View Full Version : Khem. D. vs. L_Nino (1-5)
L_Nino
11-16-2005, 02:10 PM
3 Barz..
regular rules...
due in 10 minutes...
Khemikz Divine
11-16-2005, 02:26 PM
My Attack-Kills people sleeping on ya verse's like they OD'D on Nap-Pills
Cause like "Perfecting Ancient warfare weapons" the way youre Battleaxe(battle lacks) Skills...
hey bitch u keep approaching me and ure gonna get ya rep-stunned....
and if u "Bite lines" I'll have this "Broad-banned" like "Internet-connections"
Kurupted Mindz? nah fuck-those-dicks ya flows Hopeless
in this battle I can't focus cnt take u serious u dnt even no how to Upload-pics*
*Kurupt mindz his crew
*-He didnt no how to upload pics onto the site
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....1477#post211477 (showthread.php?p=211477#post211477)
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....1476#post211476 (showthread.php?p=211476#post211476)
L_Nino
11-16-2005, 02:31 PM
1) KHEMIKZ NEVER DIVINE? It'll be easy for me to SEVER YA SPINE, BITCH, IMMA PIMP, I know all about ya kind/
& DONT THINK U'LL GET THE PERSONAL CAT. by ADDIN' MY CREW TO ONE OF YA LINES /
2) You gettin' me yet? YOU 16, Bout'a get BLOWN TO BITS fuckin 'round wit YA CHEMISTRY SET /
Cuz how you get ya name when YOU AINT EVEN HAD CHEMISTRY YET?? /
3) L'll CUT KHEM like RAPPERS FROM DA BAND, Cuz U COULDNT WRITE TIGHT wit CRAMPIN' IN YA HAND /
& YOU FROM WhALES right? Then why the fuck do YOU GOTTA DRAGON IN YA FLAG? /
Khemikz Divine
11-16-2005, 02:36 PM
I see how ppl write verses here they go more for personals....
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Vote up
Killa Jones
11-16-2005, 02:44 PM
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My Attack-Kills people sleeping on ya verse's like they OD'D on Nap-Pills
Cause like "Perfecting Ancient warfare weapons" the way youre Battleaxe(battle lacks) Skills...
TIGHT OPENER,FEELIN THIS
hey bitch u keep approaching me and ure gonna get ya rep-stunned....
and if u "Bite lines" I'll have this "Broad-banned" like "Internet-connections"
ANOTHER NICE BAR FEELIN THIS COZ IT MADE ME LAUGH
Kurupted Mindz? nah fuck-those-dicks ya flows Hopeless
in this battle I can't focus cnt take u serious u dnt even no how to Upload-pics*
LAME CLOSER
1) KHEMIKZ NEVER DIVINE? It'll be easy for me to SEVER YA SPINE, BITCH, IMMA PIMP, I know all about ya kind/
& DONT THINK U'LL GET THE PERSONAL CAT. by ADDIN' MY CREW TO ONE OF YA LINES /
SICK AS FUCK OPENER
2) You gettin' me yet? YOU 16, Bout'a get BLOWN TO BITS fuckin 'round wit YA CHEMISTRY SET /
Cuz how you get ya name when YOU AINT EVEN HAD CHEMISTRY YET?? /
COOL DISS MADE ME LAUGH
3) L'll CUT KHEM like RAPPERS FROM DA BAND, Cuz U COULDNT WRITE TIGHT wit CRAMPIN' IN YA HAND /
& YOU FROM WhALES right? Then why the fuck do YOU GOTTA DRAGON IN YA FLAG? /
OK CLOSER, AND THE CRAMP IN UR HAND IM SURE I HEARD CASSIDY SPIT SUMTHING LIKE THAT BEFORE.
Vote: L Nino, he had better vocab and his shit just seem to flow better when i was reading it, Khem D nutting against you, coz u came hard, but L edged you out
TIGHT BATTLE
Khemikz Divine
11-16-2005, 02:47 PM
SICK AS FUCK OPENER.?????
I admit it was nice but was far from sick
0-1
L_Nino
11-16-2005, 02:47 PM
Oh yea....
Broken down votes plz....
or cats:
Enjoyment:
Creativity:
Multis:
Metas:
Flow:
Personals:
Punches:
Overall:
Killa Jones
11-16-2005, 02:49 PM
.?????
I admit it was nice but was far from sick
0-1
my vote not urs
L_Nino
11-16-2005, 02:49 PM
I admit it was nice but was far from sick
Nah, he just meant it was alot better than urs ;)
ArcheType
11-16-2005, 03:25 PM
Aight Khemikz, yeah i think it goin more fo personals, but it is a battle ya know n not a freestyle so makes perfect sense....
Anyways this was one sided for me L Nino had it...
Operner:L Nino
Closer: L Nino
Enjoyment: L Nino
Creativity: L Nino (liked tha chemistry thing)
Metas: kinda tie but Khemikz had mo' (not that it helped..)
Flow: L nino
Structure: Tie
Vocab: L Nino
Personals: L Nino
Punches: L Nino
Overall: L Nino... I think this was an easy win for Nino, gud drop Nino i liked it.
Peace
Khemikz Divine
11-16-2005, 04:21 PM
break it down bar for bar I stated in callout (since he's a vet)
Khemikz Divine
11-16-2005, 04:46 PM
Nah, he just meant it was alot better than urs ;)
hmmm sure even tho mine was more creative ;)
0-1
L_Nino
11-16-2005, 04:55 PM
Uhh-huh...
"lackin' battle skill"/"slept on rhyme" concepts are the dopest shit i ever heard :rolleyes:
break it down if ya want, i dont care...cuz any way u look at it, u lost ;)
Killa Jones
11-16-2005, 05:53 PM
somebody close this,j/k,lmfao
slimshadyLP
11-17-2005, 12:56 AM
My Attack-Kills people sleeping on ya verse's like they OD'D on Nap-Pills
Cause like "Perfecting Ancient warfare weapons" the way youre Battleaxe(battle lacks) Skills...
ehh wusnt feelin this opener....the battleaxe thing kilt it...
hey bitch u keep approaching me and ure gonna get ya rep-stunned....
and if u "Bite lines" I'll have this "Broad-banned" like "Internet-connections"
liked the concept....felt it coulda came harder on the second line
Kurupted Mindz? nah fuck-those-dicks ya flows Hopeless
in this battle I can't focus cnt take u serious u dnt even no how to Upload-pics*
whack......
1) KHEMIKZ NEVER DIVINE? It'll be easy for me to SEVER YA SPINE, BITCH, IMMA PIMP, I know all about ya kind/
& DONT THINK U'LL GET THE PERSONAL CAT. by ADDIN' MY CREW TO ONE OF YA LINES /
ehhh ok opner....used that second concept b4 havent u......
2) You gettin' me yet? YOU 16, Bout'a get BLOWN TO BITS fuckin 'round wit YA CHEMISTRY SET /
Cuz how you get ya name when YOU AINT EVEN HAD CHEMISTRY YET?? /
ehhh ok again....nuttin speacial
3) L'll CUT KHEM like RAPPERS FROM DA BAND, Cuz U COULDNT WRITE TIGHT wit CRAMPIN' IN YA HAND /
& YOU FROM WhALES right? Then why the fuck do YOU GOTTA DRAGON IN YA FLAG? /
also nuttin speacial.....lil but below averege ender....
Consistency/Structure: tie
Creativity: K
Enjoyable: neither
Flow: L
Metaphors: K
Multies: L
Personal: L
Punches: tie
Vocabulary: neither
Wordplay: K
Overall: Boring ass battle.......L wins by a lil....K's verse only had one bar that was ok while Lhad all his bars pretty much ok......
L_Nino
11-19-2005, 03:03 PM
NOW OPEN for business... :cool:
Ghost Emperor
11-19-2005, 05:52 PM
My Attack-Kills people sleeping on ya verse's like they OD'D on Nap-Pills
Cause like "Perfecting Ancient warfare weapons" the way youre Battleaxe(battle lacks) Skills...
wold have been betta wit out the battle axe thing
hey bitch u keep approaching me and ure gonna get ya rep-stunned....
and if u "Bite lines" I'll have this "Broad-banned" like "Internet-connections"
liked this punch. nice bar
Kurupted Mindz? nah fuck-those-dicks ya flows Hopeless
in this battle I can't focus cnt take u serious u dnt even no how to Upload-pics*
pretty stupid
1) KHEMIKZ NEVER DIVINE? It'll be easy for me to SEVER YA SPINE, BITCH, IMMA PIMP, I know all about ya kind/
& DONT THINK U'LL GET THE PERSONAL CAT. by ADDIN' MY CREW TO ONE OF YA LINES /
opener was pretty nice
2) You gettin' me yet? YOU 16, Bout'a get BLOWN TO BITS fuckin 'round wit YA CHEMISTRY SET /
Cuz how you get ya name when YOU AINT EVEN HAD CHEMISTRY YET?? /
not feelin this set
3) L'll CUT KHEM like RAPPERS FROM DA BAND, Cuz U COULDNT WRITE TIGHT wit CRAMPIN' IN YA HAND /
& YOU FROM WhALES right? Then why the fuck do YOU GOTTA DRAGON IN YA FLAG? /
shitty closer
Consistency/Structure: tie
Creativity: KD
Enjoyable: KD
Flow: L
Metaphors: KD
Multies: L
Personal: L
Punches: L
Vocabulary: KD
Wordplay: KD
Overall: Khemikz divine got this. not ur best Nino
raider
11-19-2005, 06:03 PM
My Attack-Kills people sleeping on ya verse's like they OD'D on Nap-Pills
Cause like "Perfecting Ancient warfare weapons" the way youre Battleaxe(battle lacks) Skills...
u ruined it big time
hey bitch u keep approaching me and ure gonna get ya rep-stunned....
and if u "Bite lines" I'll have this "Broad-banned" like "Internet-connections"
decent bar
Kurupted Mindz? nah fuck-those-dicks ya flows Hopeless
in this battle I can't focus cnt take u serious u dnt even no how to Upload-pics*
whack ender
1) KHEMIKZ NEVER DIVINE? It'll be easy for me to SEVER YA SPINE, BITCH, IMMA PIMP, I know all about ya kind/
& DONT THINK U'LL GET THE PERSONAL CAT. by ADDIN' MY CREW TO ONE OF YA LINES /
was pretty nice
2) You gettin' me yet? YOU 16, Bout'a get BLOWN TO BITS fuckin 'round wit YA CHEMISTRY SET /
Cuz how you get ya name when YOU AINT EVEN HAD CHEMISTRY YET?? /
that was gay
3) L'll CUT KHEM like RAPPERS FROM DA BAND, Cuz U COULDNT WRITE TIGHT wit CRAMPIN' IN YA HAND /
& YOU FROM WhALES right? Then why the fuck do YOU GOTTA DRAGON IN YA FLAG? /
weak closer
Consistency/Structure:L
Creativity: khem
Enjoyable: L
Flow: L
Metaphors: Khem
Multies: L
Personal: L
Punches: L
Vocabulary: KD
Wordplay: KD
Overall: close battle. Nino sqeeked it out though
chappy
11-19-2005, 06:11 PM
Enjoyment: L
Creativity: TIE
Multis: L
Metas: KD
Flow: TIE
Personals: L
Punches: TIE
Overall: L_Nino
Nino - Your last bar. It did sound similar to a Cass line in a freestyle...
"......I sound too comfortable man,
And write so tight that I might pull a muscle in my hand".
Not accusin' you of anythin' tho :)
L_Nino
11-19-2005, 06:12 PM
gracias....
*closed*
i'll be doin da SPANISH HERE!! :rolleyes: ,lol
nice battle... why peeps sayin KD's first bar with da battleleaxe is wack? it's call wordplay.. L knows that but of course L Still won cuz he got more personal and them good punches :cool:
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