View Full Version : BL Day 4: CapZ vs Dash
a.i.d.s.
11-03-2005, 07:48 AM
you know the rules :)
deadline 5 days from now :)
start
check in.. no beef good luck homie
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ehhh i'ma just drop 5.. i think it's 4-8 bars... but ehh i'll drop 5 u??
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lol, ight drop soz havnt been able to get on, might reply late
yo ma man, sorry a aint been able to get on and ive had shit to do in life uno.. sorry bout this hella big delay my spit will be up soon don` expect it to be anythin good tho, and oh yeah g`luck on this 1 fam no hate cos we crewing together ok cya
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wtf at your rap, you obviously Lack In The Trend
if my lyrics are gay, no wonder u aTtracted To Them!! -1-
i`l have ya Back Broke, and Slapped Foe ya Crap Hoe
its like your "throwin your talent" when u try nd *Wack Folk!* -2-
looka ya Sap Drool, utterly and completely Trashed Fool
i`l "turn caps around" like retarded kids tryna Act Cool -3-
i`l Slice Ya Frame, please bitch egNite Ya Game
your always "wrong at the end", jus Like Ya Name! -4-
expos
1. fliped his bar
2. wack, as in punch, wack as in SHIT lol
3. eZ
4. he spelt caps with a Z at the end of his name, tis wrong lol..
fuck it lololol..
i'ma drop lata :D good looks tho dash and aids i dont like dq's
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:)
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16499&page=1&pp=10
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=16315
~PAY ATTENTION~
~Man Ya Must Be Nuts..Why Should I Be Scared Of U? I'm Da "Windex" But Ur THE DUST
See I Will Crush..& It's Like "SPED" I'll Have This Kid Barley Leanin How To Say "DA" SHHH..
~Ya Nothin But Hype..I'll Make U Have A "Major Heart Attack" So U'll Just BREATHE & DIE..
Cuz U Dumb Ight..So Ya Loss To Demise? Well I'ma Recap Dat So Watch Fo Da 3's & 5's!!
~C'mon Dash Who? Cuz Putin Ya "After Someone's Bar" The Only Time Peeps NEED YOU!!
Dont Rap Duke..Cuz I Ate Dis Like Ice Cream To Bad U Was Late U Should've Been DQ'ED!!
~Yo Ya Family Loves U? AS IF.. & Ur Last "2 Bars" Wasnt Bad But The 1st 2 LACKED KID..
So "DASH BITCH!?" But Cant... & I Still Dont Beleave U Actully Explaned What WACK IS!!!~
LMAO EZ
1- lol nameplay u know how i do with tha creative shit
2- he loss to demise [3-5]
3- dash end of bars,lol ttttttttttttt// tttttttttt// ya know and DQ's a ice cream place so i used both to be creative, he should've been dq'ed i droped before him
4- he does have family probz, lol he Serious? check his 2nd bar c'mon peeps aint dumb,lol
VOTE UP YA
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but.. u spit first and i flipped your line.. now it wont make sense *cries
lol.. should i just make another one up and say that was da 1 ;) i'll tell aids
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lolz.. eff it.. people wil understand twas a flip etc.. just the net............................................UPP ING FOR VOTES U JEWS :D
yea... i even said i made a verse too... :rolleyes:
UPPIN YA
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let's get da votes now.. :thumbup:
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u know what would be great?
VOTES
:rolleyes: exactly VOTE UP YA
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Demise
11-13-2005, 01:57 PM
Dash's Verse
wtf at your rap, you obviously Lack In The Trend
if my lyrics are gay, no wonder u aTtracted To Them!! -1-
good opener... no multies really wut up wit that Dash?
i`l have ya Back Broke, and Slapped Foe ya Crap Hoe
its like your "throwin your talent" when u try nd *Wack Folk!* -2-
haha good bar
looka ya Sap Drool, utterly and completely Trashed Fool
i`l "turn caps around" like retarded kids tryna Act Cool -3-
lmfao I was really feelin that 2nd line
i`l Slice Ya Frame, please bitch egNite Ya Game
your always "wrong at the end", jus Like Ya Name! -4-
decent closer ended kinda soft for me tho
CapZ Verse
~Man Ya Must Be Nuts..Why Should I Be Scared Of U? I'm Da "Windex" But Ur THE DUST
See I Will Crush..& It's Like "SPED" I'll Have This Kid Barley Leanin How To Say "DA" SHHH..
haha that was funny good opner
~Ya Nothin But Hype..I'll Make U Have A "Major Heart Attack" So U'll Just BREATHE & DIE..
Cuz U Dumb Ight..So Ya Loss To Demise? Well I'ma Recap Dat So Watch Fo Da 3's & 5's!!
nice personal good shit
~C'mon Dash Who? Cuz Putin Ya "After Someone's Bar" The Only Time Peeps NEED YOU!!
Dont Rap Duke..Cuz I Ate Dis Like Ice Cream To Bad U Was Late U Should've Been DQ'ED!!
Damn that was hot I liked that
~Yo Ya Family Loves U? AS IF.. & Ur Last "2 Bars" Wasnt Bad But The 1st 2 LACKED KID..
So "DASH BITCH!?" But Cant... & I Still Dont Beleave U Actully Explaned What WACK IS!!!~
Avg bar
Overall Vote: CapZ
Dash wat happened? When you battled me you had like 30 multies, word play, metas and all kinda shit in one bar. Guess you wsnt feelin this one man.
thankz D... ight... 1-0 Let's get more votes now :clap:
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yo demise.. my verse had multies.. deffantly did... its just i didnt have dumbass slashes between the lines to show and thats the problem. people dont even uncerstand verses unless they have slashes in the multies or highlighted shit to make it look god damn pretty.. i knew i should of just put slashes in between them.. next voter please read between the lines god damnit, thanks for votin tho
chappy
11-13-2005, 04:21 PM
Consistency/Structure: C
Creativity: TIE
Personal: C
Punches: TIE
Multis: C...his were better
Flow: D
Metas: TIE
Enjoyable: TIE
Wordplay: D
Overall: CapZ
Seen better from both of you, but it's aight seein' as tho you crew and shit. Keep goin'...
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Demise
11-13-2005, 04:36 PM
yo demise.. my verse had multies.. deffantly did... its just i didnt have dumbass slashes between the lines to show and thats the problem. people dont even uncerstand verses unless they have slashes in the multies or highlighted shit to make it look god damn pretty.. i knew i should of just put slashes in between them.. next voter please read between the lines god damnit, thanks for votin tho
No doubt had multies... But when you battled me you multied "Paris hilton's 40 minute sex tape" and in ths you had 3 syls ya knw wat Im sayin. and this aint the normal style you use
YEA^^...And u had multies Dash but he was sayin like u know wack-and-shit starp-and-clip like that... da key tho are punches/personals UPPIN KO
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*smh.. rap isnt about multis and shit man, jus cos sum1 has 800000 syyllables multis dont mean ther great..
that's what i was sayin... uppin KO
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slimshadyLP
11-14-2005, 09:32 PM
Dash's Verse
wtf at your rap, you obviously Lack In The Trend
if my lyrics are gay, no wonder u aTtracted To Them!! -1-
lol iight opener......
i`l have ya Back Broke, and Slapped Foe ya Crap Hoe
its like your "throwin your talent" when u try nd *Wack Folk!* -2-
coo....multies were weak though....
looka ya Sap Drool, utterly and completely Trashed Fool
i`l "turn caps around" like retarded kids tryna Act Cool -3-
cool......
i`l Slice Ya Frame, please bitch egNite Ya Game
your always "wrong at the end", jus Like Ya Name! -4-
coulda came harder...ok ender...
CapZ Verse
~Man Ya Must Be Nuts..Why Should I Be Scared Of U? I'm Da "Windex" But Ur THE DUST
See I Will Crush..& It's Like "SPED" I'll Have This Kid Barley Leanin How To Say "DA" SHHH..
first line was ok wasnt feelin the windex thing...second was betta...
~Ya Nothin But Hype..I'll Make U Have A "Major Heart Attack" So U'll Just BREATHE & DIE..
Cuz U Dumb Ight..So Ya Loss To Demise? Well I'ma Recap Dat So Watch Fo Da 3's & 5's!!
cool....
~C'mon Dash Who? Cuz Putin Ya "After Someone's Bar" The Only Time Peeps NEED YOU!!
Dont Rap Duke..Cuz I Ate Dis Like Ice Cream To Bad U Was Late U Should've Been DQ'ED!!
[/B]much better...liked the second line....
~Yo Ya Family Loves U? AS IF.. & Ur Last "2 Bars" Wasnt Bad But The 1st 2 LACKED KID..
So "DASH BITCH!?" But Cant... & I Still Dont Beleave U Actully Explaned What WACK IS!!!~
average.....first line was straight.....[B]
Consistency/Structure: tie
Creativity: tie
Enjoyable: C
Flow: D
Metaphors: D
Multies: D
Personal: C
Punches: C
Vocabulary: /
Wordplay: C
Overall: Capz won.....seen better from both.....nuttin blew me away.....
thankz fo votin ya KO Good lookz dash
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iight g`battle but next time dont delete ya original verse and post as soon as i post a weak ass verse and post a better one iight..
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:D A.I.D.S Post it back up,lol
ight will do...
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g`battle fam.. lets keep it movin ya`ll!
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