DRAMA QUEEN vs MC-ITTY (1-5)

[Mc-Itty]

y'all kno its gon be hot, ight:

48 hours fo both spits to be in, thats by Monday Night.
No flipping/feeding
First to 4 votes, 3-0 is KO
Break down bar by bar OR cats (votes WILL be tossed if bullshit is seen)
No freeposting - fuck outta this thread, i dont wana kno whatchu think of the first dropper...jus lay ya vote an leave :)
5 bars - 10 lines MAX.

Dont sign in, i kno u down cuz u jus accepted the callout.

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[Mc-Itty]

Aight First Up, Read The Expos Be4 voting, No flippin Ma...Uppin Yo Verse wit links.

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=211485#post211485
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=211918#post211918



Flows so hot its gon HEAT-HOES-LIPS-SHUT even if u hung yo words on walls u cud never KEEP-YO-SHIT-UP. Bitch yo ‘HEADED-FO-RED‘, already kno she loosin but like a blond still asks ‘SAID-IT-WHO-DEAD?!’

U shud be AXED-FO-FREE-SAY dam dyke even ASKED-FO-THREE-WAY, ma I wudnt even start-it , fo real even if u sell yo shit it wudnt ever be a ‘super-market’

Fuck a music note, ma u best Re‘Tyre’, breakin yo heels, BUYIN A ‘FLAT’, suck as an Artist, aint no point in TRYIN FO ACTS.

Talkin about age she jus sixteen, DISTRESS? I CALM A SCENE, fuck a MISS-JESS DRAMA QUEEN

Pop out ya eyes, now nobody gon SEE YOU, Tried stuffin ice down her mouth so she cud ‘BE-COO’ dawg fuck tryin spit back to this, cuz cordin 2 ya name, its mo likely u’d D-Q!!


Bar 1: lips in her display pic, shes a ‘red head’ but asks like a blond…time limit was set to 48 hours and she asked if she cud spit the next day….dont get me started on the ‘age’ thread.

Bar 2: She asked me fo a three way audio/text/topical battle and she works In a super market.

Bar 3: heels = wheels. Lindsey Lohan did that Drama Queen shit now she an ‘act’ress. ..also drama – act - Music, flat note.

Bar 4: Her aim or some shit is MsJessDramaQueen

Bar 5: D-Q…the initials for Drama Queen.

[Mc-Itty]

I guess my last bar was mo effective than i thought, ...Give u till 2morrow night...fucking hate DQ's.

[Drama Queen]

“Run Rabbit Run”, you go hide away in your little underground hole
To make you feel bit more at home, for you I will even install a pole
Make sure your hands aren’t slippery though, u might bite the dust
Ya pussy been infected by so many dicks, it built its own dirt crust
I'd go down on her but like the White House; she gotta cut-a-bush
Hah, she got so much sperm stuck on her ass, fuckin butter tush
Why do I bother? Her multis are as effective as victimless murder
Her voice’s annoying, Foxy went deaf wishin she never heard her
Just our luck, another explosive Arab (http://forum.eminem.net/showpost.php?p=211883&postcount=27) on planet, man she’s dumb
By battling Mc Dyke, I make her swallow pride like daddy’s cum





Explanations:

* Run Rabbit Run: Eminemforum
* Pole: she's a stripper...haha...one of those foreigners that come here as hookers...
* Bite the dust: Dubai (where she’s from) is known for sand-skiing
* Foxy Brown is going deaf
* Explosive Arab: terrorists and she felt personally attacked (explosive temper)

[Mc-Itty]

rofl..livin here like 3 months in a year dont make me from here....get ya personals right be4 tryin ma ;)

Uppin Votes

[a.i.d.s.]

@drama
well startin was boring, rhymin sucked ass, but its gettin better at the cut a bush line. ittys right, need to get personals more worked out before using 'em. next time ask me, got a lot to tell ya about itty :p j/k
well you didn't really stand a chance here ....
*will see in the cats.

@itty
good as usual, i still dont like this, "one big multie equals a great verse" stuff. but it was aight. "keep yo shit up" thing was nice.



Categories
Consistency/Structure: itty
Creativity: itty
Enjoyable: itty
Flow: itty
Metaphors: itty
Multies: itty
Personal: itty
Punches: itty
Vocabulary: tie
Wordplay: itty
Overall: itty

one sided, itty took this.

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

i thought it would be a better battle......Queen ya verse wasnt dat good...kinda weak.....itty as usual ya verse was good...


Consistency/Structure:I
Creativity: I
Enjoyable: I
Flow: Tie
Metaphors: I
Multies: I....easy
Personal: Tie
Punches: I...easy
Vocabulary: Tie
Wordplay: I....easy
Overall: Itty...easy

[Drama Queen]

I don't do text...ain't no excuse...but Itty...sweetie...ya style is herbish...

Trust me...I been on TONS of sites...been checking text battles forever (I usually only do topical/poetry/audio battles but Missy over there was too chicken to do an audio one) and your style...fix it up...

[Tech Skillz]

First Of all I did enjoy drama's verse better. Mc Itty, i really hate it how you structure your verses and try placing some more punches instead of just multies. You guys who voted must be retarted, since you must not rap.

Consistency/Structure: Drama-way easier to rhyme and read
Creativity: Tie
Enjoyable: Drama
Flow: Drama
Metaphors: Neither-since they all were weak
Multies: Itty
Personal: Itty
Punches: Tie
Vocabulary: Neither
Wordplay: Tie

Overall: Drama, due to the fact i enjoyed it better since it was easier to read cause other wise it'd be a tie.

[When_I'm_Gone]

Consistency/Structure: Itty
Creativity: Tie
Enjoyable: Drama
Flow: Drama
Metaphors: Itty
Multies: Itty
Personal: Itty
Punches: Itty
Vocabulary: Neither
Wordplay: Itty

MC Itty took it easyy

[Jakey Boi]

yo last vote then goes to me (kinda gives ya a clue)

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Consistency/Structure: Itty
Creativity: Tie
Enjoyable: Itty
Flow: Queen
Metaphors: Itty
Multies: Itty
Personal: Itty
Punches: Itty
Vocabulary: Queen
Wordplay: Itty

itty gets my vote

[L_Nino]

MC-ITTY:

Flows so hot its gon HEAT-HOES-LIPS-SHUT even if u hung yo words on walls u cud never KEEP-YO-SHIT-UP.

^^^ first part was aight...2nd was nice..

Bitch yo ‘HEADED-FO-RED‘, already kno she loosin but like a blond still asks ‘SAID-IT-WHO-DEAD?!’

^^^ ???

U shud be AXED-FO-FREE-SAY dam dyke even ASKED-FO-THREE-WAY,

^^^ ok personal, liked this...

ma I wudnt even start-it , fo real even if u sell yo shit it wudnt ever be a ‘super-market’

^^^ dope concept/personal..

Fuck a music note, ma u best Re‘Tyre’, breakin yo heels, BUYIN A ‘FLAT’, suck as an Artist, aint no point in TRYIN FO ACTS.

^^^ no but buyin a flat part was so-so...

Talkin about age she jus sixteen, DISTRESS? I CALM A SCENE, fuck a MISS-JESS DRAMA QUEEN

^^^ ehhh...woulda been better used in a line...

Pop out ya eyes, now nobody gon SEE YOU, Tried stuffin ice down her mouth so she cud ‘BE-COO’ dawg fuck tryin spit back to this, cuz cordin 2 ya name, its mo likely u’d D-Q!!

^^^ hottest bar in ya verse...




DRAMA:

Run Rabbit Run”, you go hide away in your little underground hole
To make you feel bit more at home, for you I will even install a pole

^^^ kinda liked this, flow wise...it woulda been a ok personal if she was really a stripper....

Make sure your hands aren’t slippery though, u might bite the dust
Ya pussy been infected by so many dicks, it built its own dirt crust

^^^ ill...not ill as in dope...ill as in disgustin'..

I'd go down on her but like the White House; she gotta cut-a-bush
Hah, she got so much sperm stuck on her ass, fuckin butter tush

^^^ liked the first part, 'cmon, who doesnt love lesbians? :D...wasnt feelin' the rest though

Why do I bother? Her multis are as effective as victimless murder
Her voice’s annoying, Foxy went deaf wishin she never heard her

^^^ first part was alright...rest was off..

Just our luck, another explosive Arab on planet, man she’s dumb
By battling Mc Dyke, I make her swallow pride like daddy’s cum

^^^ ehhhh...



u tell me who won?...





btw, u dont hafta count my vote ;)

[Mc-Itty]

[QUOTE=junior087]First Of all I did enjoy drama's verse better. Mc Itty, i really hate it how you structure your verses and try placing some more punches instead of just multies. You guys who voted must be retarted, since you must not rap.

^^ thats funny, since i'm pretty much sure Rico KO'd ur ass in a battle... ;)



@ rofl at drama queen...ma PLEASE...how u gon comment on my style when u cudnt even drop one decent bar...talkin ish on my style SMH ma, fuck off this site now :) . Thanks fo not DQ'ing me...not that it wud have made a difference.


5-1 to me.

*Closed*