Archetype.Vs.Lyricologist RiCo (0-6 KO)

[ArcheType]

Aight thanx fo acceptin,,
Im droppin first..
5 bars
24 hour time limit
no dickridin, crew votes etc
Breakdown votes please..

il check in wit my links n drop in bout half hour..

GL
Peace

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16489&page=2

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=1569

[ArcheType]

Aight droppin links and verse...
Links: http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16349&page=4&pp=10
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16489&page=2

Aight,..yo..

Ayo..Mr.Rico..Next time yo’ pick up that Pencil..to scrawl/
Please save us the brawl, N make some shit ill, by drowning in a bottle’o..penacil//

I’m so ill, slittin you wit any’o my jewellery that’s steel/
Feel the cold chill of the steel as your brain starts to peel/
Sendin’ your eyes to reel as you realise this shits fo' real//

Tell me, How can you afford to battle when I have you plain unemployed?/
Have you destroyed when I envelope you into this lyrical flowin void//

Its My mind intertwined wit the divine, Sendin me a sublime ryhme one at a time/
"n" at tha end of my lines its like im pullin out a nine,...emtyn dimes into ya spine/

This verse is just me practacin Voodoo, Im gainin’ mo knowledge like a Guru/
The story ends Tragic as My Magick’s* New,...Maimin’ camp college dicks just like You/

*The Magick is my lyrics, kinda like spells….!? N I’m new to this..





Ok I real tried elevatin on this so if you've seen my previous battles also pm me your critism n how i can improve,,Thanx

Peace

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

nice attempt

"INTERGALLACTIC", faker than jewelry made of PLASTIC//
Consider your streak "dead", let me introduce you to the "CASKET"//
Testing me was a mistake - and soon you'll see the BLUNDER//
People who read your text become jealous of STEVIE WONDER//
What's this? Oh, just a faggot that don't know a bar from a STANZA//
I'ma "love to kill" this kid like my name is "Tony DANZA"//*1
the nine'll have your body "bouncin'" 'round like "BAD CHECKS"//
You already said you'd lose, where the fuck is the CONFIDENCE//
This dude's just HOPIN'-TO-LOSE, leavin' Arche SMOKED-AND-THEN-BRUISED//
I'll play hopskotch wit' ya organs and jumprope with FALOPEAN-TUBES//

* In 1997, Tony Danza starred in a movie called "Love to Kill."

[CapZ]

i guess i cant vote :(

~1~

[Kaotik D]

Vote,
Structure:RICO
FLOW:Arche
Punches:Rico
Metas:Rico
Multis:Rico

Overall:Rico
Vote to rico but U elevatin Arche keep spittin

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

0-1 uppin

[JD da MC]

1 sided battle in my opinion... but Archetype took flow

Flow: Archetype
Punches: Rico
Multis: Rico, but there was a lack of
Personals: None that I saw
Structure: Rico, Archetype's was messed up every now and again
Metaphors: Rico
Vote: Rico took this, but it was a pretty weak verse... no worries though, you didn't need ya full skill to win this, good battle

[Executioner]

Consistency/Structure: Rico
Creativity:rico
Enjoyable: rico
Flow: rico
Metaphors: rico
Multies: rico
Personal: rico
Punches: rico
Vocabulary: Arch
Wordplay: Arch
Overall: i wonder, well rico

[Nightshift]

Flow: Archetype
Punches: Rico
Multis: Archetype
Personals: rico
Structure: Rico
Metaphors: Rico
Vote:

[S.W.A.T]

Flow: Arche
Structure: Rico
Punches: Rico
Multis: Rico
Personals: Rico
Metas: Rico
Wordplay: Rico
Enjoyment: Rico

Vote: Rico

[RAKIM]

stuff rico and archetype

Flow: Archetype
Punches: Rico
Multis: Rico only a few though
Personals: even
Structure: Rico
Metaphors: Rico

my vote rico :clap: