J-o-e vs S.W.A.T (0-3 KO)

[J-o-e]

5 bars
5 votes
3= ko
No beef.....

[J-o-e]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16685
http://www.************/phpbb2/profile.php?mode=activate&u=3238&act_key=881cd1a75c0c1

^^Links

My Drop

Yet another HOBO named SWAT rhymes are wack hes just started a HOMO-MOVEMENT
Let me Give u a PROMO, and realise theres always room for SLO-MO-IMPROVEMENT

You drink too much MAGRITIA your name should be ANITA and get PISSED OFF
See your a turtle and i'm the CHEETAH and now you just getting RIPPED OFF

What does your NAME really GAIN in actually getting you DANGLIN'-VOTES
I understand its a SHAME that your LAME I see you try STRANGLIN'-THROATS

See i'm NEW but better than your CREW, stop trying to be OVERRATED-DICTATORSHIP
Hope you catch the bird FLU, Just better than YOU just a HATED-PRICKTATORSHIP

*PRICKTATORSHIP - just calling him a prick really.....

[S.W.A.T]

u drop first....

[J-o-e]

Just did, ur drop

[Kaotik D]

Sorry for freepost but decent drop man keep it up

[S.W.A.T]

My Verse:

Come on dawg gimme a challenge, throw~ya~fists~bro
Loser can eat a cock so here, blow~on~dicks~J-O-E

U cant match my skill drop my verse n watch~me~kill
Cuz if beating you was free dawg i'll scrath~my~bill

Fuck this army man SWAT is top of the food~chain
He's writing barz guessing like the fued~game

Write your own shit bro cuz im seeing bite~marks
Stretched barz, he's like gas the way i fight~farts

True definition of toy soldiers im battling drastic~ones
How the fuck can you harm me shooting with plastic~gunz
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will getz links up soon...

[J-o-e]

Good Battle, uppin 4 votes....

[Kaotik D]

Come on dawg gimme a challenge, throw~ya~fists~bro
Loser can eat a cock so here, blow~on~dicks~J-O-E
Nice Multi Flowed Well

U cant match my skill drop my verse n watch~me~kill
Cuz if beating you was free dawg i'll scrath~my~bill
Kinda forced

Fuck this army man SWAT is top of the food~chain
He's writing barz guessing like the fued~game
Alrite

Write your own shit bro cuz im seeing bite~marks
Stretched barz, he's like gas the way i fight~farts
Alrite

True definition of toy soldiers im battling drastic~ones
How the fuck can you harm me shooting with plastic~gunz
Yes better
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JOES VERSE
Yet another HOBO named SWAT rhymes are wack hes just started a HOMO-MOVEMENT
Let me Give u a PROMO, and realise theres always room for SLO-MO-IMPROVEMENT
last word forced But alrite openner

You drink too much MAGRITIA your name should be ANITA and get PISSED OFF
See your a turtle and i'm the CHEETAH and now you just getting RIPPED OFF
Hmm not feelin this

What does your NAME really GAIN in actually getting you DANGLIN'-VOTES
I understand its a SHAME that your LAME I see you try STRANGLIN'-THROATS
NICE

See i'm NEW but better than your CREW, stop trying to be OVERRATED-DICTATORSHIP
Hope you catch the bird FLU, Just better than YOU just a HATED-PRICKTATORSHIP
last Word forced as fuck,but decent otherwise,

hmm now vote time its close,
Gonna have to give this to swat,
Joe u have elevated but ur multis are Forced,
Swat ive seen better keep elevatin man
battle overall was preety weak,
Keep spittin Boys

[J-o-e]

Aight cool, 1-0 to swat

uppin 4 mo' votes....

[S.W.A.T]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=208261#post208261

1-0 SWAT, upping...

[IllerthanMe]

vote swat will explain send me a pm

[S.W.A.T]

1-0 SWAt

upping..

yo ILLerthanme, come on man dont b lazy, vote proper;y..

[Kaotik D]

Illerthan me votes like that in every battle hes just lazy

[J-o-e]

Lazy fuck....uppin votes still 1-0 to Swat....

[Demise]

Come on dawg gimme a challenge, throw~ya~fists~bro
Loser can eat a cock so here, blow~on~dicks~J-O-E
Decent flow good opener

U cant match my skill drop my verse n watch~me~kill
Cuz if beating you was free dawg i'll scrath~my~bill
not a multi jst so you know

Fuck this army man SWAT is top of the food~chain
He's writing barz guessing like the fued~game
This is a solid line gd job

Write your own shit bro cuz im seeing bite~marks
Stretched barz, he's like gas the way i fight~farts
Meh

True definition of toy soldiers im battling drastic~ones
How the fuck can you harm me shooting with plastic~gunz
Good ender


J-O-E'S VERSE

Yet another HOBO named SWAT rhymes are wack hes just started a HOMO-MOVEMENT
Let me Give u a PROMO, and realise theres always room for SLO-MO-IMPROVEMENT
Froced mutli 1st line is weak

You drink too much MAGRITIA your name should be ANITA and get PISSED OFF
See your a turtle and i'm the CHEETAH and now you just getting RIPPED OFF
Pissed and Ripped is a questionable rhyme... it would work wit audio but wit txt you gta make it actually rhyme

What does your NAME really GAIN in actually getting you DANGLIN'-VOTES
I understand its a SHAME that your LAME I see you try STRANGLIN'-THROATS
it rhymes but what does one really have to do wit the other? decent tho

See i'm NEW but better than your CREW, stop trying to be OVERRATED-DICTATORSHIP
Hope you catch the bird FLU, Just better than YOU just a HATED-PRICKTATORSHIP
Did you make up a fuckin word? this is avg

Swat took this EZ

[Executioner]

Joes verse

Yet another HOBO named SWAT rhymes are wack hes just started a HOMO-MOVEMENT
Let me Give u a PROMO, and realise theres always room for SLO-MO-IMPROVEMENT
not really fealing the opener, nice try tho
You drink too much MAGRITIA your name should be ANITA and get PISSED OFF
See your a turtle and i'm the CHEETAH and now you just getting RIPPED OFF
nice, love the multies
What does your NAME really GAIN in actually getting you DANGLIN'-VOTES
I understand its a SHAME that your LAME I see you try STRANGLIN'-THROATS
dumb, you should have built on from last bar
See i'm NEW but better than your CREW, stop trying to be OVERRATED-DICTATORSHIP
Hope you catch the bird FLU, Just better than YOU just a HATED-PRICKTATORSHIP
okay closer, could have been better

Swats verse

Come on dawg gimme a challenge, throw~ya~fists~bro
Loser can eat a cock so here, blow~on~dicks~J-O-E
nice opener, good multies
U cant match my skill drop my verse n watch~me~kill
Cuz if beating you was free dawg i'll scrath~my~bill
good first line didn't like the second one
Fuck this army man SWAT is top of the food~chain
He's writing barz guessing like the fued~game
50/50, but okay jab
Write your own shit bro cuz im seeing bite~marks
Stretched barz, he's like gas the way i fight~farts
didn't like it, grow up and don't use fart for a word, no beef swat
True definition of toy soldiers im battling drastic~ones
How the fuck can you harm me shooting with plastic~gunz
nice closer, hard multies

i would have to say swat won this