Archetype vs Rebel~Shadow (0-4 KO)

[ArcheType]

Aight..GL

5 bars..
24 hour drop..from check in
No dickriding votes
Breakdown Votes

Im Dropin verse first..
Il check in wit verse n links

Peace

[ArcheType]

droppin links and verse...
No beef to you or your crew...aight
my mind just bit sick right now..

Links:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16712
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16349&page=4

Your aggressive sound fades as your catching pantie oppressive bound aids/
Go Grab your spades, I think you got enough time to dig your own graves//

Ill enslave all M.I.C as ghost writing slaves/
Don’t fuck wit my mentality, cause me n my stlye equals a Heavenly Matrimony,
A vile sequel to insanity, fuck morality I’m performing a vasectomy on Yo Styles Anatomy//

I’m just use to this…staryin down your mothers uterus/
I’m serious all yo brothers have fucked her delirious//...

All Just pissed spreadin tha diseased mist…2 minutes in this’ll have her contagious with syphilis/
Listen to this, You ain’t a vocalist …cause you sounding like her throat, when I decided to choke ya Miss//

STOP it….Ya out of fashion rappin like you lost all y’all compassion fo life/
Im not askin ,Drop tha Mic!, here take this knife…n…go rape your whoe wife//

GL..Thanx fo Battle...PEACE

[Kaotik D]

Nice drop u elevatin sorry for free post

[Executioner]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16619
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=15960

my links^^
my rap will be up in a little bit

[Executioner]

Archetype, which sould be Archebishop, cuz he to rape little kids//
damn,damn,damn, for a win agaist you i already call dibs//

theres nothing more that pushes me to beat you Arch//
which is when you try dissing me, leave and let me march//

all over you,i'll even let my mother join, she'll beat you mentally//
and i'll beat ya phyiscaly, fuck you and your mortalitly//

god give me the knife, i'll hand it back and let you stab yourself and discharge//
and the only thing you'd be fucking, is Homer and his wifr Marge//

listen you over grown weasel, stop sucking that dick and listen//
as am pissing vinagar in your wounds, i just caught ya outa position//

there i'm done, no beef, and lets get some vots

[Kaotik D]

Your aggressive sound fades as your catching pantie oppressive bound aids/
Go Grab your spades, I think you got enough time to dig your own graves//
Only a jab Flowed well

Ill enslave all M.I.C as ghost writing slaves/
Don’t fuck wit my mentality, cause me n my stlye equals a Heavenly Matrimony,
A vile sequel to insanity, fuck morality I’m performing a vasectomy on Yo Styles Anatomy//
Structure out here

I’m just use to this…staryin down your mothers uterus/
I’m serious all yo brothers have fucked her delirious//...
Weak

All Just pissed spreadin tha diseased mist…2 minutes in this’ll have her contagious with syphilis/
Listen to this, You ain’t a vocalist …cause you sounding like her throat, when I decided to choke ya Miss//
Alrite

STOP it….Ya out of fashion rappin like you lost all y’all compassion fo life/
Im not askin ,Drop tha Mic!, here take this knife…n…go rape your whoe wife//
Nope not feelin it

Archetype, which sould be Archebishop, cuz he to rape little kids//
damn,damn,damn, for a win agaist you i already call dibs//
More dissing a bihsop then arche

theres nothing more that pushes me to beat you Arch//
which is when you try dissing me, leave and let me march//
Not feelin it

all over you,i'll even let my mother join, she'll beat you mentally//
and i'll beat ya phyiscaly, fuck you and your mortalitly//
Yea better

god give me the knife, i'll hand it back and let you stab yourself and discharge//
and the only thing you'd be fucking, is Homer and his wifr Marge//
Nope not feelin it

listen you over grown weasel, stop sucking that dick and listen//
as am pissing vinagar in your wounds, i just caught ya outa position//
Better

Overall I have to give this to Rebel,
Achre u gettin better now ya need to work on multis, flow was alrite, strucutre was out//
Rebel, wheres the multis at brother?
Both need to elevate.
weak battle overall

[Executioner]

ight thanx 4 da vote, i'm just saving up for a big battle. this is just practise

[Executioner]

some votes plz

[IllerthanMe]

i VOTE REBEL ON THIS BATTLE NICE BATTLE OVERALL THESE NIGGAZ IS ELEVATING FAST

[Executioner]

thanx 4 dat, just next time could ya plz do cats or BBB

[Executioner]

it is 2-0 4 me, one more vote for de KO

[Kaotik D]

Illerthan stop fucking Bs voting, Mod closed are battle cause u.

[IllerthanMe]

Your aggressive sound fades as your catching pantie oppressive bound aids/
Go Grab your spades, I think you got enough time to dig your own graves//
This flowed well but the 2nd line just didn't go with the first line

Ill enslave all M.I.C as ghost writing slaves/
Don’t fuck wit my mentality, cause me n my stlye equals a Heavenly Matrimony,
A vile sequel to insanity, fuck morality I’m performing a vasectomy on Yo Styles Anatomy//
Your flow was way off on this bar lines were a lil long

I’m just use to this…staryin down your mothers uterus/
I’m serious all yo brothers have fucked her delirious//...
uterus and delirious don't rhyme and this bar was off and it didn't elevate from the last bar

All Just pissed spreadin tha diseased mist…2 minutes in this’ll have her contagious with syphilis/
Listen to this, You ain’t a vocalist …cause you sounding like her throat, when I decided to choke ya Miss//
This was alrite but again u are supposed to elevate through out ur bars. This bar started out elevatin but then on the second line it dropped again

STOP it….Ya out of fashion rappin like you lost all y’all compassion fo life/
Im not askin ,Drop tha Mic!, here take this knife…n…go rape your whoe wife//
I am not feeling this bar it didn't elevate

Archetype, which sould be Archebishop, cuz he to rape little kids//
damn,damn,damn, for a win agaist you i already call dibs//
it was aight but start off by dissing the one u battling

theres nothing more that pushes me to beat you Arch//
which is when you try dissing me, leave and let me march//
not feeling this bar

all over you,i'll even let my mother join, she'll beat you mentally//
and i'll beat ya phyiscaly, fuck you and your mortalitly//
this is better but u gotta mix and match to make it sound better

god give me the knife, i'll hand it back and let you stab yourself and discharge//
and the only thing you'd be fucking, is Homer and his wifr Marge//
not feeling this bar could have ended with something better

listen you over grown weasel, stop sucking that dick and listen//
as am pissing vinagar in your wounds, i just caught ya outa position//
This bar is alot better good ender.

Rebel won this battle because of humor this battle was aight but at the end Rebel elevated a little better than u did

[L_Nino]

weak battle...no breakdown..


Consistency: TIE
Structure: RS
Multis: TIE
Flow: A
Metas: TIE
Personals: RS
Punches: TIE
Enjoyment: A
Creativity: TIE
Overall: i'd (personally) vote for Arch..but since RS got a more important catergory, he gets it...



VOTE: Rebel Shadow...

[Executioner]

i won 3-0, KO, good battle Archetype, close this shit

[Jakey Boi]

Consistency: arch
Structure: rebel
Multis: rebel
Flow: tie
Metas: tie
Personals: rebel
Punches: rebel
Enjoyment: arch
Creativity: rebel hard descision
Overall: rebel

[Executioner]

well thanx, i already won. but w/e

[Jakey Boi]

voted so i could get ma link up in ourz lol

[Executioner]

o, srry bout that