Tox vs. Notorious R.I.G

[Toxic]

5 barz
i drop first
ill hopefully drop ??? haha i dunno hopefully soon
-house rulez-

[Notorious R.I.G]

alrite dont worry about it, heres my links - just to get them outta the way -

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=150998#post150998
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=151002#post151002

[Toxic]

5 barz...

threads back-alive, attack-at-high, u betta get prepared to fight so practice-tonight /
slack-at-this-time? betta not, im comin with force so looks like u comin out last-in-this-fight /

5 quick jabs-to-ya-side, u lackin-the-fine, skills i got so now u goin round askin-for-pride /
ya tracks-shunned-to-fire, no good consistancy so i towed ya rhymez R.I.G and moved ya traction-aside /

i got thorns-to-poke, make u bleed like bad papers from poor students on music sheets and rip ya vocal chords-to-notes /
take a tour-of-wat-i-wrote, maybe ull learn somehtin, to get a higher rankin, check the core-of-the-smoke /

a mod should close this before-u-reply, dont make a fool out of him, rhyme-for-a-rhyme, only i got more for-the-eye /
i see it now, four-to-the-five, votes-for-me, close-this-story, u learn from these greasy lesson so i guess it was important-to-fry /

u winnin dis is like the beach blowin up so it aint shore-to-bust, a virgin in the rap game so u was sure-to-rust /
by the way... battlin midgets is the only way ull get peepz to say u No-Tor-I-Us /


lotta wordplay goin on here.....gotta think about it.

uppin fo ya verse.

[Notorious R.I.G]

not feelin it at all at the moment ill drop sumtime tommorow.

[Toxic]

uppin on ya verse.

[Toxic]

uppin on ya verse homie

[Toxic]

still uppin ya verse man.

[Toxic]

uppin fo his.

[Toxic]

i see u online..juss acknowledge this.

[Notorious R.I.G]

my battlin days are over sorry man but gotta say that drop was pretty immense, it wudnt be worth me droppin - u got the k.o wivout no votes - good work sorry for wastin ur time haha inabit.

[Demise]

my battlin days are over sorry man but gotta say that drop was pretty immense, it wudnt be worth me droppin - u got the k.o wivout no votes - good work sorry for wastin ur time haha inabit.
WTF man I know this aint my battle but dont go out like that homie just drop whatever you got and take the K.O. like a man homie. I understand if you wanna stop battlin in general but dont let it be on a note like this. Man up homie jus drop ya verse and take the possible loss.

[Toxic]

i agree...juss drop some stuff man....peace.

[Notorious R.I.G]

hm alrite then if u say so...


i got 5 bars to show you what im made of im blowin myself out
this toxic waste is goin up in flames so u better all get urselves out

biggie, tupac, robert johnson, JFK, they weren't to know
theyd say what they say and itd be the last time they show

but im witnessin my own death its like im seein into the future
so as i drop these lines i know theyre my last so i take time to nurture

this is wastin my precious time, unlike others out there ive got prospects
i dont need to prove myself to anyone specially not u so fuck this contest

my route is the education system ill be gettin a degree not a criminal record
i dont do beefs so toxic can have this battle go sign urself a record deal

see you in heaven.

[Toxic]

damn...u not that bad fam...lol..


uppin fo votes.

[Toxic]

Uppin Fo Votes!!!

[White_Chocolate]

Creativity:Toxic
Personals:Toxic
Punches:Toxic
Multis:R.I.G.
Flow:Tox
Enjoyable:Tox
Overall:Tox
Nice Battle

[Toxic]

1-0 thanx fo dropp and thanx fo votin

uppin

[Demise]

All cats but multis go to TOX

But R.I.G. you got some potential if you get the right guidence

[Toxic]

thanx fo votin...2-0 uppin fo tha ko

[JD da MC]

Toxic's Verse:
threads back-alive, attack-at-high, u betta get prepared to fight so practice-tonight /
slack-at-this-time? betta not, im comin with force so looks like u comin out last-in-this-fight /
eh, not a bad opener, definetely not your best, not much of a punch here
5 quick jabs-to-ya-side, u lackin-the-fine, skills i got so now u goin round askin-for-pride /
ya tracks-shunned-to-fire, no good consistancy so i towed ya rhymez R.I.G and moved ya traction-aside /
nice, pretty good punch, your multis are sounding just a little bit forced in this verse
i got thorns-to-poke, make u bleed like bad papers from poor students on music sheets and rip ya vocal chords-to-notes /
take a tour-of-wat-i-wrote, maybe ull learn somehtin, to get a higher rankin, check the core-of-the-smoke /
nice punch, ya flowing nicely
a mod should close this before-u-reply, dont make a fool out of him, rhyme-for-a-rhyme, only i got more for-the-eye /
i see it now, four-to-the-five, votes-for-me, close-this-story, u learn from these greasy lesson so i guess it was important-to-fry /
not really much of a punch, but it flowed good
u winnin dis is like the beach blowin up so it aint shore-to-bust, a virgin in the rap game so u was sure-to-rust /
by the way... battlin midgets is the only way ull get peepz to say u No-Tor-I-Us /
tight ender, probly your best bar in this verse, real nice punch, metaphors were tight

R.I.G's Verse:
i got 5 bars to show you what im made of im blowin myself out
this toxic waste is goin up in flames so u better all get urselves out
not too bad an opener, the "toxic waste" concept is played in alot of Toxic's battles
biggie, tupac, robert johnson, JFK, they weren't to know
theyd say what they say and itd be the last time they show
no punch, waste of space
but im witnessin my own death its like im seein into the future
so as i drop these lines i know theyre my last so i take time to nurture
same as above
this is wastin my precious time, unlike others out there ive got prospects
i dont need to prove myself to anyone specially not u so fuck this contest
LoL, right
my route is the education system ill be gettin a degree not a criminal record
i dont do beefs so toxic can have this battle go sign urself a record deal
....

Toxic: DEFINETELY not the best that i've seen from you, this was really weak compared to what i know you can do, but it was enough to win

R.I.G: damn homie, i know that you didn't really wanna drop, but you could have at least put just a little effort and put punches in ya verse

Vote: Toxic, basically because his verse had a coupla punches in it

[Toxic]

wat a breakdown....damn, lol. thanx a lot man. appreciate it. thanx fo votin everyone....good battle. no hate.

peace

[chappy]

Consistency/Structure: R.I.G
Creativity: T
Personal: T
Punches: T
Multis: T
Flow: R.I.G
Metas: T
Enjoyable: T
Wordplay: T
Overall: Toxic

[Notorious R.I.G]

mosh master u mite av noticed i cud be not be fucked doin it, took me bout 3 minutes to drop that.