Mc Itty VS. Osiris (3-0 KO)

[osiris]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=135256#post135256
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11366


Never battled a female before so I’ma this real sweet

Turning Itty around, i now caress the nape of her neck, the satiny skin of her back, the full cheeks of her bottom, which I half-opened to tickle gently the furrow which separated them and the sweet little rosette hidden in this cleft; my caresses became more rapid, more insistent, colouring her pretty buttocks pink with my manipulations.

here goes

I got the magic stick
Forget this rap shit & suck on this here dick
I bring my prick to bear against the lips of ur throbbing
Excited cunt I gently force it in
I’ma deprive u of ur upper garments
Force ur drawers down your legs
Remove the last defence to ya cunt
Eyes dilated with terror
And convulsively heaving bosom
Utter inarticulate cries
Half panting by ur emotions and panting under ur exertions

[Mc-Itty]

Ma links:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=135296#post135296
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11290

The Rules:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11378

The Callout:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11366

The shit das gon knock u the fuck out: (FREESTYLE)

Homo-Bitch thinking he Knows-Shit jus Talks-Dick. Tryin-ta Play Gangsta wtf u Lock+Load? Payin guys an fuckin till yo cock-explodes?

This punk worships shit i spit specially THIS-CRITISISM killin this bitch WIT-LYRICISM. Ma talents MEANT-TA-ME fuck'd u grow them balls ta STEP-TA-ME?

Bitch I don’t give a fuck if u don’t LIKE-ME. Can u match ma rap skills? Shit aint LIKELY. Cudnt giv a fuck-less, Cunt cudnt EVA-BE a Success.

I’ll give ya 2 last SHITS-TA-WRITE yo will an yo last WHISPER-ON-DIS-MIC.




das all yo worth, a fuckin free man, shits less than 5 bars.

[L_Nino]

OSIRIS:

I got the magic stick
Forget this rap shit & suck on this here dick

^^^ Simple...

I bring my prick to bear against the lips of ur throbbing
Excited cunt I gently force it in

^^^ Ehhh...

I’ma deprive u of ur upper garments
Force ur drawers down your legs
Remove the last defence to ya cunt
Eyes dilated with terror
And convulsively heaving bosom
Utter inarticulate cries
Half panting by ur emotions and panting under ur exertions


^^^ It all pretty much sounds the same, most creative part was prolly the intro....Work on ya punches/personals/wordplay/metas/multis/English...Get cha weight up...




MC-ITTY:

Homo-Bitch thinking he Knows-Shit jus Talks-Dick. Tryin-ta Play Gangsta wtf u Lock+Load? Payin guys an fuckin till yo cock-explodes?

^^^ Set was ok but no punch?...Weak bar...

This punk worships shit i spit specially THIS-CRITISISM killin this bitch WIT-LYRICISM. Ma talents MEANT-TA-ME fuck'd u grow them balls ta STEP-TA-ME?

^^^ Aint really feelin' this bar...Flow was off too..

Bitch I don’t give a fuck if u don’t LIKE-ME. Can u match ma rap skills? Shit aint LIKELY. Cudnt giv a fuck-less, Cunt cudnt EVA-BE a Success.

^^^ Basic...

I’ll give ya 2 last SHITS-TA-WRITE yo will an yo last WHISPER-ON-DIS-MIC.

^^^ Soft ender...



Structure: TIE
Creativity: TIE
Flow: MC...O's barely rhymed..
Punches: TIE
Personals: TIE
Metas: TIE
Multis: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Overall: MC Itty...Close/weak battle..


VOTE: MC ITTY

[CapZ]

PUNCHES- MC WAS MO DIRECT NOT AS HARD THO
PERSONALS- TIE
MULTIES- MC
MET'S- MC
VOCAB- TIE
FLOW- TIE
CREATIVE- MC
ENJOYED- MC
WORDPLAY- MC
STRUCTURE- TIE

OVERALL- MC-Itty took this O's Verse was just to BASIC N Punches was weak still ok battle

`1`

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

Osiris

I got the magic stick
Forget this rap shit & suck on this here dick

weak opener.....

I bring my prick to bear against the lips of ur throbbing
Excited cunt I gently force it in

ummmm........bad

I’ma deprive u of ur upper garments
Force ur drawers down your legs

not feelin dis......no ryhme....

Remove the last defence to ya cunt
Eyes dilated with terror

same

And convulsively heaving bosom
Utter inarticulate cries
Half panting by ur emotions and panting under ur exertions

not really a battle verse.......yo verse was choppy.....simple......work on yo punches....wordplay.....multis...metas...flow....a nd structure.....elavate



MC Itty

Homo-Bitch thinking he Knows-Shit jus Talks-Dick. Tryin-ta Play Gangsta wtf u Lock+Load? Payin guys an fuckin till yo cock-explodes?

not bad opener

This punk worships shit i spit specially THIS-CRITISISM killin this bitch WIT-LYRICISM. Ma talents MEANT-TA-ME fuck'd u grow them balls ta STEP-TA-ME?

liked dis.......

Bitch I don’t give a fuck if u don’t LIKE-ME. Can u match ma rap skills? Shit aint LIKELY. Cudnt giv a fuck-less, Cunt cudnt EVA-BE a Success.

ummmm.......seems to be a lil played

I’ll give ya 2 last SHITS-TA-WRITE yo will an yo last WHISPER-ON-DIS-MIC.

nice outro.....

Structure: neither
Creativity: Both
Flow: Mc
Punches: Mc......she actually had punches
Personals: Mc
Metas: Mc
Multis: Mc
Wordplay: Mc
Overall: Mc

My Vote:::: MC Itty.....she had punches.....but still a very weak battle

[Inevitable]

MC Itty wins 3-0 KO.

*CLOSED