Archetype.VS.Huff (3-0 KO)

[ArcheType]

Aight man you sed you woz cool wit this so ere it is..
I also pm'd u tha time limit so duno y u askin again?

Rules:
5 bars
24 hour time limit from check in
breakdown votes
No dickriding etc...

Il drop in first as i set this up...
GL

Peace

[ArcheType]

Chekin in wit links n verse,
N beef man,
GL
Links up soon....

Shut up punk!, you a mother fucker who couldn’t huff a bag “o” spray/
I don’t care what you got to say, So get on you’re knees like a puff and pray//

That I don’t go grab a bag of sum volatile chemical substance..intoxicated/..n..
Make u Inhale the deadly vale of fumes that in an instance have u..Suffocated//

Wit my Eyes dilated,....in the police inquiry I stated that you just hyperventilated/
"our battle woz already lost,He couldn’t take it, n straight went n fainted"//

"As he huffed and puffed, he just started panackin/ stood stiff like manaquin/
All because my rhymes were attackin him", now I gota be the one to inform his Next of Kin//

So lets laugh At this fucker who calls himself a Huffer, well now youre gonna mentally suffer/
As I Gut yer, mother n yer brother…lets all watch this guy wallow n stutter//

[ArcheType]

Aight lukin fo sum feedback on my ish'...
Uppin votes as soon as this guy Huff Drops...
Thanx fo acceptin, GL

Links:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16773&page=2&pp=10
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16769&page=3&pp=10

[Huff]

srry bout that man gott pay more attention to shit like this
ne way here goes

archetype eh what type is that??/ the type of cat who sucks ya dick and wont holla back/ but will attack at ya back like a fag with an empty nutsack

ill huff n puff and blow ya ass away/ with the power of a hand grenade and the feeling of napalm and pepper spray/ and watch u walk away like ur mother when she got wet and played/

i dont even know what to say u dont make sense/ cuz ur moms brother blew it early and u an accident/ another back seat mistake that god shouldnt of sent

well now i dont need to drop ne more cuz ur queer ass is beat and poor and i dont want u to kill ya self so im not gonna say ne more

[Huff]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....73&page=2&pp=10 (showthread....73&page=2&pp=10)
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....69&page=3&pp=10 (showthread....69&page=3&pp=10)

[ArcheType]

Aight open fo votes...
lets get this voted on quick so just do cat votes...

Peace

[ArchimedeZ]

Consistency: Archetype
Structure: Archetype
Flow: Archetype
Multies: Neither
Punches: Archetype
Personals: Neither
Nameplay: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Vocab: Neither
Enjoyment/Humour: Neither

Overall: Archetype, both need to elevate though

[TheExhibitionist]

Consistency/Structure:Archetype
Creativity: Archetype
Enjoyable: Tie
Flow: Archetype
Metaphors: Neither
Multies: Archetype
Personal: Huff
Punches: Archetype
Vocabulary: Archetype
Wordplay: Archetype
Overall: Archetype

I cant really say I enjoyed either, but Archetype got this.

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

Consistency/Structure:A
Creativity: A
Enjoyable: A
Flow: TIE
Metaphors: H
Multies: A..easy
Personal: ehhhhh
Punches: A
Vocabulary:A....
Wordplay: A
Overall: Arch.....weak but he took dis

[ArcheType]

AIght, close the battle ko to me thanx fo battle Huff
keep spittin n we'l both elevate....

Peace