ssLp Vs Pgb (5-3)

[Kaotik D]

8 Bars,
5 votes,wins
3-0 ko
bbb votes only,
No feeding recyling,
no hate,Dikridiing,
Links up with verse,
No time limit
Check in*

[slimshadyLP]

checkin in.......

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16863&page=2&pp=10
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16769&page=4&pp=10

[Kaotik D]

Alrite random Drop Links up with Verse

[Kaotik D]

****PGB VERSE*****
Check this,

BAR 1
"Slim"this a"Shift"of pain for ya,my"Profiencey" is Reveling a Despondent "fag"in M.I.Cs Crew//
Im about to rip you and this is "premediated"ur good?nah just a "Scandolmonger"Whos Ratings Over Due//

BAR2
Im"vigrous",at Stonning Direct Punches at"Slim"Even "gravity" Coudnt stop me gettin~so~high/High//
my rhymes Flow,ur shit just keeps "rambling"M.I.C sick of ur "period" Blood,Now they Lettin~you~Die//

BAR3
Watch me as i perfrom a"Speilburg"production,Dam ur"Dramatic"thats why u were Rejected from the Play~skool~moive//
"alota"posts And still un~respected,and full of"sorrow"Ull run after this,And take up an Idenity as a Gay~tool~Newbie//

BAR4
Im a "Marvel"prophet,i "choke" villans Like a "Spider"castin a web,u cant run From"Silk" Just Put the Gun~2~head//
Im batman,and u can be ma "Robin" Bitch,Go get ma "gat mo bill"Wait this shits R rated,Slim u better Run~2~Bed//

BAR5
Ima Break the "jurisdiction"on this shit ,Cause im from the "CPT"My rhymes sells more then the Slim Shady~Lp//
SSLP coudnt hit a note with "Windows Notebook" set on automatic rhyme,ya feelin ma Punches?,thats me Baby~"PGB"//

BAR 6
Bitch im a gangster whos "Infinte",I get vociferious when i hit the mic ,stand back and watch me close the Hood/hood//
my rhymes are Sophistacated,Urs are like a Rasping voice trying to clear,U hit the Stage,And said Nothing Just Stood//

Bar7
Better not mess with me,Cause PGB "will fucking kill you",Listean to the Lyrics,And get back to ur Homosexual~Sex//
U are a Hindarance to the "Internet police"Downloading Child Gay Porn,u "Arise" over ma verse i call it Errectional~TEXT//

BAR8
Aye yo Slim,"Live this Up"this is coming from a "teetotaller" who sits at home all day and stairs at his computer Screen//
Fuck your Murk list,this is a treason of ur rhymes,i commite Murders,even "sherlockhomes" coudnt discover the mean/mean//



Explanations
BAR1
line1=his has our Crew name in his Name
Line2=Means battle is already won,Scandolmongher=gossiper,

BAR2
Line3=Wordplay High as in Stonned high is in sky,gravity=meta
line=4Sayin his rhymes are Shit,Period Blood as in Female,Mic,
'
BAR3
line1=Check profile his into filmmaking,
line 2.he got over 800 posts,Basically saying his gonna runaway after this

BAR4
Line1=he likes comics,marvel=Spiderman etc,
Line2=Basic,

BAR5
line1=His from the Cpt,Nameplay at the end
line2=basic self explantory.

Bar6-
line1=Personal=infinte vociferious=Loud......Wordplay
line2=Rasping=Rusty-croacky,sayin that he got on the stage and freaked out said nothing

Bar7
line1=em sings Kill you,And the Hook is that,personal
line2-Sayin he gets a Bonner over my verse And he looks at child Porn Lol

Bar8
line1=Teetotaller=Non drinker basic
line2=Wordplay mean as in angry mean is in Like a crime show Motive etc.

no beef, Uppin ur verse,
feedback on this freeposts allowed

Links
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16863
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16907

[Kaotik D]

Uppin ur verse

[slimshadyLP]

1.-Doin a 'blind drop' cuz i tore his "ankles"(angles) like i just 'burned-ya-bootz', i bring ya team "demise" like i just 'served-ya-crew',
--Cuz this fool thinkin he "underground" just cuz he got 'murked-by-rootz'//

2.-Ya punches are like 'fog' they've always "myst"(missed), whackest in ya crew placed hisself last in his own sig,
--Ya reputations like most people he beat in battles, they dont exist//

3.-You to ya crew's like quotes in ya verse, its not needed, your whackness like the words in barz 6 an 8 it just repeated,
--Double sizin ya crew in ya sig cuz its da only thing thats worth seein//

4.-Like spices i 'Seizin(season)-this-fight', nuttin speacial in ya verse so like faxes ya 'feedin-us-rhymez',
--I burn ya to a crisp and hav ya 'leadin-the-night', 'squeezin-ya-eyes' just so u can 'see-that-im-tight'//

5.-Like vegetables i hav ya ass "beet"(beat), no audios cuz whackness speak for itself like it da only truth that ya leak,
--Like ice ya pack no heat, and "LP" ya crew already dickridin me//

6.-I take ya breath away like i 'hold-chests', usin itty's strutcture like ya 'stole-rep',
--Ya 'souls-bled', fool thinkin he gangsta cuz he got 'bold-text'//

7.-Ya lyrics aint thought out like 'severed-heads', like empty pencils ya 'never-lead',
--Cuz like thrown out credit cards this fools 'better-shred'//

Explanations
1.he said to do a blind drop.......demise was banned....he got beat by a member anmed rootz..

2.in his sig where he put his crew members names he placed himself at the bottom...most of the battles he won are with people that are barely known..

3.in barz 6 an 8 he repeated the wrod 'hood' and 'mean'....his crew name is bolded and big in his sig...

4. season like i a seasoned dish with spices.....

5. his crew name is LP for short and im sslp....

most everyhting else is selfexplainable......

VOTEZ!!

[Kaotik D]

uppin votes

[paranoia]

gud verses both of u guys 50 50 i guess
but ... oh well
for me i think
pgb had ya
ma vote :-pgb
no beefs man

[Kaotik D]

1-0 to me
uppin more

[Kaotik D]

Sorry that vote doesnt count.,
its 0-0
Remember BBB votes only 0-0
uppin votes

[GaTmAn]

hmmmmmmm,

pgb, ur verse was good, fell off in a couple of places, but kept it funny,
sslp, started good but by the end, the wordplay and metaphors was annoying the fuck outa me, u use em TOOOOOOO much,

cats

wodplay-sslp
flow-pgb
ejoyment-pgb
punches-pgb
personals-sslp
multis-pgb
opener-pgb
closer-sslp

cats dont lie

vote-pgb, mannn ur elevatin

[Kaotik D]

Ok 1-0
Bbb votes or Cats
Since the first vote didnt count make sure votes are cats or BBB
Thanks for voting
1-0 my way
uppin votes

[Chess_Intellijenc]

wordplay-sslp
flow-pgb
ejoyment-pgb
punches-pgb
personals-tie
multis-pgb
opener-tie
closer-sslp

vote: pgb

[ArchimedeZ]

Opener: PGB
Closer: PGB
Consistency: SSLP
Flow: SSLP
Structure: Tie
Mutlies: SSLP (PGB some of yours were forced)
Metaphors/Similes: SSLP
Wordplay: SSLP
Vocab: PGB (lay off using the long words all the time though, messes up the flow)
Enjoyment/Humour: PGB
Nameplay: Neither

VOTE: close battle but SSLP got this imo. PGB elevated like fuck but his verse just wasn’t as natural as SSLP’s.

[S.W.A.T]

since i dint see that crew votes are not allowed....

Opener: SSLP
Closer: PGB
Flow: PGB
Structure: PGB
Punches: SSLP
Wordplay: SSLP
Metas: SSLP
Vocab: PGB
Multiez: SSLP
Enjoyment: SSLP

VOTE: SSLP

gd battle, but the wrdplay killed him....

[IllerthanMe]

1.-Doin a 'blind drop' cuz i tore his "ankles"(angles) like i just 'burned-ya-bootz', i bring ya team "demise" like i just 'served-ya-crew',
--Cuz this fool thinkin he "underground" just cuz he got 'murked-by-rootz'//

2.-Ya punches are like 'fog' they've always "myst"(missed), whackest in ya crew placed hisself last in his own sig,
--Ya reputations like most people he beat in battles, they dont exist//

3.-You to ya crew's like quotes in ya verse, its not needed, your whackness like the words in barz 6 an 8 it just repeated,
--Double sizin ya crew in ya sig cuz its da only thing thats worth seein//

4.-Like spices i 'Seizin(season)-this-fight', nuttin speacial in ya verse so like faxes ya 'feedin-us-rhymez',
--I burn ya to a crisp and hav ya 'leadin-the-night', 'squeezin-ya-eyes' just so u can 'see-that-im-tight'//

5.-Like vegetables i hav ya ass "beet"(beat), no audios cuz whackness speak for itself like it da only truth that ya leak,
--Like ice ya pack no heat, and "LP" ya crew already dickridin me//

6.-I take ya breath away like i 'hold-chests', usin itty's strutcture like ya 'stole-rep',
--Ya 'souls-bled', fool thinkin he gangsta cuz he got 'bold-text'//

7.-Ya lyrics aint thought out like 'severed-heads', like empty pencils ya 'never-lead',
--Cuz like thrown out credit cards this fools 'better-shred'//

Explanations
1.he said to do a blind drop.......demise was banned....he got beat by a member anmed rootz..

2.in his sig where he put his crew members names he placed himself at the bottom...most of the battles he won are with people that are barely known..

3.in barz 6 an 8 he repeated the wrod 'hood' and 'mean'....his crew name is bolded and big in his sig...

4. season like i a seasoned dish with spices.....

5. his crew name is LP for short and im sslp....

most everyhting else is selfexplainable......

VOTEZ!!
Bleedin Ya Gut...Put Spices On Fools Cuz I'm Seizin This Slut (Season)


YO HOMEY STOP BITTIN COME UP WITH UR OWN CONCEPTS AIGHT

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16683

[L_Nino]

PGB:

"Slim"this a"Shift"of pain for ya,my"Profiencey" is Reveling a Despondent "fag"in M.I.Cs Crew//
Im about to rip you and this is "premediated"ur good?nah just a "Scandolmonger"Whos Ratings Over Due//

^^^ ???

Im"vigrous",at Stonning Direct Punches at"Slim"Even "gravity" Coudnt stop me gettin~so~high/High//
my rhymes Flow,ur shit just keeps "rambling"M.I.C sick of ur "period" Blood,Now they Lettin~you~Die//

^^^ first line as decent...2nd was weak..

Watch me as i perfrom a"Speilburg"production,Dam ur"Dramatic"thats why u were Rejected from the Play~skool~moive//
"alota"posts And still un~respected,and full of"sorrow"Ull run after this,And take up an Idenity as a Gay~tool~Newbie//

^^^ gay..

Im a "Marvel"prophet,i "choke" villans Like a "Spider"castin a web,u cant run From"Silk" Just Put the Gun~2~head//
Im batman,and u can be ma "Robin" Bitch,Go get ma "gat mo bill"Wait this shits R rated,Slim u better Run~2~Bed//

^^^ wordplay is wack in the first part...2nd part was a weak...flow was off...

Ima Break the "jurisdiction"on this shit ,Cause im from the "CPT"My rhymes sells more then the Slim Shady~Lp//
SSLP coudnt hit a note with "Windows Notebook" set on automatic rhyme,ya feelin ma Punches?,thats me Baby~"PGB"//

^^^ u mentioned the same words over again in this bar (sslp/note/rhyme)...this bar was aight but coulda been better...

Bitch im a gangster whos "Infinte",I get vociferious when i hit the mic ,stand back and watch me close the Hood/hood//
my rhymes are Sophistacated,Urs are like a Rasping voice trying to clear,U hit the Stage,And said Nothing Just Stood//

^^^ wack..

Better not mess with me,Cause PGB "will fucking kill you",Listean to the Lyrics,And get back to ur Homosexual~Sex//
U are a Hindarance to the "Internet police"Downloading Child Gay Porn,u "Arise" over ma verse i call it Errectional~TEXT//

^^^ ehhh..

Aye yo Slim,"Live this Up"this is coming from a "teetotaller" who sits at home all day and stairs at his computer Screen//
Fuck your Murk list,this is a treason of ur rhymes,i commite Murders,even "sherlockhomes" coudnt discover the mean/mean//

^^^ alright bar but soft closer...




SSLP:

1.-Doin a 'blind drop' cuz i tore his "ankles"(angles) like i just 'burned-ya-bootz', i bring ya team "demise" like i just 'served-ya-crew',
--Cuz this fool thinkin he "underground" just cuz he got 'murked-by-rootz'//

^^^ Demise part was decent everythang else was garbage..

2.-Ya punches are like 'fog' they've always "myst"(missed), whackest in ya crew placed hisself last in his own sig,
--Ya reputations like most people he beat in battles, they dont exist//

^^^ fog line was so-so...crew/sig line was ok...2nd line was borin'...

3.-You to ya crew's like quotes in ya verse, its not needed, your whackness like the words in barz 6 an 8 it just repeated,
--Double sizin ya crew in ya sig cuz its da only thing thats worth seein//

^^^ ehhh...

4.-Like spices i 'Seizin(season)-this-fight', nuttin speacial in ya verse so like faxes ya 'feedin-us-rhymez',
--I burn ya to a crisp and hav ya 'leadin-the-night', 'squeezin-ya-eyes' just so u can 'see-that-im-tight'//

^^^ seen that season line (on here) already....eyes line was the only thing worth readin' in this bar..

5.-Like vegetables i hav ya ass "beet"(beat), no audios cuz whackness speak for itself like it da only truth that ya leak,
--Like ice ya pack no heat, and "LP" ya crew already dickridin me//

^^^ liked the ice pack part...rest was ehhh...

6.-I take ya breath away like i 'hold-chests', usin itty's strutcture like ya 'stole-rep',
--Ya 'souls-bled', fool thinkin he gangsta cuz he got 'bold-text'//

^^^ first part was koo...last part was gay...

7.-Ya lyrics aint thought out like 'severed-heads', like empty pencils ya 'never-lead',
--Cuz like thrown out credit cards this fools 'better-shred'//

^^^ last line was a ok concept...



Structure:TIE
Consistentcy: SSLP
Personals: SSLP...his were more effective...
Punches: SSLP
Multis: SSLP
Metas: TIE
Flow: TIE
Enjoyment: TIE
Creativity: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Vocab: TIE
Overall: SSLP

VOTE: SSLP

[slimshadyLP]

2-3 me leadin...........


yo illerthanme sorry bout that i never knew u used that wordplay...........

[Mavro]

wordplay:sslp
flow:pgb
ejoyment:pgb
punches:pgb
personals:tie
multis:pgb
opener:tie
closer:sslp

vote: pgb

[Kaotik D]

3-3
upping more

[CapZ]

Pgb's Verse:

BAR 1
"Slim"this a"Shift"of pain for ya,my"Profiencey" is Reveling a Despondent "fag"in M.I.Cs Crew//
Im about to rip you and this is "premediated"ur good?nah just a "Scandolmonger"Whos Ratings Over Due//
~i see u up ya vocab so-so 2/5 opener~

BAR2
Im"vigrous",at Stonning Direct Punches at"Slim"Even "gravity" Coudnt stop me gettin~so~high/High//
my rhymes Flow,ur shit just keeps "rambling"M.I.C sick of ur "period" Blood,Now they Lettin~you~Die//
~ehhh~

BAR3
Watch me as i perfrom a"Speilburg"production,Dam ur"Dramatic"thats why u were Rejected from the Play~skool~moive//
"alota"posts And still un~respected,and full of"sorrow"Ull run after this,And take up an Idenity as a Gay~tool~Newbie//
~not feelinin it..~

BAR4
Im a "Marvel"prophet,i "choke" villans Like a "Spider"castin a web,u cant run From"Silk" Just Put the Gun~2~head//
Im batman,and u can be ma "Robin" Bitch,Go get ma "gat mo bill"Wait this shits R rated,Slim u better Run~2~Bed//
~nope~

BAR5
Ima Break the "jurisdiction"on this shit ,Cause im from the "CPT"My rhymes sells more then the Slim Shady~Lp//
SSLP coudnt hit a note with "Windows Notebook" set on automatic rhyme,ya feelin ma Punches?,thats me Baby~"PGB"//
~so-so~

BAR 6
Bitch im a gangster whos "Infinte",I get vociferious when i hit the mic ,stand back and watch me close the Hood/hood//
my rhymes are Sophistacated,Urs are like a Rasping voice trying to clear,U hit the Stage,And said Nothing Just Stood// ~lame homie~

Bar7
Better not mess with me,Cause PGB "will fucking kill you",Listean to the Lyrics,And get back to ur Homosexual~Sex//
U are a Hindarance to the "Internet police"Downloading Child Gay Porn,u "Arise" over ma verse i call it Errectional~TEXT//
~ehhhhh~

BAR8
Aye yo Slim,"Live this Up"this is coming from a "teetotaller" who sits at home all day and stairs at his computer Screen//
Fuck your Murk list,this is a treason of ur rhymes,i commite Murders,even "sherlockhomes" coudnt discover the mean/mean//
~1/5 ender~

1.-Doin a 'blind drop' cuz i tore his "ankles"(angles) like i just 'burned-ya-bootz', i bring ya team "demise" like i just 'served-ya-crew',
--Cuz this fool thinkin he "underground" just cuz he got 'murked-by-rootz'//
~feelin it a bit not bad personal 3/5 opener~

2.-Ya punches are like 'fog' they've always "myst"(missed), whackest in ya crew placed hisself last in his own sig,
--Ya reputations like most people he beat in battles, they dont exist//
~1st line myst very played..so-so~

3.-You to ya crew's like quotes in ya verse, its not needed, your whackness like the words in barz 6 an 8 it just repeated,
--Double sizin ya crew in ya sig cuz its da only thing thats worth seein//
~ehhh could've been betta~

4.-Like spices i 'Seizin(season)-this-fight', nuttin speacial in ya verse so like faxes ya 'feedin-us-rhymez',
--I burn ya to a crisp and hav ya 'leadin-the-night', 'squeezin-ya-eyes' just so u can 'see-that-im-tight'//
~1st line played..da rest ok..~

5.-Like vegetables i hav ya ass "beet"(beat), no audios cuz whackness speak for itself like it da only truth that ya leak,
--Like ice ya pack no heat, and "LP" ya crew already dickridin me//
~could've been used WAY BETTA~

6.-I take ya breath away like i 'hold-chests', usin itty's strutcture like ya 'stole-rep',
--Ya 'souls-bled', fool thinkin he gangsta cuz he got 'bold-text'//
~2nd kinda messed it up for a betta punch~

7.-Ya lyrics aint thought out like 'severed-heads', like empty pencils ya 'never-lead',
--Cuz like thrown out credit cards this fools 'better-shred'//
~so-so 2/5 ender~

CAT'S

PUNCHES- Slim... was more direct then pgb's..
PERSONALS- Slim Was Way More Noticeable
MULTIES- Slim.. Tho Both At Parts Also Where FORCED..
METAS- TIE
VOCAB- PGB
CREATIVE- TIE
INTRO/OUTRO- SLIM
FLOW/STRUCTURE- TIE
WORDPLAY- SLIM

OVERALL- SSLP Took this.. ur getin there tho pgb ACTULLY i seen ya other battles and this wasnt that much ya best same to u Slim..

~1~

[Jakey Boi]

PUNCHES- Sslp
PERSONALS- PGB
MULTIES- Sslp
METAS- PGB
VOCAB- PGB
CREATIVE- Sslp
INTRO/OUTRO- Sslp
FLOW/STRUCTURE- PGB
WORDPLAY- Sslp

VOTE- close but Slim got this

[slimshadyLP]

thanx for votin peepz.........5-3 i win..close this....nice battle PGB.......