BL Day 2: bakkie vs chappy (0:3)

[a.i.d.s.]

rules:

4 - 8 bars
deadline friday
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

votes:

bar by bar votes only
only people who are signed in the BL are allowed two vote



don't forget your links (to battles in the BL), you can post them afterwards this time, if you don't till friday : DQ!


Good Luck:


to say it like a cowboy: DRAW

[chappy]

No beef bro...

This bitch is thinkin he's hot jus 'cause he's PAC-IN-SPIRED, (inspired)
I'll have this burnt actor thinkin he's 'discharged', watch CHAP-BRING-'FIRE'.

You keep tryin but your wack, I'ma SHIT-ON-YOUR-WEAK-BLOWS
Dawg your all hype, you faker than the PIC-OF-YOUR-CLIQUE'S-HOE. (~lady~)

I'm KILLIN-THIS-BITCH, only spit 'raw' when I'll have your blood SPILLIN-AN-SHIT,
You pussy man, "scared you'd hurt a friend" I'm surprised you wa WILLIN-TO-SPIT.

You ain't even ABLE-TO-FIGHT, got no job or money so you ain't STABLE-IN-LIFE,
You joined 'Be Ruthless', hopped on Ghost's dick you already been LABELED-HIS-WIFE. (no beef ghost)

"Somebody give him a light" 'cause with his swag rhymes he's SEEMIN-CLUELESS,
Always try'na 'shine' but you with the wrong group 'cause your TEAM-IS-USELESS. (no beef)

Someone better 'console' him, 'cause he's shit but he CLAIMS-HE'S-MADE,
Dawg your shits gettin old, like a PS2 all your GAMES-BE-PLAYED.

You can't get lower than you bitch all you do is BITE-OFF-THE-GREAT,
You goin' nowhere, attemptin take me is like try'na FIGHT-OFF-YA-FATE.


Bar 1 - Discharged = means you've lost your job, fired. So it's wordplay, CHAP-BRINGS-FIRE, I'll make him think he's lost his job 'cause of the way I bring fire (fired).
Bar 3 - We're homies. Raw = having the surface exposed and painful
Example: "A raw wound"
Bar 4 - Doesn't have a job, is in 'Be Ruthless'.
Bar 5 - Has a song called "Gimme a Light", tries to shine, shit's linked.
Bar 6 - Console = means to give moral/emotional support, and as in a games console, so more wordplay.
Bar 7 - Sayin he bites off Pac, and you can't fight of ya fate, it's jus gonna happen.


I'll get the links later...

[Bakkie]

My words 'free~load' ima murk more than you've~showed,
ya fat not 'Explode' even wen 'mrs dynamite' claimed she~blowed

Im 'spliting' your 'personalitys' more than 'THA PROB~LEM',
If your lyrics was gold 'THA HUSTLA' would'nt even 'ROB~THEM',

Ima high~light your ryhmes bolder than chalk on the floor,
Display ya corps with pride and leave ya dick behind the door,

Hungry ass porper,always 'filling' ya face in the kit~chen,
ima replace ya 'teeth' with a dick that will stop ya bitch~in,

Your dick so small its usage is for a 'Mail' Woman's Tamp~on,
Ya 'Delivery' obsorbes more wetness when it gets stamped~on,

You winning is like Eric Cartman saying he going to start slimming,
Diss cat no shady he pussy stuffing his face at thanks giving,

You Racist staying on the losers side when we all segregate,
you popping spots like your ugly ass got sumat to celebrate,

My lyrics will make you go "O~Man" 'Cause they death in place,
Left~Hook~ya~Brace even the 'Devil scared to look at ya face.

Explanation's

im so pissed you should no so fuck it,
Mrs Dynamite is a singer in the UK
Cartman is fat out of south park im saying he's fat
he's a teenager with spots and wears a brace
he's piatriotic,mail and delivery come under mailing post and a tampon is a womens peirod stick and a OMAN and Devil you shud get that if you no what ya on about.
Tha hustla and the problem is Cassidy he did split personality album and now hes the hustla and chappy likes him.

fuck it i know i have lost i dont give fuck i have had gud time tonght and pissed wwwwwayyyyyy

[Bakkie]

fucking hell damm lol my verse wack LMFAO anyways here's my links:

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=188792#post188792
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=15143

[CapZ]

Bakkie's Verse:


My words 'free~load' ima murk more than you've~showed,
ya fat not 'Explode' even wen 'mrs dynamite' claimed she~blowed
`` Ok opener i saw what u was tryin to do 2/5 forced multie tho``

Im 'spliting' your 'personalitys' more than 'THA PROB~LEM',
If your lyrics was gold 'THA HUSTLA' would'nt even 'ROB~THEM',
`` nice bar/personal , no need to do that ~ i use to do that PROBLEM AND ROB THEM multie dont worry``

Ima high~light your ryhmes bolder than chalk on the floor,
Display ya corps with pride and leave ya dick behind the door,
`` ok``

Hungry ass porper,always 'filling' ya face in the kit~chen,
ima replace ya 'teeth' with a dick that will stop ya bitch~in,
`` forced multies, again i know u still learnin avg. bar``

Your dick so small its usage is for a 'Mail' Woman's Tamp~on,
Ya 'Delivery' obsorbes more wetness when it gets stamped~on,
``Forced again.. but funny bar,lol``

You winning is like Eric Cartman saying he going to start slimming,
Diss cat no shady he pussy stuffing his face at thanks giving,
``i wanted more u know...``

You Racist staying on the losers side when we all segregate,
you popping spots like your ugly ass got sumat to celebrate,
``see you was tryin to put a personal``

My lyrics will make you go "O~Man" 'Cause they death in place,
Left~Hook~ya~Brace even the 'Devil scared to look at ya face.
``not feelin it homie 1/5 ender``


Chappy's Verse:


This bitch is thinkin he's hot jus 'cause he's PAC-IN-SPIRED, (inspired)
I'll have this burnt actor thinkin he's 'discharged', watch CHAP-BRING-'FIRE'.
``nice 4/5 opener``

You keep tryin but your wack, I'ma SHIT-ON-YOUR-WEAK-BLOWS
Dawg your all hype, you faker than the PIC-OF-YOUR-CLIQUE'S-HOE. (~lady~)
`` lol ya 2nd``

I'm KILLIN-THIS-BITCH, only spit 'raw' when I'll have your blood SPILLIN-AN-SHIT,
You pussy man, "scared you'd hurt a friend" I'm surprised you wa WILLIN-TO-SPIT.
``ehhh avg. bar``

You ain't even ABLE-TO-FIGHT, got no job or money so you ain't STABLE-IN-LIFE,
You joined 'Be Ruthless', hopped on Ghost's dick you already been LABELED-HIS-WIFE.
`` LMAO Damn that should've been ya Ender homie``

"Somebody give him a light" 'cause with his swag rhymes he's SEEMIN-CLUELESS,
Always try'na 'shine' but you with the wrong group 'cause your TEAM-IS-USELESS.
``ok-ok``

Someone better 'console' him, 'cause he's shit but he CLAIMS-HE'S-MADE,
Dawg your shits gettin old, like a PS2 all your GAMES-BE-PLAYED.
`` Played...avg. bar``

You can't get lower than you bitch all you do is BITE-OFF-THE-GREAT,
You goin' nowhere, attemptin take me is like try'na FIGHT-OFF-YA-FATE.
`` so much MULTIES But no good Punch, 2/5 ender ya 4th bar should've been ya last``

Cat's:


PUNCHES- Chappy, Bakkie u tried but he just had some betta ones
Personals- damn this was a hard one to descide so TIE
Multies- Chappy, Bak's Some Of Yours Wear FORCED it's kool tho
Metas- Chappy
Flow- Bakkie, I read it betta
Strcuture- Bakkie
Vocab- Tie
Wordplay- TIE
Creative- Tie
Enjoyed- Chappy

OVERALL- Chappy Took this.. Bakkie i know this wasnt ya best u even said it... it's kool i know how u feel go out and party ya know... ya both ma homies nice battle ya stay up


`1`

[Bakkie]

yo man thanks capz i appreciate it bro yer still grasping how to get multi's right but thanks for voting on battle hommie.

[Killa Jones]

Bakkie's Verse:


My words 'free~load' ima murk more than you've~showed,
ya fat not 'Explode' even wen 'mrs dynamite' claimed she~blowed
Ok opener

Im 'spliting' your 'personalitys' more than 'THA PROB~LEM',
If your lyrics was gold 'THA HUSTLA' would'nt even 'ROB~THEM',
Ok bar, nice meta

Ima high~light your ryhmes bolder than chalk on the floor,
Display ya corps with pride and leave ya dick behind the door,
ok

Hungry ass porper,always 'filling' ya face in the kit~chen,
ima replace ya 'teeth' with a dick that will stop ya bitch~in,
ok

Your dick so small its usage is for a 'Mail' Woman's Tamp~on,
Ya 'Delivery' obsorbes more wetness when it gets stamped~on,
ok and funny

You winning is like Eric Cartman saying he going to start slimming,
Diss cat no shady he pussy stuffing his face at thanks giving,
ok

You Racist staying on the losers side when we all segregate,
you popping spots like your ugly ass got sumat to celebrate,
not bad

My lyrics will make you go "O~Man" 'Cause they death in place,
Left~Hook~ya~Brace even the 'Devil scared to look at ya face.
ok


Chappy's Verse:


This bitch is thinkin he's hot jus 'cause he's PAC-IN-SPIRED, (inspired)
I'll have this burnt actor thinkin he's 'discharged', watch CHAP-BRING-'FIRE'.
tight opener

You keep tryin but your wack, I'ma SHIT-ON-YOUR-WEAK-BLOWS
Dawg your all hype, you faker than the PIC-OF-YOUR-CLIQUE'S-HOE. (~lady~)
nice diss

I'm KILLIN-THIS-BITCH, only spit 'raw' when I'll have your blood SPILLIN-AN-SHIT,
You pussy man, "scared you'd hurt a friend" I'm surprised you wa WILLIN-TO-SPIT.
ok bar

You ain't even ABLE-TO-FIGHT, got no job or money so you ain't STABLE-IN-LIFE,
You joined 'Be Ruthless', hopped on Ghost's dick you already been LABELED-HIS-WIFE.
tight bar

"Somebody give him a light" 'cause with his swag rhymes he's SEEMIN-CLUELESS,
Always try'na 'shine' but you with the wrong group 'cause your TEAM-IS-USELESS.
ok bar

Someone better 'console' him, 'cause he's shit but he CLAIMS-HE'S-MADE,
Dawg your shits gettin old, like a PS2 all your GAMES-BE-PLAYED.
ok bar

You can't get lower than you bitch all you do is BITE-OFF-THE-GREAT,
You goin' nowhere, attemptin take me is like try'na FIGHT-OFF-YA-FATE.
ok closer

vote: chappy came with much harder punches, sum nice disses epscailly the 2pac line and sum cool multis

[chappy]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=188922#post188922

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=188934#post188934

^There's my links, sorry they're late.

Aight 2-0 me, thanks for the votes, uppin for a KO.....

And LOL @ you being pissed, good battle bro.

[chappy]

Come on peeps, uppin' on this...

[chappy]

Come on! Vote!

[Demise]

Chappy's Verse:


This bitch is thinkin he's hot jus 'cause he's PAC-IN-SPIRED, (inspired)
I'll have this burnt actor thinkin he's 'discharged', watch CHAP-BRING-'FIRE'.
Damn that was nice man

You keep tryin but your wack, I'ma SHIT-ON-YOUR-WEAK-BLOWS
Dawg your all hype, you faker than the PIC-OF-YOUR-CLIQUE'S-HOE. (~lady~)
LMFAO nice bar man

I'm KILLIN-THIS-BITCH, only spit 'raw' when I'll have your blood SPILLIN-AN-SHIT,
You pussy man, "scared you'd hurt a friend" I'm surprised you wa WILLIN-TO-SPIT.
Umm ok the fire's gone... wtf?

You ain't even ABLE-TO-FIGHT, got no job or money so you ain't STABLE-IN-LIFE,
You joined 'Be Ruthless', hopped on Ghost's dick you already been LABELED-HIS-WIFE.
Nice personal and another hot crew diss

"Somebody give him a light" 'cause with his swag rhymes he's SEEMIN-CLUELESS,
Always try'na 'shine' but you with the wrong group 'cause your TEAM-IS-USELESS.
Ok this is just blowin hot air

Someone better 'console' him, 'cause he's shit but he CLAIMS-HE'S-MADE,
Dawg your shits gettin old, like a PS2 all your GAMES-BE-PLAYED.
Avg

You can't get lower than you bitch all you do is BITE-OFF-THE-GREAT,
You goin' nowhere, attemptin take me is like try'na FIGHT-OFF-YA-FATE.
Aight this was a decent ender... That other bar woulda been better tho wit bein ghosts wife funny as fuck


Bakkie's Verse:


My words 'free~load' ima murk more than you've~showed,
ya fat not 'Explode' even wen 'mrs dynamite' claimed she~blowed
Shit's forced but avg opener

Im 'spliting' your 'personalitys' more than 'THA PROB~LEM',
If your lyrics was gold 'THA HUSTLA' would'nt even 'ROB~THEM',
Bar was aight dont split ya words like that just bold em or smtn

Ima high~light your ryhmes bolder than chalk on the floor,
Display ya corps with pride and leave ya dick behind the door,
Umm eww thats gruesome but its aight

Hungry ass porper,always 'filling' ya face in the kit~chen,
ima replace ya 'teeth' with a dick that will stop ya bitch~in,
not really a multi the words just rhyme but the bar itself was weak

Your dick so small its usage is for a 'Mail' Woman's Tamp~on,
Ya 'Delivery' obsorbes more wetness when it gets stamped~on,
That was funny good bar

You winning is like Eric Cartman saying he going to start slimming,
Diss cat no shady he pussy stuffing his face at thanks giving,
Aight... nuthin special here you cut the shit off short

You Racist staying on the losers side when we all segregate,
you popping spots like your ugly ass got sumat to celebrate,
Aight that wasnt bad

My lyrics will make you go "O~Man" 'Cause they death in place,
Left~Hook~ya~Brace even the 'Devil scared to look at ya face.
Shits whack


Chappy took this hand down

[chappy]

Aight that's 3-0 KO, thanks for the vote Demise.

[Demise]

Aye man no prob could y'all drop a vote in my battle against D-ManD

[a.i.d.s.]

3:0 Chappy