Falix vs Mosh Master (0-3 KO)

[Falix]

all those rules we usually use
no max bars or lines
EXPLAINED VOTES ONLY please

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11170
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11247
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this battle is a fuckin waste of time
this kid thot that "stealing second base" was a crime
what do u know about Moshin, when ya live in Australia
let me show u about breathin, when ya lungs are failin ya
cuz im nailin ya, wit hard hits inscribed in black pin grenades
ur rhymes are dull as plastic knives, mine are sharpened blades
this really isnt a battle, this is a slaughter
ur ship is sunk, but im like Pams breasts, above in the water
i can think and talk and spit some bezerk and flawless wicked shit
im legit, take my brain and split it, im still mountain, ur just a pit
u dont compare, dont try, "i suck" is what should be in ur descripttion
this kids blind, even the windows in his house have a prescrition
i won this battle, u cant beat me, im too superb
ur "small"time, could prolly commit suicide off a curb
ur stupid if u retataliate, ur too dumb to get into a college
i write rhymes and commit crimes, forensic science couldnt acknowlegde
untill u put ur post up im takin ur soul, its a deposit,
and till then i'll remain as the monster in ur closet

[JD da MC]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=135600#post135600
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=135602#post135602

only way this kid spit dirty if he just Fa"Lix"~my~shoes/
better bring double your "magic" cause i make my "tricks"~in~twos/
you come as a surprise, cause you already cut to "Syze"/
because that guy had beat you simply like a Cheeseburger and fries*/
no matter how hard Falix tries, he ain't gon' stand a chance against me/
you think you're rhymes are phat? well i'ma bring my spits immensely/
have this verse hit you intensely, like a toke straight to your brain~waves/
rip you up, i'm in a frenzy, i need more blood than any vein~craves/
the only thing i read in that verse is "i like rippin'~and~rappin'"/
"i'm a fake G, check my gun out, it makes sounds clickin'~and~clapping"/
i get to strippin'~and~strappin' like a fucking~horny~dyke/
you're "punches" put me to sleep, place done your fucking~corny~mic/
this is a David v. Goliath thing, the younger one prevails/
i may be short but i deliver punches just like mails/
your rhymes are used up constantly like a kitchen~utensil/
i rip this faggot up so hard, it makes stitchin'~essential/
i feed this dog a bone and have the old man rolling~home/
you ain't gon' pick up green in this even though u're "Rolling~Stone"**/

*a McDonalds TV ad in australia, saying how life is complicated, but a cheeseburger is a simple thing
**"a rolling stone gathers no moss", that's a saying, but a Rolling Stone is someone really famous, and green represents the money and the moss

alright, votes

[slimshadyLP]

falix


this battle is a fuckin waste of time
this kid thot that "stealing second base" was a crime

pretty good

what do u know about Moshin, when ya live in Australia
let me show u about breathin, when ya lungs are failin ya
cuz im nailin ya, wit hard hits inscribed in black pin grenades
ur rhymes are dull as plastic knives, mine are sharpened blades

straight

this really isnt a battle, this is a slaughter
ur ship is sunk, but im like Pams breasts, above in the water

meh...

i can think and talk and spit some bezerk and flawless wicked shit
im legit, take my brain and split it, im still mountain, ur just a pit

ending was strange

u dont compare, dont try, "i suck" is what should be in ur descripttion
this kids blind, even the windows in his house have a prescrition

wtf?

i won this battle, u cant beat me, im too superb
ur "small"time, could prolly commit suicide off a curb

ok

ur stupid if u retataliate, ur too dumb to get into a college
i write rhymes and commit crimes, forensic science couldnt acknowlegde
untill u put ur post up im takin ur soul, its a deposit,
and till then i'll remain as the monster in ur closet
weak closer


mosh

only way this kid spit dirty if he just Fa"Lix"~my~shoes/
better bring double your "magic" cause i make my "tricks"~in~twos/

i liked the first line. but wasnt that sort of L nino's line?

you come as a surprise, cause you already cut to "Syze"/
because that guy had beat you simply like a Cheeseburger and fries*/

good personal first line

no matter how hard Falix tries, he ain't gon' stand a chance against me/
you think you're rhymes are phat? well i'ma bring my spits immensely/

nuttin special

have this verse hit you intensely, like a toke straight to your brain~waves/
rip you up, i'm in a frenzy, i need more blood than any vein~craves/

descent

the only thing i read in that verse is "i like rippin'~and~rappin'"/
"i'm a fake G, check my gun out, it makes sounds clickin'~and~clapping"/

meh...

i get to strippin'~and~strappin' like a fucking~horny~dyke/
you're "punches" put me to sleep, place done your fucking~corny~mic/

meh...

this is a David v. Goliath thing, the younger one prevails/
i may be short but i deliver punches just like mails/

pretty good

your rhymes are used up constantly like a kitchen~utensil/
i rip this faggot up so hard, it makes stitchin'~essential/

kool

i feed this dog a bone and have the old man rolling~home/
you ain't gon' pick up green in this even though u're "Rolling~Stone"**/

ok. better than his ender.


Consistency/Structure: M
Creativity: tie
Enjoyable: M
Flow: F
Metaphors: tie
Multies: tie
Personal: M
Punches: M
Vocabulary: -
Wordplay: M
Overall: Moshmaster wins.

[Inevitable]

1-0 Mosh.

[Inevitable]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11430

2 strikes, 1 to go....

[-Unfaded-]

Consistency/Structure: M
Creativity: tie
Enjoyable: M
Flow: F
Metaphors: tie
Multies: tie
Personal: M
Punches: M
Vocabulary: none
Wordplay: M
Overall: Moshmaster



falix


this battle is a fuckin waste of time
this kid thot that "stealing second base" was a crime

coo.....but typical...

what do u know about Moshin, when ya live in Australia
let me show u about breathin, when ya lungs are failin ya
cuz im nailin ya, wit hard hits inscribed in black pin grenades
ur rhymes are dull as plastic knives, mine are sharpened blades

real....

this really isnt a battle, this is a slaughter
ur ship is sunk, but im like Pams breasts, above in the water

ughhh

i can think and talk and spit some bezerk and flawless wicked shit
im legit, take my brain and split it, im still mountain, ur just a pit

couldve improved it....

u dont compare, dont try, "i suck" is what should be in ur descripttion
this kids blind, even the windows in his house have a prescrition

wow....

i won this battle, u cant beat me, im too superb
ur "small"time, could prolly commit suicide off a curb

ok

ur stupid if u retataliate, ur too dumb to get into a college
i write rhymes and commit crimes, forensic science couldnt acknowlegde
untill u put ur post up im takin ur soul, its a deposit,
and till then i'll remain as the monster in ur closet

....agreed with slim:weak closer


mosh

only way this kid spit dirty if he just Fa"Lix"~my~shoes/
better bring double your "magic" cause i make my "tricks"~in~twos/

good line althought idea seemed to be L NINOS

you come as a surprise, cause you already cut to "Syze"/
because that guy had beat you simply like a Cheeseburger and fries*/

good personal first line

no matter how hard Falix tries, he ain't gon' stand a chance against me/
you think you're rhymes are phat? well i'ma bring my spits immensely/

iite....

have this verse hit you intensely, like a toke straight to your brain~waves/
rip you up, i'm in a frenzy, i need more blood than any vein~craves/

descent

the only thing i read in that verse is "i like rippin'~and~rappin'"/
"i'm a fake G, check my gun out, it makes sounds clickin'~and~clapping"/

iiite

i get to strippin'~and~strappin' like a fucking~horny~dyke/
you're "punches" put me to sleep, place done your fucking~corny~mic/

.....

this is a David v. Goliath thing, the younger one prevails/
i may be short but i deliver punches just like mails/

pretty good

your rhymes are used up constantly like a kitchen~utensil/
i rip this faggot up so hard, it makes stitchin'~essential/

good

i feed this dog a bone and have the old man rolling~home/
you ain't gon' pick up green in this even though u're "Rolling~Stone"**/

your end beats falix's end...lol that dusnt sound rite huh? lol

[4PLAY]

I think mosh did come harder but still i think he could have came up with alot better punches in this battle .

Falix i liked the pam anderson line but that didn' make up for the rest of ur verse .

VOTE :MOSH

[Inevitable]

Mosh wins 3-0 KO. Itty and TzVe Em read the rules.

*CLOSED