lilfusdawg vs gatman

[GaTmAn]

u told me to set it up so here it is, 5-10 bars,
no feedin, dickridin, bitin, recyclin,
by-meh

right ill spit shortly

[GaTmAn]

fus dog, u wuss dawg,u must jog, get out retreat,
meant to be a rookie, ha, sorry 4 the deceipt,

rip flash n burn, ill twist blast n turn,
left ripped, ashed n urned, waiting for my return,

never been a battler, but battlin never rattled me,
only thing thts rattled me, is when ur fat bitch mom jst sat-on-me

i aint exactly unknown, but i aint that known either,
but its papered on billboards,dawgs moms pussy just a fiver,

so ima end it here, 5 bars is nearly over,
next time dawg maybe, u wont get no cold shoulder,

made in 5 mins, there aint no battles to vote on so i cnt get links, uppin for ur reply, lilfusdawg

first battle EVER!

[littlefusdawg]

gatmans a joke when he wrote this he choked
hold on let me finish this line of coke

no one was waiting for ur return
ill murder your whole family n stick them in one urn

uz one lil pussy who is a dumb ass rookie
so am i but at least i get some nookie

damn right my mom is the only thing u could fuck
the ugliest prostitute wouldnt fuck u for a buck

this shit u just wrote just made me dumber
so here take my mom's number

shit i suck nice gatman

[littlefusdawg]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=161207#post161207 one link

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=161242#post161242 second

[Red Devyl]

nice all cats to Gatman
Gat u elaveted alot keep it up
my vote;Gatman

[Bakkie]

Structure:Tie
Creativity:nah
Metph:Gatman
wordplay:nah
Flow:Gatman
Overall:Gatman

not a good battle pretty weak but use will get better wid practice.peace.

[Demise]

All cats G-Man nice drop homie you got my vote

Gatman Wins Via KO

[GaTmAn]

cheers ya'll, ima carry on, need to work on my metas, any1 fancy a challenge i ere

[Mc-Itty]

Gatman:

Again like said for all my battles...dont take any offence to what i say im jus tellin u straight up

fus dog, u wuss dawg,u must jog, get out retreat,
meant to be a rookie, ha, sorry 4 the deceipt
..first line didn make sense.

rip flash n burn, ill twist blast n turn,
left ripped, ashed n urned, waiting for my return,
..u should use multis...and ur flow is blah.

never been a battler, but battlin never rattled me,
only thing thts rattled me, is when ur fat bitch mom jst sat-on-me
i didnt like the repition of rattled and sat on doesnt rhyme with rattled..forced multi.

i aint exactly unknown, but i aint that known either,
but its papered on billboards,dawgs moms pussy just a fiver,
it rhymes sayin it in a brit accent...never use those typa rhymes fa text

so ima end it here, 5 bars is nearly over,
next time dawg maybe, u wont get no cold shoulder,
ender should have been harder

Littlefusdawg:

gatmans a joke when he wrote this he choked
hold on let me finish this line of coke
this line of coke?!...exp

no one was waiting for ur return
ill murder your whole family n stick them in one urn
...use wordplay...fix ya structure

uz one lil pussy who is a dumb ass rookie
so am i but at least i get some nookie
uppp ur vocab...use multis...

damn right my mom is the only thing u could fuck
the ugliest prostitute wouldnt fuck u for a buck
ur dissin ur mom...not him.

this shit u just wrote just made me dumber
so here take my mom's number
...how does this diss him?


Overall my votes for gatman...both y'all on the same level and elemental wise..both are lacking some of the main elements lol...the reason i didnt vote for fusdawg is cuz he slipped half way...didnt have direct punches

vote: gatman.

[Venim]

Flow:GatMan
Punches:GatMan
Personals:GatMan
Multis:GatMan
Opener:GatMan
Closer:GatMan
WordPlay:GatMan
Overall:GatMan