BL Day 2: Masen vs Souljat (2:0)

[a.i.d.s.]

rules:

4 - 8 bars
deadline friday
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

votes:

bar by bar votes only
only people who are signed in the BL are allowed two vote



don't forget your links (to battles in the BL), you can post them afterwards this time, if you don't till friday : DQ!


Good Luck:


to say it like a cowboy: DRAW

[souljat]

checkin in

[souljat]

you wanna match my skill but cant handle my lyrical~shots/
my raps are ill,put ya to the grave early like i owned the spiritual~clock//1

your mother should have deserted you at birth, of course you was a mistake/
and father wasnt there.so you were cursed with techniques of faggot~ ways//2

I've read your battles man, theres no punches, it's~all~simple~flex/
punch gaps in your scripts, leave it so holy you'd think it was biblical~text//3

I can hardly read your penmanship, you usin a scribble~effect/
put your adams apple to your chin the way I'm flippin~your~neck//4

you think you spit fire? you ain't shit kid I breath incineration/
I'm about to label you WHACK! like MC amputation//5

you're a new kid on the block, why you think~ya~the~best?/
you're like an anerexic body builder the way you attemptin~to~flex//6

you comin in second cuz I'm mic~checkin~the~best/
you can keep your fan fare cuz I'm affectin~the~rest//7

I've watched you lose 3 times now let me re~enact~your~scars/
you can call me jailbreaker the way I bent~and~snapped~ya~bars//8

EAZZZZZY - I haven't battled in bout week n half so im a lil rusty but iz all good


"1" ill get ma links soon

[souljat]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=14927

[souljat]

i don't think masen is dropping

[Lady_Sway]

Soz for the freepost but Masen isnt active due to colledge etc ...

[souljat]

hmm D.Q i guess?

[Ma$eN]

soz guys and sway :D like i sed in my last battle my internet is completly fucked so i can't be active till i got it sorted, i'm round dannys again TRYIN to write a verse lol. i think i might have to pull out of the league if i can't get my internet sorted coz half my bars are gonna be shite keystyles.

i'll post shortly shouldn't be long

[Ma$eN]

i spit fire? :confused: wtf lol i'm a dragon now :rolleyes:
i've only had 2 loses not 3 well not yet anyways lol i'm not as crap as most people think well i hope not lol :)
right here goes

i'll try to get on 2morrow to get a link

i'm about to discard~your~career as soon as the scorecard~makes~it~clear
theres nothing left for you to give so just carry on being the retard~of~the~year

Your shit still wouldn't be read first even if you did your whole verse in~a~bracket
fuck online battlin kid you~have~had~it, your tryin to be bad but ya~can't~hack~it

you just couldn't hack losin~before wanted a rematch coz i was just blazin~galore
now you have got your shot i'ma show why i'm better as you recieve a rising~outscore

you think that~you're~black and gangster but you ain't from the ghetto or an emcee
and you aint hard thats~a~fact, you just invading black culture like some stupid nazi

i'm pissed by the things that he says thats why i frame up just to~picture~him~lose
thinks hes the greatest emcee yet hes still a newbie whos too~big~for~his~shoes

Silly wigga with his bb gun biggin~himself up claimin thats hes murdered~eleven
better trade-in~yourself because i'll leave you overpowered and beggin~for~heaven

stop the whining its not my fault that ya can't hold down that bulging~erection
just tell Falix you wanna stop the dickridin and he'll stop thrusting~ya~rectum

Expos
Bar1- his sig used to say hes retard of the year
Bar2- self explanatory
Bar3- i beat him first time and he sed he wanted another battle, saying my score(votes) will he rising higher than his
Bar4- he acts like hes black and gangster but hes not
Bar5- self explanatory
Bar6- posted a pic with him holdin a gun looked every1 was sayin its a bb gun and he previously sed he was involved in 11 murders
Bar7- hes gd mates with falix just worked with that abit

[Red Devyl]

SOUL JA T
you wanna match my skill but cant handle my lyrical~shots/
my raps are ill,put ya to the grave early like i owned the spiritual~clock//1
lolz nice opener nice multi n i can call it a meta as well

your mother should have deserted you at birth, of course you was a mistake/
and father wasnt there.so you were cursed with techniques of faggot~ ways//2
compared to the nice opener this is avg, n i seriously didnt liek the multi is wayyyyyyy too forced

I've read your battles man, theres no punches, it's~all~simple~flex/
punch gaps in your scripts, leave it so holy you'd think it was biblical~text//3
LMAO niceeeeeeeee punch cudnt have it any betta

I can hardly read your penmanship, you usin a scribble~effect/
put your adams apple to your chin the way I'm flippin~your~neck//4
...........normal diss.......normal punch not a gud rhymin tho

you think you spit fire? you ain't shit kid I breath incineration/
I'm about to label you WHACK! like MC amputation//5
:( let me look those words up lolz kiddin but nice vocab....not that hard punch tho

you're a new kid on the block, why you think~ya~the~best?/
you're like an anerexic body builder the way you attemptin~to~flex//6
lolz nice diss n nice multi but u gotta work on rhymin

you comin in second cuz I'm mic~checkin~the~best/
you can keep your fan fare cuz I'm affectin~the~rest//7
liekin the multis but u got no punch in diz

I've watched you lose 3 times now let me re~enact~your~scars/
you can call me jailbreaker the way I bent~and~snapped~ya~bars//8
nice closer

Ma$en

i'm about to discard~your~career as soon as the scorecard~makes~it~clear
theres nothing left for you to give so just carry on being the retard~of~the~year
LMAO NICEEEEEEe multis n nice personal n nice opener

Your shit still wouldn't be read first even if you did your whole verse in~a~bracket
fuck online battlin kid you~have~had~it, your tryin to be bad but ya~can't~hack~it
avg bar nice multi weak punch but a punch

you just couldn't hack losin~before wanted a rematch coz i was just blazin~galore
now you have got your shot i'ma show why i'm better as you recieve a rising~outscore
so-so bar

you think that~you're~black and gangster but you ain't from the ghetto or an emcee
and you aint hard thats~a~fact, you just invading black culture like some stupid nazi
no..............jus nooooooo

i'm pissed by the things that he says thats why i frame up just to~picture~him~lose
thinks hes the greatest emcee yet hes still a newbie whos too~big~for~his~shoes
NICe punch n multi

Silly wigga with his bb gun biggin~himself up claimin thats hes murdered~eleven
better trade-in~yourself because i'll leave you overpowered and beggin~for~heaven
ncie multi diss n personal

stop the whining its not my fault that ya can't hold down that bulging~erection
just tell Falix you wanna stop the dickridin and he'll stop thrusting~ya~rectum
in evry of either of those 2 battle sum one gotta tlk abt the otha one lolz nice personal n closer n multi

Catz:
Opner/Closer: TIe
VOcab:............Soul ja but close
Personal:Masen
Punches: masen...........but real close
Metaz: Soul Ja
Multis: Tie
Wordplay: Masen
Enjoyable: TIE(BIG propz to u 2.......cracked the crack outta me)
Overall: Masen

masne u had nice rhymes nice multis avg vocab n nice personals n punches

soulja u jus gotta betta ur multis............n this wasnt that u were bad it was jus masen turned out to be betta but i realli lieked ur verse

[souljat]

iight uppin from respected texts plz

[GaTmAn]

SOUL JA T
you wanna match my skill but cant handle my lyrical~shots/
my raps are ill,put ya to the grave early like i owned the spiritual~clock//1

meh, no diss there, multi is forced, clock/shots? ok bar

your mother should have deserted you at birth, of course you was a mistake/
and father wasnt there.so you were cursed with techniques of faggot~ ways//2

i liked this, the rhyme aint the best but the bar n punches were hot, nice idea

I've read your battles man, theres no punches, it's~all~simple~flex/
punch gaps in your scripts, leave it so holy you'd think it was biblical~text//3

lmao, if the multis werent forced, this bar was HOTT, im lovin ur ideas,

I can hardly read your penmanship, you usin a scribble~effect/
put your adams apple to your chin the way I'm flippin~your~neck//4

FORCED, FOR FUCKS SAKE, scribble/flippin, your?, damn, no diss, no personal

you think you spit fire? you ain't shit kid I breath incineration/
I'm about to label you WHACK! like MC amputation//5

this dont make sense, meh bar

you're a new kid on the block, why you think~ya~the~best?/
you're like an anerexic body builder the way you attemptin~to~flex//6

nice diss, not personal, n u may b foolin red with these ~, but, its not a multi, look the only thing that rhymes is best/flex n it dont rhyme perfect, they aint multis

you comin in second cuz I'm mic~checkin~the~best/
you can keep your fan fare cuz I'm affectin~the~rest//7

MEH, jst pissin me off now with wana be multis, n no personals. meh bar

I've watched you lose 3 times now let me re~enact~your~scars/
you can call me jailbreaker the way I bent~and~snapped~ya~bars//8

NOW IF THAT MULTI WAS changed slightly. this ender was HOT AS FUCK,
i reeli like it u got mint ideas, use em proper take ur time

PEACE...eleveate, still ok bar

Ma$en

i'm about to discard~your~career as soon as the scorecard~makes~it~clear
theres nothing left for you to give so just carry on being the retard~of~the~year

forced, ok opener tho,

Your shit still wouldn't be read first even if you did your whole verse in~a~bracket
fuck online battlin kid you~have~had~it, your tryin to be bad but ya~can't~hack~it

the last 2 aint as forced, they still are, but its not total, erm, flow was meh, but ok bar overall :p


you just couldn't hack losin~before wanted a rematch coz i was just blazin~galore
now you have got your shot i'ma show why i'm better as you recieve a rising~outscore

meh, id have rhymed, raisin the score, but ok, ok bar overall nowt special

you think that~you're~black and gangster but you ain't from the ghetto or an emcee
and you aint hard thats~a~fact, you just invading black culture like some stupid nazi

yeah, quite good bar, multi neerli wasnt forced lol, i liked the ideas, :)

i'm pissed by the things that he says thats why i frame up just to~picture~him~lose
thinks hes the greatest emcee yet hes still a newbie whos too~big~for~his~shoes

wait, hmm, is that a multi, (pic-tore, big-for), neerli i liked this bar, yeah it was cool

Silly wigga with his bb gun biggin~himself up claimin thats hes murdered~eleven
better trade-in~yourself because i'll leave you overpowered and beggin~for~heaven

lol
nice bar

stop the whining its not my fault that ya can't hold down that bulging~erection
just tell Falix you wanna stop the dickridin and he'll stop thrusting~ya~rectum

lmao, nice diss, falix brought into it again lol, bet he cnt wait to battle u


right erm,

punches-murda mase
multis-NONE
flow-souljat
metas-souljat
opener-masen
closer-tie
enjoyable-tie

overall: erm, ima giv this toooooooooooo its dead close but, masen, coz he was more personal, :cool:

btw i kno my votes were a bit grim but i jst got up, peace anyways, keep elevating, N VOTE ON MINE N CAPZ BATTLE BITCHES :eek: :p

[Falix]

im not gonna vote, cuz it will prob be called dick ride, but i honestly think Soulja T deserves the win. whethere i knew him or not. I thot his was better. better punches... Beter vocab. and multies werent AS forced as red devil says...Personal level... you cant be that personal on online battling so thats not all that important, but thats the one good category that masen beats soulja in... but overall soulja's verse was better...

[a.i.d.s.]

2:0 masen