BL Day 1: Ghost vs Killa Jones (4:1)

[a.i.d.s.]

rules:

4 - 8 bars (real bars, means !!!!!!TWO!!!!!! lines)
time limit friday
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

votes:

bar by bar votes only
only people who are signed in the BL are allowed two vote



don't forget your links (to battles in the BL), you can post them afterwards this time, if you don't till friday : DQ!


Good Luck:

start

[Killa Jones]

Your spit will spring a leak, Like a Plumber With No Wreches
I pull tighter spits out my mouth than nerves at the dentist
Unlucky for you, Its inevitable your gonna lose three points
While the audience sit back and watch me dismatle your three joints
Ill rip your legs out their sockets, break your back and snap your neck
3 points in the bag, respect, now a call out to rizla who's next
I got the best rap to snap at ya, with a flow that a clap at cha
With the impact of my punch, like roy jones took a crack at ya
Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway
Well today its burning you up like a jay in an astray
Im rhyming so sick like i just caught a disease
I breeze past this cat, coz im ill, 'Hat'chu' and i sneeze
A ghost in the night, doesn't faze me coz i cant see it
So your scare plan of attack didnt work and werent le-git
Eight lyrical wordplays i drop, its magic like harry potter
Except the thunder i drop from my mind is even hotter!

[Gh0$T]

i’ll grab my rhymes and “toat~it” cuz im known to “Kill~A~Poet”…
who was EXPOSED and scared to “show~it” so to murk you “im~devoted”…*
i’ll “eliminate~ya~life” and “disintegrate~ya~nice” cuz you tried to “emulate~my~strife”…
so i’ll just “initiate~the~price” you gotta pay for my “ghost~write’s” to even “flow~concise“…
he moved back to text battles because his mic begin 2 rust,
tired of hearin your spits it decided to bust, (his mic did brake 4 some unknown reason)
Tha Simularity u have 2 roy jones is that ya style is fading...
your both getting lazy need excercise try GHOST TRAINing...
Your Rhymez Are Weak I {"Notice"} Drawn The Wrong {Cards}... U "wrote This"?...
Ive drawn mine so {"GO FISH"} Seperate Ya Flowz Like "Mo-ses"
Does Fire Sway Cos I Thought It Just Burned,
Thats One HAHA and no points earned!!!! "Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway" killas 5th bar
I seen u wit ya girl last week in the middle of Cardiff City (our hometown)
WHOS FUCKING WHO AND WHOS SUCKING WHOS TITTIE! (They Both Men And Fat As Fuck)
You aint a killa u a fake, a pussy on ghosts~dick,
ah-herm....how many battles u actually won with them posts~bitch!

[mattSMD]

KILLA JONES

Your spit will spring a leak, Like a Plumber With No Wreches
I pull tighter spits out my mouth than nerves at the dentist
weak opener, if a plumber doesn't have a wrench how would he spring a leak?
Unlucky for you, Its inevitable your gonna lose three points
While the audience sit back and watch me dismatle your three joints
why only three joints? so far this aint making sense
Ill rip your legs out their sockets, break your back and snap your neck
3 points in the bag, respect, now a call out to rizla who's next
getting better
I got the best rap to snap at ya, with a flow that a clap at cha
With the impact of my punch, like roy jones took a crack at ya
ok rhyme but very basic
Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway
Well today its burning you up like a jay in an astray
weak but good attempt at multies
Im rhyming so sick like i just caught a disease
I breeze past this cat, coz im ill, 'Hat'chu' and i sneeze
ish......
A ghost in the night, doesn't faze me coz i cant see it
So your scare plan of attack didnt work and werent le-git
good attempt at a personal but pretty weak rhyme
Eight lyrical wordplays i drop, its magic like harry potter
Except the thunder i drop from my mind is even hotter!
weak closer
i aint hatin on you, i got no reason to. but this was very weak. basic rhymes, multies, punches and few personals. been ages since i saw you text last so keep at it, can see you'll get better as the league goes on


GHOST

i’ll grab my rhymes and “toat~it” cuz im known to “Kill~A~Poet”…
who was EXPOSED and scared to “show~it” so to murk you “im~devoted”…*
trying to force the multies, liked the first line but second didnt work
i’ll “eliminate~ya~life” and “disintegrate~ya~nice” cuz you tried to “emulate~my~strife”…
so i’ll just “initiate~the~price” you gotta pay for my “ghost~write’s” to even “flow~concise“…
again, you're trying too hard
he moved back to text battles because his mic begin 2 rust,
tired of hearin your spits it decided to bust,
basic but still a good personal
Tha Simularity u have 2 roy jones is that ya style is fading...
your both getting lazy need excercise try GHOST TRAINing...
poor. and you fed that roy jones thing
Your Rhymez Are Weak I {"Notice"} Drawn The Wrong {Cards}... U "wrote This"?...
Ive drawn mine so {"GO FISH"} Seperate Ya Flowz Like "Mo-ses"
not feeling this
Does Fire Sway Cos I Thought It Just Burned,
Thats One HAHA and no points earned!!!! "Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway" killas 5th bar
you fed this
I seen u wit ya girl last week in the middle of Cardiff City (our hometown)
WHOS FUCKING WHO AND WHOS SUCKING WHOS TITTIE!
weak
You aint a killa u a fake, a pussy on ghosts~dick,
ah-herm....how many battles u actually won with them posts~bitch!
ok closer

ive seen much, much better from you, this was weak as well

tough one to call but i gotta give this to GHOST, just edged it on the multies

[D-ManD]

KILLA JONES

Your spit will spring a leak, Like a Plumber With No Wreches
I pull tighter spits out my mouth than nerves at the dentist
weak opener

Unlucky for you, Its inevitable your gonna lose three points
While the audience sit back and watch me dismatle your three joints
dosn't flow into tha above thing

Ill rip your legs out their sockets, break your back and snap your neck
3 points in the bag, respect, now a call out to rizla who's next
ok that flowed

I got the best rap to snap at ya, with a flow that a clap at cha
With the impact of my punch, like roy jones took a crack at ya
ok

Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway
Well today its burning you up like a jay in an astray
weak but good attempt at multies

Im rhyming so sick like i just caught a disease
I breeze past this cat, coz im ill, 'Hat'chu' and i sneeze
not feelin it

A ghost in the night, doesn't faze me coz i cant see it
So your scare plan of attack didnt work and werent le-git
nice name play

Eight lyrical wordplays i drop, its magic like harry potter
Except the thunder i drop from my mind is even hotter!
weak closer,u could do better


Ghost:
i’ll grab my rhymes and “toat~it” cuz im known to “Kill~A~Poet”…
who was EXPOSED and scared to “show~it” so to murk you “im~devoted”…*
didn'tflow,kinda weak

i’ll “eliminate~ya~life” and “disintegrate~ya~nice” cuz you tried to “emulate~my~strife”…
so i’ll just “initiate~the~price” you gotta pay for my “ghost~write’s” to even “flow~concise“…
ur tryin to hard to bring what ur not makin right now(no offense)

he moved back to text battles because his mic begin 2 rust,
tired of hearin your spits it decided to bust,
good personal

Tha Simularity u have 2 roy jones is that ya style is fading...
your both getting lazy need excercise try GHOST TRAINing...
not to good

Your Rhymez Are Weak I {"Notice"} Drawn The Wrong {Cards}... U "wrote This"?...
Ive drawn mine so {"GO FISH"} Seperate Ya Flowz Like "Mo-ses"
naw

Does Fire Sway Cos I Thought It Just Burned,
Thats One HAHA and no points earned!!!! "Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway" killas 5th bar
once again not to gd

I seen u wit ya girl last week in the middle of Cardiff City (our hometown)
WHOS FUCKING WHO AND WHOS SUCKING WHOS TITTIE!
weak

You aint a killa u a fake, a pussy on ghosts~dick,
ah-herm....how many battles u actually won with them posts~bitch!
wasn't bad



I'ma go wit killa on dis

[GaTmAn]

Your spit will spring a leak, Like a Plumber With No Wreches
I pull tighter spits out my mouth than nerves at the dentist

flow was nice i thought, but the first line needs to be rephrased

Unlucky for you, Its inevitable your gonna lose three points
While the audience sit back and watch me dismatle your three joints

meh

Ill rip your legs out their sockets, break your back and snap your neck
3 points in the bag, respect, now a call out to rizla who's next

yeah tht was ok, flowed well

I got the best rap to snap at ya, with a flow that a clap at cha
With the impact of my punch, like roy jones took a crack at ya

meh, no personal, it flowed but me, snap, crack n clap,, meh

Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway
Well today its burning you up like a jay in an astray

lol, nice idea, liked this bar

Im rhyming so sick like i just caught a disease
I breeze past this cat, coz im ill, 'Hat'chu' and i sneeze

meh MEH MEHHHHH...lol, te hatchu thing spoilt it

A ghost in the night, doesn't faze me coz i cant see it
So your scare plan of attack didnt work and werent le-git

first line WAS HOT, second one fizzled

Eight lyrical wordplays i drop, its magic like harry potter
Except the thunder i drop from my mind is even hotter!

didnt like this


Ghost:
i’ll grab my rhymes and “toat~it” cuz im known to “Kill~A~Poet”…
who was EXPOSED and scared to “show~it” so to murk you “im~devoted”…*

it flowed, but r they multis?, i hope not

i’ll “eliminate~ya~life” and “disintegrate~ya~nice” cuz you tried to “emulate~my~strife”…
so i’ll just “initiate~the~price” you gotta pay for my “ghost~write’s” to even “flow~concise“…

yeah thsi flowed well, BUT the disinteregate ya nice SUCKED, ruined it a lil

he moved back to text battles because his mic begin 2 rust,
tired of hearin your spits it decided to bust,

yeah good personal, rust n bust r a bit basic

Tha Simularity u have 2 roy jones is that ya style is fading...
your both getting lazy need excercise try GHOST TRAINing...

hmmm, this was ok, but sumthings putting me off it i cnt figure it out, mayb the flow or sumthing

Your Rhymez Are Weak I {"Notice"} Drawn The Wrong {Cards}... U "wrote This"?...
Ive drawn mine so {"GO FISH"} Seperate Ya Flowz Like "Mo-ses"

this was a good concept i liked it, the whole card thing, also the moses line at the end was clever

Does Fire Sway Cos I Thought It Just Burned,
Thats One HAHA and no points earned!!!! "Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway" killas 5th bar

nice bar, took the piss outa his bar

I seen u wit ya girl last week in the middle of Cardiff City (our hometown)
WHOS FUCKING WHO AND WHOS SUCKING WHOS TITTIE!

this was funny, itd be funny on a mic, but for text the lyrics are a bit meh, but still funny

You aint a killa u a fake, a pussy on ghosts~dick,
ah-herm....how many battles u actually won with them posts~bitch!

avg ender, ok punch


GHOST TOOK THIS :p

[Demise]

KILLA JONES

Your spit will spring a leak, Like a Plumber With No Wreches
I pull tighter spits out my mouth than nerves at the dentist
Weak opener not feelin it at all

Unlucky for you, Its inevitable your gonna lose three points
While the audience sit back and watch me dismatle your three joints
This is full of fillers and it dont really make sense

Ill rip your legs out their sockets, break your back and snap your neck
3 points in the bag, respect, now a call out to rizla who's next
This was aight best bar so far

I got the best rap to snap at ya, with a flow that a clap at cha
With the impact of my punch, like roy jones took a crack at ya
This was aight but its prechool multis

Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway
Well today its burning you up like a jay in an astray
Meh...

Im rhyming so sick like i just caught a disease
I breeze past this cat, coz im ill, 'Hat'chu' and i sneeze
This was avg

A ghost in the night, doesn't faze me coz i cant see it
So your scare plan of attack didnt work and werent le-git
Avg again dont rhyme like that le-git see it shit it aint cute

Eight lyrical wordplays i drop, its magic like harry potter
Except the thunder i drop from my mind is even hotter!
Weak closer

Shit was just preschool in general man coulda been MUCH better

GHOST

i’ll grab my rhymes and “toat~it” cuz im known to “Kill~A~Poet”…
who was EXPOSED and scared to “show~it” so to murk you “im~devoted”…*
Shit is forced and fucks the opener

i’ll “eliminate~ya~life” and “disintegrate~ya~nice” cuz you tried to “emulate~my~strife”…
so i’ll just “initiate~the~price” you gotta pay for my “ghost~write’s” to even “flow~concise“…
Still forced and its fuckin you HARD

he moved back to text battles because his mic begin 2 rust,
tired of hearin your spits it decided to bust,
Nice personal

Tha Simularity u have 2 roy jones is that ya style is fading...
your both getting lazy need excercise try GHOST TRAINing...
I think you fed this but it was weak anyway

Your Rhymez Are Weak I {"Notice"} Drawn The Wrong {Cards}... U "wrote This"?...
Ive drawn mine so {"GO FISH"} Seperate Ya Flowz Like "Mo-ses"
Whack

Does Fire Sway Cos I Thought It Just Burned,
Thats One HAHA and no points earned!!!! "Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway" killas 5th bar
Were there hungry children near you this was fed

I seen u wit ya girl last week in the middle of Cardiff City (our hometown)
WHOS FUCKING WHO AND WHOS SUCKING WHOS TITTIE!
Sad

You aint a killa u a fake, a pussy on ghosts~dick,
ah-herm....how many battles u actually won with them posts~bitch!
Decent closer better of the two

Meh I guess Ghost got it he had the best barz in the battle but this shit was weak

[CapZ]

Killa Jones Verse>>

Your spit will spring a leak, Like a Plumber With No Wreches
I pull tighter spits out my mouth than nerves at the dentist
`` 1 st line was ight, 2nd could've been betta 1/5 opener``

Unlucky for you, Its inevitable your gonna lose three points
While the audience sit back and watch me dismatle your three joints
``Lot of fillers homie, workin on ya multies???``

Ill rip your legs out their sockets, break your back and snap your neck
3 points in the bag, respect, now a call out to rizla who's next
``ok bar``

I got the best rap to snap at ya, with a flow that a clap at cha
With the impact of my punch, like roy jones took a crack at ya
``keep workin on ya multies,,,``

Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway
Well today its burning you up like a jay in an astray
``weak``

Im rhyming so sick like i just caught a disease
I breeze past this cat, coz im ill, 'Hat'chu' and i sneeze
``kinda played,,``

A ghost in the night, doesn't faze me coz i cant see it
So your scare plan of attack didnt work and werent le-git
`` le-git Aint a multie just leave it alone see it, legit,,, ok``

Eight lyrical wordplays i drop, its magic like harry potter
Except the thunder i drop from my mind is even hotter!
``Weak meta on ya 1st line, 1/5 closer``


Gh0$t's Verse>>

i’ll grab my rhymes and “toat~it” cuz im known to “Kill~A~Poet”…
who was EXPOSED and scared to “show~it” so to murk you “im~devoted”…*
`` ok opener 3/5``

i’ll “eliminate~ya~life” and “disintegrate~ya~nice” cuz you tried to “emulate~my~strife”…
`` ok``
so i’ll just “initiate~the~price” you gotta pay for my “ghost~write’s” to even “flow~concise“…
`` good``
he moved back to text battles because his mic begin 2 rust,
tired of hearin your spits it decided to bust,`` ok lines``

Tha Simularity u have 2 roy jones is that ya style is fading...
your both getting lazy need excercise try GHOST TRAINing...
`` 2nd was that good fell off``

Your Rhymez Are Weak I {"Notice"} Drawn The Wrong {Cards}... U "wrote This"?...
Ive drawn mine so {"GO FISH"} Seperate Ya Flowz Like "Mo-ses"
`` nice bar``
Does Fire Sway Cos I Thought It Just Burned,
Thats One HAHA and no points earned!!!! "Im deadly with my sprays, which way will my fire sway" killas 5th bar
I seen u wit ya girl last week in the middle of Cardiff City (our hometown)
WHOS FUCKING WHO AND WHOS SUCKING WHOS TITTIE!
``nice bars``
You aint a killa u a fake, a pussy on ghosts~dick,
ah-herm....how many battles u actually won with them posts~bitch!
``no need for dat forced multie ah-herm,, 3/5 close ok``


PUNCHES- GHOST
PERSONALS- GHOST
MULTIES- GHOST
METAS- GHOST
FLOW- KILLA
STRUCTURE- KILLA
CREATIVE- TIE
VOCAB- GHOST

Overall- Gh0$t TOOK THIS EZ

`1`

[a.i.d.s.]

4 : 1 Ghost

congratulations


Ghost: +3
Killa Jones: -3