BL Day 4: Reddevil vs Rico

[a.i.d.s.]

you know the rules :)


deadline 5 days from now :)


start

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

*Intro*

I'm "COLLAPSIN THIS GEEK" claimin he's "STRAPPED FROM THE STREET//
while the only 'CAPS' I "bust" will leave you "SNAPPED AT THE KNEES"//
snd "PACKED WIT SOME PLEAS" I'll set ya "hands on fire and make u applaud" so u can say u've "CLAPPED WIT SOME HEAT!"//

*Let's get It*

My rhymes bring the "COLDEST COMBINATION" that'll IM-"PLODE THIS ABOMINATION"//
I'll slice your 'tongue out' and put it in ya 'hand' if you want to "HOLD A CONVERSATION"//
I'll "FLIP YOUR NOTIONS" with 'FIST OF MOTION"//
that pull your 'intestines through your heart' to leave you wit " 'MIXED EMOTIONS' "//
I'll catch you on the streets, so when you "SEE ME ..TURN AND DIP"//
cuz I'll ~"Beat You In Public"~ like "PEE WEE HERMAN'S DICK"//

[Red Devyl]

how can u call urself lyricist when u bite-lines n are a big plagiarist
u got tite-whines but the onli time u r sick is when up our ass u put ur own fist

i don go unlock mah door when i m sed to lay~the~keys
may b u are 19 but compared to me u are still learnin ur A~B~C's*

yes u atleast agree that ur shit is curupt n afta this battle ur sales are gonna~b~bankrupt
yes i understand u say u are killa fuck me up? damn really u cant even fauna~life~interupt**

born killa? the onli phrase defining ur lyrics is high school dropper
man u think u r down into hip hop cuz of the frog infection turnin u into a hopper


Explantations
*his avatar says A, B ,C
**his pro says he is a born killa but he cant even fuck up a plant(fauna)

[Red Devyl]

uppin votes CMON guys

[chappy]

RICO:

I'm "COLLAPSIN THIS GEEK" claimin he's "STRAPPED FROM THE STREET//
while the only 'CAPS' I "bust" will leave you "SNAPPED AT THE KNEES"//
snd "PACKED WIT SOME PLEAS" I'll set ya "hands on fire and make u applaud" so u can say u've "CLAPPED WIT SOME HEAT!"//

^^Nice opener, liked the multis..

My rhymes bring the "COLDEST COMBINATION" that'll IM-"PLODE THIS ABOMINATION"//
I'll slice your 'tongue out' and put it in ya 'hand' if you want to "HOLD A CONVERSATION"//

^^Nice but not hard enough

I'll "FLIP YOUR NOTIONS" with 'FIST OF MOTION"//
that pull your 'intestines through your heart' to leave you wit " 'MIXED EMOTIONS' "//

^^Aight

I'll catch you on the streets, so when you "SEE ME ..TURN AND DIP"//
cuz I'll ~"Beat You In Public"~ like "PEE WEE HERMAN'S DICK"//

^^LOL, cool, hot ender.


DEVIL:

how can u call urself lyricist when u bite-lines n are a big plagiarist
u got tite-whines but the onli time u r sick is when up our ass u put ur own fist

^^Hard to read, so-so opener

i don go unlock mah door when i m sed to lay~the~keys
may b u are 19 but compared to me u are still learnin ur A~B~C's

^^Ehh, poor

yes u atleast agree that ur shit is curupt n afta this battle ur sales are gonna~b~bankrupt
yes i understand u say u are killa fuck me up? damn really u cant even fauna~life~interupt**

^^Better

born killa? the onli phrase defining ur lyrics is high school dropper
man u think u r down into hip hop cuz of the frog infection turnin u into a hopper

^^That's jus plain wack


This was jus murder, devil you need to elevate. Rico had better multis & punches, not ya best Rico but you didn't need to try...

Vote - Rico

1.

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=205788#post205788

a.i.d.s u need to get dese ppl to voting and spitting so we can get dis rolling

[slimshadyLP]

RICO:

I'm "COLLAPSIN THIS GEEK" claimin he's "STRAPPED FROM THE STREET//
while the only 'CAPS' I "bust" will leave you "SNAPPED AT THE KNEES"//
snd "PACKED WIT SOME PLEAS" I'll set ya "hands on fire and make u applaud" so u can say u've "CLAPPED WIT SOME HEAT!"//
nice multies and flow, pucnhes coulda came harder though....still nice..

My rhymes bring the "COLDEST COMBINATION" that'll IM-"PLODE THIS ABOMINATION"//
I'll slice your 'tongue out' and put it in ya 'hand' if you want to "HOLD A CONVERSATION"//
liked the seconed line....good multies

I'll "FLIP YOUR NOTIONS" with 'FIST OF MOTION"//
that pull your 'intestines through your heart' to leave you wit " 'MIXED EMOTIONS' "//
iight......

I'll catch you on the streets, so when you "SEE ME ..TURN AND DIP"//
cuz I'll ~"Beat You In Public"~ like "PEE WEE HERMAN'S DICK"//
nice.....

DEVIL:

how can u call urself lyricist when u bite-lines n are a big plagiarist
u got tite-whines but the onli time u r sick is when up our ass u put ur own fist
attempted multies...punches were bad...weak opener..

i don go unlock mah door when i m sed to lay~the~keys
may b u are 19 but compared to me u are still learnin ur A~B~C's
weak punch...simple personal

yes u atleast agree that ur shit is curupt n afta this battle ur sales are gonna~b~bankrupt
yes i understand u say u are killa fuck me up? damn really u cant even fauna~life~interupt**
weak pucnhes..

born killa? the onli phrase defining ur lyrics is high school dropper
man u think u r down into hip hop cuz of the frog infection turnin u into a hopper
no....frog part killed this.....

Consistency/Structure: R
Creativity: R
Enjoyable: R
Flow: R
Metaphors: R
Multies: R
Personal: D
Punches: R
Vocabulary: none stood out
Wordplay: R
Overall: rico took this.......

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

come on yall vote so i can get dis KO

[mattSMD]

RICO:

I'm "COLLAPSIN THIS GEEK" claimin he's "STRAPPED FROM THE STREET//
while the only 'CAPS' I "bust" will leave you "SNAPPED AT THE KNEES"//
snd "PACKED WIT SOME PLEAS" I'll set ya "hands on fire and make u applaud" so u can say u've "CLAPPED WIT SOME HEAT!"//

flow was well off but decent wordplay

My rhymes bring the "COLDEST COMBINATION" that'll IM-"PLODE THIS ABOMINATION"//
I'll slice your 'tongue out' and put it in ya 'hand' if you want to "HOLD A CONVERSATION"//

ok

I'll "FLIP YOUR NOTIONS" with 'FIST OF MOTION"//
that pull your 'intestines through your heart' to leave you wit " 'MIXED EMOTIONS' "//

good

I'll catch you on the streets, so when you "SEE ME ..TURN AND DIP"//
cuz I'll ~"Beat You In Public"~ like "PEE WEE HERMAN'S DICK"//

haha good closer


DEVIL:

how can u call urself lyricist when u bite-lines n are a big plagiarist
u got tite-whines but the onli time u r sick is when up our ass u put ur own fist

weak opener

i don go unlock mah door when i m sed to lay~the~keys
may b u are 19 but compared to me u are still learnin ur A~B~C's

played and poor

yes u atleast agree that ur shit is curupt n afta this battle ur sales are gonna~b~bankrupt
yes i understand u say u are killa fuck me up? damn really u cant even fauna~life~interupt**

what?

born killa? the onli phrase defining ur lyrics is high school dropper
man u think u r down into hip hop cuz of the frog infection turnin u into a hopper

damn man, weak verse


Rico took this easy

[Red Devyl]

come on yall vote so i can get dis KO


u were soundin desperate..................u kno u won this....................

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

u were soundin desperate..................u kno u won this....................


no i soundin like dese folks need to vote......smh