Venim .vs. Rootz (0-3 KO)

[Venim]

:worship: 3BAR'Z

...IM BOUT TO SPIT NOW...


:worship: ...HANDS DOWN...

[Rootz]

This lil' kid tryna get at me? I'll have to 'Put-You-On-The-Game'*
'Lyrically Assassinate you,' to give you the right to put-'lose'-on-ya-'grave'**

I'll spit 'Venim' into ya lyrics, to give you some 'poinson' with a jacked-hurl***
Stomp ya 'frame,' just to see if ya 'picture perfect' for the rap-world

Have ya lookin' up to the 'sky' like a 'birds down,' so you can out 'dew'****
When 'Capz stop winning,' is when I'll lose*****

*Check sig
**Crew: Lyrical Assassins
***Check name..when ya poisoned you puek "hurl"..jacked, messed up
****Dew=do, out do someone...ya know? And dew is like crap..bird crap. Oh, and in his sig, look like Snoop lookin' up to tha sky.
*****Check sig

[Rootz]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16349&page=5

[Rootz]

C'mon..thought you was about to spit..I did mine in seven minutes..hurry son...it don't take long for a freestyle...let's be real.

[Venim]

1)DUDE TRUST ME IM DA LYRICAL ASASSIN OF THIS BATTLE,CUZ YA RHYMEZ ARE WEAK AND LACK DA LEAGUE/
&WHEN YA BE TAKIN EX-TECEE YA THINK OF GAY PEEPS LIKE YA SELF WHY WOULD YOU EVEN STEP TO ME//

2)TRUST ME WHEN I BE SPITTIN YOU BE SNIFFIN MY ILLER INSTINKTZ CUZ YA ROOTZ IS WHAT YOU SHOULD FOLLOW/
&TRUST ME I KNOW YOU SWALLOW IN PUBLIC LIKE A LIKE A HORNY PRICK FROM THE HALLOW//

3)IMA WHIP LASH GRIP MY CLIP GRASP,TRUST ME MY BARS KICK A%# AND YOU WILL DWELL IN A QUICK TASK/
I'll KILL IN A TRICK BLAST AND I'LL LOAD MY CLIPS FAST AND I WILL PUT MORE HOLES IN YA FACE THAN A JASON MASK//

*DROP LINKZ LATER

[S.W.A.T]

Opener: R
Closer: R
Punches: R
Personalz: R
Metas: R
Vocab: R
Enjoyment: R

VOTE: R

all cts rootz

last bar alone could have merked him...

o btw venim, peep my diss u to in open mic... title diss to venim [lmao]

[IllerthanMe]

This lil' kid tryna get at me? I'll have to 'Put-You-On-The-Game'*
'Lyrically Assassinate you,' to give you the right to put-'lose'-on-ya-'grave'**
LINES DIDN'T RHYME BUT THIS BAR WAS AIGHT

I'll spit 'Venim' into ya lyrics, to give you some 'poinson' with a jacked-hurl***
Stomp ya 'frame,' just to see if ya 'picture perfect' for the rap-world
ELEVATED NICE BAR I LIKED THIS ONE U ELEVATED NICELY DONE

Have ya lookin' up to the 'sky' like a 'birds down,' so you can out 'dew'****
When 'Capz stop winning,' is when I'll lose*****
DIDN'T LIKE THIS BAR AT ALL
BUT THE SECOND BAR MADE THE VERSE SOUND WAY BETTER
AIGHT VERSE


1)DUDE TRUST ME IM DA LYRICAL ASASSIN OF THIS BATTLE,CUZ YA RHYMEZ ARE WEAK AND LACK DA LEAGUE/
&WHEN YA BE TAKIN EX-TECEE YA THINK OF GAY PEEPS LIKE YA SELF WHY WOULD YOU EVEN STEP TO ME//
U ELEVATED IN THE FIRST LINE BUT DROPPED IN THE SECOND


2)TRUST ME WHEN I BE SPITTIN YOU BE SNIFFIN MY ILLER INSTINKTZ CUZ YA ROOTZ IS WHAT YOU SHOULD FOLLOW/
&TRUST ME I KNOW YOU SWALLOW IN PUBLIC LIKE A LIKE A HORNY PRICK FROM THE HALLOW//
YOUR FLOW IN THIS BAR IS AIGHT BUT ADD A LITTLE HUMOR

3)IMA WHIP LASH GRIP MY CLIP GRASP,TRUST ME MY BARS KICK A%# AND YOU WILL DWELL IN A QUICK TASK/
I'll KILL IN A TRICK BLAST AND I'LL LOAD MY CLIPS FAST AND I WILL PUT MORE HOLES IN YA FACE THAN A JASON MASK//
THIS BAR WAS TIGHT BUT U ENDED THE BAR WRONG NICE BAR OVERALL THOUGH


YOUR FLOW IN THIS IS STRAIGHT BUT U NEED TO STOP FORCING PUNS AND ADD MORE PUNS

IN A SHORT BATTLE LIKE THREE BARS U NEED TO HAVE AT LEAST TWO GOOD PUNCHLINES OR ONE GREAT PUNCHLINES AND SOME NAMPLAY, WORDPLAY, OR SOMETHING DISSING YOUR OPPONENT. SO U ELEVATED IN SOME PLACED BUT DROPPED IN OTHERS. TRY TO ADD MORE HUMOR AND ELEVATE THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE VERSE NOT JUST SOME AIGHT

I VOTE THIS BATTLE FOR ROOTZ BECAUSE HE ADD HUMOR AND EXCITEMENT WITH THAT SECOND BAR ALONE. THIS WAS REALLY THE KILLER IN THE BATTLE THAT MADE HIM WIN THE OTHER BARS WERE JUST ADD ONS

NICE BATTLE

[Rootz]

Thanks, 2-0, uppin'.

[Kaotik D]

Opener: R
Closer: R
Punches: R
Personalz: R
Metas: R
Vocab: R
Enjoyment: R

VOTE: R
Very good battle.......
Elevated rootz

[Rootz]

That's 3-0, KO. I win.

[Executioner]

well srry about this, even tho i hate you, nice battle

[ArchimedeZ]

YOU BE SNIFFIN MY ILLER INSTINKTZ

and shit is bitten too

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16164

[Rootz]

^Wack line anyway.

[ArchimedeZ]

but doesnt matter, still my fuckin line.

[Kaotik D]

venim is a bitter his being getting better fucking like that hes probaly copying and pasting from other sites

[Venim]

That Line Not Bitten I Was Thinkin Of It All Since The CALLOUT HATE ME IF YOU WANT*

[ArchimedeZ]

safe bro