S.W.A.T v/s Dennis (5-1)

[S.W.A.T]

SWAT's Verse:

Choose ya own faith fuck Dennis, bro prove that ure God
I dont gotto drop a tight verse u'll lose to the odds

I'm off the rocks merking this faggot spittin off the top
Denis claims to b 'hard' but hes known to have the softest cock

Neva lost and i aint gon down to this new cat not today bro
I'll leave him more 'rocked' than the stones received by J LO

Links:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16198

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16166


Dennis's Verse:

Swat if you step to me your life you risk it,
I got the knife and the bisquit and if ull like ill get real specific,

You might get flipped in the pacific, tied to a cement brick,
Kickin it with the fishes, ya missin n it was just quick hit,

I can tell u aint got green and u definetly not mean,
the bridge was a hot scene so now they really need a swat team..

Linkz:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....49&page=3&pp=10

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....ed=1#post204411

Vote Stand at: 4-1 SWAT
Venim Dick Ride...

upping fo finisher...

[S.W.A.T]

come on ppl

1 more vote to win...

Venim.. fucking hater...

[CapZ]

S.W.A.T's Verse:


Choose ya own faith fuck Dennis, bro prove that ure God
I dont gotto drop a tight verse u'll lose to the odds
~ ight ok closer 2/5~

I'm off the rocks merking this faggot spittin off the top
Denis claims to b 'hard' but hes known to have the softest cock
~so-so but funny~

Neva lost and i aint gon down to this new cat not today bro
I'll leave him more 'rocked' than the stones received by J LO
~ok 2/5 closer~

Dennis Verse:

Swat if you step to me your life you risk it,
I got the knife and the bisquit and if ull like ill get real specific,
~weak 0/5~

You might get flipped in the pacific, tied to a cement brick,
Kickin it with the fishes, ya missin n it was just quick hit,
~ played~

I can tell u aint got green and u definetly not mean,
the bridge was a hot scene so now they really need a swat team..
~ could've been use betta best bar in ya verse ya multies was ight 0.5/5~


PUNCHES- S
PERSONALS- TIE [Lacked]
MULTIES- TIE
Metas- TIE
VOCAB- N/A
creative- S
FLOW/STRUCTURE- TIE
INTRO/OUTRO- S

OVERALL- S.W.A.T Took this.. betta punches,, weak battle tho


~1~

[S.W.A.T]

thats the win

wonder wat battle Venim was lookin at...

5-1 SWAT

taHNX fo voting ppl...

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

PUNCHES- s
PERSONALS- ehhhh
MULTIES- ehhh
Metas- Tie
VOCAB- none
creative- S
FLOW/STRUCTURE- S
overall Swat