BL Day 2: Capz vs Gatman (3:0)

[a.i.d.s.]

rules:

4 - 8 bars
deadline friday
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

votes:

bar by bar votes only
only people who are signed in the BL are allowed two vote



don't forget your links (to battles in the BL), you can post them afterwards this time, if you don't till friday : DQ!


Good Luck:


to say it like a cowboy: DRAW

[GaTmAn]

checkin in

[CapZ]

check's as well :cool:


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[GaTmAn]

We all know why this bitch got “Layzie” under his verses,
coz his “punches” are all LAME-UNEVEN-N-FLOPPING
i told you, you'll get beat.... its a SHAME-YO-EVEN-DROPPING!/

you damn well better be "high", coz your verse against CHAPPY-WAS-LOW/
it was so ugly it got sympathy, like HAPPY-N-SLOW crippled kids at beauty shows/

My heart is pounding, my flow is "popping". its OVER-PACED,
n jst coz yours is "out of breath" I aint “running a SLOWER-RACE,
jst watch me when its over, CAPZ'll look like LOWER-CASE



1.got layzie from bone thugz in his sig,
rest is jst punches

2.i sed he better be high if he want to beat me in the drug thread,
chappy bit, i reckon chappys verse beat him, jst he got like KO or sumthing
sympathy votes

3jst wordplay n metas, n a punch n 3multis

[GaTmAn]

:p uppin ur reply

[CapZ]

lol^ :p


My links>
i cant get da links cuz my comp's messed up but i have voted so look at these>>>
Soulja T vs. D-ManD <showthread.php?t=14740>
slimshadyLP vs. Reddevil (4-0 KO) <showthread.php?t=15030>





good verse,, but let me show ya

``It's Ez``

C'mon Who's Dis Fag Stepin? What's Really Sad Ya Lil "Prophets" Is Only 'U' That's Not Repin!/
Like Bein "Siliver" Ya Always Second! & Ya Cant 'Shoot' Even If Ya Named After A Weapon!-1
``

Ur Weak-Trick, & Ya Verse Way To Sloopy I Feel Bad Fo Da Voters When They Read-It!/
U Rap? Leave-It! Like When U Use To 'Smoke' I'll Make Ya "Quit" When Da Weed-Hits!/-2
``

CapZ Gonna Stop-Ya-Set, And Your Like "A Bitch On Her Fuckin Period" I Got-Ya-Wet!/
So Where's Da 'Gat's Man? Cuz Fo Real Only Thing U Gonna Be Sprayin Is Aqua-Net!/-3


I'll Murk-Ya-Quick-Bitch! & Change Ya 'Color' Like Ya 2 "A's" So Change Your-Name!/
Shit Havent U Hurd-Da-Sickness, I Went To "Personal" And Raped Ya Girl LAUREN!/-4


Expo's
1- His Crew, it's only him,lol.. Creative "Shoot" cuz his name Gat ya,, Weapon ya know
2- His profile said he Quit smokin weed...
3- Nameplay Gatman,,, Aqua Net is Hair Spray...lol so yea "Sprayin'' ya know..
4- Damn... ight his Sig GATMAN Both da A's Are Colored.. so yeah.. Wow yea i went there Lauren is his girl [profile]

So mostly i had Punches, personals, multies, lot's of meta's, nameplay, creative shit ya know...

VOTE UP!!

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[GaTmAn]

alrighty vesre .......ma

jokes, upppin votes ppplz

god im drukknk

[CapZ]

ur buzzed too ;) uppin


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[GaTmAn]

upping vootes,

[chappy]

GATMAN:

We all know why this bitch got “Layzie” under his verses,
coz his “punches” are all LAME-UNEVEN-N-FLOPPING
i told you, you'll get beat.... its a SHAME-YO-EVEN-DROPPING!/

^^OK

you damn well better be "high", coz your verse against CHAPPY-WAS-LOW/
it was so ugly it got sympathy, like HAPPY-N-SLOW crippled kids at beauty shows/

LOL, decent

My heart is pounding, my flow is "popping". its OVER-PACED,
n jst coz yours is "out of breath" I aint “running a SLOWER-RACE,
jst watch me when its over, CAPZ'll look like LOWER-CASE

^^The CapZ/lower case shit is played, but this bar was good anywayz.


CAPZ:

C'mon Who's Dis Fag Stepin? What's Really Sad Ya Lil "Prophets" Is Only 'U' That's Not Repin!/
Like Bein "Siliver" Ya Always Second! & Ya Cant 'Shoot' Even If Ya Named After A Weapon!-1

^^Ehh...OK

Ur Weak-Trick, & Ya Verse Way To Sloopy I Feel Bad Fo Da Voters When They Read-It!/
U Rap? Leave-It! Like When U Use To 'Smoke' I'll Make Ya "Quit" When Da Weed-Hits!/-2

^^Cool, this was better..

CapZ Gonna Stop-Ya-Set, And Your Like "A Bitch On Her Fuckin Period" I Got-Ya-Wet!/
So Where's Da 'Gat's Man? Cuz Fo Real Only Thing U Gonna Be Sprayin Is Aqua-Net!/-3

^^Hahaha, good shit bro..

I'll Murk-Ya-Quick-Bitch! & Change Ya 'Color' Like Ya 2 "A's" So Change Your-Name!/
Shit Havent U Hurd-Da-Sickness, I Went To "Personal" And Raped Ya Girl LAUREN!/-4

^^Aight


Gatman - You might have done better if you'd done some more bars. The layout of your verse was awful, harder to read and didn't flow as well, so up on that. Apart form that it's good stuff bro, keep goin.

CapZ - Seen better, but was good enough and you came with some nice shit. Again would have been had you done some more bars, but overall decent.

Vote - Close, but CapZ.

[CapZ]

ight kool, uppin fo more votes 1-0 me

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[CapZ]

Still uppin.... c'mon ya

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[Demise]

GATMAN:

We all know why this bitch got “Layzie” under his verses,
coz his “punches” are all LAME-UNEVEN-N-FLOPPING
i told you, you'll get beat.... its a SHAME-YO-EVEN-DROPPING!/
Nuthin special

you damn well better be "high", coz your verse against CHAPPY-WAS-LOW/
it was so ugly it got sympathy, like HAPPY-N-SLOW crippled kids at beauty shows/
LMFAO funny good bar

My heart is pounding, my flow is "popping". its OVER-PACED,
n jst coz yours is "out of breath" I aint “running a SLOWER-RACE,
jst watch me when its over, CAPZ'll look like LOWER-CASE
Played as fuck avg bar


CAPZ:

C'mon Who's Dis Fag Stepin? What's Really Sad Ya Lil "Prophets" Is Only 'U' That's Not Repin!/
Like Bein "Siliver" Ya Always Second! & Ya Cant 'Shoot' Even If Ya Named After A Weapon!-1
Meh

Ur Weak-Trick, & Ya Verse Way To Sloopy I Feel Bad Fo Da Voters When They Read-It!/
U Rap? Leave-It! Like When U Use To 'Smoke' I'll Make Ya "Quit" When Da Weed-Hits!/-2
Avg

CapZ Gonna Stop-Ya-Set, And Your Like "A Bitch On Her Fuckin Period" I Got-Ya-Wet!/
So Where's Da 'Gat's Man? Cuz Fo Real Only Thing U Gonna Be Sprayin Is Aqua-Net!/-3
Haha that was a good bar

I'll Murk-Ya-Quick-Bitch! & Change Ya 'Color' Like Ya 2 "A's" So Change Your-Name!/
Shit Havent U Hurd-Da-Sickness, I Went To "Personal" And Raped Ya Girl LAUREN!/-4
Weak but its better than Gat's

CapZ Gets it

[CapZ]

ight kool, 2-0 Still uppin KO VOTES UP

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[GaTmAn]

uppin votes pplz

[Demise]

Could y'all (CapZ alreday did) drop a vote in my battle gainst D-ManD

[CapZ]

Uppin Last Vote....

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[slimshadyLP]

GATMAN:

We all know why this bitch got “Layzie” under his verses,
coz his “punches” are all LAME-UNEVEN-N-FLOPPING
i told you, you'll get beat.... its a SHAME-YO-EVEN-DROPPING!/
average opener, nuttin speaical

you damn well better be "high", coz your verse against CHAPPY-WAS-LOW/
it was so ugly it got sympathy, like HAPPY-N-SLOW crippled kids at beauty shows/
pretty good bar.....

My heart is pounding, my flow is "popping". its OVER-PACED,
n jst coz yours is "out of breath" I aint “running a SLOWER-RACE,
jst watch me when its over, CAPZ'll look like LOWER-CASE
first 2 lines was cool but the ender kinda killed it cuz its played..

CAPZ:

C'mon Who's Dis Fag Stepin? What's Really Sad Ya Lil "Prophets" Is Only 'U' That's Not Repin!/
Like Bein "Siliver" Ya Always Second! & Ya Cant 'Shoot' Even If Ya Named After A Weapon!-1
ok opener...

Ur Weak-Trick, & Ya Verse Way To Sloopy I Feel Bad Fo Da Voters When They Read-It!/
U Rap? Leave-It! Like When U Use To 'Smoke' I'll Make Ya "Quit" When Da Weed-Hits!/-2
likin this one...

CapZ Gonna Stop-Ya-Set, And Your Like "A Bitch On Her Fuckin Period" I Got-Ya-Wet!/
So Where's Da 'Gat's Man? Cuz Fo Real Only Thing U Gonna Be Sprayin Is Aqua-Net!/-3
first part was kinda of played, seocnd line was cool..

I'll Murk-Ya-Quick-Bitch! & Change Ya 'Color' Like Ya 2 "A's" So Change Your-Name!/
Shit Havent U Hurd-Da-Sickness, I Went To "Personal" And Raped Ya Girl LAUREN!/-4
second part wasnt so speacial first was cool...


Consistency/Structure: tie
Creativity: tie
Enjoyable: tie
Flow: G
Metaphors: tie
Multies: C
Personal: tie
Punches: C
Vocabulary: none
Wordplay: C
Overall: Capz won.....

[CapZ]

ight kool thankz fo da votes ya... 3-0 ko,,, propz mannn

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[a.i.d.s.]

3:0 Capz