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Kaotik D
11-10-2005, 07:38 AM
5 bars,
5 votes
3-0 ko
No dickridding,hate,crew votes,
bbb please.

Kaotik D
11-10-2005, 07:44 AM
Checks in
Links-
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16499
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16198

J-o-e
11-10-2005, 07:48 AM
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16453
^Link

He's in Lyrical Prohpets but he isn't no LYRICISIT
Claim he's a writier but hes a biter, cant be as REAL AS THIS

Need help to make a SONG, so go and look for RHYMES
We both know that shit's WRONG, come on get with the TIMES

This guys no gangster, if ANYTHING this guy can come under PUSSY
U got a girl? That you can't buy the RING, im at the edge so dont PUSH ME

If you think i'm not gonna COME hard then you better BELIEVE it
Truth is this fool don't want NONE, He's now dead so better GRIEVE it

Begging please while smoking TREES, Geuss you want to be a QUEEN
Your in debt so bitch go and pay the FEE'S just because hes a crack FIEND....

Kaotik D
11-10-2005, 08:08 AM
If your standing at the edge,Then My Lyrics be KNOCKIN YOU OVER//
I Choke u Like a "Mass Murder".and watch u fall like an DROPIN-BLUE-CLOVER//

I bring the BLADE-to-JOE,My punches leave u weak, BittinHoles in ya,MADE-to-BLOW//
Ur rhymes are WHACK,Next Eminem-SHOW? Nah a cover with teletubies,text Statin,"JOES-a-HOE"

Youve Already Lost to me,So WHY-COME-BACK?//
Tryin to elevate,But u cant produce Nothin,when ya got a DRY-CUM-SACK//

"17"year Old Kid,Still playin computer-GAMES//
Dopewars,Dam u must be high to battle me,cause i puttin you to SHAME//

Lyrical Prophets For life,Youd have trouble tryin to get into MARVOS-CREW//
bar by bar,so wack"Ur gettin Worse"And yet MARVO Still BRAVOS-YOU//

Explanasions:
1.in his verse he said he is on the edge,
2.Basic Punch
3.hes already Lost to me
4.He was to busy to vote on site cause he was playin dope wars
5.Marvo posted he wanted to start a new Crew

No Beed Homie,
Uppin votes

Kaotik D
11-10-2005, 08:17 AM
Uppin for votes

raz2riches
11-10-2005, 03:28 PM
J-O-E

He's in Lyrical Prohpets but he isn't no LYRICISIT
Claim he's a writier but hes a biter, cant be as REAL AS THIS
ok opener, not hard enough tho

Need help to make a SONG, so go and look for RHYMES
We both know that shit's WRONG, come on get with the TIMES
first line ok attempt at personal, second line was meh

This guys no gangster, if ANYTHING this guy can come under PUSSY
U got a girl? That you can't buy the RING, im at the edge so dont PUSH ME
flow was off, but again ok jab

If you think i'm not gonna COME hard then you better BELIEVE it
Truth is this fool don't want NONE, He's now dead so better GRIEVE it
believe and grieve don’t rhyme completely, be-lieve - grieve, weak

Begging please while smoking TREES, Geuss you want to be a QUEEN
Your in debt so bitch go and pay the FEE'S just because hes a crack FIEND....
Ok closer, one of your better bars


PGB Gangster

If your standing at the edge,Then My Lyrics be KNOCKIN YOU OVER//
I Choke u Like a "Mass Murder".and watch u fall like an DROPIN-BLUE-CLOVER//
shit don’t make sense to me, its gotta be clear man, weak

I bring the BLADE-to-JOE,My punches leave u weak, BittinHoles in ya,MADE-to-BLOW//
Ur rhymes are WHACK,Next Eminem-SHOW? Nah a cover with teletubies,text Statin,"JOES-a-HOE"
JOES and Made don’t rhyme so why they bold, ok

Youve Already Lost to me,So WHY-COME-BACK?//
Tryin to elevate,But u cant produce Nothin,when ya got a DRY-CUM-SACK//
forced as fuck, and kind of childish too, sounds like you didn’t put any time into this bar, filler, wack

"17"year Old Kid,Still playin computer-GAMES//
Dopewars,Dam u must be high to battle me,cause i puttin you to SHAME//
jab, meh

Lyrical Prophets For life,Youd have trouble tryin to get into MARVOS-CREW//
bar by bar,so wack"Ur gettin Worse"And yet MARVO Still BRAVOS-YOU//
ok, don’t know bout bringin marvo into it your supposed to be battling J-O-E

OVERALL - J-O-E

Executioner
11-10-2005, 04:00 PM
Consistency/Structure: P-Gangstar
Creativity: Joe
Enjoyable: joe
Flow: P-Gangstar
Metaphors: joe
Multies: P-Gangstar
Personal: Joe
Punches: joe
Vocabulary: P-gangstar
Wordplay: Joe
Overall: JOE

J-o-e
11-10-2005, 05:01 PM
Aight cool 2-0 uppin mo' votes

ArcheType
11-10-2005, 06:25 PM
Damm, when i read this i thught it woz easzy gona go to PGB!?
But i didnt did it...

J-O-E
He's in Lyrical Prohpets but he isn't no LYRICISIT
Claim he's a writier but hes a biter, cant be as REAL AS THIS
yeah not bad operner

Need help to make a SONG, so go and look for RHYMES
We both know that shit's WRONG, come on get with the TIMES
Jab only

This guys no gangster, if ANYTHING this guy can come under PUSSY
U got a girl? That you can't buy the RING, im at the edge so dont PUSH ME
attack at a personal here but didnt real come of

If you think i'm not gonna COME hard then you better BELIEVE it
Truth is this fool don't want NONE, He's now dead so better GRIEVE it
filler

Begging please while smoking TREES, Geuss you want to be a QUEEN
Your in debt so bitch go and pay the FEE'S just because hes a crack FIEND....
aight but not really into it

PGB_GANGSTER

If your standing at the edge,Then My Lyrics be KNOCKIN YOU OVER//
I Choke u Like a "Mass Murder".and watch u fall like an DROPIN-BLUE-CLOVER//
I to diidnt really understand

I bring the BLADE-to-JOE,My punches leave u weak, BittinHoles in ya,MADE-to-BLOW//
Ur rhymes are WHACK,Next Eminem-SHOW? Nah a cover with teletubies,text Statin,"JOES-a-HOE"
Didnt hit hard enugth

Youve Already Lost to me,So WHY-COME-BACK?//
Tryin to elevate,But u cant produce Nothin,when ya got a DRY-CUM-SACK//
Aight liked the dry cum sack,,

"17"year Old Kid,Still playin computer-GAMES//
Dopewars,Dam u must be high to battle me,cause i puttin you to SHAME//
weak attack

Lyrical Prophets For life,Youd have trouble tryin to get into MARVOS-CREW//
bar by bar,so wack"Ur gettin Worse"And yet MARVO Still BRAVOS-YOU//
I can see why yu gettin Marvo into it, but "crew n you" are too easy ryhmin words,ya know..

Well i thougt PGB would of had tis you done better battles wit better wordin, sorry but gotta be honest n give it to:

OVERALL:J-O-E

(JUST HIT DAT LITTLE BIT HARDER)
PEACE

mattSMD
11-10-2005, 06:45 PM
rebel's vote wont count cos it aint bbb so.......

JOE
He's in Lyrical Prohpets but he isn't no LYRICISIT
Claim he's a writier but hes a biter, cant be as REAL AS THIS
got flow and personal but not very hard-hitting for an opener

Need help to make a SONG, so go and look for RHYMES
We both know that shit's WRONG, come on get with the TIMES
not very good but nice rhyme scheme

This guys no gangster, if ANYTHING this guy can come under PUSSY
U got a girl? That you can't buy the RING, im at the edge so dont PUSH ME
ok attempt at personal again but didnt really work out

If you think i'm not gonna COME hard then you better BELIEVE it
Truth is this fool don't want NONE, He's now dead so better GRIEVE it
weakest bar so far

Begging please while smoking TREES, Geuss you want to be a QUEEN
Your in debt so bitch go and pay the FEE'S just because hes a crack FIEND....
weak

PGB

If your standing at the edge,Then My Lyrics be KNOCKIN YOU OVER//
I Choke u Like a "Mass Murder".and watch u fall like an DROPIN-BLUE-CLOVER//
bad opener

I bring the BLADE-to-JOE,My punches leave u weak, BittinHoles in ya,MADE-to-BLOW//
Ur rhymes are WHACK,Next Eminem-SHOW? Nah a cover with teletubies,text Statin,"JOES-a-HOE"
weak and flow was off

Youve Already Lost to me,So WHY-COME-BACK?//
Tryin to elevate,But u cant produce Nothin,when ya got a DRY-CUM-SACK//
not bad

"17"year Old Kid,Still playin computer-GAMES//
Dopewars,Dam u must be high to battle me,cause i puttin you to SHAME//
poor

Lyrical Prophets For life,Youd have trouble tryin to get into MARVOS-CREW//
bar by bar,so wack"Ur gettin Worse"And yet MARVO Still BRAVOS-YOU//
isnt it mavro? lol w/e werent hard-hitting enough

Joe had this one pretty easy

IllerthanMe
11-10-2005, 07:04 PM
i vote pgb on this battle kid i will explain if ask me to

J-o-e
11-11-2005, 06:53 AM
Don't matter anyway....3-0 ko....

Kaotik D
11-11-2005, 07:59 AM
yea a Ko good battle man

RAKIM
11-13-2005, 12:48 AM
Mulites: pgb had a copel but the were really forced like you had verbal constipation... so joe
personals: joe
flow: joe
structure:joe

vote joe

Kaotik D
11-13-2005, 01:18 AM
Mulites: pgb had a copel but the were really forced like you had verbal constipation... so joe
personals: joe
flow: joe
structure:joe

vote joe


Verbal what? and this is already over so if u want a battle hollar at me

Executioner
11-13-2005, 05:52 PM
damn PGB Gangstar, i didn't except this

Kaotik D
11-13-2005, 05:59 PM
Didnt expect,what

Executioner
11-13-2005, 05:59 PM
you to lose