BL Day 2: Demise vs D-ManD (2:0)

[a.i.d.s.]

rules:

4 - 8 bars
deadline friday
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

votes:

bar by bar votes only
only people who are signed in the BL are allowed two vote



don't forget your links (to battles in the BL), you can post them afterwards this time, if you don't till friday : DQ!


Good Luck:


to say it like a cowboy: DRAW

[Demise]

Checkin in... Im set and ready for the 4th consecutive win... AIDS why do this to him?

[D-ManD]

Naw fuck dat..Thats what schoolis for..I can still drop don't try to back out of it

[D-ManD]

Demise 4th time,still haven't shined/
Like your luck wit women,coment declined//
I'm an underdawg,You tha runt of tha litter/
Your hated by your family,just good as a baby sitter//
You just a baby,finally turnin 1-6/
But you might not live,messin wit my click//
Your red flags a lie just like your life/
Take that thro Garfiled get killed by tha knife//
Man this battles over go call your mom and cry on tha phone/
Or better yet wait a couple months and drive your aveo home//

[Demise]

Oh shit sry Im late but I got held u last night but I'll key my shit if you wna count it anyway.

Yous a color blind gangsta and you dont talk shit up close/
And I dont suggest startin wit me cuz I love to Kut~Throat//

And you got no proof of thuggin never heard the K drummin/
And my verses like a right hook you never see it comin//

Man you seem kinda stressed ya dad didnt hit it right/
Throw ya rhyme book in the dryer then maybe you'd spit it tight//

Cuz ya verses is shit man you attracted rats and the roaches/
And you movin clear away from where they clappin the toastas//

Man this shit is over you lost man give up you got done in/
I just did you like I did ya sis I blew off ya front end//

Explanations

Bar 1.1- self explanitory
Bar 1.2- In one pic he wore blue and he flags blood and Kut~Throat tore him apart

Bar 2.1- self explanitory
Bar 2.2- Hes blind in left eye. Incase you're wondering his left eye would account for my right side so he wouldnt see a right hook

Bar 3.1- Got into a fist fight wit his dad "hittin" yea you get it
Bar 3.2- You dont get this you dumb as hell

Bar 4.1- Had a mouse issue in his house
Bar 4.2- Is movin to a whiter area where no crimes happen

Bar 5.1- Obvious
Bar 5.2- Sister got pounded by some guy... Im sayin it was me

[CapZ]

D-Mand's Verse:


Demise 4th time,still haven't shined/
Like your luck wit women,coment declined//
`` weak opener could've been betta on ya 2nd line 1/5``

I'm an underdawg,You tha runt of tha litter/
Your hated by your family,just good as a baby sitter//
``ehhh``

You just a baby,finally turnin 1-6/
But you might not live,messin wit my click//
``wack``

Your red flags a lie just like your life/
Take that thro Garfiled get killed by tha knife//
`` man c'mon weak``

Man this battles over go call your mom and cry on tha phone/
Or better yet wait a couple months and drive your aveo home//
``wack ender 0/5``

Demise's Verse:

Yous a color blind gangsta and you dont talk shit up close/
And I dont suggest startin wit me cuz I love to Kut~Throat//
``ok betta then D-mand's opener 2/5``

And you got no proof of thuggin never heard the K drummin/
And my verses like a right hook you never see it comin//
`` so-so``

Man you seem kinda stressed ya dad didnt hit it right/
Throw ya rhyme book in the dryer then maybe you'd spit it tight//
`` ok avg. bar``

Cuz ya verses is shit man you attracted rats and the roaches/
And you movin clear away from where they clappin the toastas//
``2nd could've been betta aswell but i saw what u was tryin to do``

Man this shit is over you lost man give up you got done in/
I just did you like I did ya sis I blew off ya front end//
`` ok-ok betta then D-mand's ender 2/5``


PUNCHES- DEMISE
PERSONALS- DEMISE
MULTIES- Demise
Flow-Demise
Structure- TIE
CREATIVE- TIE
META'S- DEMISE
ENJOYED- DEMISE

OVERALL- DEMISE EZ. Demise i seen betta from u, but i know u didnt bother seenin D-mand ya verse was just not Hard enough, Elevate D-mand...

`1`

[Demise]

thnx CapZ... yea that shit wa weak I jst had to key sumtn b4 I got DQ'd lol :D thnx fo the vote 1-0 me UPPIN

[Demise]

Link 1: http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=189202#post189202
Link 2: http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=15142

[Demise]

Yo uppin dis shit man

[Falix]

Demise 4th time,still haven't shined/
Like your luck wit women,coment declined//
^^ok...avg diss

I'm an underdawg,You tha runt of tha litter/
Your hated by your family,just good as a baby sitter//
^^...ok

You just a baby,finally turnin 1-6/
But you might not live,messin wit my click//
^^weak

Your red flags a lie just like your life/
Take that thro Garfiled get killed by tha knife//
^^weak

Man this battles over go call your mom and cry on tha phone/
Or better yet wait a couple months and drive your aveo home//
^^weak...




Yous a color blind gangsta and you dont talk shit up close/
And I dont suggest startin wit me cuz I love to Kut~Throat//
^^nice diss...if u were battlin kut throat

And you got no proof of thuggin never heard the K drummin/
And my verses like a right hook you never see it comin//
^^liked the second line

Man you seem kinda stressed ya dad didnt hit it right/
Throw ya rhyme book in the dryer then maybe you'd spit it tight//
^^...meh, bit weak

Cuz ya verses is shit man you attracted rats and the roaches/
And you movin clear away from where they clappin the toastas//
^^...come on demise

Man this shit is over you lost man give up you got done in/
I just did you like I did ya sis I blew off ya front end//
^^...ok

pretty weak battle but DEMISE comes out on top

[Demise]

I know this shit was weak it was key'd and that aint wat I do so aight 2-0 me

[Falix]

i always key.... it's more fun that way

[Im_The_Real_Slim]

bullshit do u key^^^

Demise shud b disqualified anyway come on AIDS give DManD the win

[a.i.d.s.]

@The Real Slim Shady

i'm givin you the beating of your life, if you dont stop to fuck up the battles.

2:0 Demise

demise: +3
d-mand: -3