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GaTmAn
11-14-2005, 06:24 PM
3 -4 Bars,

Drop By U Decide, Im Thinkin Like The Next Hour Or So,

Holla Quicksnap

Khemikz Divine
11-15-2005, 02:19 PM
Was about to set this......

I'll drop 2moz (since I am going out 2night)

No feeding of verses eiver
48hours for u to reply
Bars must be broken down to vote
No d/r votes

Voting format
Flow:
Punches:
Personals:
Multi's:
Wordplay:
Enjoyment:

^^that must be used for voting if not then the vote will not count

good luck

GaTmAn
11-15-2005, 05:48 PM
k man, this can be ur judgement i spose,

ill let my crew review this battle and if u gud enough there might be a space for ya

k, ill drop when im done

GaTmAn
11-16-2005, 05:08 AM
heres my drop

devine? man why TRYING-TOO-HARD? jesus just watch "khemikalz" burning, turning and FRYING-YOU-CHARD
raz didnt diss u, why u CRYING-YOU-MARD?, u aint got "skills" dont lie, jst stop IMPLYING-YOU-HARD!

gats cumin AT-CHU-WI-TRUE-CRED, on ya knees boot faced like i just TATOO-YOU-MY-SHOE-TRED!
Ill jst "SINK" your shitty RANDOM-SPIT and leave every braincell "onboard" screamin ABANDON-SHIP!

i aint a movie, but like an OLD-EMPTY-SLASHER i slice u bleedin, screamin SPARE-ME-PLEASE!,
u aint nothin to the COLD-EMCEE-MASHER, jeeez, if ur shits "chemicals" mines a RARE-DISEASE!

1: devine in his sig,, callin him jesus, jhe was quick to jump at raz
when he sed sumthing, "is that a diss at me?" so i used tht
he been sayin he got skills,
2:punches, wordplay
3:names khemical, i used nameplay,

uppin ur drop man :cool:

Khemikz Divine
11-16-2005, 02:35 PM
I Bash and flex Knecks and I'll Blast and slash this Vet's rep
I never loose cuz I see "through ya moves" like a "Glass chess set"
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ya whack-damn Gatman? I've seen more of a threat coming from a "Peacful Afghan"
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After I drop my verse I will leave Gatman so worried he'll run Scared-for-miles
And I'll end ure rep with punches that will connect even if u Dare-to-smile
My punches with squeeze ya to death and make ure "shadow fade" like a fucing "Haircut-style"

Khemikz Divine
11-16-2005, 02:48 PM
votes ppl

Lyricologist_RiCo
11-16-2005, 03:16 PM
Flow:Tie
Punches:Gat..had better
Personals:Gat
Multi's:Basically Gat took dis
Wordplay:Gat to
Enjoyment:Tie

My Vote: according to dese cats Gatman took it

ArcheType
11-16-2005, 03:35 PM
Flow: Yeah Tie
Punches: Gatman
Personals: Gatman
Multi's: Gatman
Wordplay: Gatman
Enjoyment: Gatman

All cats go to Gatman...Gud drop!

Peace

GaTmAn
11-16-2005, 04:02 PM
Cheers, Uppin More Votes Ppl

.PhoNetiXS.
11-16-2005, 04:13 PM
Flow: Khemik
Punches: Gatman
Personals: Meh...nothin stellar tie
Multi's: Tie
Wordplay: Gatman
Enjoyment: Gatman

Vote to Gatman
`1

Khemikz Divine
11-16-2005, 04:22 PM
none count

bar for bar break down like I stated!

I no Ill loose but read the rules fools :)

GaTmAn
11-16-2005, 04:23 PM
FINE WTEVER, cmon ppz, votes plz

Khemikz Divine
11-16-2005, 04:44 PM
what u mean fine whatever If I stated in the callout it's obvious thats what I wanted

GaTmAn
11-16-2005, 07:20 PM
yeah ok cool,

i aint arsed, jst i already won by 3-0 KO, but, if u wnt break downs then thts cool

CAN WE GET SUM BAR BY BARS IN HERE PEOPLE PLZ

Khemikz Divine
11-17-2005, 07:04 PM
the reason I want a bar for bar breakdown is too show were I can improove U no

Kaotik D
11-19-2005, 08:02 AM
devine? man why TRYING-TOO-HARD? jesus just watch "khemikalz" burning, turning and FRYING-YOU-CHARD
raz didnt diss u, why u CRYING-YOU-MARD?, u aint got "skills" dont lie, jst stop IMPLYING-YOU-HARD!
Nice oppner Liked the impyling you hard Lol

gats cumin AT-CHU-WI-TRUE-CRED, on ya knees boot faced like i just TATOO-YOU-MY-SHOE-TRED!
Ill jst "SINK" your shitty RANDOM-SPIT and leave every braincell "onboard" screamin ABANDON-SHIP!
Decent liked the first 1 better

i aint a movie, but like an OLD-EMPTY-SLASHER i slice u bleedin, screamin SPARE-ME-PLEASE!,
u aint nothin to the COLD-EMCEE-MASHER, jeeez, if ur shits "chemicals" mines a RARE-DISEASE!
Very good closer nice nameplay.....

I Bash and flex Knecks and I'll Blast and slash this Vet's rep
I never loose cuz I see "through ya moves" like a "Glass chess set"
decent nothing specaill nice flow
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ya whack-damn Gatman? I've seen more of a threat coming from a "Peacful Afghan"
Decent
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After I drop my verse I will leave Gatman so worried he'll run Scared-for-miles
And I'll end ure rep with punches that will connect even if u Dare-to-smile
My punches with squeeze ya to death and make ure "shadow fade" like a fucing "Haircut-style
Yea decent again

This was a decent battle

Vote to Gatman,
Kez ya had flow but gat took this easy.

Mc-Itty
11-19-2005, 08:28 AM
well yo...thats jus fucking retarded...(no offence meant) ...i mean, if you KNOW u lost, whats the point in askin all of them to vote again...*sigh...noones guna break it down again but cuz i'm nice :) ...i'll do a bar by bar...


Gatman - as u kno ima be a bitch breakin this down SPECIALLY fo u ;)

devine? man why TRYING-TOO-HARD? jesus just watch "khemikalz" burning, turning and FRYING-YOU-CHARD
raz didnt diss u, why u CRYING-YOU-MARD?, u aint got "skills" dont lie, jst stop IMPLYING-YOU-HARD!
yo multis are mo forced than a fat bitch in tight pants...but nice attempt, liked the nameplay as well.

gats cumin AT-CHU-WI-TRUE-CRED, on ya knees boot faced like i just TATOO-YOU-MY-SHOE-TRED!
Ill jst "SINK" your shitty RANDOM-SPIT and leave every braincell "onboard" screamin ABANDON-SHIP!
Decent, u shudve used mo personals

i aint a movie, but like an OLD-EMPTY-SLASHER i slice u bleedin, screamin SPARE-ME-PLEASE!,
u aint nothin to the COLD-EMCEE-MASHER, jeeez, if ur shits "chemicals" mines a RARE-DISEASE!
i like the whole rare disease concept, humours nice..

Overall, ya flow was choppy on parts, multis i liked, nameplay was aight, you lacked personals and didnt really have any wordplay but deff an improvement so yea propzzzzzz

K:

I Bash and flex Knecks and I'll Blast and slash this Vet's rep
I never loose cuz I see "through ya moves" like a "Glass chess set"
like the flow on this, didnt really have anything on gat though..kinda pointless..

ya whack-damn Gatman? I've seen more of a threat coming from a "Peacful Afghan'
lmfao, forced multi

After I drop my verse I will leave Gatman so worried he'll run Scared-for-miles
And I'll end ure rep with punches that will connect even if u Dare-to-smile
My punches with squeeze ya to death and make ure "shadow fade" like a fucing "Haircut-style
Aight...
I liked ur verse, creativity was aight but not original, flow was ur strong point, aight wordplay, forced multis though and u lacked personals and direct punches...

Punches: Gat
Personals: Gat
Structure: Tie
Multis: Gat
Wordplay: K
Flow: K
Creativity: K
Nameplay: Gat

Overall, Gat took this. 1

Khemikz Divine
11-19-2005, 11:04 AM
like I stated I asked ppl for bar for bar breakdown to improove....but thanks for voting

sum1 can close this now

Mc-Itty
11-19-2005, 11:39 AM
yea..soz fo the bitchyness...shit happens at times, but yea like said, i did like ur drop though..if u had mo personals shit wud have been better...but yep im done...u needa PM this to inevitable so he closes it.