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ArcheType
11-17-2005, 07:46 PM
Aight man..here it is....

5 bars
No dickridin votes...etc..
3 ko, 5 to win,
Breakdown by cats please
24 hour time limit

Il drop first ..Il do it tonite...

Ok...Bars

A bar is to lines that rhyme together..Eg

..........................e/
..........................e// (thats a bar in like real basic structure)

Ya follow? so 5 bars will be technically like ten lines in basic structure!?

Thanx fo acceptin..GL

Peace.....1.....

ArcheType
11-17-2005, 08:44 PM
Aight here's ma drop..post links as soon as i find em...

GL

Ayo,,yo...

Stop rushing your rhymes, slow down n gain some Patience/
I’m crushing your minds, wit my brain flowing like ill-emcee-Ancients//

I bet All you gonna do is rap about this bitches (pointing at moi!) mother/
Dam, Yo whack rhymes got me in stitches, you must be her lover?//

N I Don’t need to luk at yo verse, I already won casue im intergalatic sittin ontop of tha universe/
I know tha gay’s ‘l pay’s to dress yo as a whoe nurse, fuck money is tha only way you fillin ya puny-Purse//

Throwin you aloft into tha Air , I’ma literally slam dunkin’ ur ass like Michael-Jordan/
Stop usin rhyme generatin’ software, lets see you actually flowin on tha Mic usin yo Recital-Organ//

So wit tha last two line’s im a teching ya tha battles main Prin-ci-pal/
That Your shits gota rhymes n be literal, like Im'a maime ya Mys-ti-kal//


Links...http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16889
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16772

No beef aight..

Peace

Minus 17
11-17-2005, 09:18 PM
aight

Everytime I see your lyrics in my Thread/
I know that you come from your Bed//

Your lyrics are so poor that my little cuzin can make Better/
Dont cry if you compare my dick and your, and mine is about a Meter//

I think your lonely becuz your words are too Emotional/
This is not a contest of faggot here, International//

Stop crying please, I'm here dont mourn Baby/
You see me and I know your going to turn Happy//

The two other last lines are for you and your Conscience/
Continue to grow without pills and bad Influence//


I made what I can

no beef, aight

good battle

Enfleurage
11-17-2005, 09:56 PM
ArcheType wins, I'm not doin categories cause it's pretty obvious who is going to win...

S.W.A.T
11-17-2005, 11:14 PM
ytea same here, Arche got this easily...

umm who did jordan beat?

Executioner
11-18-2005, 12:15 AM
waste of time, but Archetype took dis with ez

diamond in rough
11-18-2005, 05:25 AM
no comparison really ai you need to start ona lower level im guessing your a new b like me juging by your no of pots prac more

structure: archie
rhyming: archie
personals: ariche
multies: disnt see any

my vote archie

Jakey Boi
11-18-2005, 11:25 AM
he bet rowe swat

Ghost Emperor
11-18-2005, 07:05 PM
archetype all caps. i guess we cn say this is a ko

Khemikz Divine
11-19-2005, 11:24 AM
weak battle

Flow:Arche

fuck it all cats arche