Eminem.vs.Archetype (0-3 KO)000

[ArcheType]

Aight thanx fo acceptin, rules:

5 bars
no crew votes..Dick ridin..e.t.c
24 hr time limit after checkin in
3 ko/ 5 to win

GL

Peace

[.:Eminem:.]

checkin in...ill post mine later.....

[.:Eminem:.]

you know what imma drop it now
GL no beef

This nigga so gay he still wears his baby clothes/
even though he says hes a male, his name makes him look like a fairy hoe//

You can't escalate, youre just like a walking escalator/
you go so far and still got no paper//

It's stupid how u gettin killed by a twelve year old/
Its like having a jacket in the summer and still be cold//

When im done wit u u gon leave the forum/
Then after then im gonna die from boredum//

So come on and step to your game man/
or go and start kicking spray cans//1

1- im callin him prro and he has nothing to do
No beef GL

[Rap&Rock]

boy that sucked^^^

[.:Eminem:.]

^^^ u must be so desperate with them girls in ur siggy so stfu

[Rap&Rock]

stop looking at them bitch, and go in the corner and masterbate.

[.:Eminem:.]

then how the fuck did u get them without l00kin at them and try to hump them

[Rap&Rock]

like you don't look at porn, maybe you do just naked males ass rapeping each other, damn right i look at porn, but you would be the one to hump the screen.

[.:Eminem:.]

u dumb u part of a crew and have another's siggy how dumb is that?
and u stay on Marvos dick

[Rap&Rock]

holy fuck, it is dissing LP, fucking read you little 12 year old.

[.:Eminem:.]

W0W 3 ppl.....thats fucking sad like hell

[Rap&Rock]

just like how you fuck your mom.

[.:Eminem:.]

WOW can it get any hornier 4 u u fucking masturbate master...
ANYWAY HERES MY LINKS http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=106370#post106370 http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=106475#post106475

[Rap&Rock]

can't even properly vote, you made some shit up.

[.:Eminem:.]

^^biggest dickrider ever so go home...if u have 1......

[Rap&Rock]

i might vote, so i would be saying that.

[Kaotik D]

fucking hell,,,,,,,,,,
Rap&fock fuck off u Lame Homo Fag.............................

[Hex!]

get the fuck off rap&Rock, you know what i wanna battle you Rap&Rock

[raider]

stop freepostin peeps. yo archtype get ur verse over wit so these babies can go home. we need a mod to delete this shit

[.:Eminem:.]

read fool

No hate or d/r votes
what a giant meathead

[ArcheType]

Fo Fuck Sake Slap a Cock fuck right off...
Both of u stop fuckin freepostin...stop fuelin each other aight!!

Heres ma fuckin verse!!!!

Ayo..yo...
Ahem, wtf//
You takin tha piss?, did I juss here what I think I did!, What are you, fuckin racist/!?
After youve read this yo gona hav wished that you thought bout who you juss fuckin dissed//

Actually “Em”… I be wearin Zoo York, repin all of “NYC’S” hip hop elementary/
You juss an Eminem wannabee, n this is tha way it meant to be, ur getting beat down by Arche tha realist MC//

Dude?! You cant hack it, u go to ya cd collecton grabbin tha first Em freestyle crack spit/
Go on n re-write it, switch jumper fo jacket, but you still whack n lackin lyrical shit/

Now I’m half way threw n this is it, Death form boredom? Nah I’m bout ‘a make ya commit…suicide/
Admit it You a Canadian emcee wit no shit ta slide, Fuck! U don’t even know Classified!!//

Aight now I neva even tried but im pretty sure that wit that last bar you juss died/
N im goina to finish of eatin yo hind like you was straight up Stir fried//

If ya need me to explain i will, but it not exactly difficult to understand..

Links in a minute

[Hex!]

srry 4 the free post tho.

[Ghost Emperor]

no ones even voted. stop freepostin in ur own thread

[raider]

who juss got ripped. eminem did

archetype on all cats

[.:Eminem:.]

POLLS NOW OPEN
Arch post ur links..
do cat votes......

[Hex!]

This nigga so gay he still wears his baby clothes/
even though he says hes a male, his name makes him look like a fairy hoe//
nice opener, nice punch
You can't escalate, youre just like a walking escalator/
you go so far and still got no paper//
not feeling it
It's stupid how u gettin killed by a twelve year old/
Its like having a jacket in the summer and still be cold//
not really feeling it either
When im done wit u u gon leave the forum/
Then after then im gonna die from boredum//
gay, not decent
So come on and step to your game man/
or go and start kicking spray cans//1
not a srong closer

it was like you were just tyring to get words to rythem, you'll get better as you grow on, nice try tho 4 your age.
Suggestions
1)don't try to just get words to rythem
2)nice try, just work on uppin your vocab and punches


Archetypes verse

You takin tha piss?, did I juss here what I think I did!, What are you, fuckin racist/!?
After youve read this yo gona hav wished that you thought bout who you juss fuckin dissed//
it was ight, good opener
Actually “Em”… I be wearin Zoo York, repin all of “NYC’S” hip hop elementary/
You juss an Eminem wannabee, n this is tha way it meant to be, ur getting beat down by Arche tha realist MC//
nice punch
Dude?! You cant hack it, u go to ya cd collecton grabbin tha first Em freestyle crack spit/
Go on n re-write it, switch jumper fo jacket, but you still whack n lackin lyrical shit/
it was okay, could have been better
Now I’m half way threw n this is it, Death form boredom? Nah I’m bout ‘a make ya commit…suicide/
Admit it You a Canadian emcee wit no shit ta slide, Fuck! U don’t even know Classified!!//
nice closer, :clap:

Over all goes to Archetype
Aight now I neva even tried but im pretty sure that wit that last bar you juss died/
N im goina to finish of eatin yo hind like you was straight up Stir fried//

[ArcheType]

Shit yeah cat votes...dnt care w/e...

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16981
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16846

Aight uppin votes n no mo shitty 3posts!!

Peace..(to those who deserve it)..

V V V V V WTF!! NO FUCKIN FREE POSTS!! PM HIM THAT!! V V V V V V

[.:Eminem:.]

yo hex that pic is gay so plz take it out!! lol

[Hex!]

my pic, which one

[.:Eminem:.]

the one that says this poster blah blah.....

[Hex!]

it was orignally Explicent content sticker, fuck it was a hidden picture

[Kaotik D]

This nigga so gay he still wears his baby clothes/
even though he says hes a male, his name makes him look like a fairy hoe//
Playedddddddddd

You can't escalate, youre just like a walking escalator/
you go so far and still got no paper//
No played again

It's stupid how u gettin killed by a twelve year old/
Its like having a jacket in the summer and still be cold//
yea decent

When im done wit u u gon leave the forum/
Then after then im gonna die from boredum//
most played rhyme..............

So come on and step to your game man/
or go and start kicking spray cans//1
Playedddddddddddddddddd
Vocab poor,
Structure alrite
flow alrite.
U just chucking in words to rhyme try and step up ya game man

Archetypes verse

You takin tha piss?, did I juss here what I think I did!, What are you, fuckin racist/!?
After youve read this yo gona hav wished that you thought bout who you juss fuckin dissed//
Decent better then Above

Actually “Em”… I be wearin Zoo York, repin all of “NYC’S” hip hop elementary/
You juss an Eminem wannabee, n this is tha way it meant to be, ur getting beat down by Arche tha realist MC//
good concept

Dude?! You cant hack it, u go to ya cd collecton grabbin tha first Em freestyle crack spit/
Go on n re-write it, switch jumper fo jacket, but you still whack n lackin lyrical shit/
No i didnt like it

Now I’m half way threw n this is it, Death form boredom? Nah I’m bout ‘a make ya commit…suicide/
Admit it You a Canadian emcee wit no shit ta slide, Fuck! U don’t even know Classified!!//
Nice

All cats to archetype u elevatin alot man.
Keep spittin both
'1'

[.:Eminem:.]

0-2 still needs some votes.....

[Mavro]

all cats archetype, no need to break it down