IM NEW TO THIS

[rugbyrapster]

HELLO BOYS AND GIRLS

WELL IM NEW TO ALL THIS BATTLE SHIT
AND BY THE LOOKS OF IT HAS BECOME A HIT
BUT Y R LOTS OF U TELLIN OTHERS TO GO SUCK DICK
OR WORSE THEN THAT THEYRE ALL PRICKS
ANYWAY IVE DECIDED TO MAKE THIS MY HOME
SO AT THE MO WHO SEATS ON THE THRONE
CUS I WANNA CHALLENGE U ALL
SOME ONE U WILL FALL
AS I START TO UP THE TEMPO
LETS GO
SOMEBODY PLEASE BUST A FLOW

[Slitt Ristz]

hahaha that's novice shit man practice aight I'ma give u some constructive criticism: Work the metaphors man that shit is just stupid without metaphors and work double rhymes like where the last two words rhyme with the last two words of the next line or triple rhymes. And u gotta quit the generic shit u gotta hit where it hurts. Peace out

-Used to be blue now red inbetween hand and arm