BL Day 2: Chess Intelligence vs Dash (0:3)

[a.i.d.s.]

hmm, that'll be good :)

rules:

4 - 8 bars
deadline friday
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

votes:

bar by bar votes only
only people who are signed in the BL are allowed two vote



don't forget your links (to battles in the BL), you can post them afterwards this time, if you don't till friday : DQ!


Good Luck:


to say it like a cowboy: DRAW

[Dash]

ight checking in

[Dash]

[Bar 1]
this WACK-KID pfft i`m BUSTIN-THIS-ELF leave ya HIT-WITH-SORES-YOU-ORPEHENED-ASS!
tha FACT-IS hes in *LOVE-WITH-HIMSELF* like having *INTERCOURSE-WITH-AUTOGRAPHS!!!*

[Bar 2]
MERK-THIS-MAGGOT you`l FRY-WITHOUT-RAP my VENGENCE-BURNS-HIS-HEAD-STILL
Its CERTAIN-FAGGOT your *DYING-OUT-FAST* Like *PENSIONERS-ON-TREADMILLS!!!*

[Bar 3]
I`l MERK-YOUR-WET-DRIBBLE-YA-WACK-CAT fag ya SCRIPTURES-NEED-REPAIRS!!
Ya VERSE`L-GET-SNIGERED-AND-LAFFD-AT like retards playing TWISTA-IN-WHEELCHAIRS

[Bar 4]
|| Sayin u bring heat, wel bitch-ya-wrong,-the-facts-is-straight get hit-wit-bombs-your-back-wil-break!
this spit with rip that 'Orahcastrated' leaves ya 'More Frustrated' Than kids-who-cant-masterbate!! ||

[Bar 5]
|| u *lose breathe* as i giv ya-throat-a-strong-grapple u more *dramatic* than a-soap-thats-on-channels!my 'sound is verbal' look at ya lyrics.. ur head must go *round in circles* like u was afloat-with-one-paddel! ||

[Chess_Intellijenc]

expos

bar5- flipped


i' SMASHING-DASH, like mongomery beating records, he aint quick to be MATCHING-THAT
dash's worthless so it's like i'm TRASHING-TRASH leave him *gasping for air* like hes CATCHING-FAT

he thinks he can be TYPING-FAST but no! he's as *slow* as begginers LEARNING-TO-TYPE
dash's a rook, im just FLYING-PAST, text is his live so when i beat him he'll be BURNING-WITH-HYPE

stop decorating your verse! it's looking worser than FAT-KIDS, you know you SHIT-KID
desinging bars, with some WACK-SHIT that just chat shit, i'll leave you getting jealous over my SCRIPTS-SNITCH

my SMOKE-IS-LEFT-TO-BE-SEEN, dash's BROKE-IN-THEFT-LIKE-DUMB-TEENS
so hows he gonna be *stealing my scripts*, *biting them*? cuz dash's STROKE-ON-DEBT-HAS-BEEN-MEAN

*matches are over* when *fat lady sings*, well she SANG-AFTER-MY-FIRST-BAR
so me loosing my breath is wrong cuz dash's HANGED,-LAUGHED-AND-CURSED-WITH-SCARS

[Dash]

upping

[Bakkie]

Dash

this WACK-KID pfft i`m BUSTIN-THIS-ELF leave ya HIT-WITH-SORES-YOU-ORPEHENED-ASS!
tha FACT-IS hes in *LOVE-WITH-HIMSELF* like having *INTERCOURSE-WITH-AUTOGRAPHS!!!*
[B]lol nice opener great multi and nice diss

MERK-THIS-MAGGOT you`l FRY-WITHOUT-RAP my VENGENCE-BURNS-HIS-HEAD-STILL
Its CERTAIN-FAGGOT your *DYING-OUT-FAST* Like *PENSIONERS-ON-TREADMILLS!!!*
[B]nice bar

I`l MERK-YOUR-WET-DRIBBLE-YA-WACK-CAT fag ya SCRIPTURES-NEED-REPAIRS!!
Ya VERSE`L-GET-SNIGERED-AND-LAFFD-AT like retards playing TWISTA-IN-WHEELCHAIRS
[B]lmfao man shit hot bar nice multi's

|| Sayin u bring heat, wel bitch-ya-wrong,-the-facts-is-straight get hit-wit-bombs-your-back-wil-break!
this spit with rip that 'Orahcastrated' leaves ya 'More Frustrated' Than kids-who-cant-masterbate!! ||
[B]played

|| u *lose breathe* as i giv ya-throat-a-strong-grapple u more *dramatic* than a-soap-thats-on-channels!my 'sound is verbal' look at ya lyrics.. ur head must go *round in circles* like u was afloat-with-one-paddel! ||
[B]nah dint like bro flow was off

Chess
i' SMASHING-DASH, like mongomery beating records, he aint quick to be MATCHING-THAT
dash's worthless so it's like i'm TRASHING-TRASH leave him *gasping for air* like hes CATCHING-FAT
nice opener i like the use of mongomery
he thinks he can be TYPING-FAST but no! he's as *slow* as begginers LEARNING-TO-TYPE
dash's a rook, im just FLYING-PAST, text is his live so when i beat him he'll be BURNING-WITH-HYPE
nah dint feel this
stop decorating your verse! it's looking worser than FAT-KIDS, you know you SHIT-KID
desinging bars, with some WACK-SHIT that just chat shit, i'll leave you getting jealous over my SCRIPTS-SNITCH
nah dint fit together and not hard enough punch
my SMOKE-IS-LEFT-TO-BE-SEEN, dash's BROKE-IN-THEFT-LIKE-DUMB-TEENS
so hows he gonna be *stealing my scripts*, *biting them*? cuz dash's STROKE-ON-DEBT-HAS-BEEN-MEAN
ok bar
*matches are over* when *fat lady sings*, well she SANG-AFTER-MY-FIRST-BAR
so me loosing my breath is wrong cuz dash's HANGED,-LAUGHED-AND-CURSED-WITH-SCARS
nice ender nice multi's

This was a good battle nearly tight,Dash nice verse need to work on the structure a bit but the rest of it man is sick bro keep it up.Chess nice shit bro just had a couple of bars that let you down and my have just slipped this battle for you be more consistent with the hits and punchlines good verse.

VOTE: DASH-good battle guys keep it up.

[Dash]

thanks, 1-0 upping

[Demise]

Dash

this WACK-KID pfft i`m BUSTIN-THIS-ELF leave ya HIT-WITH-SORES-YOU-ORPEHENED-ASS!
tha FACT-IS hes in *LOVE-WITH-HIMSELF* like having *INTERCOURSE-WITH-AUTOGRAPHS!!!*
Mutlis are hot as usual diss is decent

MERK-THIS-MAGGOT you`l FRY-WITHOUT-RAP my VENGENCE-BURNS-HIS-HEAD-STILL
Its CERTAIN-FAGGOT your *DYING-OUT-FAST* Like *PENSIONERS-ON-TREADMILLS!!!*
Bar is aight

I`l MERK-YOUR-WET-DRIBBLE-YA-WACK-CAT fag ya SCRIPTURES-NEED-REPAIRS!!
Ya VERSE`L-GET-SNIGERED-AND-LAFFD-AT like retards playing TWISTA-IN-WHEELCHAIRS
FUNNY SHIT this was good always love a funny punch


Sayin u bring heat, wel bitch-ya-wrong,-the-facts-is-straight get hit-wit-bombs-your-back-wil-break!
this spit with rip that 'Orahcastrated' leaves ya 'More Frustrated' Than kids-who-cant-masterbate!!
Weak...

u *lose breathe* as i giv ya-throat-a-strong-grapple u more *dramatic* than a-soap-thats-on-channels!my 'sound is verbal' look at ya lyrics.. ur head must go *round in circles* like u was afloat-with-one-paddel!
Meh Nuthin Special

Chess

i' SMASHING-DASH, like mongomery beating records, he aint quick to be MATCHING-THAT
dash's worthless so it's like i'm TRASHING-TRASH leave him *gasping for air* like hes CATCHING-FAT
Decent opener

he thinks he can be TYPING-FAST but no! he's as *slow* as begginers LEARNING-TO-TYPE
dash's a rook, im just FLYING-PAST, text is his live so when i beat him he'll be BURNING-WITH-HYPE
This was aight but def not that good

stop decorating your verse! it's looking worser than FAT-KIDS, you know you SHIT-KID
desinging bars, with some WACK-SHIT that just chat shit, i'll leave you getting jealous over my SCRIPTS-SNITCH
Weak punch come harder

my SMOKE-IS-LEFT-TO-BE-SEEN, dash's BROKE-IN-THEFT-LIKE-DUMB-TEENS
so hows he gonna be *stealing my scripts*, *biting them*? cuz dash's STROKE-ON-DEBT-HAS-BEEN-MEAN
This was good

*matches are over* when *fat lady sings*, well she SANG-AFTER-MY-FIRST-BAR
so me loosing my breath is wrong cuz dash's HANGED,-LAUGHED-AND-CURSED-WITH-SCARS
Good ender REAL good multis

OVERALL VOTE: Dash got this

[slimshadyLP]

Dash

this WACK-KID pfft i`m BUSTIN-THIS-ELF leave ya HIT-WITH-SORES-YOU-ORPEHENED-ASS!
tha FACT-IS hes in *LOVE-WITH-HIMSELF* like having *INTERCOURSE-WITH-AUTOGRAPHS!!!*
the mutlies were tight and photo thing was cool....

MERK-THIS-MAGGOT you`l FRY-WITHOUT-RAP my VENGENCE-BURNS-HIS-HEAD-STILL
Its CERTAIN-FAGGOT your *DYING-OUT-FAST* Like *PENSIONERS-ON-TREADMILLS!!!*
descent nuttin speacial outta this one....

I`l MERK-YOUR-WET-DRIBBLE-YA-WACK-CAT fag ya SCRIPTURES-NEED-REPAIRS!!
Ya VERSE`L-GET-SNIGERED-AND-LAFFD-AT like retards playing TWISTA-IN-WHEELCHAIRS
mulites was cool and the metaphor was ok...


Sayin u bring heat, wel bitch-ya-wrong,-the-facts-is-straight get hit-wit-bombs-your-back-wil-break!
this spit with rip that 'Orahcastrated' leaves ya 'More Frustrated' Than kids-who-cant-masterbate!!
weak...wasnt feelin this at all....

u *lose breathe* as i giv ya-throat-a-strong-grapple u more *dramatic* than a-soap-thats-on-channels!my 'sound is verbal' look at ya lyrics.. ur head must go *round in circles* like u was afloat-with-one-paddel!
the first was cool the second killed it....

Chess

i' SMASHING-DASH, like mongomery beating records, he aint quick to be MATCHING-THAT
dash's worthless so it's like i'm TRASHING-TRASH leave him *gasping for air* like hes CATCHING-FAT
nuttin speacial just a openr.....

he thinks he can be TYPING-FAST but no! he's as *slow* as begginers LEARNING-TO-TYPE
dash's a rook, im just FLYING-PAST, text is his live so when i beat him he'll be BURNING-WITH-HYPE
first was weak second part was cool...

stop decorating your verse! it's looking worser than FAT-KIDS, you know you SHIT-KID
desinging bars, with some WACK-SHIT that just chat shit, i'll leave you getting jealous over my SCRIPTS-SNITCH
wtf? i didint get that at all....

my SMOKE-IS-LEFT-TO-BE-SEEN, dash's BROKE-IN-THEFT-LIKE-DUMB-TEENS
so hows he gonna be *stealing my scripts*, *biting them*? cuz dash's STROKE-ON-DEBT-HAS-BEEN-MEAN
ok......

*matches are over* when *fat lady sings*, well she SANG-AFTER-MY-FIRST-BAR
so me loosing my breath is wrong cuz dash's HANGED,-LAUGHED-AND-CURSED-WITH-SCARS
nice multies punch wasnt that speacial.....

Id say dash took it.....

[Dash]

thanks for tha votes ya`ll.. 3-0 upping

[a.i.d.s.]

3:0 Dash