BL Day 3: 4 Play vs Rico (0:2)

[a.i.d.s.]

rules:

4 - 8 bars
deadline friday
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

votes:

bar by bar votes or category with explaination
only people who are signed in the BL are allowed to vote



don't forget your links

[4PLAY]

I welcome u to ma hood /cus i always get the guest lost/
Chockin on my wood/ like u sniffin aspesdos//
Act ghetto / but if you left your estate you'd get lost/
Faggot / the first bar of my shit is hotter than your best of//
Time to start the test off / Your skillz is transparent/
I'm causing you major offence /u aint even bein bad mannered//
I hit you wit your mic until / youexcreting ya own claret/
U wanna move outta the bronx so u can have a gay marriage//
I could rip you badly with your own played out passage/
While you quoting my shit only causing yourself damage//
And i got better than when you wupped me before /
Fucking whore / i dont dickride my voters to get guffores//
I was gunna say fuck the deadline /put down my pen and ignore you/
But i didn't get the pm /askin for me to write the diss for you //
So i live this played out gay / sprayed in his own dismay/
As the bass from this track's wax make his braincells decay //


sorry i didn't hit the deadline but fuck its here now

ur go rico good luck bro

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

sorry i aint hit da deadline but my pc been acting up

quick key....

you a CLEVER-ONE, u must dont kno, i'm "ALI" 'da greatest' EVER-SON//
your like "street sign's" cause u getttin 'turned on" by EVERYONE//
leave u like a "DIKE IN A RAGE" when I strap ur "MIC WITH GRENADES"//
so u can see what it feels like to " 'LIGHT UP' DA STAGE"//
you only "punch keys" while i "HACK COMPUTERS" I'll leave your face with "SCABS AND SUTURES"//
and blast your ass into da "past" because your "persence" "HAS NO 'FUTURE' "//
4play let me tell u da turth.... u aint HURTIN-SHIT, but i understand all of YOUR HATRED//
accordin to your lyrics.. you aint "dropping shit" worth reading...like "CONSTIPATION"//

ima get my links soon

[CapZ]

4PLAY'S VERSE:


I welcome u to ma hood /cus i always get the guest lost/
Chockin on my wood/ like u sniffin aspesdos//
`` ehhh``

Act ghetto / but if you left your estate you'd get lost/
Faggot / the first bar of my shit is hotter than your best of//
`` so-so``

Time to start the test off / Your skillz is transparent/
I'm causing you major offence /u aint even bein bad mannered//
``lackin...``

I hit you wit your mic until / youexcreting ya own claret/
U wanna move outta the bronx so u can have a gay marriage//
`` ok``

I could rip you badly with your own played out passage/
While you quoting my shit only causing yourself damage//
`` ehhh``

And i got better than when you wupped me before /
Fucking whore / i dont dickride my voters to get guffores//
`` suck``

I was gunna say fuck the deadline /put down my pen and ignore you/
But i didn't get the pm /askin for me to write the diss for you //
`` :confused: ``

So i live this played out gay / sprayed in his own dismay/
As the bass from this track's wax make his braincells decay //
`` 0.6 closer``

RICO'S VERSE:

you a CLEVER-ONE, u must dont kno, i'm "ALI" 'da greatest' EVER-SON//
your like "street sign's" cause u getttin 'turned on" by EVERYONE//
``IGHT good 3/5 opener``

leave u like a "DIKE IN A RAGE" when I strap ur "MIC WITH GRENADES"//
so u can see what it feels like to " 'LIGHT UP' DA STAGE"//
`` so-so not bad``

you only "punch keys" while i "HACK COMPUTERS" I'll leave your face with "SCABS AND SUTURES"//
and blast your ass into da "past" because your "persence" "HAS NO 'FUTURE' "//
`` :D nice``

4play let me tell u da turth.... u aint HURTIN-SHIT, but i understand all of YOUR HATRED//
accordin to your lyrics.. you aint "dropping shit" worth reading...like "CONSTIPATION"//
`` Over... 4/5 closer ok``

PUNCHES- RICO
PERSONALS- RICO
MULTIES- TIE
METAS- TIE
FLOW/STRUCTURE- 4
VOCAB- TIE
CREATIVE- RICO
INTRO/OUTRO- RICO

OVERALL- RICO.. EZ 4PLAY.. ya verse was more like a freestyle fo ya self no good punches and NO PERSONALS.. Even tho rico had less bars it was still good enough

`1`

[slimshadyLP]

4PLAY:

I welcome u to ma hood /cus i always get the guest lost/
Chockin on my wood/ like u sniffin aspesdos//
weak opener....bad meta.....

Act ghetto / but if you left your estate you'd get lost/
Faggot / the first bar of my shit is hotter than your best of//
weak again..bad punch...pretty simple

Time to start the test off / Your skillz is transparent/
I'm causing you major offence /u aint even bein bad mannered//
weak again.....

I hit you wit your mic until / youexcreting ya own claret/
U wanna move outta the bronx so u can have a gay marriage//
weak punch....

I could rip you badly with your own played out passage/
While you quoting my shit only causing yourself damage//
?? didnt like this

And i got better than when you wupped me before /
Fucking whore / i dont dickride my voters to get guffores//
weak as hell........

I was gunna say fuck the deadline /put down my pen and ignore you/
But i didn't get the pm /askin for me to write the diss for you //
didint ge tthis one.....

So i live this played out gay / sprayed in his own dismay/
As the bass from this track's wax make his braincells decay //
no realk punch just multies.....bad ender

RICO:

you a CLEVER-ONE, u must dont kno, i'm "ALI" 'da greatest' EVER-SON//
your like "street sign's" cause u getttin 'turned on" by EVERYONE//
first line was meh...second was ok...ok opner

leave u like a "DIKE IN A RAGE" when I strap ur "MIC WITH GRENADES"//
so u can see what it feels like to " 'LIGHT UP' DA STAGE"//
cool........

you only "punch keys" while i "HACK COMPUTERS" I'll leave your face with "SCABS AND SUTURES"//
and blast your ass into da "past" because your "persence" "HAS NO 'FUTURE' "//
damn...liked this one.....

4play let me tell u da turth.... u aint HURTIN-SHIT, but i understand all of YOUR HATRED//
accordin to your lyrics.. you aint "dropping shit" worth reading...like "CONSTIPATION"//
meh...played line..just below average ender.....

Rico took this......

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=201729&posted=1#post201729

ima get my other one

[a.i.d.s.]

2:0 Rico