GE vs. raider (3-5)

[raider]

i hate bar limits.. takes my flow away. so no limit

no hate votes
ride dik all u want, it wont happen cuz we hardly known.

3 straight KO, or first to 5 votes

and cuz im so nice ill let u go first again. :D

verses due tomorow. freestyling juss takes the fun out of the reader. they wanna read hot shit

[Ghost Emperor]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16846&page=2
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16875&page=2

[raider]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=211684#post211684
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=211693#post211693

[Ghost Emperor]

Enough of this waitin' shyt....let's do this thing....check...check.....uhhh buss it!!!!


My grammar styles stay unique, my technique wit speech ranks elite
I take breaks between verses so these keys won’t overheat
enough of that speech let’s start ya defeat when I speak, your replys in vain you pipsqueak
your outdated like beta and ur rhymes obsolete!!
I admit that your faith is adamant….but I’m not havin’ it…your style ain’t stable an’ I’m constantly hacking it
you MUST feel that your first ass kickin’ wasn’t that adequate!!
Can’t handle punches at this magnitude, uppercuts and jabs propel ya directions in longitude or latitude I got attitude wit words….I tend to be abusive
every post is exclusive your loss, my win again is always conclusive!!!
I got a vaccine for ya sickness, several shots that hurts worse than tetina…these lines affects the retina, an makes it hard for the cerebrum to properly register….
Jam fishhooks in ya mouth hang ya by ur tonsils, put m80s in ya nostrils
I’m way to hostile my thoughts r iller than satan’s apostles
beat 2X till he docile…..he ain’t ready for this wickedness, I’m way to sick at this
reduce raiders remains to a pile of gore and some liquidness…even put fear in his witnesses!!
It’s your training day bitch, this is chess not checkers….respect the five-letters!!
Cause when it comes to shatterin’ dreams, this “Dj” is always breakin’ records!!
I beat this cat till he “shout Peace”….I stomp with out “cease”
till ur speech is fuk’d up like a drunk Juevenile with a mouthpiece
raider post ill so I gotta come harder, he’s far from a starter
so read his verse and send a prayer……I juss made this author a martyr!!!
We ain’t evenly matched…betta check my stats, I’m felonious wit raps!!
Even if my flows “pussy”….you still getting’ “clapped”
I'm drillin' ya like drunken dentists with turretts....this shyt ya nevah forget
or live to regret got you shook as hell and ya didn't even post yet!!!
Let's break this down....integrate ill with nice....lemme be more precise
even the preacher said "you a dumb muh-fukah for fuk'n wit' GE twice"!!!

[raider]

aight...check it out...

Ghost takes it on the chin, speak the clout, knockin ur lights out/ pull ur voicebox out ur throat, raider just "took the words right out ur mouth"/ verbal syphillis, watch this pussy get infected/ give em a barbed wire necklace, duck when the verbal tech spits/ leave u off "balance", watch ur head "bounce" when the lyrically "check" hits/ wreck this, spit faster then cheatahs/ smash the speakers, im the verbal leader/ make u "face facts" when i hit u in the head wit an encycledia/ leave ur head leakin like cheap tampons, i drop bombs/ im beatin this kid more then a trailor park mom/ run in ur house, empty a clip at the crib/ ass fuck the kids, hog tie ur bitch/ make u watch me split her ribs/ spray her brains on the wall when i shove the fifth to her lips/ glue ur hands to ur rhyme book to help u "stick to the script"/ fight fire wit fire, i just burnt the thread to ashes/ when the titan clashes, i leave u ripped like faggot asses/ i slice n cut, mics i bust, ur life is up/ shove a broom down ur throat and make u "bite the dust"/ start duckin, quit actin like u buckin somethin/ ur raps are like ur sexlife, cuz ur "fuckin nothin"/ uppercut, u lift off faster then a rocket, cant stop it/ hit ur ass wit a flamethrower and "burn a hole in ur pocket"/ ur face i scratch it, flurry of madness, i hurry the dispatchin/ slam the axe thru ur chest and "bury the hatchet"/ floss the rhyme, u cant cover the cost of mine/ carve a "crusifix" in ur "brain" so i can "cross ur mind"/ u been a clown since birth, drown ur verse, its bound to hurt/ slam u into the cement, i guess Ghosts really are "down to earth"/ im hell on wheels, food for thought, conjured many meals/ twist ur head around, put ur mouth to ur asscrack, leave u "head over heels"/ ill, i been the same since the start/ cut ur "chest" into 4 "quarters", make u have a "change of heart"/ harmin ur street, posses charm when i speak/ stick the nozzel to ur grill, so yea GE is "armed to the teeth"/ this grammar is offin dudes awfully often/ hit ur "throat" wit a "hammer", put a "nail in ur coffin"/ ripped this man for 20 bars, turned him into a puddle of fluids/ ejaculate on this faggot then shit on the ruins...six feet motherfucker...

[raider]

lets get the votes in. no need for bar by bar breakdowns. u can if u want though

[L_Nino]

GE:


My grammar styles stay unique, my technique wit speech ranks elite
I take breaks between verses so these keys won’t overheat

^^^ decent...

enough of that speech let’s start ya defeat when I speak, your replys in vain you pipsqueak
your outdated like beta and ur rhymes obsolete!!

^^^ first line was wack....2nd was played and borin' and the flow was a lil' off between/after the first line...

I admit that your faith is adamant….but I’m not havin’ it…your style ain’t stable an’ I’m constantly hacking it
you MUST feel that your first ass kickin’ wasn’t that adequate!!

^^^ Not feelin' this..

Can’t handle punches at this magnitude, uppercuts and jabs propel ya directions in longitude or latitude

^^^ lol...Nice..

I got attitude wit words….I tend to be abusive
every post is exclusive your loss, my win again is always conclusive!!!

^^^ Lame..

I got a vaccine for ya sickness, several shots that hurts worse than tetina…these lines affects the retina, an makes it hard for the cerebrum to properly register….

^^^ first line was soft...retina line was ok, rest was ehh...sounds too much like a canibus line..."...illest lyricist in America / ...too fast for the human retina to register"...i know u aint bite it though...dont like this bar

Jam fishhooks in ya mouth hang ya by ur tonsils, put m80s in ya nostrils
I’m way to hostile my thoughts r iller than satan’s apostles

^^^ liked the first line....thought the 2nd was gay...

beat 2X till he docile…..he ain’t ready for this wickedness, I’m way to sick at this
reduce raiders remains to a pile of gore and some liquidness…even put fear in his witnesses!!

^^^ witness part was tight...everything before was unneccesary...when u mentioned 2XL i thought u were gonna use a personal...& then i read this...

It’s your training day bitch, this is chess not checkers….respect the five-letters!!
Cause when it comes to shatterin’ dreams, this “Dj” is always breakin’ records!!

^^^ Played...

I beat this cat till he “shout Peace”….I stomp with out “cease”
till ur speech is fuk’d up like a drunk Juevenile with a mouthpiece

^^^ mentioned speech again....the wordplay was weak in ya first line, 2nd was ok though...

raider post ill so I gotta come harder, he’s far from a starter
so read his verse and send a prayer……I juss made this author a martyr!!!

^^^ wtf? ur first line complimented ur opponent....this bar was ehhhh...

We ain’t evenly matched…betta check my stats, I’m felonious wit raps!!
Even if my flows “pussy”….you still getting’ “clapped”

^^^ No..

I'm drillin' ya like drunken dentists with turretts....this shyt ya nevah forget
or live to regret got you shook as hell and ya didn't even post yet!!!

^^^ Dentist line was sub-par...concept wasnt really effective since he told u to go first....also forced......

Let's break this down....integrate ill with nice....lemme be more precise
even the preacher said "you a dumb muh-fukah for fuk'n wit' GE twice"!!!

^^^ Weak closer...




RAIDER:

Ghost takes it on the chin, speak the clout, knockin ur lights out/
pull ur voicebox out ur throat, raider just "took the words right out ur mouth"/

^^^ liked the concept...nice opener..

verbal syphillis, watch this pussy get infected/
give em a barbed wire necklace, duck when the verbal tech spits/

^^^ wack...

leave u off "balance", watch ur head "bounce" when the lyrically "check" hits/
wreck this, spit faster then cheatahs/

^^^ wordplay in the first line was decent...cheetah thang was weak...

smash the speakers, im the verbal leader/
make u "face facts" when i hit u in the head wit an encycledia/

^^^ lol...dope concept...

leave ur head leakin like cheap tampons, i drop bombs/
im beatin this kid more then a trailor park mom/

^^^ Nope..

run in ur house, empty a clip at the crib/
ass fuck the kids, hog tie ur bitch/
make u watch me split her ribs/

^^^ no..


spray her brains on the wall when i shove the fifth to her lips/
glue ur hands to ur rhyme book to help u "stick to the script"/

^^^ 1st line was off....2nd was a nice comeback though..

fight fire wit fire, i just burnt the thread to ashes/
when the titan clashes, i leave u ripped like faggot asses/

^^^ gay....played concept..

i slice n cut, mics i bust, ur life is up/
shove a broom down ur throat and make u "bite the dust"/

^^^ haha...

start duckin, quit actin like u buckin somethin/
ur raps are like ur sexlife, cuz ur "fuckin nothin"/

^^^ damn...

uppercut, u lift off faster then a rocket, cant stop it/
hit ur ass wit a flamethrower and "burn a hole in ur pocket"/

^^^ soft..

ur face i scratch it, flurry of madness, i hurry the dispatchin/
slam the axe thru ur chest and "bury the hatchet"/

^^^ females scratch partna...woulda flowed better if u took "the" out the first line...2nd was a lil' played....

floss the rhyme, u cant cover the cost of mine/
carve a "crusifix" in ur "brain" so i can "cross ur mind"/

^^^ lil' fruity how it came out but some good wordplay...

u been a clown since birth, drown ur verse, its bound to hurt/
slam u into the cement, i guess Ghosts really are "down to earth"/

^^^ ouch...nice personal...

im hell on wheels, food for thought, conjured many meals/
twist ur head around, put ur mouth to ur asscrack, leave u "head over heels"/

^^^ liked the first line...2nd was so-so...

ill, i been the same since the start/
cut ur "chest" into 4 "quarters", make u have a "change of heart"/

^^^ concepts played but its an aight bar...

harmin ur street, posses charm when i speak/
stick the nozzel to ur grill, so yea GE is "armed to the teeth"/

^^^ Ehhhh...

this grammar is offin dudes awfully often/
hit ur "throat" wit a "hammer", put a "nail in ur coffin"/

^^^ not diggin' this...

ripped this man for 20 bars, turned him into a puddle of fluids/
ejaculate on this faggot then shit on the ruins...

^^^ liked the closer...it was better than GE's....


Structure: GE....i had to fuckin break Raider's up...bastard..
Consistency: TIE...both were on & off...
Wordplay: R....was better...
Enjoyment: R...funnier bars & he had more of a "fuck u" attitude whereas GE was less "agressive"...
Multis: R...GE had more forced ones..
Flow: GE....fell off here & there but his was on point compared to raiders..
Metas: TIE
Punches: R...laughed on a couple 'em..
Personals: R....hit harder...
Overall: R...good battle gentlemen...worth the read...

VOTE: RAIDER

[L_Nino]

no need for bar by bar breakdowns.

lol...now u say it muffucka! :(

[raider]

looks like i screwed wit u twice. ma bad man. lol

[Rap&Rock]

Consistency/Structure: Ge
Creativity: Tie
Enjoyable: GE
Flow: Raider
Metaphors: GE
Multies: Raider
Personal: Ge
Punches: ge
Vocabulary: Ge
Wordplay: Raider
Overall: GE

it was a very good battle indeed. but Ge won it.

[Hex!]

Consistency/Structure: Ghost
Creativity: Ghost
Enjoyable: Raider
Flow: Raider
Metaphors: Ghost
Multies: Ghost
Personal: raider
Punches: Ghost
Vocabulary: Ghost
Wordplay: raider
Overall: Ghost

it was a strong battle guyz, loved them both, to bad you could have not tied, but it went to Ghost

[Mavro]

Consistency/Structure: Ghost
Creativity: Ghost
Enjoyable: Raider
Flow: Raider
Metaphors: Ghost
Multies: Ghost
Personal: raider
Punches: Ghost
Vocabulary: Ghost
Wordplay: raider
Overall: Ghost

[raider]

more votes cats. first to 5. its only 3-1

[TheExhibitionist]

Consistency/Structure: Ghost
Creativity: Raider
Enjoyable: Raider
Flow: Raider
Metaphors: Ghost
Multies: Ghost
Personal: Raider
Punches: Ghost
Vocabulary: Ghost
Wordplay: Raider
Overall: Raider

I liked them both alot, but it came down to the creativity and rhyming, both of which Raider took.

[RJB.]

Consistency/Structure: Ghost
Creativity: Raider
Enjoyable: Raider
Flow: Ghost
Metaphors: Ghost
Multies: Ghost
Personal: Raider
Punches: Raider
Vocabulary: Raider
Wordplay: Raider
Overall: Raider

[Demise]

Structure: Ghost... Raider wtf were you thinkin?
Creativity: Raider
Enjoyable: Raider
Flow: Ghost
Metaphors: Ghost
Multies: Ghost... GE was forcin shit like he had constipation
Personal: Raider
Punches: Raider
Wordplay: Raider
Overall: Raider

VOTE: RAIDER

[Rap&Rock]

you suck and you don't no how 2 vote bitch^^^^^

[Demise]

Fuck you nuff sed... I ripped ya ass already and I'll do it again leave their thread alone

[Rap&Rock]

you ripped and anal raped Rebel shadow and your whole crew....nuff sed bitch.

[ArchimedeZ]

Consistency/Structure: Ghost
Creativity: raider
Enjoyable: Tie
Flow: Tie
Metaphors: raider
Multies: Tie
Personal: Tie
Punches: raider
Vocabulary: Ghost
Wordplay: raider

Overall: raider, really good battle peeps

[raider]

yeeeeeesssss. The rematch is mine. i juss put the flesh back ghost