L Nino vs. Rootz (4-0 KO)

[Rootz]

4 bars, deadline tomorrow night midnight.

Check in so I can spit, homie!

[Rootz]

Good one, Inevitable about the outcome of this battle. Very original; shows how much DR this Board gives out.

I'll spit like an 'upset stomach,' to 'KuRupt-ya-MiNd'
The way I play 'catch' in 'Austrailia,' you'd think I 'threw'-up-ya-'spine'*

Everyone 'Hates' on ya 'empty' rhymes, but 'fillers-Love-it'
'Collectin' money on pay day,' the only way you rhyme at a spitters-'budget'**

You gettin' beat and you 'Lovin' It,' cross ya 'buddies,' I'll show-stoppin'-to-his-'friends'
I'll put 'yellow signs' in 'L_Nino's' path, the way I 'throw-caution-to-the-wind'****

'Spittin' below ground' the only way ya rhymes are 'under'stood, ya free-raps (Freestyles)
Make you do 'run' around ya 'MiNd' 'cause recoverin' from my rhymes, you just 're-laps'***


*Outback in Austrailia..get it?
**Budget...the best you could get, without being wack..like right on the boarder line of being wack
***Relapse, or fall sick again..or whatever you are in...re-laps..re-run a lap
****L_Nino is a change in climate...hence the fact "wind"

[Inevitable]

Good one, Inevitable about the outcome of this battle. Very original; shows how much DR this Board gives out.

It was a joke man, ever heard of one? Whens the last time you saw me vote on a battle? Thats right, because I dont, so how would I be a d/r?

Also, get your links up.

[L_Nino]

LMAO....nice bite...next time use a personal...& L_Nino doesnt refer to a change in climate, professor...


1) ROOTZ SUCK MORE than a BLACK & DECKER, YOU LEFT...CAME BACK & STILL AS WACK AS EVER/
BEAT ME? Man, YOU'LL NEVER, YOU 19, But the closest you gon' come to seein' 2-0 is LOOKIN' AT YA BATTLE RECORD /


2) HER 2PAC QUOTE show me HE AINT GON BE MAD AT ME after L HURT THIS THING, CALLED ME OUT like YOU MURDER KINGS /
So now HE ACTIN' LIKE HE SERVIN' THINGS, But HE IS, Cuz BK dont REP BROOKLYN it stands FOR BURGER KING /


3) Just cuz YOU WORK there, Dont mean u cant HAVE IT UR WAY, Like EYEWEAR L'll putta HOLE IN UR FRAME /
Or do like TEACHERS, PUT IT ALL IN UR BRAIN, But YOU'd still AMOUNT TO NOTHIN' like the DOUBLE O's in UR NAME /


4) YOU DONE GETTIN' CHECKED like when the DOCTOR THREW, L a PESTICIDE, NOT dude on here but IM TOXIC TOO /
So that mean I'M STOPPIN' ROOTZ, You a fruit, KUTA KENTAY does more HIP HOP than YOU /



^^^ dats my verse to be voted on....




and here's a couple more shots since u're not gonna be here much longer :D


G-UNIT? Yeah, Ok, WHO GOT YA UR DEAL?, You NOT MAKIN' MILLS, YOU MAKIN' VALUE MEALS /
So lemme know how YA NANA FEEL, Cuz BITCH YOU MUST HAVE A PUSSY since you SCREW BANANNA PEELS /


REPPIN' COMPTON, CALIFORNIA NIGGA, You gotta be either STUPID or SILLY /
YA DICK SIZE only way YOU HOLD A MILLY & the REAL ROOTZ is a GROUP FROM PHILLY /


ROOTZ CLAP AT NIGGAS?, UR PRO's FRONTIN' dude, YOU PLAY BASKETBALL, So of course YOU SHOOT /
& L normally rolls up MARIJUANA LEAVES but TODAY, I decided to SMOKE THE ROOTZ /





explanations are in his profile or post...

[Rootz]

It's called PLAY OF NAME, homie..don't give me that L_Nino don't mean that ish..it does!

Maybe not your likings, but to geographers, it is.

El Nino is what I'm talkin' about..same thing as your name! Just the E is gone, and the little weird ~ over the n or the o. Whatever.

[L_Nino]

Ok...

dont explain that to me....explain what site u got ur verse from....cuz (in reality) ur wack...

& why would u just explain that and not my accusations of bitin':confused:


is that why u suddenly called me out?...to drop some bitten shit?....cuz it all makes sense now ;)

[Rootz]

4 bars..get rid of a few of yours, home-skillet. Otherwise, I win by DQ. READ THE RULES.

[Rootz]

No..notice how I was gone for like five months? I been elevating, dawg.

Check any rap site that has an "L_Nino," and you won't find my verse. Or any rap site, for that matter.

Plus, how would I have used the personals if they were bitten from another site?

Get ya game straight, homie.

[Rootz]

Oh, by the way...that "have it your way," is MADLY played.

[L_Nino]

4 bars..get rid of a few of yours, home-skillet. Otherwise, I win by DQ. READ THE RULES.

i did....


^^^ dats my verse to be voted on


the extra's were jus' cuz i didnt wanna make a open mic thread about it...and u'll prolly get banned anyway so i jus' let a couple more shots off...& those are not to be counted...READ MY VERSE ;)

[L_Nino]

Oh, by the way...that "have it your way," is MADLY played.

its not the fact that its played....the thing is, "Is it true?" ;)


Occupation:
I work at Burger King.


^^^ and I see that is :D


blame urself...u wrote it...im jus' doin' the best wit' what i got to work wit'...

[Rootz]

Why would I get banned?

[Rootz]

Your line still played.

Personal, yes; good line, no.

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=210816&posted=1#post210816

[L_Nino]

Why would I get banned?

cuz thats what usually happens to ppl that bite...

Your line still played.

Personal, yes; good line, no.

it IS played....but like i said, its FACT, not fiction...thats why i said it, plus it tied in wit' the previous line...

& its still one more personal than u got in ya whole verse...


critque my lines when u start writin' ya own ;)


http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?goto=newpost&t=16833
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16772



bar by bar breakdowns plz...

[slimshadyLP]

I'll spit like an 'upset stomach,' to 'KuRupt-ya-MiNd'
The way I play 'catch' in 'Austrailia,' you'd think I 'threw'-up-ya-'spine'*
ok opner nuttin really stood out

Everyone 'Hates' on ya 'empty' rhymes, but 'fillers-Love-it'
'Collectin' money on pay day,' the only way you rhyme at a spitters-'budget'**
second line was not very good....

You gettin' beat and you 'Lovin' It,' cross ya 'buddies,' I'll show-stoppin'-to-his-'friends'
I'll put 'yellow signs' in 'L_Nino's' path, the way I 'throw-caution-to-the-wind'****
also nuttin speacial...

'Spittin' below ground' the only way ya rhymes are 'under'stood, ya free-raps (Freestyles)
Make you do 'run' around ya 'MiNd' 'cause recoverin' from my rhymes, you just 're-laps'***
strectched....first line was cool till the 'free raps' add on.....second line coulda been used better....ok ender


1) ROOTZ SUCK MORE than a BLACK & DECKER, YOU LEFT...CAME BACK & STILL AS WACK AS EVER/
BEAT ME? Man, YOU'LL NEVER, YOU 19, But the closest you gon' come to seein' 2-0 is LOOKIN' AT YA BATTLE RECORD /
ok first line...second was better...descent opener..

2) HER 2PAC QUOTE show me HE AINT GON BE MAD AT ME after L HURT THIS THING, CALLED ME OUT like YOU MURDER KINGS /
So now HE ACTIN' LIKE HE SERVIN' THINGS, But HE IS, Cuz BK dont REP BROOKLYN it stands FOR BURGER KING /
BK line was good becuz it was a direct personal punch even hto it was played...

3) Just cuz YOU WORK there, Dont mean u cant HAVE IT UR WAY, Like EYEWEAR L'll putta HOLE IN UR FRAME /
Or do like TEACHERS, PUT IT ALL IN UR BRAIN, But YOU'd still AMOUNT TO NOTHIN' like the DOUBLE O's in UR NAME /
cool....liked the last line...cool frame metaphor..

4) YOU DONE GETTIN' CHECKED like when the DOCTOR THREW, L a PESTICIDE, NOT dude on here but IM TOXIC TOO /
So that mean I'M STOPPIN' ROOTZ, You a fruit, KUTA KENTAY does more HIP HOP than YOU /
cool ender....liked the last part...

Consistency/Structure: tie
Creativity: tie
Enjoyable: L
Flow: L
Metaphors: L
Multies: L
Personal: L
Punches: L
Vocabulary: neither
Wordplay: L
Overall: nino took it.......

[Rootz]

WHAT A DR...this crack-head wouln't know wordplay if it smacked his posterior.

NO COUNTING THAT VOTE.

Nothin' stood out in my first bar? PLEASE! Go put away that stupid D4L rappin;-(Laffy Taffy)-skills-simple-scheme, and take it out of my thread.

BITING?! Man..you don't know that people can improve, do you?

I say L_Nino gets banned for being stupid.

[raider]

I'll spit like an 'upset stomach,' to 'KuRupt-ya-MiNd'
The way I play 'catch' in 'Austrailia,' you'd think I 'threw'-up-ya-'spine'*
decent open

Everyone 'Hates' on ya 'empty' rhymes, but 'fillers-Love-it'
'Collectin' money on pay day,' the only way you rhyme at a spitters-'budget'**
creative, liked this bar

You gettin' beat and you 'Lovin' It,' cross ya 'buddies,' I'll show-stoppin'-to-his-'friends'
I'll put 'yellow signs' in 'L_Nino's' path, the way I 'throw-caution-to-the-wind'****
:thumbdwn:

'Spittin' below ground' the only way ya rhymes are 'under'stood, ya free-raps (Freestyles)
Make you do 'run' around ya 'MiNd' 'cause recoverin' from my rhymes, you just 're-laps'***
free raps? No. not feelin this ender

1) ROOTZ SUCK MORE than a BLACK & DECKER, YOU LEFT...CAME BACK & STILL AS WACK AS EVER/
BEAT ME? Man, YOU'LL NEVER, YOU 19, But the closest you gon' come to seein' 2-0 is LOOKIN' AT YA BATTLE RECORD /
another descent open, but better than rooz

2) HER 2PAC QUOTE show me HE AINT GON BE MAD AT ME after L HURT THIS THING, CALLED ME OUT like YOU MURDER KINGS /
So now HE ACTIN' LIKE HE SERVIN' THINGS, But HE IS, Cuz BK dont REP BROOKLYN it stands FOR BURGER KING /
would have been betta if rootz was from brooklyn but its nutin special

3) Just cuz YOU WORK there, Dont mean u cant HAVE IT UR WAY, Like EYEWEAR L'll putta HOLE IN UR FRAME /
Or do like TEACHERS, PUT IT ALL IN UR BRAIN, But YOU'd still AMOUNT TO NOTHIN' like the DOUBLE O's in UR NAME /
good bar here. liked the wordplay

4) YOU DONE GETTIN' CHECKED like when the DOCTOR THREW, L a PESTICIDE, NOT dude on here but IM TOXIC TOO /
So that mean I'M STOPPIN' ROOTZ, You a fruit, KUTA KENTAY does more HIP HOP than YOU /
better ender
Consistency/Structure: L
Creativity: L. rootz tried but failed
Enjoyable: Rootz
Flow: tie
Metaphors: L
Multies: L
Personal: L
Punches: L
Vocabulary: none
Wordplay: L
The Champion............ NINOOOOO!

sorry rootz but the only thing i liked in ur verse was the spitters budget

[Kaotik D]

Ur a bitter rootz peep my battle with him then check out his open mic.......

[ArchimedeZ]

What open mic, drop a link PGB? he hasn't dropped an open mic in a while. I get what ya sayin that you think he elevated too much but you gotta have evidence. Biting means to steal other peepz rhymes.

[Kaotik D]

Check his previous posts......

[Executioner]

Consistency/Structure: Nino
Creativity: Rootz
Enjoyable: Nino
Flow: Nino
Metaphors: Nino
Multies: Nino
Personal: Nino
Punches: Nino
Vocabulary: Nino
Wordplay: rootz
Overall: Nino

[Khemikz Divine]

Flow:Nino hands down
Punches: Nino
Personals: Nino
Worpdlay: Nino
creativity: Rootz
Enjoyment: Nino
Overall: Nino