: Boi
Enjoyable: Boi
Flow: Boi
Metaphors: Boi
Multies: Boi
Personal: Boi
Punches: Boi
Vocabulary: Boi
Wordplay: Boi
Overall: Boi

[paranoia]

boi wins this fo m
finisher was a gud 1
austin well ur dick verse was a hum. 1

[Mc-Itty]

if austins made full sense he wud get punches, shit was mo direct...needa sort ya ish out...but yea

Vote: JakeyBoi

Doesnt say u needa break shit down but yea here the cats:

Multis: None
Wordplay: None
Nameplay: None
stucture: J
Flow: A
Vocab: None
Personals: None
Punches: J

Close though.

[a.i.d.s.]

ugh, kinda, weak battle.

@austin
could you write your shit with a skip (by pressing the enterkey on your keyboard) after every line.


well jakey took this, i dont break down here.


vote jakey boy

[ArchimedeZ]

Jakey Boi took this easy, I see your elevatin a little with your flow, but now try and improve your vocab and complexity. Austin, sort the structure out, and be alot more creative if you dont wanna get eaten up in here :D

[Jakey Boi]

yea man ino but if you read my other posts yestday! i got shit on at home and he wanted me to drop so i just put sumtin up real quick

my win cheerz for votes

[.:Eminem:.]

he bited like fuck!!!! all cats go to jakey

[Jakey Boi]

ok close this shit 6-0 i think

[Hex!]

good battle man^^^^

[ArchimedeZ]

Hex needs links

[..Da Storm..]

Multis: None
Wordplay: None
Nameplay: None
stucture: J
Flow: A
Vocab: None
Personals: None
Punches: J
Overall: J

[J-Crawf]

i need links so
jakey took it with ease, not breakin it down cos it doesnt say we need to

[Jakey Boi]

lmao @ this battle was i really that bad?? haha

[[Da~Iceman]]

lol no offense jakey but this was the worst battle from you ever but u still took it easy my vote jakey

[Jakey Boi]

no need for votes lol it was over a month ago
no offence taken lol i was whack then
but it 9-0 or sumtin now

[J-Crawf]

lol i just needs links bruv , but fuck me i can safely say the shit can be closed jakey . lol .