Mosh Master VS Mc-Itty (1-4)

[Mc-Itty]

Rules:

5 bars - 10 lines MAX
First to 4 votes, 3-0 is KO
NO FLIPS
Both Mc's got 24 hours to spit
No Dickrydin, broken down votes please

[JD da MC]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=135728#post135728
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=135730#post135730

this just a warm up, not a rematch, only fire~comes~from~me/
bitch likes burning so much rubber, motto's "one tire~for~free"/
this ain't a cat fight, we both rap dawgs, but you should stay clear~of~windows/
cause civilians fear your face like flight attendants fear~of~Indos/
have you feelin' pain like shin~blows, but i keep above~the~belt~here/
everywhere i go, it reaks~of~clit, can tell you shove~and~dealt~here/
known as the chik who speaks~of~shit, i sit and watch your fellow~roast/
because i've burned you and your she~male like a crisp marshmallow~toast/
just killed this MC Itty~bitty, everything you've spit~is~shitty/
your rhymes are all over the place, it's just like sand, the shit~is~gritty/

[Mc-Itty]

SHIT-YA-WORTHLESS, why rap wen u don’t GET-THE-PURPOSE? Peeps call u ‘ill’ cuz ya exp is as long as YA-VERSE-IS!

This kid dyslexic he MISCOUNTS-HIS-BARS, still a ko even with a DISCOUNT-IN-PARTS watch as ma lyrics POUND-AT-HIS-HEART.

shit ima leave u with SPINAL-ECSTASY only time u cud win me b in a game of FINAL-FANTASY I leave trails of DIAGONAL-ENEMIES

I’m like yoda with lyrics gon RIP-THIS-FORCE-QUICK he ailing cuz his DICK-IS-FORE-SKINNED in yo relationship the ‘gal’ BRINGS-THE-TORCH-IN

Wen I’m done u gon be STRAPPED-WITH-PATCHES yo shits TRASHED-WITH-CLASHES kid u cudnt come hot even if u SPAT-WIT-MATCHES



broken down fo u retarded ones:
Bar 1 - he got short explanations.
Bar 2 - our last battle, he spat 10 bars when the limit was 5
Bar 3 - Final Fantasy is a game
Bar 4 - torch is dick
Bar 5 - clashed notes in music, distorted...


http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....6126#post136126 (showthread.php?p=136126#post136126)

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=135739#post135739


UPPIN BROKEN DOWN VOTES

[L_Nino]

MOSH MASTER:

this just a warm up, not a rematch, only fire~comes~from~me/
bitch likes burning so much rubber, motto's "one tire~for~free"/

^^^ Liked the concept but the "punch" was off...Weak opener..

this ain't a cat fight, we both rap dawgs, but you should stay clear~of~windows/
cause civilians fear your face like flight attendants fear~of~Indos/

^^^ Strizzle...

have you feelin' pain like shin~blows, but i keep above~the~belt~here/
everywhere i go, it reaks~of~clit, can tell you shove~and~dealt~here/

^^^ Ehhhh..

known as the chik who speaks~of~shit, i sit and watch your fellow~roast/
because i've burned you and your she~male like a crisp marshmallow~toast/

^^^ Not feelin' this..

just killed this MC Itty~bitty, everything you've spit~is~shitty/
your rhymes are all over the place, it's just like sand, the shit~is~gritty/

^^^ Coulda been alot better....Soft ender...



MC ITTY:


SHIT-YA-WORTHLESS, why rap wen u don’t GET-THE-PURPOSE? Peeps call u ‘ill’ cuz ya exp is as long as YA-VERSE-IS!

^^^ Good concept and personal...But I aint get the connection between bein' "ill" and why his exps is long...Shoulda switched 'ill' to a word that made more sense...

This kid dyslexic he MISCOUNTS-HIS-BARS, still a ko even with a DISCOUNT-IN-PARTS watch as ma lyrics POUND-AT-HIS-HEART.

^^^ Ehhh...

shit ima leave u with SPINAL-ECSTASY only time u cud win me b in a game of FINAL-FANTASY I leave trails of DIAGONAL-ENEMIES

^^^ Spinal ecstasy?...Liked the FF part...Very first/Last part was off..

I’m like yoda with lyrics gon RIP-THIS-FORCE-QUICK he ailing cuz his DICK-IS-FORE-SKINNED in yo relationship the ‘gal’ BRINGS-THE-TORCH-IN

^^^ Not feelin' this at all..

Wen I’m done u gon be STRAPPED-WITH-PATCHES yo shits TRASHED-WITH-CLASHES kid u cudnt come hot even if u SPAT-WIT-MATCHES

^^^ Played concept but its an ok bar..



Structure: TIE
Creativity: TIE
Enjoyable: TIE
Flow: TIE
Multis: I
Metas: TIE
Personal: I
Punches: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Overall: MC Itty...Close/weak battle..


VOTE: MC ITTY

[slimshadyLP]

MOSH MASTER

this just a warm up, not a rematch, only fire~comes~from~me/
bitch likes burning so much rubber, motto's "one tire~for~free"/

meh....

this ain't a cat fight, we both rap dawgs, but you should stay clear~of~windows/
cause civilians fear your face like flight attendants fear~of~Indos/

ok

have you feelin' pain like shin~blows, but i keep above~the~belt~here/
everywhere i go, it reaks~of~clit, can tell you shove~and~dealt~here/

no...

known as the chik who speaks~of~shit, i sit and watch your fellow~roast/
because i've burned you and your she~male like a crisp marshmallow~toast/

no...

just killed this MC Itty~bitty, everything you've spit~is~shitty/
your rhymes are all over the place, it's just like sand, the shit~is~gritty/

weak ender. straight.



MC ITTY

SHIT-YA-WORTHLESS, why rap wen u don’t GET-THE-PURPOSE? Peeps call u ‘ill’ cuz ya exp is as long as YA-VERSE-IS!

liked the concept used it wrong.

This kid dyslexic he MISCOUNTS-HIS-BARS, still a ko even with a DISCOUNT-IN-PARTS watch as ma lyrics POUND-AT-HIS-HEART.

ok

shit ima leave u with SPINAL-ECSTASY only time u cud win me b in a game of FINAL-FANTASY I leave trails of DIAGONAL-ENEMIES

first line is strange

I’m like yoda with lyrics gon RIP-THIS-FORCE-QUICK he ailing cuz his DICK-IS-FORE-SKINNED in yo relationship the ‘gal’ BRINGS-THE-TORCH-IN

not bad

Wen I’m done u gon be STRAPPED-WITH-PATCHES yo shits TRASHED-WITH-CLASHES kid u cudnt come hot even if u SPAT-WIT-MATCHES

better than his ender.



Structure: Tie
Creativity: I
Enjoyable: Tie
Flow: M
Multis: I
Metas: Tie
Personal: I
Punches: Tie
Wordplay: Tie
Overall: Itty

[OMC Bonez]

Mosh Master

this just a warm up, not a rematch, only fire~comes~from~me/
bitch likes burning so much rubber, motto's "one tire~for~free"/

Bad Opener

this ain't a cat fight, we both rap dawgs, but you should stay clear~of~windows/
cause civilians fear your face like flight attendants fear~of~Indos/

Kind of a weak punch, i think u could of done better on that bar

have you feelin' pain like shin~blows, but i keep above~the~belt~here/
everywhere i go, it reaks~of~clit, can tell you shove~and~dealt~here/

Not feelin it at all really, makes sense a bit but should never really rhyme
a word with the same word. Only works at curtain times if you wanted a
a strong punch

known as the chik who speaks~of~shit, i sit and watch your fellow~roast/
because i've burned you and your she~male like a crisp marshmallow~toast/

ehhhhhh? kind of a weak line there...i think u could of used a better
comparison.

just killed this MC Itty~bitty, everything you've spit~is~shitty/
your rhymes are all over the place, it's just like sand, the shit~is~gritty/

Bad ender, but the last bar i have to say was my favorite.

Mc-itty

SHIT-YA-WORTHLESS, why rap wen u don’t GET-THE-PURPOSE? Peeps call u ‘ill’ cuz ya exp is as long as YA-VERSE-IS!

I dont like the opening

This kid dyslexic he MISCOUNTS-HIS-BARS, still a ko even with a DISCOUNT-IN-PARTS watch as ma lyrics POUND-AT-HIS-HEART.

Now your trying a little to hard

shit ima leave u with SPINAL-ECSTASY only time u cud win me b in a game of FINAL-FANTASY I leave trails of DIAGONAL-ENEMIES

Wow...first time i heard someone use final fantasy in one of their bars
hmmmm i see some creativity here..

I’m like yoda with lyrics gon RIP-THIS-FORCE-QUICK he ailing cuz his DICK-IS-FORE-SKINNED in yo relationship the ‘gal’ BRINGS-THE-TORCH-IN

wtf...

Wen I’m done u gon be STRAPPED-WITH-PATCHES yo shits TRASHED-WITH-CLASHES kid u cudnt come hot even if u SPAT-WIT-MATCHES

no comment...

Structure: Mosh
Creativity: itty
Enjoyable: None
Flow: itty
Multis: None
Metas: itty
Personal: Mosh
Punches: Mosh
Wordplay: Mosh
Overall: Mosh

Comment ON this battle:......no comment..

[Inevitable]

2-1 to Itty, more votes needed. Up this again and its closed.

[CapZ]

DA BREAKDOWN

Mosh master's verse

this just a warm up, not a rematch, only fire~comes~from~me/
bitch likes burning so much rubber, motto's "one tire~for~free"/
``ehhhh``

this ain't a cat fight, we both rap dawgs, but you should stay clear~of~windows/
cause civilians fear your face like flight attendants fear~of~Indos/
``nope.... i aint feelin it.. ur tryin TO FORCE YA MULTIES HOMIE``

have you feelin' pain like shin~blows, but i keep above~the~belt~here/
everywhere i go, it reaks~of~clit, can tell you shove~and~dealt~here/
``force... where ya punches??``

known as the chik who speaks~of~shit, i sit and watch your fellow~roast/
because i've burned you and your she~male like a crisp marshmallow~toast/
``ehhhhh FILLER``

just killed this MC Itty~bitty, everything you've spit~is~shitty/
your rhymes are all over the place, it's just like sand, the shit~is~gritty/
``could've been mo betta VERY WEAK ENDER``

MC-Itty's Verse

SHIT-YA-WORTHLESS, why rap wen u don’t GET-THE-PURPOSE? Peeps call u ‘ill’ cuz ya exp is as long as YA-VERSE-IS!
``ok concept but could've came harder , better then mosh's opener``

This kid dyslexic he MISCOUNTS-HIS-BARS, still a ko even with a DISCOUNT-IN-PARTS watch as ma lyrics POUND-AT-HIS-HEART.
``ok``

shit ima leave u with SPINAL-ECSTASY only time u cud win me b in a game of FINAL-FANTASY I leave trails of DIAGONAL-ENEMIES
``ehhhh``

I’m like yoda with lyrics gon RIP-THIS-FORCE-QUICK he ailing cuz his DICK-IS-FORE-SKINNED in yo relationship the ‘gal’ BRINGS-THE-TORCH-IN
``it's ight``

Wen I’m done u gon be STRAPPED-WITH-PATCHES yo shits TRASHED-WITH-CLASHES kid u cudnt come hot even if u SPAT-WIT-MATCHES
``played n could've been better fo ender``

PUNCHES- TIE
PERSONALS-TIE
MULTIES-MC
METS-Tie
ENJOYED-TIE
CREATIVE-MC
WORDPLAY- TIE
STRUCTURE- MOSH
FLOW-TIE
OVERALL- MC-ITTY in cat's

SHIT'S VERY COMPLEX IN PART IGHT BATTLE close...

`1`

[Inevitable]

3-1 to Itty.

[AJC90]

weak battle i say

Structure: TIE
Creativity: TIE
Enjoyable: TIE
Flow: TIE
Multis: mc
Metas: TIE
Personal:mc
Punches: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Overall: MC Itty...Close/weak battle..

[Inevitable]

Falix Im sick of you freeposting in every battle thread. Mosh dont need to do that, and its against the rules.

Itty wins 4-1.

*CLOSED