Jakey Boi vs Rebel Shadow (5-1)

[Jakey Boi]

3 barz
next hour or so
BBB votes
house rules

no beef homie and good luck

links up soon

[Jakey Boi]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=209391#post209391
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=209396#post209396

Yo rebel, before you battle me can you climb out of Demise's hole/
BRING BACK DEMISE boo hoo, gettin on his cock be your only goal//

His gender be male and he's actually into the same shit/
Yo Rebel did Demise complain when you swallowed instead of spit//

You act all gay but on your space theres a pic of a pussy/
Is this a decoy to think you straight, iv finished with this wussy//

no beef dawg

[Executioner]

no beef. i'll get my links up soon and rap

[Executioner]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16683
link one

[Executioner]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=15693
link 2

[Executioner]

that rap was repetative. be creative. but you can't. your just repetive.//
nothing new comes in that under developted brain. your very subjective//

nothing good can come from you, just like that song you made "in the cold"//
i'm refreshed, i'm new and unbreakable, your just the same, so you must remold//

i offered to spit frist. but you didn't except. that was just dumb. your a clucking dove//
i'm done with this guy, you just got served, you led me to fucking shove//

no beef, let get some votes.

[Jakey Boi]

yo good drop man lets get some votes on this

[Executioner]

thanx nice spit from you, i just found it repetive tho.

[Jakey Boi]

yea and doves dont cluck lol

[Executioner]

LOL. votes plz

[ArcheType]

Jakey Boi

Yo rebel, before you battle me can you climb out of Demise's hole/
BRING BACK DEMISE boo hoo, gettin on his cock be your only goal//
Yeah aight jab n kinda personal, kinda funny too

His gender be male and he's actually into the same shit/
Yo Rebel did Demise complain when you swallowed instead of spit//
Weak vocab, but funny context, jab

You act all gay but on your space theres a pic of a pussy/
Is this a decoy to think you straight, iv finished with this wussy//
startin to get bored of the he's gay thing now, again weak vocab

Rebel~Shadow

that rap was repetative. be creative. but you can't. your just repetive.//
nothing new comes in that under developted brain. your very subjective//
aight gud flip, repettion well noticed and better vocab

nothing good can come from you, just like that song you made "in the cold"//
i'm refreshed, i'm new and unbreakable, your just the same, so you must remold//
Ok general jab

i offered to spit frist. but you didn't except. that was just dumb. your a clucking dove//
i'm done with this guy, you just got served, you led me to fucking shove//
Clucking Dove!? do they thou? i dunno? not best closer, but did its job

Overall: Rebel~Shadow

[Executioner]

ight, 1-0 fro me. i was just tryin to be creative about that dove thing.

more votes plz

[Kaotik D]

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REBELS VERSE
that rap was repetative. be creative. but you can't. your just repetive.//
nothing new comes in that under developted brain. your very subjective//
"Whack"weak Oppner man i mean Good vocab But its :shit:

nothing good can come from you, just like that song you made "in the cold"//
i'm refreshed, i'm new and unbreakable, your just the same, so you must remold//
Nothing in this

i offered to spit frist. but you didn't except. that was just dumb. your a clucking dove//
i'm done with this guy, you just got served, you led me to fucking shove//
ur first Non-Forced Multi Decent Closer

Weak Verse Rebel Give everything u have got in all ur battles

JAKEY VERSE

Yo rebel, before you battle me can you climb out of Demise's hole/
BRING BACK DEMISE boo hoo, gettin on his cock be your only goal//
Not Orginal but its better then Rebels

His gender be male and he's actually into the same shit/
Yo Rebel did Demise complain when you swallowed instead of spit//
Lmfao thats a good Punch

You act all gay but on your space theres a pic of a pussy/
Is this a decoy to think you straight, iv finished with this wussy//
No No "Whack"Closer

This was a decent verse nice punches.
Chuck multis in to man

OVERALL VOTE=Jakey_Boi

[Jakey Boi]

yo 1-1 uppin

[Kaotik D]

I probaly went a bit mean on rebel Well done on the multi really creative not forced either,
Jakey Boy u nearly lost this in ur closer man be creative,
sorry for da free post

[Jakey Boi]

ye on closer i couldnt think of anything at all
uppin......

[Executioner]

so it still 1-1, or is he changing his vote.

[Jakey Boi]

1-1 homie

[S.W.A.T]

Opener: JB
Closer: JB
Flow: JB
Strucuture: JB
Metas: tie
Multiez: RS [forced as fuck]
Personalz: JB
Wordplay: .....
Punches: JB
Vocab: RS
Enjoyment: ....

VOTE: JB

JB actaully took this on catz...

[Kaotik D]

No its 1-1 still

[IllerthanMe]

that rap was repetative. be creative. but you can't. your just repetive.//
nothing new comes in that under developted brain. your very subjective//
Weak bar vocab was nice but its ur opener gotta start with something good

nothing good can come from you, just like that song you made "in the cold"//
i'm refreshed, i'm new and unbreakable, your just the same, so you must remold//
didn't like this that much but it was an aight bar. Try dissing him next time

i offered to spit frist. but you didn't except. that was just dumb. your a clucking dove//
i'm done with this guy, you just got served, you led me to fucking shove//
sight closer
Try to elevated throughout each bar

aight verse try elevating though

Jakey_boi

Yo rebel, before you battle me can you climb out of Demise's hole/
BRING BACK DEMISE boo hoo, gettin on his cock be your only goal//
aight opener

His gender be male and he's actually into the same shit/
Yo Rebel did Demise complain when you swallowed instead of spit//
Nice punch this bar got u a W in this battle

You act all gay but on your space theres a pic of a pussy/
Is this a decoy to think you straight, iv finished with this wussy//
aight closer could have cam up with something else on the last line

MY vote Jakey_Boi
He elevated in the second line and Reb u tried but didn't succeed

[Executioner]

2-1, for JB. more votes plz

[Jakey Boi]

swat could you do a bar by bar please homie

[J-o-e]

Yo rebel, before you battle me can you climb out of Demise's hole/
BRING BACK DEMISE boo hoo, gettin on his cock be your only goal//
Funny Opener,

His gender be male and he's actually into the same shit/
Yo Rebel did Demise complain when you swallowed instead of spit//
Good diss

You act all gay but on your space theres a pic of a pussy/
Is this a decoy to think you straight, iv finished with this wussy//
That was aight...


that rap was repetative. be creative. but you can't. your just repetive.//
nothing new comes in that under developted brain. your very subjective//
Good vocab, an aight diss

nothing good can come from you, just like that song you made "in the cold"//
i'm refreshed, i'm new and unbreakable, your just the same, so you must remold//
Good flow

i offered to spit frist. but you didn't except. that was just dumb. your a clucking dove//
i'm done with this guy, you just got served, you led me to fucking shove//
Clucking dove? WTF? But its aight

Overall: JB

[Jakey Boi]

3-1 uppin

[Jakey Boi]

yo uppin some votes on this please homies

[ArchimedeZ]

Jakey Boi

Yo rebel, before you battle me can you climb out of Demise's hole/
BRING BACK DEMISE boo hoo, gettin on his cock be your only goal//
nice personal, good humour maybe lacked vocab but good opener

His gender be male and he's actually into the same shit/
Yo Rebel did Demise complain when you swallowed instead of spit//
played, wasn’t original enough, and vocab needs uppin again.

You act all gay but on your space theres a pic of a pussy/
Is this a decoy to think you straight, iv finished with this wussy//
Weak closer, lacked power in your punches

Rebel Shadow

that rap was repetative. be creative. but you can't. your just repetive.//
nothing new comes in that under developted brain. your very subjective//
did you mean to be repetitive yourself there in the first line? That doesn’t make sense really, you gotta be more clear. Let the humour do the puchin.

nothing good can come from you, just like that song you made "in the cold"//
i'm refreshed, i'm new and unbreakable, your just the same, so you must remold//
too simple, again you need to up your vocab.

i offered to spit frist. but you didn't except. that was just dumb. your a clucking dove//
i'm done with this guy, you just got served, you led me to fucking shove//
Your multies don’t tie in with the rest of the line. Your rhymes just rhyme and that’s it, no connection or complexity.

Overall - weak battle cus you both need to elevate your vocab and your multies, but I would say Jakey Boi got this, his made sense slightly more. Both need to get rid of the forced mutlies tho.

[Jakey Boi]

kk cheerz dawg 4-1 uppin last vote

[Executioner]

you can have the win^^^^

[Tyrone]

Jakei Boi

Yo rebel, before you battle me can you climb out of Demise's hole/
BRING BACK DEMISE boo hoo, gettin on his cock be your only goal//
lol decent opener

His gender be male and he's actually into the same shit/
Yo Rebel did Demise complain when you swallowed instead of spit//
up yo vocab, avg bar

You act all gay but on your space theres a pic of a pussy/
Is this a decoy to think you straight, iv finished with this wussy//
weak


Rebel

that rap was repetative. be creative. but you can't. your just repetive.//
nothing new comes in that under developted brain. your very subjective//
.....weak

nothing good can come from you, just like that song you made "in the cold"//
i'm refreshed, i'm new and unbreakable, your just the same, so you must remold//
avg

i offered to spit frist. but you didn't except. that was just dumb. your a clucking dove//
i'm done with this guy, you just got served, you led me to fucking shove//
avg...naw weak

Overall Jakey Boi
weak battle, keep battlin both of ya

[Executioner]

now it is offical, you win Jakey Boi

[Jakey Boi]

yo cheerz fo battle rebel! now close this shit

[.PhoNetiXS.]

haha
it aint closed yet
and i need my links

Jake Boy
Yo rebel, before you battle me can you climb out of Demise's hole/
BRING BACK DEMISE boo hoo, gettin on his cock be your only goal//
^flow was iight..work on multis..personal was decent

His gender be male and he's actually into the same shit/
Yo Rebel did Demise complain when you swallowed instead of spit//
^mmm not feelin this

You act all gay but on your space theres a pic of a pussy/
Is this a decoy to think you straight, iv finished with this wussy//
^nah..lol...it was iight i guess

RebelShadow
that rap was repetative. be creative. but you can't. your just repetive.//
nothing new comes in that under developted brain. your very subjective//
^liked how u dissed the opponent on both lines...but kinda weak...need a stronger opener

nothing good can come from you, just like that song you made "in the cold"//
i'm refreshed, i'm new and unbreakable, your just the same, so you must remold//
^same as before...and dont let vocab be ur focus... vocab here and there yea..but u dont need mass vocab like Electrical tryin to put on u need to be stronger

i offered to spit frist. but you didn't except. that was just dumb. your a clucking dove//
i'm done with this guy, you just got served, you led me to fucking shove//
^wack closer no offense...needs to be stronger bruh

`1

Vote: Jakey more direct
rebel u got the idea of dissin in each line...stay up keep elevatin
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[Jakey Boi]

kk cheerz homie 6-1 now close this lol