kaspir vs. mosh master (0-3 KO)

[kaspir]

rules are:
no crew votes, no hate votes
3-0=K.O., 4-1=T.K.O, or first to 5
no feeding, biting
5-8 bars

sorry it took so long i had some computer trouble. i'll have the other link soon
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=138420#post138420

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....8591#post138591 (showthread.php?p=138591#post138591)

wanting to battle me mosh you must be out of your mind//
im more powerful than gotenks and vegeto combined//

with more than enough skill to beat you before the tenth line//
and add a loss to your score making your wins fall behind//*

if you want to match wits you'll just get your life cashed quick//
one punch to the jaw will snap your spine and make your whole body twitch//

if you think im an easy ko your in for a surprise but there wont be a party//
your dead body will be found mangled with a slit throat from a car key//

mosh im telling you to quit now its something i highly advise//
you dont want to be this young when you meet your demise//

*if i win he will have six wins and seven losses

[JD da MC]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=138451#post138451
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=138413#post138413

gotta weak record on your hands, 2 wins, 2 losses how it stands/
yeh, you read that right, i said 2 losses, undertand/
that this is simple, i'ma win this, caue you're rappin' like a newb~spits/
rhyme like you're knickers in a knot, don't yell at me when all your pubes~rip/
wait a sec, did i say pubes? i musta been mistaken, dude/
cause this faggot ain't developed, with body, skill or attitude/
ain't elevated with his rhymes, they still the same as when he started/
like a baby left ingrown, can clearly see this kid's retarded/
i guess you used to bein' shunned, because you're hated by your city/
i just murked your ass right here, i'll leave the scraps for MC Itty/*

*he's battling MC Itty, and is most likely to lose :rolleyes:

alright, get votes in

[chappy]

KASPIR:

wanting to battle me mosh you must be out of your mind//
im more powerful than gotenks and vegeto combined//

^^Nice rhyming and flow....no punch

with more than enough skill to beat you before the tenth line//
and add a loss to your score making your wins fall behind//*

^^Again...no punch

if you want to match wits you'll just get your life cashed quick//
one punch to the jaw will snap your spine and make your whole body twitch//

^^Nah

if you think im an easy ko your in for a surprise but there wont be a party//
your dead body will be found mangled with a slit throat from a car key//

^^Not feelin this either

mosh im telling you to quit now its something i highly advise//
you dont want to be this young when you meet your demise//

^^Ok rhyming and flow...no punch


MOSH_MASTER:

gotta weak record on your hands, 2 wins, 2 losses how it stands/
yeh, you read that right, i said 2 losses, undertand/

^^Not the best of openers

that this is simple, i'ma win this, caue you're rappin' like a newb~spits/
rhyme like you're knickers in a knot, don't yell at me when all your pubes~rip/

^^Lol....Aight

wait a sec, did i say pubes? i musta been mistaken, dude/
cause this faggot ain't developed, with body, skill or attitude/

^^Good

ain't elevated with his rhymes, they still the same as when he started/
like a baby left ingrown, can clearly see this kid's retarded/

^^Nice

i guess you used to bein' shunned, because you're hated by your city/
i just murked your ass right here, i'll leave the scraps for MC Itty/*

^^Good Closer


Kaspir-You got good rhyming and flow, but there were no punches...keep uppin'.
mosh_master-Ain't your best and you know that, but came out well and was enough to win.


Consistency/Structure: K
Creativity: M
Flow: K
Multis: M
Metas: M
Wordplay: M
Punches: M
Personals: M
Overall: M

[Mc-Itty]

Kaspir:
U got a good stand of structure i like that (shits what im always missin), u got a hot base fo personals but ya needa develop that mo with multis. Vocab level was decent, flow was nice. In battles the strongest element is multis...thats truth, i think if u add in some of them shit wud b real hot...but overal okay spit 5/10.

Mosh Master:
We coo so dont hate me fo bein critical ye, i seen a lotta ya battles, this the weakest i read from u...it was aight but man i seen way better, structure was off, multis was too basic..but u still got this battle cordin ta elements (u an ill kid, this jus wasnt a hot battle)

Multis: Mosh
Structure: Falix
Vocab: Tie
Flow: Falix
Metas/sims: Mosh
Creativity: Tie
Worplday: None
Personals: Mosh
Punches: Mosh

Overall: Mosh.

[CapZ]

not da best mosh.. but i can tell u went ez on him

PUNCHES- M
PERSONALS- M
MULTIES- M
MET'S- TIE
VOCAB- M
ENJOYED- TIE
WORDPLAY- M
CREATIVE- TIE
FLOW/STRUCTURE- TIE
OVERALL- MOSH , Came more harder

`1`

[Inevitable]

Mosh wins 3-0 KO.

*CLOSED