ElectricalXcess vs Phonetixs (0-3 KO)

[ArchimedeZ]

5 Bars = 10 Lines

No Feedin / No Recyclin / No Bitin (not that i expect you to)
All Votes Broken Down BBB (No Shit Votes)
No Hate Votes
NO CREW VOTES

OK Let's Go...

[ArchimedeZ]

Feedback Freeposting Allowed

I Worked Hard On This, I Consider This My Best Battle Verse To Date So...

OK Let's Go...

Phonetixs Bring This (Looks At His Wrist), Still Wearing Hospital Outpatients Bracelet/
He Needs Gas Fast Or He Ain’t Gonna Last!, But Last Time He Found Stations Tasteless// -1

Your Abrasions Waste Less, I Make Ya Spleen Bleed Like Surgeon Slips and Severin Veins/
I Use And Abuse Hand Movements, Like My Murderin’ Clip Hand’s Never In Vain// -2

“Gods Tears Fall Upon You”, Cus Your First Verse Was Classified As The Earths Worst/
Perception Is You Damned From Conception, Conformed To Deformity Like Your Dads Girth Cursed!// -3

A “Street Pharmacist?!” Pffft Lets Get This Straight Fam I Squeeze This Blisters Cyst/
Reap Harm With This?! Got This Grown Fool Swingin’ Like This The First Time His Sister Kissed!// -4

Phone Stands 6 Faces Glazed, Smash And Grab Hands Up Like This A Mexican Wave/
Over Can’t Trace Memory Fazed, Bury Him 6 Feet Deep Like This A Hexagons Grave// -5

Explanations

-1: Punch Self Expo
-2: Punch Self Expo
-3: In his sig he has “Gods Tears Full Upon Me”. "Damned From Conception", he says he is "cursed from birth" in his sig too.
-4: In his profile he calls himself a “street pharmacist”, "Sister Kissed", like he too protective over her.
-5: In his profile he says “me, my selph and I” so I exaggerated and said he has 6 faces. In a "Mexican wave" everybody stand up with their hands in the air. 6 Feet Deep, 6 again so used “Hexagons Grave“, Hexagon being a 6 sided shape.

[ArchimedeZ]

Drop Today Phone

[.PhoNetiXS.]

*yawns
well...u just dug ur grave fam.......fam talk/jokes are more then played and my sis is dead.... i wasnt gonna come to hard on ya since i saw u were a newb...watch kill ya wit a key..

-I'm STRONG-WITH-THIS-CURSE-KIDS!! ya expos like da 'channel tunnel':almost as LONG-AS-YA-VERSE-IS!!/ pfft
-ya BOXED-IN-A-HEARSE-BITCH...'sewin ya lips when u high' da only time ya BONGED-AND-YA-WORDS-STITCH!!//ez

-[Change of Style]-
-Watch me Toss-this-liar wit Glossed-In-Pliars so u see this Sinners-Pity-Stack-Doubts, cuz i "crossed-the-wires On Electric": his lyrics 'fade' like Inner-City-Black-Outs..//
-When I Post-This-Verse to Smoke-His-Words:Past-Chest-To-Exhale-Herbs....this kids 'keyboard strokes-this-nerd'..listen u dont need microsoft ACCESS-TO-EXCEL.....WORD?!..//

|-:Change of Style:-|
Wit mac SOUNDS-TO-PUMP-HIM that DROWNS-AND-DUMPS-KID ur like an 'old mans sac' u never 'MOUNT-TO-NUTTIN!!!//

PERSONALS/EXPLANATIONS
Bar One:he from UK, channel tunnel is a long ass tunnel underground, expos are 9 lines...and his verse is 10 :| wtf
Bar 5: his records 6-7=-1...wtf...and the other meanin is obvious

[ArchimedeZ]

Nice Drop Phone, I Am Totally Sorry About That Line I Didn't Realise.

UPPIN VOTES

[L_Nino]

omg...

Pho got this hands down wit' his first bar alone...

[ArchimedeZ]

That's why I said no crew votes ;)

[.PhoNetiXS.]

u can have ur crew vote up too
i dont care
i no i got it in the bag

`1
two links
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=210317#post210317
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=210321#post210321

[L_Nino]

That's why I said no crew votes ;)

LOL...


Crew votes or NO crew votes, it's still gonna be a K.O....


I jus' thought u'd like to get it over wit' quickly as possible :D

[ArchimedeZ]

probably have, but I feel my verse was worth more than a crew member votin with one line sayin hands down.

[.PhoNetiXS.]

If L breaks it down
be appreciated
end this :|
`1

[ArchimedeZ]

I'm cool wit that, but man i appreciate he is in your crew L and you entitled to your opinions but it breakin it down and givin some constructive criticism (cus thats whats it prob gonna be from u anyway!)

[.PhoNetiXS.]

werd i agree..
a broken down vote from all crew members
`1

[Chess_Intellijenc]

punches: pho
flow: tie
multis: pho
wordplay: pho
metas/sim: pho

vote phonetics

well everyone on this site would get k.o.ed my phonetixs but electricalxcess i felt you came harder than usuall though, nice shit

[ArchimedeZ]

appreciated Chess, i do feel it was my best verse in a battle.

[L_Nino]

I feel my verse was worth more than a crew member votin with one line sayin hands down.

then u were wrong...



XCESS:

Phonetixs Bring This (Looks At His Wrist), Still Wearing Hospital Outpatients Bracelet/
He Needs Gas Fast Or He Ain’t Gonna Last!, But Last Time He Found Stations Tasteless//

^^^ Aint feelin' this....this was weak opener compared to Pho's...

Your Abrasions Waste Less, I Make Ya Spleen Bleed Like Surgeon Slips and Severin Veins/
I Use And Abuse Hand Movements, Like My Murderin’ Clip Hand’s Never In Vain// -2

^^^ So-so bar but no direct hits...

“Gods Tears Fall Upon You”, Cus Your First Verse Was Classified As The Earths Worst/
Perception Is You Damned From Conception, Conformed To Deformity Like Your Dads Girth Cursed!// -3

^^^ Family jokes are TOO played...ya worst bar...

A “Street Pharmacist?!” Pffft Lets Get This Straight Fam I Squeeze This Blisters Cyst/
Reap Harm With This?! Got This Grown Fool Swingin’ Like This The First Time His Sister Kissed!// -4

^^^ SEE BAR 3....

Phone Stands 6 Faces Glazed, Smash And Grab Hands Up Like This A Mexican Wave/
Over Can’t Trace Memory Fazed, Bury Him 6 Feet Deep Like This A Hexagons Grave// -

^^^ Soft closer....& dats too many expo'z b....




PHO:

-I'm STRONG-WITH-THIS-CURSE-KIDS!! ya expos like da 'channel tunnel':almost as LONG-AS-YA-VERSE-IS!!/
-ya BOXED-IN-A-HEARSE-BITCH...'sewin ya lips when u high' da only time ya BONGED-AND-YA-WORDS-STITCH!!/

^^^ First line was the killer...good personal...2nd line was ehhh....

-Watch me Toss-this-liar wit Glossed-In-Pliars so u see this Sinners-Pity-Stack-Doubts, cuz i "crossed-the-wires On Electric": his lyrics 'fade' like Inner-City-Black-Outs..//

^^^ Nice 2nd line...

-When I Post-This-Verse to Smoke-His-Words:Past-Chest-To-Exhale-Herbs....this kids 'keyboard strokes-this-nerd'..listen u dont need microsoft ACCESS-TO-EXCEL.....WORD?!..//

^^^ Heard the concept before but not like this....Good bar...

Wit mac SOUNDS-TO-PUMP-HIM that DROWNS-AND-DUMPS-KID ur like an 'old mans sac' u never 'MOUNT-TO-NUTTIN!!!//

^^^ So-so...




Enjoyment: P
Personals: P
Punches: P
Flow: TIE
Multis: TIE
Metas: P
Creativity: P
Opener: P
Closer: P
Overall: P...weak/one-sided battle...



VOTE: PhoNetiX






feel better now? :rolleyes:

[ArchimedeZ]

thanks L, btw have you ever battled Phone

[.PhoNetiXS.]

2-0
`1

[.PhoNetiXS.]

'1

uppin for more votes

[ArchimedeZ]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16815

my link^^

[.PhoNetiXS.]

yawns
upz
`1

[Executioner]

Phonetixs Bring This (Looks At His Wrist), Still Wearing Hospital Outpatients Bracelet/
He Needs Gas Fast Or He Ain’t Gonna Last!, But Last Time He Found Stations Tasteless// -1
Aight opener
Your Abrasions Waste Less, I Make Ya Spleen Bleed Like Surgeon Slips and Severin Veins/
I Use And Abuse Hand Movements, Like My Murderin’ Clip Hand’s Never In Vain// -2
Nice diss, great complexity.
“Gods Tears Fall Upon You”, Cus Your First Verse Was Classified As The Earths Worst/
Perception Is You Damned From Conception, Conformed To Deformity Like Your Dads Girth Cursed!// -3
Bulit on that last bar, :clap:
A “Street Pharmacist?!” Pffft Lets Get This Straight Fam I Squeeze This Blisters Cyst/
Reap Harm With This?! Got This Grown Fool Swingin’ Like This The First Time His Sister Kissed!// -4
okay, could have been better
Phone Stands 6 Faces Glazed, Smash And Grab Hands Up Like This A Mexican Wave/
Over Can’t Trace Memory Fazed, Bury Him 6 Feet Deep Like This A Hexagons Grave// -okay closer, nice spit overall, 9/10


Phones verse


well...u just dug ur grave fam.......fam talk/jokes are more then played and my sis is dead.... i wasnt gonna come to hard on ya since i saw u were a newb...watch kill ya wit a key..
Great opner
I'm STRONG-WITH-THIS-CURSE-KIDS!! ya expos like da 'channel tunnel':almost as LONG-AS-YA-VERSE-IS!!/ pfft
-ya BOXED-IN-A-HEARSE-BITCH...'sewin ya lips when u high' da only time ya BONGED-AND-YA-WORDS-STITCH!!//ez
Great diss, thumbs way up
[Change of Style]-
-Watch me Toss-this-liar wit Glossed-In-Pliars so u see this Sinners-Pity-Stack-Doubts, cuz i "crossed-the-wires On Electric": his lyrics 'fade' like Inner-City-Black-Outs..//
-When I Post-This-Verse to Smoke-His-Words:Past-Chest-To-Exhale-Herbs....this kids 'keyboard strokes-this-nerd'..listen u dont need microsoft ACCESS-TO-EXCEL.....WORD?!..//
Prefect
|-:Change of Style:-|
Wit mac SOUNDS-TO-PUMP-HIM that DROWNS-AND-DUMPS-KID ur like an 'old mans sac' u never 'MOUNT-TO-NUTTIN!!!//
nice, could have been better, overall 9.5/10

Over all vote:
Phone