BL Day 3: SSLP vs Takuh (0:4)

[a.i.d.s.]

rules:

4 - 8 bars
deadline friday
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

votes:

bar by bar votes or category with explaination
only people who are signed in the BL are allowed to vote



don't forget your links

[slimshadyLP]

damn battlin u again lol...........

checkin in........

[Da-Tite-iLL-TakUh]

Checkkkka hmmm...sup sslp..again huh.......DAMN..only people who are signed in the BL are allowed to vote << Thats Like Everyone who doesnt like me lol....

Im Down Lets Get It Poppin Lp G/L

[Da-Tite-iLL-TakUh]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=14604
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=14451

Sorry Dawg...Gotta do It Here I GO!


You Can't Rap, |Please Understand It|, iLL Take Out The Blade In The Streets And Make You |Bleed On The Granite,| C Packin Heat? Pfft, Only Time You See SSLP Is A List Of The Wackest |Emcees On The Planet!|..


Its A known fact that your "plane punches" Wont "land on me", as im in an airport terminal
SSL? Please imma "piss all over you",...cuz iLL will always "stay above P" like im standing at the urnial :cwow:

iLL put 'Scared voices in ya mind' & fill ya head-wit-screams..Put 'holloween internet address in ya thoughts', cuz im linking fear-in-ur-dreams..run kid, the-45-gleams..& Truly your 'offensive lines are weak' like shitty-sports-teams..

This Battle? Abort It and like Quadruplets WardRobes 4-Fit/Forfit Then Ya gettin Punched when you did and you Know/No This
This Kid Get Rushed and Proved Newbish Against me cuz his skill level isn't much like what thieves Get from the Homeless..-Ouch-

LP Best? Nah Like my Uncles Inlaws Not Hardly-Cuz Punch Come to Ya Mouth like thats where the Party-Was This Boy Gay & Gettin Wrecked so like X Rated Toy Play I Leave Him Fucking Achein/A Ken More than Barby-Does...-Damn-

Like Ballerinas Doin Construction, iLL Know How Ta Flip A Brick
Drowning Niggas Wit My Flow, Yall Get My Drift?
N My Presence Is Always Felt, Like Tossin Christmas Gifts

Stepping To Me It'll Be A Lesson... Because I'm Known to 'Waste Your Muscles' Until Pain & Leprosy Is Present! Yes!, Treachery's My Profession, So Don't 'Get Me Wrong' When I Kill You Then 'Question The Motives' Like 'Angry Jeopardy Contestants!'

Damn man.....

:cwow: ...In Loving Memory Of SSLP... :cwow:

[slimshadyLP]

damn forgot bout this sorry man.........bout to come wit sumthin quick............

[slimshadyLP]

sorry im late..........

1.-Im killin this 'trash' like i was 'soapin-diseased-rhymes', hav ya hit "rock-bottom" like you was 'coalin-beneath-mines',
-"Washed up" lyrics like you was 'holdin-the-seas-tides', cuz 'parkin cars' the only time ya 'rollin-between-lines'//

2.-Ya cheap like bargains, ya whackness is 'buggin-like-gardens', cuz i got this fool in 'fuzzy' situations like he was 'rubbin-with-carpets',
-My lyrics is sharpened, cuz like germs your talents somethin we cant spot, this fool drops so much 'shit' cuz his 'asscracks' the only "line" that he's got//

3.-Ya like 'computers' cuz ya 'rappin-just-crashed', the only thing you be "hittin's" when ya 'tappin-sum-ass',
-Ya whack lyrics 'reflect' ya even if ya was 'smashin-through-glass', cuz like gangsta movies this fools only 'actin-he's-bad//

4.-Goin to a stripclub only time ya 'hard-on-the-block', ya careers closed like you was 'chompin-on-locks', cuz 'drinkin' the only time takuh 'poppin-sum-shots',
-Performin on the 'beach' only time takuh 'rockin-our-socks'//

5.-This fool aint 'audible' like 'lightning-beams', got this fool 'barkin' like dogs as if he was 'strikin-trees', like his crew he's a Kondom Man waitin to 'dickride-the-teams',
-This fools blowin off steam, cuz his only "lines" the 'internet', cuz we wouldnt hear good "lines" if you was playin a 'musical instrument'//

6.-Ridin in with a bulldozer only time ya 'tearin-the-stage', got takuh "airin" his punches like he was 'wearin-a-cape',
-Have this fool 'mad' like "whinin" babies like you was 'flarin-sum-grapes'//

^^^Whine is made from grapes........dont get anyhting else tell me....


http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=195662#post195662
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=195665#post195665

VOTEZ.......

[Killa Jones]

Da Title Takuh

You Can't Rap, |Please Understand It|, iLL Take Out The Blade In The Streets And Make You |Bleed On The Granite,| C Packin Heat? Pfft, Only Time You See SSLP Is A List Of The Wackest |Emcees On The Planet!|..
Nice Opener

Its A known fact that your "plane punches" Wont "land on me", as im in an airport terminal
SSL? Please imma "piss all over you",...cuz iLL will always "stay above P" like im standing at the urnial
Ok meta, nice bar
iLL put 'Scared voices in ya mind' & fill ya head-wit-screams..Put 'holloween internet address in ya thoughts', cuz im linking fear-in-ur-dreams..run kid, the-45-gleams..& Truly your 'offensive lines are weak' like shitty-sports-teams..
nice
This Battle? Abort It and like Quadruplets WardRobes 4-Fit/Forfit Then Ya gettin Punched when you did and you Know/No This
This Kid Get Rushed and Proved Newbish Against me cuz his skill level isn't much like what thieves Get from the Homeless..-Ouch-
decent bar
LP Best? Nah Like my Uncles Inlaws Not Hardly-Cuz Punch Come to Ya Mouth like thats where the Party-Was This Boy Gay & Gettin Wrecked so like X Rated Toy Play I Leave Him Fucking Achein/A Ken More than Barby-Does...-Damn-
lol ok bar

Like Ballerinas Doin Construction, iLL Know How Ta Flip A Brick
Drowning Niggas Wit My Flow, Yall Get My Drift?
N My Presence Is Always Felt, Like Tossin Christmas Gifts
ok bar
Stepping To Me It'll Be A Lesson... Because I'm Known to 'Waste Your Muscles' Until Pain & Leprosy Is Present! Yes!, Treachery's My Profession, So Don't 'Get Me Wrong' When I Kill You Then 'Question The Motives' Like 'Angry Jeopardy Contestants!'
ok closer
SSLP

-Im killin this 'trash' like i was 'soapin-diseased-rhymes', hav ya hit "rock-bottom" like you was 'coalin-beneath-mines',
-"Washed up" lyrics like you was 'holdin-the-seas-tides', cuz 'parkin cars' the only time ya 'rollin-between-lines'//
ok opener
2.-Ya cheap like bargains, ya whackness is 'buggin-like-gardens', cuz i got this fool in 'fuzzy' situations like he was 'rubbin-with-carpets',
-My lyrics is sharpened, cuz like germs your talents somethin we cant spot, this fool drops so much 'shit' cuz his 'asscracks' the only "line" that he's got//
ok ....
3.-Ya like 'computers' cuz ya 'rappin-just-crashed', the only thing you be "hittin's" when ya 'tappin-sum-ass',
-Ya whack lyrics 'reflect' ya even if ya was 'smashin-through-glass', cuz like gangsta movies this fools only 'actin-he's-bad//
not feelin it

4.-Goin to a stripclub only time ya 'hard-on-the-block', ya careers closed like you was 'chompin-on-locks', cuz 'drinkin' the only time takuh 'poppin-sum-shots',
-Performin on the 'beach' only time takuh 'rockin-our-socks'//
lame
5.-This fool aint 'audible' like 'lightning-beams', got this fool 'barkin' like dogs as if he was 'strikin-trees', like his crew he's a Kondom Man waitin to 'dickride-the-teams',
-This fools blowin off steam, cuz his only "lines" the 'internet', cuz we wouldnt hear good "lines" if you was playin a 'musical instrument'//
lame bar
6.-Ridin in with a bulldozer only time ya 'tearin-the-stage', got takuh "airin" his punches like he was 'wearin-a-cape',
-Have this fool 'mad' like "whinin" babies like you was 'flarin-sum-grapes'//
ok closer

SSLP you didnt come as hard as da title takuh.
Vote: Title Takuh

[Da-Tite-iLL-TakUh]

1-0 me thanks uppin

[CapZ]

SSLP'S Verse:

1.-Im killin this 'trash' like i was 'soapin-diseased-rhymes', hav ya hit "rock-bottom" like you was 'coalin-beneath-mines',
-"Washed up" lyrics like you was 'holdin-the-seas-tides', cuz 'parkin cars' the only time ya 'rollin-between-lines'//
`` Good Metas/multies 4/4 opener``


2.-Ya cheap like bargains, ya whackness is 'buggin-like-gardens', cuz i got this fool in 'fuzzy' situations like he was 'rubbin-with-carpets',
-My lyrics is sharpened, cuz like germs your talents somethin we cant spot, this fool drops so much 'shit' cuz his 'asscracks' the only "line" that he's got//
`` Lmao.. ight``

3.-Ya like 'computers' cuz ya 'rappin-just-crashed', the only thing you be "hittin's" when ya 'tappin-sum-ass',
-Ya whack lyrics 'reflect' ya even if ya was 'smashin-through-glass', cuz like gangsta movies this fools only 'actin-he's-bad//
`` ok-ok``

4.-Goin to a stripclub only time ya 'hard-on-the-block', ya careers closed like you was 'chompin-on-locks', cuz 'drinkin' the only time takuh 'poppin-sum-shots',
-Performin on the 'beach' only time takuh 'rockin-our-socks'//
`` lot's of metas so-so``

5.-This fool aint 'audible' like 'lightning-beams', got this fool 'barkin' like dogs as if he was 'strikin-trees', like his crew he's a Kondom Man waitin to 'dickride-the-teams',
-This fools blowin off steam, cuz his only "lines" the 'internet', cuz we wouldnt hear good "lines" if you was playin a 'musical instrument'//
`` so-so not bad``

6.-Ridin in with a bulldozer only time ya 'tearin-the-stage', got takuh "airin" his punches like he was 'wearin-a-cape',
-Have this fool 'mad' like "whinin" babies like you was 'flarin-sum-grapes'//
`` 3/5 closer``


Da-Tite-iLL-TakUh's Verse:


You Can't Rap, |Please Understand It|, iLL Take Out The Blade In The Streets And Make You |Bleed On The Granite,| C Packin Heat? Pfft, Only Time You See SSLP Is A List Of The Wackest |Emcees On The Planet!|..
``LOL Ok 4.7/5 Opener``


Its A known fact that your "plane punches" Wont "land on me", as im in an airport terminal
SSL? Please imma "piss all over you",...cuz iLL will always "stay above P" like im standing at the urnial
`` 1st a lil played so-so tho avg. bar``

iLL put 'Scared voices in ya mind' & fill ya head-wit-screams..Put 'holloween internet address in ya thoughts', cuz im linking fear-in-ur-dreams..run kid, the-45-gleams..& Truly your 'offensive lines are weak' like shitty-sports-teams..
``Good`

This Battle? Abort It and like Quadruplets WardRobes 4-Fit/Forfit Then Ya gettin Punched when you did and you Know/No This
This Kid Get Rushed and Proved Newbish Against me cuz his skill level isn't much like what thieves Get from the Homeless..
`` lol..``

LP Best? Nah Like my Uncles Inlaws Not Hardly-Cuz Punch Come to Ya Mouth like thats where the Party-Was This Boy Gay & Gettin Wrecked so like X Rated Toy Play I Leave Him Fucking Achein/A Ken More than Barby-Does...
`` ight``

Like Ballerinas Doin Construction, iLL Know How Ta Flip A Brick
Drowning Niggas Wit My Flow, Yall Get My Drift?
N My Presence Is Always Felt, Like Tossin Christmas Gifts
`` Very creative nice``

Stepping To Me It'll Be A Lesson... Because I'm Known to 'Waste Your Muscles' Until Pain & Leprosy Is Present! Yes!, Treachery's My Profession, So Don't 'Get Me Wrong' When I Kill You Then 'Question The Motives' Like 'Angry Jeopardy Contestants!'
`` DAMN.. 5/5 Closer i like that bar``

PUNCHES- Da.. felt his cuz it flowed betta
PERSONALS- TIE
MULTIES- SSLP
METAS- SSLP
CREATIVE- TIE
VOCAB- TIE
WORDPLAY- TIE
INTRO/OUTRO- DA
FLOW- TIE
STRUCTURE- DA
ENJOYED- DA..

OVERALL- Close fo real.. but i think Da-Tite-iLL-TakUh TOOK THIS his punches flowed well.. LP U Elevatin good homie keep that up good battle very creative from both

`1`

[Demise]

1.-Im killin this 'trash' like i was 'soapin-diseased-rhymes', hav ya hit "rock-bottom" like you was 'coalin-beneath-mines',
-"Washed up" lyrics like you was 'holdin-the-seas-tides', cuz 'parkin cars' the only time ya 'rollin-between-lines'//
Good opener good good shit


2.-Ya cheap like bargains, ya whackness is 'buggin-like-gardens', cuz i got this fool in 'fuzzy' situations like he was 'rubbin-with-carpets',
-My lyrics is sharpened, cuz like germs your talents somethin we cant spot, this fool drops so much 'shit' cuz his 'asscracks' the only "line" that he's got//
This was good aswell

3.-Ya like 'computers' cuz ya 'rappin-just-crashed', the only thing you be "hittin's" when ya 'tappin-sum-ass',
-Ya whack lyrics 'reflect' ya even if ya was 'smashin-through-glass', cuz like gangsta movies this fools only 'actin-he's-bad//
Aint bad but not as good as the other 2 bars

4.-Goin to a stripclub only time ya 'hard-on-the-block', ya careers closed like you was 'chompin-on-locks', cuz 'drinkin' the only time takuh 'poppin-sum-shots',
-Performin on the 'beach' only time takuh 'rockin-our-socks'//
Damn hella metas decent bar

5.-This fool aint 'audible' like 'lightning-beams', got this fool 'barkin' like dogs as if he was 'strikin-trees', like his crew he's a Kondom Man waitin to 'dickride-the-teams',
-This fools blowin off steam, cuz his only "lines" the 'internet', cuz we wouldnt hear good "lines" if you was playin a 'musical instrument'//
Avg at best nufn special I gta say

6.-Ridin in with a bulldozer only time ya 'tearin-the-stage', got takuh "airin" his punches like he was 'wearin-a-cape',
-Have this fool 'mad' like "whinin" babies like you was 'flarin-sum-grapes'//
Good closer definitely solid


Da-Tite-iLL-TakUh's Verse:


You Can't Rap, |Please Understand It|, iLL Take Out The Blade In The Streets And Make You |Bleed On The Granite,| C Packin Heat? Pfft, Only Time You See SSLP Is A List Of The Wackest |Emcees On The Planet!|..
Hot opener dno whos I like better

Its A known fact that your "plane punches" Wont "land on me", as im in an airport terminal
SSL? Please imma "piss all over you",...cuz iLL will always "stay above P" like im standing at the urnial
Aight bar nufn special tho

iLL put 'Scared voices in ya mind' & fill ya head-wit-screams..Put 'holloween internet address in ya thoughts', cuz im linking fear-in-ur-dreams..run kid, the-45-gleams..& Truly your 'offensive lines are weak' like shitty-sports-teams..
Lovin the "offensive line" part good bar

This Battle? Abort It and like Quadruplets WardRobes 4-Fit/Forfit Then Ya gettin Punched when you did and you Know/No This
This Kid Get Rushed and Proved Newbish Against me cuz his skill level isn't much like what thieves Get from the Homeless..
Haha good one

LP Best? Nah Like my Uncles Inlaws Not Hardly-Cuz Punch Come to Ya Mouth like thats where the Party-Was This Boy Gay & Gettin Wrecked so like X Rated Toy Play I Leave Him Fucking Achein/A Ken More than Barby-Does...
Cool shit

Like Ballerinas Doin Construction, iLL Know How Ta Flip A Brick
Drowning Niggas Wit My Flow, Yall Get My Drift?
N My Presence Is Always Felt, Like Tossin Christmas Gifts
Wow thats really original

Stepping To Me It'll Be A Lesson... Because I'm Known to 'Waste Your Muscles' Until Pain & Leprosy Is Present! Yes!, Treachery's My Profession, So Don't 'Get Me Wrong' When I Kill You Then 'Question The Motives' Like 'Angry Jeopardy Contestants!'
Hottest bar of the damn battle lol

Tite took this GOOD BATTLE

[Da-Tite-iLL-TakUh]

thats 3-0 good battle sslp

[slimshadyLP]

damn i keep gettin close battles with ya.....ill beat ya one day ;)

nice battle...........

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

Slim

1.-Im killin this 'trash' like i was 'soapin-diseased-rhymes', hav ya hit "rock-bottom" like you was 'coalin-beneath-mines',
-"Washed up" lyrics like you was 'holdin-the-seas-tides', cuz 'parkin cars' the only time ya 'rollin-between-lines'//
nice opener


2.-Ya cheap like bargains, ya whackness is 'buggin-like-gardens', cuz i got this fool in 'fuzzy' situations like he was 'rubbin-with-carpets',
-My lyrics is sharpened, cuz like germs your talents somethin we cant spot, this fool drops so much 'shit' cuz his 'asscracks' the only "line" that he's got//
lol nice

3.-Ya like 'computers' cuz ya 'rappin-just-crashed', the only thing you be "hittin's" when ya 'tappin-sum-ass',
-Ya whack lyrics 'reflect' ya even if ya was 'smashin-through-glass', cuz like gangsta movies this fools only 'actin-he's-bad//
nah wasnt feelin dis

4.-Goin to a stripclub only time ya 'hard-on-the-block', ya careers closed like you was 'chompin-on-locks', cuz 'drinkin' the only time takuh 'poppin-sum-shots',
-Performin on the 'beach' only time takuh 'rockin-our-socks'//
nice multis.....

5.-This fool aint 'audible' like 'lightning-beams', got this fool 'barkin' like dogs as if he was 'strikin-trees', like his crew he's a Kondom Man waitin to 'dickride-the-teams',
-This fools blowin off steam, cuz his only "lines" the 'internet', cuz we wouldnt hear good "lines" if you was playin a 'musical instrument'//
wasnt feelin dis

6.-Ridin in with a bulldozer only time ya 'tearin-the-stage', got takuh "airin" his punches like he was 'wearin-a-cape',
-Have this fool 'mad' like "whinin" babies like you was 'flarin-sum-grapes'//
ok closer

Da-Tite


You Can't Rap, |Please Understand It|, iLL Take Out The Blade In The Streets And Make You |Bleed On The Granite,| C Packin Heat? Pfft, Only Time You See SSLP Is A List Of The Wackest |Emcees On The Planet!|..
nice opener..lol

Its A known fact that your "plane punches" Wont "land on me", as im in an airport terminal
SSL? Please imma "piss all over you",...cuz iLL will always "stay above P" like im standing at the urnial
nice

iLL put 'Scared voices in ya mind' & fill ya head-wit-screams..Put 'holloween internet address in ya thoughts', cuz im linking fear-in-ur-dreams..run kid, the-45-gleams..& Truly your 'offensive lines are weak' like shitty-sports-teams..
lol hot

This Battle? Abort It and like Quadruplets WardRobes 4-Fit/Forfit Then Ya gettin Punched when you did and you Know/No This
This Kid Get Rushed and Proved Newbish Against me cuz his skill level isn't much like what thieves Get from the Homeless..
ok


LP Best? Nah Like my Uncles Inlaws Not Hardly-Cuz Punch Come to Ya Mouth like thats where the Party-Was This Boy Gay & Gettin Wrecked so like X Rated Toy Play I Leave Him Fucking Achein/A Ken More than Barby-Does...
lol nice

Like Ballerinas Doin Construction, iLL Know How Ta Flip A Brick
Drowning Niggas Wit My Flow, Yall Get My Drift?
N My Presence Is Always Felt, Like Tossin Christmas Gifts
ehhhhh

Stepping To Me It'll Be A Lesson... Because I'm Known to 'Waste Your Muscles' Until Pain & Leprosy Is Present! Yes!, Treachery's My Profession, So Don't 'Get Me Wrong' When I Kill You Then 'Question The Motives' Like 'Angry Jeopardy Contestants!'
oh shit son!!!!...HOT!!!


Tite took dis battle

[a.i.d.s.]

4:0 da tite