Capz vs. Quizzez (3-0 KO)

[holocoust]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=133425#post133425
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=133426#post133426

rules: 5-25 lines and all the other rules that apply to every one


i'll take the first verse my flow will disperse a curse
that makes capz start to hurt
i stomp you in my white converse
i write you have to rewind and rehearse
your witnessin a demon at work
im steaming these words
while your censored
i dont think you concur
you make me feel awkward and angered
your a coward you bastard
to dumb to fuckin answer a question
i'll have you murdered in less than a second
i'll have you orphaned and auctioned
gunned down
so have caution
i'm fastened im arsonned
see rap is an art
and i've mastered the sport
i'll tear you apart
while im safe in a fort
i'll see you in court
i mean a deadly escort
back into hell
you can hear satins bells
as you excel down this well farwell so long
your better off gone
im the one to follow
the online icon
i give off light until my mic is gone!!!!!!

lets see wat you got homeboy

[CapZ]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=133495#post133495
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11008
ok....im only gonna drop 5 bars cuz 25 lines?? nehhh lol besides no sweetin dis
NO BEEF

``Key'd up``
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``Dirty Getin In Ya Skin-Bitch N Checkin Ya Wack Verse I Know Ima Win-Dis!`` Yup!
``U's No Fuckin 'Test' Kid Cuz Ya Name I Will 'Pass It' Like Takin EZ Quizzes!!`` 1 name^lol
``Im Slashin-Dudes N Quiz Like Fuckin 'Car Test Dummies' Always Crashin-Fool!``
``Dashin-Kool??? Naw......N I'll Throw A 'Fat Ass On Ya' Now Im Smashin-You!!`` 2 LOL
``N Did I Even Bother Wastin Ma Free Time On U?Nope Cuz Yo-Its-Keyd!!``
``Yo Plz Who Told Ya How Ta Make A 'Bar?' Cuz Dat Shit Looks Like Poetry!!!`` 3 lol
``CapZ @ It Again N U Jus Dumb Like 'Jokers' Mannn Ya Shit Only Makes Me Laugh!``
``Whats Dat? U Winin? Na Cuz Only Peeps Dat Gona 'Vote Fo U' Fuckin Suck In Rap!!`` 4 lol
``I'll Toss Dis Lame Cuz I Already Murked U N Yo Bitch Who Cares So-Ya-Loss!!``
``N Ur Dead Pussy Like What Da Fuckin 'Germens Did Ta Da Jews' In Da Holocaust!!!`` ^^
Damn...... EZ!


``NEX!!``

`1`

[slimshadyLP]

Holocaust

i'll take the first verse my flow will disperse a curse
that makes capz start to hurt
weak. and stolen.

i stomp you in my white converse
i write you have to rewind and rehearse
weak.

your witnessin a demon at work
im steaming these words
still weak but better.

while your censored
i dont think you concur
no. hell no.

you make me feel awkward and angered
your a coward you bastard
nagered line was whack. 2nd was whack but atleast its a form of punchline.

to dumb to fuckin answer a question
i'll have you murdered in less than a second
One ya best lines. still not the best.

i'll have you orphaned and auctioned
gunned down
so have caution
i'm fastened im arsonned
no

see rap is an art
and i've mastered the sport
i'll tear you apart
while im safe in a fort
i'll see you in court
i mean a deadly escort
weak

back into hell
you can hear satins bells
as you excel down this well farwell so long
your better off gone
im the one to follow
the online icon
i give off light until my mic is gone!!!!!!
no. bad closer.

^^^Practice man. get sum multies learn to write it in a better format and try to use vocab if you can. It seems like ur just sqeezin wurds in just cuz ya can.

CAPZ

Dirty Getin In Ya Skin-Bitch N Checkin Ya Wack Verse I Know Ima Win-Dis!`` Yup!
``U's No Fuckin 'Test' Kid Cuz Ya Name I Will 'Pass It' Like Takin EZ Quizzes!!`` 1 name^lol
Descent. nuthin speacial.

``Im Slashin-Dudes N Quiz Like Fuckin 'Car Test Dummies' Always Crashin-Fool!``
``Dashin-Kool??? Naw......N I'll Throw A 'Fat Ass On Ya' Now Im Smashin-You!!`` 2 LOL
meh. didnt like it.

``N Did I Even Bother Wastin Ma Free Time On U?Nope Cuz Yo-Its-Keyd!!``
``Yo Plz Who Told Ya How Ta Make A 'Bar?' Cuz Dat Shit Looks Like Poetry!!!`` 3 lol
Decsent

``CapZ @ It Again N U Jus Dumb Like 'Jokers' Mannn Ya Shit Only Makes Me Laugh!``
``Whats Dat? U Winin? Na Cuz Only Peeps Dat Gona 'Vote Fo U' Fuckin Suck In Rap!!`` 4 lol
Lol like the last line.

``I'll Toss Dis Lame Cuz I Already Murked U N Yo Bitch Who Cares So-Ya-Loss!!``
``N Ur Dead Pussy Like What Da Fuckin 'Germens Did Ta Da Jews' In Da Holocaust!!!``
Cud be used better but descent ender.



Creativity: C
Enjoyable: C
Flow: H
Metaphors: C
Multies: tie
Personal: C
Punches: C
Vocabulary: H
Wordplay: C
Overall: Capz wins. Nice job. I kno it wasnt ya best.

Yo choice to count it or not.

[Falix]

Creativity: C
Enjoyable: C
Flow: C
Metaphors: C
Multies: --
Personal: C
Punches: C
Vocabulary:--
Wordplay: C
Overall: Capz really wasnt feelin holocaust at all

[mattSMD]

Holocaust

i'll take the first verse my flow will disperse a curse
that makes capz start to hurt
weak opener

i stomp you in my white converse
i write you have to rewind and rehearse
you wear converse?! lol. ok line i guess

your witnessin a demon at work
im steaming these words
while your censored
i dont think you concur
poor

you make me feel awkward and angered
your a coward you bastard
very poor

to dumb to fuckin answer a question
i'll have you murdered in less than a second
what question? weak

i'll have you orphaned and auctioned
gunned down
so have caution
i'm fastened im arsonned
na

see rap is an art
and i've mastered the sport
i'll tear you apart
while im safe in a fort
i'll see you in court
i mean a deadly escort
ok better than most of your bars

back into hell
you can hear satins bells
as you excel down this well farwell so long
your better off gone
im the one to follow
the online icon
i give off light until my mic is gone!!!!!!
meh....


CAPZ

Dirty Getin In Ya Skin-Bitch N Checkin Ya Wack Verse I Know Ima Win-Dis!`` Yup!
``U's No Fuckin 'Test' Kid Cuz Ya Name I Will 'Pass It' Like Takin EZ Quizzes!!`` 1 name^lol
weak opener but better than his^

``Im Slashin-Dudes N Quiz Like Fuckin 'Car Test Dummies' Always Crashin-Fool!``
``Dashin-Kool??? Naw......N I'll Throw A 'Fat Ass On Ya' Now Im Smashin-You!!`` 2 LOL
ok...

``N Did I Even Bother Wastin Ma Free Time On U?Nope Cuz Yo-Its-Keyd!!``
``Yo Plz Who Told Ya How Ta Make A 'Bar?' Cuz Dat Shit Looks Like Poetry!!!`` 3 lol
good
``CapZ @ It Again N U Jus Dumb Like 'Jokers' Mannn Ya Shit Only Makes Me Laugh!``
``Whats Dat? U Winin? Na Cuz Only Peeps Dat Gona 'Vote Fo U' Fuckin Suck In Rap!!`` 4 lol
ok
``I'll Toss Dis Lame Cuz I Already Murked U N Yo Bitch Who Cares So-Ya-Loss!!``
``N Ur Dead Pussy Like What Da Fuckin 'Germens Did Ta Da Jews' In Da Holocaust!!!``
best line. fairly strong closer

capz didnt even try and he didnt have to. he take it on all cats

[Inevitable]

Capz wins 3-0 KO.

*CLOSED