BL Day 3: chappy vs souljat (3:0)

[a.i.d.s.]

rules:

4 - 8 bars
deadline friday
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

votes:

bar by bar votes or category with explaination
only people who are signed in the BL are allowed to vote



don't forget your links

[souljat]

checkin in, good luck bra

[chappy]

I'ma drop tomorrow...

[chappy]

Dawg your wack, comin with those multies it's like you TRY'NA-BE-ME-SON,
You facin defeat, you defenseless, so you best go an FIND-YA-BB-GUN.

Your duckin from me, prolly 'cause you know for you THIS-SHIT'S-DIRE,
But like the warplane I flow fast and spit 'heat' so you can't MISS-SPIT-FIRE.

You've been SET-DOWNHILL, goin nowhere 'cause I don't LET-CLOWNS-KILL,
Dream on bitch you weak, could win King of the Board still wouldn't GET-'CROWNED'-ILL.

Jus a 'TOY'-SOLDIER, he ain't shit without someone behind him to WIND-HIM-UP,
Bitch your JOY'S-OVER, 'cause like an alarm ringin your TIME-IS-UP!



Droppin 'cause I haven't wrote shit in ages...but ain't wastin loads on a no-show, jus want the three points, I'll get the links now.

Explanations:
BAR 1 - Tries to use multies, but they're forced and wack, he posted a picture of himself holding a BB gun, try'na look hood.
BAR 2 - Wordplay on 2nd line, I'm sure you get it, heat = fire.
BAR 3 - 2nd line, EZ kings get crowned, more wordplay.
BAR 4 - More play on the fact about the BB gun, it's a toy, so toy soldier, 2nd line, EZ when an alarm rings your tme is up.

[chappy]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=195487#post195487

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=195500#post195500

[a.i.d.s.]

3:0 chappy