who wants to battle me

[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

quick 10 lines no bitin 5 votes win 3 votes ko usual rules
ill spit first once yuve checked in ... this is open for everyone

[LYRicAL ViLLAiN]

aiite

[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

you call yourself the lyrical villian but ive read ur shit and im not feelin
quit now cuz yur started to imitate micheal jackson with little boys
buy them another netherland ranch and get them some nipple toys
this is a fucking rap battle and your standin uptight actin speechless
my rhymes are like stone slab walls defending me u cant breach this
probably smokin so much cigarettes it gave u second hand terretz
cuz everytime u rap u start gibberin in the middle of it and i dont hear shit
yur like a dog cuz last time i fucked yur mom on a bed of nails i fell off
i ended up killin the dog with my machetti up in to little pieces of confetti
so i picked you up and threw you in its place and beat in yur face so you took his place

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thats only 10 lines the took his place part his part of the last line

[LYRicAL ViLLAiN]

Objection: Destroy this soft emcee
Patient: krine 69
Surgeon: Dr. Lyrical Villain
Procedure: Rip out krine's heart
Hospital: eminem HH

EMERGENCY ROOM:
Villain is restraining this FAGGOT with punches (re-arranging his words)// cause the only way krine is "ill" is when he uses his (name in his verse)// you're (remaining the worst) emcee to state your (name and emerge)// no (fame is the first) "krine" that he (sustained at his birth)// ill bring (shame to your words) by verbally (infiltrating your secrets)// cause (it's plain to see kid) by your skills that you're (related to retards)// it's (amazing to see this) cat's verse and how it's (restraining from neatness)// while blows are (changing his features), my multi's are (blazing his weakness)//

CRITICAL CONDITION:
Disfigure krine's lips to petals and ass lips..fire slugs your way and cut your fucking throat..Villain buys what he breaks..so how much for your neck?
your (dome is useless) to think of rhymes because i (own your music)// ill beat you to the point that you don't wanna show your face like the nigga on (Home Improvement)// then i'll (cause the silence) of this "dull rock" trying to ("spark" some violence)// cause a win for him gets denied more than Mike Tyson's (boxing licence)// you're (wrong beside the) fact that i smack newbies like you who think that you're (ill in advance)// cause ill put your teeth in your throat and make you bleed more than fat women (in period pants)//you still dont get the fact that your (writtens is wack?)// without a (fifth and a mag) ill beat you with your shoulderblade and put your (hip on your back)//

Pronounced Dead 8:39 PM Pacific Time

___/\_/\___/\__/\_______________- FLATLINE

GAME OVER! FATALITY!

uppin on votes kiddies

edit: i fixed the \ shit

[jersey#12]

structure: Villian
creativity: Villian
flow: Krine
multies: Villian
enjoyment: Villian
punches: Villian

vote: Lyrical Villian

Comment: yo lyrical, i like what you did wit dat emergency room n' critical condition :lol: , funny as hell dawg 8)
yo krine, :? keep workin on ya flows
:wink:

[LYRicAL ViLLAiN]

haha thanks yo 1-0 uppin

[jersey#12]

yea you got tight shit villian, i want a rematch wit u soon, but not now :D

[Young Legend]

Damn that was a lopsided affair.

vote:nigga villain

[Young Legend]

yea you got tight shit villian, i want a rematch wit u soon, but not now :D

villain will CONSUME U

[jersey#12]

yea villian has some tight shit, but i was a lil close on tournament :wink:
i might have a chance if i work harder :D

[Young Legend]

8)

[LYRicAL ViLLAiN]

aiite stop fightin over me haha jp 2-0 uppin

[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

nice

[S.W.A.T]

lyrical
thats the KO
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