mako vs. CapZ (4-5)

[mako]

Here's the rules:

1 round
5 Bars=10 Lines to 8 bars=16 Lines
3 votes to 0 is a k.o...First to 5 votes...
3 k.o.,5 t.k.o.
no dickridin', no bitin

My Links:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10784&page=2
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10535&page=2

[mako]

You bout to hit a train like the bears-backer, and miss the big screen like scared-actors/
after my blades "crack" your face larger than joe rogan on "fear-factor"//
so don't front like you've got hammers to clap, becuz if we meet in the streets i'd 'eat CapZ dogs like “animal snacks”/
as a matter o'fact, it'll cost your life , cuz ya'll couldn't “ride ova two wheels of steel” on 'top of bikes'//
its like great danes-on-elfs and they get “Torn-to-Pieces” and i'll get more- facetious the way i leave them like “Ground Beef” just “Raw-and-Speechless”/
that's how i “dead-the-talkin” like i put
“death-in-your-mouth” in war-CapZ future is bleak-and..i'ma give you a “Purpose to be Scared” like a “Horror-Thesis”//
u tellin me dat gump-is-da-best? 1 loss I m in a *"empire state" battling me iz a "jump-to-your-deaths"/
if a cat-hating I m “slumping-em-next”... “tie your dawgs up like a “pair-a-boots”, “rip u a part” w/o “tearing-roots”, becuz **'goin sky diving' iz da only tyme “CapZ-shoots”//
my “game's-top-shelf” like “spring-board-dunks” while you “lames-catch-welts” when my beams-on-chumps and when you die..you're “Destined to be Alone” wit a “Name-like-CapZ”/
dog your “pain's-not-felt” like “Paralyzed-Gun-Victims”, “CapZ-get-done-wishing” becuz I’m “winning Hands-Down” and you “Hit-Grounds” like your “Canes-Not-Felt”//
my Block-Is-***Hot the Hood-Is-with-The-Devil like "malfunctioned-magnets"-..u "wouldnt-grip-the-metal"/
need more iron in ya BLOOD..ill squirt "BulletZ-in-Your-VesselZ"//
bringing ya clique el' get cha' MarkZ-spilled-on-their-faceZ
RUSH-CapZ*.."Spark-steel-With-Impatience"/
getting high on my punchlines? u flipping-on-the-*StreetZ* is like "CartwheelZ-on-the-PavementZ"//

K.O. Bar
allow me to send CapZ to the “reaper-at-wunce”, give u n your man-a-tip if i pack a banana-clip “im skeetin-a-bunch”, in da backs where im keeping-CapZ- so like '****narcoleptic in pools “u’ll be 'sleepin-in-a-TrunkZ”/(da police'll be sweepin fa MonthZ!)//

* empire state as in im in da state of makin a empire
** how a sky diver takes pictures(photographs) they click and shoot
*** (like CapZ avatar) flame-on
**** narcoleptic-A disorder characterized by sudden and uncontrollable, though often brief, attacks of deep sleep, sometimes accompanied by paralysis and hallucinations.

[CapZ]

Key'd Up...
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``C'mon Mako Ya Lyrics Like 'Science Fiction' Shits Jus Fake-Yo!``
``I Shake-Hos Like U, N Ma Punches Will Drop U With Only 1 KO!!`` 1
``Ye......I Take-Votes...N Like 'Kids Doin Drugs' Son Jus Say-No!!``
``Dis Gay-Blows N I'll Move Da 'Audience' Cuz Ma Spits Make-O's!!`` [Ohhh] Mako 2
``N Ma 'Actions' Jus Skip-Verbs.....N Im Well Ready Ta Rip-Herbs!``
``Word..Ima Do What Ya Do So Like Ya Avi I'll Jus Flip U Da Bird!!`` 3 look @ his avi lol
``Yo U Betta Not B Frontin Cuz I'll Get Ya 'Mouth' So Best Believe U'll B Shuttin!``
``N Dude Mus B Runnin......Cuz Jus Look At His 'Sig' His 'Record' Means Nuttin!!`` 4 LOL
``Ima Damage Ya 'Thoughtz' So Now Who Thinks-Slow? Mako
Can Wish Da 'Sky' Is 'Water' But He Still Cant Drink-Flows! N Dis
Bitch Gona Have Mo 'Hits' Den 'Titanic’ Cuz He'll Sink-Blows!!`` 5
```O'hhh....N 'M' Aint Eva Gona Have 'A's N Ks' If He Bought-A-Gat!!`` [M A K O...Aks]
``CapZ Da Name N Dunno Y Dis Fag Spitin He Prolly Thought-Gays-Rap!!' NOPE! 6 lol
``I'll-Beat-U N Plz Chump U 'Wuz Told Ta Suck' So I Can Tell-He-Blows!``
``N I Thought I Wuz Battlin U But U Tryin Ta Have A 'Structure' Like L Nino!`` Damn 7
``Man Dude U Cant Spit N If U Actully 'Won Battles' I Bet Dey Wuz Lame-Wins-Bitch!``
``N C'mon Only Reason Y Peeps Even Readin Ya Verse Cuz Ma Fuckin Name-In-It!!!`` 8 True LOL


EZ!!!


`1`

[Zac the Ripper]

The Breakdown:

mako:

You bout to hit a train like the bears-backer, and miss the big screen like scared-actors/
after my blades "crack" your face larger than joe rogan on "fear-factor"//

decent opener... something tells me you could have done better.

so don't front like you've got hammers to clap, becuz if we meet in the streets i'd 'eat CapZ dogs like “animal snacks”/
as a matter o'fact, it'll cost your life , cuz ya'll couldn't “ride ova two wheels of steel” on 'top of bikes'//

good

its like great danes-on-elfs and they get “Torn-to-Pieces” and i'll get more- facetious the way i leave them like “Ground Beef” just “Raw-and-Speechless”/
that's how i “dead-the-talkin” like i put
“death-in-your-mouth” in war-CapZ future is bleak-and..i'ma give you a “Purpose to be Scared” like a “Horror-Thesis”//

nice multies

u tellin me dat gump-is-da-best? 1 loss I m in a *"empire state" battling me iz a "jump-to-your-deaths"/
if a cat-hating I m “slumping-em-next”... “tie your dawgs up like a “pair-a-boots”, “rip u a part” w/o “tearing-roots”, becuz **'goin sky diving' iz da only tyme “CapZ-
shoots”//

okay.

my “game's-top-shelf” like “spring-board-dunks” while you “lames-catch-welts” when my beams-on-chumps and when you die..you're “Destined to be Alone” wit a “Name-like-CapZ”/
dog your “pain's-not-felt” like “Paralyzed-Gun-Victims”, “CapZ-get-done-wishing” becuz I’m “winning Hands-Down” and you “Hit-Grounds” like your “Canes-Not-Felt”//
my Block-Is-***Hot the Hood-Is-with-The-Devil like "malfunctioned-magnets"-..u "wouldnt-grip-the-metal"/
need more iron in ya BLOOD..ill squirt "BulletZ-in-Your-VesselZ"//

good

bringing ya clique el' get cha' MarkZ-spilled-on-their-faceZ
RUSH-CapZ*.."Spark-steel-With-Impatience"/
getting high on my punchlines? u flipping-on-the-*StreetZ* is like "CartwheelZ-on-the-PavementZ"//

good

allow me to send CapZ to the “reaper-at-wunce”, give u n your man-a-tip if i pack a banana-clip “im skeetin-a-bunch”, in da backs where im keeping-CapZ- so like '****narcoleptic in pools “u’ll be 'sleepin-in-a-TrunkZ”/(da police'll be sweepin fa MonthZ!)//

good for a normal bar... not really for an ender...

CapZ:

C'mon Mako Ya Lyrics Like 'Science Fiction' Shits Jus Fake-Yo!/
I Shake-Hos Like U, N Ma Punches Will Drop U With Only 1 KO!!/

good opener... liked yours better.

Ye......I Take-Votes...N Like 'Kids Doin Drugs' Son Jus Say-No!!/
Dis Gay-Blows N I'll Move Da 'Audience' Cuz Ma Spits Make-O's!!/

lol

N Ma 'Actions' Jus Skip-Verbs.....N Im Well Ready Ta Rip-Herbs!/
Word..Ima Do What Ya Do So Like Ya Avi I'll Jus Flip U Da Bird!!/

good

Yo U Betta Not B Frontin Cuz I'll Get Ya 'Mouth' So Best Believe U'll B Shuttin!/
N Dude Mus B Runnin......Cuz Jus Look At His 'Sig' His 'Record' Means Nuttin!!/

good

Ima Damage Ya 'Thoughtz' So Now Who Thinks-Slow? /
Can Wish Da 'Sky' Is 'Water' But He Still Cant Drink-Flows!/
Bitch Gona Have Mo 'Hits' Den 'Titanic’ Cuz He'll Sink-Blows!!/

lol

O'hhh....N 'M' Aint Eva Gona Have 'A's N Ks' If He Bought-A-Gat!!/
CapZ Da Name N Dunno Y Dis Fag Spitin He Prolly Thought-Gays-Rap!!/

LOL

I'll-Beat-U N Plz Chump U 'Wuz Told Ta Suck' So I Can Tell-He-Blows!/
N I Thought I Wuz Battlin U But U Tryin Ta Have A 'Structure' Like L Nino!/

good.

Man Dude U Cant Spit N If U Actully 'Won Battles' I Bet Dey Wuz Lame-Wins-Bitch!/
N C'mon Only Reason Y Peeps Even Readin Ya Verse Cuz Ma Fuckin Name-In-It!!!/

awesome ender.

Final Thoughts:

mako: dude, you just didn't hit hard enough. and you may wanna work on enders.

CapZ: dude, this is your best by far (except for our battle lol...) keep it up. and try to make full words please. it gives me a headache trying to read things that way.

The Categories:

Consistency/Structure: CapZ
Creativity: CapZ
Enjoyable: CapZ
Flow: mako
Metaphors: CapZ
Multies: CapZ
Personal: CapZ
Punches: CapZ
Vocabulary: mako (only cause he used full words)
Wordplay: tie
Overall: CapZ

the vote:

CAPZ

[Inevitable]

1-0 to Capz, uppin for more votes.

[RipShit]

The Categories:

Consistency/Structure: Capz
Creativity: Mako
Enjoyable: Capz
Flow: Mako
Metaphors: Mako
Multies: Mako
Personal: Capz
Punches: Mako
Vocabulary: Mako
Wordplay: Mako
Overall: Mako

My vote goes to Mako, he strung together so many punches and multies, it basically overpowered Capz verse just by the sheer number. Each one was delivered well though, and I don't know what you on about Zac, but Mako's punches definitely hit hard... maybe you just didn't understand them. Capz had some good lines, the one about makin Ohs, and the ender was on point, but Mako took it. Good battle to the both of you.

[kaspir]

Consistency/Structure: capz
Creativity: mako
Enjoyable: mako
Flow: mako
Metaphors: both
Multies: mako
Personal: capz
Punches: mako
Vocabulary: mako
Wordplay: capz
Overall: damn that was a close battle but my vote goes to mako

[a.i.d.s.]

Consistency/Structure: capz
Creativity: mako
Enjoyable: mako
Flow: mako
Metaphors: capz
Multies: mako
Personal: capz
Punches: mako
Vocabulary: mako
Wordplay: capz
Overall: mako

[TzVe Em]

Consistency/Structure: capz
Creativity: capz
Enjoyable: capz
Flow: mako
Metaphors: capz
Multies: mako
Personal: capz
Punches: mako
Vocabulary: capz
Wordplay: capz
Overall: capz


gj

[raider]

Consistency/Structure: capz
Creativity: mako
Enjoyable: mako
Flow: mako
Metaphors: capz
Multies: mako
Personal: capz
Punches: mako
Vocabulary: mako
Wordplay: mako
Overall: mako

[chappy]

MAKO:
You bout to hit a train like the bears-backer, and miss the big screen like scared-actors/
after my blades "crack" your face larger than joe rogan on "fear-factor"//

^^Not feelin this...weak opener

so don't front like you've got hammers to clap, becuz if we meet in the streets i'd 'eat CapZ dogs like “animal snacks”/
as a matter o'fact, it'll cost your life , cuz ya'll couldn't “ride ova two wheels of steel” on 'top of bikes'//

^^Diggin the 1st line...

its like great danes-on-elfs and they get “Torn-to-Pieces” and i'll get more- facetious the way i leave them like “Ground Beef” just “Raw-and-Speechless”/
that's how i “dead-the-talkin” like i put
“death-in-your-mouth” in war-CapZ future is bleak-and..i'ma give you a “Purpose to be Scared” like a “Horror-Thesis”//

^^This was OK

u tellin me dat gump-is-da-best? 1 loss I m in a *"empire state" battling me iz a "jump-to-your-deaths"/
if a cat-hating I m “slumping-em-next”... “tie your dawgs up like a “pair-a-boots”, “rip u a part” w/o “tearing-roots”, becuz **'goin sky diving' iz da only tyme “CapZ-shoots”//

^^Aight

my “game's-top-shelf” like “spring-board-dunks” while you “lames-catch-welts” when my beams-on-chumps and when you die..you're “Destined to be Alone” wit a “Name-like-CapZ”/
dog your “pain's-not-felt” like “Paralyzed-Gun-Victims”, “CapZ-get-done-wishing” becuz I’m “winning Hands-Down” and you “Hit-Grounds” like your “Canes-Not-Felt”//

^^OK

my Block-Is-***Hot the Hood-Is-with-The-Devil like "malfunctioned-magnets"-..u "wouldnt-grip-the-metal"/
need more iron in ya BLOOD..ill squirt "BulletZ-in-Your-VesselZ"//

^^Cool

bringing ya clique el' get cha' MarkZ-spilled-on-their-faceZ
RUSH-CapZ*.."Spark-steel-With-Impatience"/
getting high on my punchlines? u flipping-on-the-*StreetZ* is like "CartwheelZ-on-the-PavementZ"//

^^Not bad

allow me to send CapZ to the “reaper-at-wunce”, give u n your man-a-tip if i pack a banana-clip “im skeetin-a-bunch”, in da backs where im keeping-CapZ- so like '****narcoleptic in pools “u’ll be 'sleepin-in-a-TrunkZ”/(da police'll be sweepin fa MonthZ!)//

^^Nah


CAPZ:
``C'mon Mako Ya Lyrics Like 'Science Fiction' Shits Jus Fake-Yo!``
``I Shake-Hos Like U, N Ma Punches Will Drop U With Only 1 KO!!`` 1

^^OK opener, 2nd line coulda been better..

``Ye......I Take-Votes...N Like 'Kids Doin Drugs' Son Jus Say-No!!``
``Dis Gay-Blows N I'll Move Da 'Audience' Cuz Ma Spits Make-O's!!`` [Ohhh] Mako 2

^^Aight

``N Ma 'Actions' Jus Skip-Verbs.....N Im Well Ready Ta Rip-Herbs!``
``Word..Ima Do What Ya Do So Like Ya Avi I'll Jus Flip U Da Bird!!``

^^OK

``Yo U Betta Not B Frontin Cuz I'll Get Ya 'Mouth' So Best Believe U'll B Shuttin!``
``N Dude Mus B Runnin......Cuz Jus Look At His 'Sig' His 'Record' Means Nuttin!!`

^^Not bad

``Ima Damage Ya 'Thoughtz' So Now Who Thinks-Slow? Mako
Can Wish Da 'Sky' Is 'Water' But He Still Cant Drink-Flows! N Dis
Bitch Gona Have Mo 'Hits' Den 'Titanic’ Cuz He'll Sink-Blows!!``

^^Liked this

```O'hhh....N 'M' Aint Eva Gona Have 'A's N Ks' If He Bought-A-Gat!!`` [M A K O...Aks]
``CapZ Da Name N Dunno Y Dis Fag Spitin He Prolly Thought-Gays-Rap!!'

^^Not really feelin this bar..

``I'll-Beat-U N Plz Chump U 'Wuz Told Ta Suck' So I Can Tell-He-Blows!``
``N I Thought I Wuz Battlin U But U Tryin Ta Have A 'Structure' Like L Nino!`

^^OK

``Man Dude U Cant Spit N If U Actully 'Won Battles' I Bet Dey Wuz Lame-Wins-Bitch!``
``N C'mon Only Reason Y Peeps Even Readin Ya Verse Cuz Ma Fuckin Name-In-It!!!``

^^Cool


Consistency/Structure: CapZ
Creativity: mako
Enjoyable: CapZ
Flow: CapZ
Metaphors: mako
Multies: TIE
Personal: CapZ
Punches: CapZ
Vocabulary: mako
Wordplay: CapZ
Overall: CapZ

CapZ gets this. mako your structure was all over the place, and you lacked flow, and some parts of your verse were hard to read and understand. Keep uppin'....PEACE

[L_Nino]

MAKO:

You bout to hit a train like the bears-backer, and miss the big screen like scared-actors/
after my blades "crack" your face larger than joe rogan on "fear-factor"//

^^^ Liked the first line...2nd was weak...Ok opener..

so don't front like you've got hammers to clap, becuz if we meet in the streets i'd 'eat CapZ dogs like “animal snacks”/
as a matter o'fact, it'll cost your life , cuz ya'll couldn't “ride ova two wheels of steel” on 'top of bikes'//

^^^ Straight...

its like great danes-on-elfs and they get “Torn-to-Pieces” and i'll get more- facetious the way i leave them like “Ground Beef” just “Raw-and-Speechless”/
that's how i “dead-the-talkin” like i put
“death-in-your-mouth” in war-CapZ future is bleak-and..i'ma give you a “Purpose to be Scared” like a “Horror-Thesis”//

^^^ Ehhh...

u tellin me dat gump-is-da-best? 1 loss I m in a *"empire state" battling me iz a "jump-to-your-deaths"/
if a cat-hating I m “slumping-em-next”... “tie your dawgs up like a “pair-a-boots”, “rip u a part” w/o “tearing-roots”, becuz **'goin sky diving' iz da only tyme “CapZ-shoots”//

^^^ I was actaully diggin' this bar till I seen ya explaination for the last part....Aight bar..

my “game's-top-shelf” like “spring-board-dunks” while you “lames-catch-welts” when my beams-on-chumps and when you die..you're “Destined to be Alone” wit a “Name-like-CapZ”/
dog your “pain's-not-felt” like “Paralyzed-Gun-Victims”, “CapZ-get-done-wishing” becuz I’m “winning Hands-Down” and you “Hit-Grounds” like your “Canes-Not-Felt”//

^^^ So so...

my Block-Is-***Hot the Hood-Is-with-The-Devil like "malfunctioned-magnets"-..u "wouldnt-grip-the-metal"/
need more iron in ya BLOOD..ill squirt "BulletZ-in-Your-VesselZ"//

^^^ Nice...

bringing ya clique el' get cha' MarkZ-spilled-on-their-faceZ
RUSH-CapZ*.."Spark-steel-With-Impatience"/
getting high on my punchlines? u flipping-on-the-*StreetZ* is like "CartwheelZ-on-the-PavementZ"//

^^^ Liked this too...

allow me to send CapZ to the “reaper-at-wunce”, give u n your man-a-tip if i pack a banana-clip “im skeetin-a-bunch”, in da backs where im keeping-CapZ- so like '****narcoleptic in pools “u’ll be 'sleepin-in-a-TrunkZ”/(da police'll be sweepin fa MonthZ!)//

^^^ Fell off wit' this closer though...



CAPZ:

``C'mon Mako Ya Lyrics Like 'Science Fiction' Shits Jus Fake-Yo!``
``I Shake-Hos Like U, N Ma Punches Will Drop U With Only 1 KO!!`` 1

^^^ Ehhh...

``Ye......I Take-Votes...N Like 'Kids Doin Drugs' Son Jus Say-No!!``
``Dis Gay-Blows N I'll Move Da 'Audience' Cuz Ma Spits Make-O's!!`` [Ohhh] Mako 2

^^^ Lovin' the first line...2nd was a disappointment to how the bar was set up...

``N Ma 'Actions' Jus Skip-Verbs.....N Im Well Ready Ta Rip-Herbs!``
``Word..Ima Do What Ya Do So Like Ya Avi I'll Jus Flip U Da Bird!!``

^^^ Decent personal...But not really a hard hit...

``Yo U Betta Not B Frontin Cuz I'll Get Ya 'Mouth' So Best Believe U'll B Shuttin!``
``N Dude Mus B Runnin......Cuz Jus Look At His 'Sig' His 'Record' Means Nuttin!!`

^^^ Damn!!...

``Ima Damage Ya 'Thoughtz' So Now Who Thinks-Slow? Mako
Can Wish Da 'Sky' Is 'Water' But He Still Cant Drink-Flows! N Dis
Bitch Gona Have Mo 'Hits' Den 'Titanic’ Cuz He'll Sink-Blows!!``

^^^ Ok...

```O'hhh....N 'M' Aint Eva Gona Have 'A's N Ks' If He Bought-A-Gat!!`` [M A K O...Aks]
``CapZ Da Name N Dunno Y Dis Fag Spitin He Prolly Thought-Gays-Rap!!'

^^^ Creative on the first line...2nd line, you fell off...

``I'll-Beat-U N Plz Chump U 'Wuz Told Ta Suck' So I Can Tell-He-Blows!``
``N I Thought I Wuz Battlin U But U Tryin Ta Have A 'Structure' Like L Nino!`

^^^ Hahaha...

``Man Dude U Cant Spit N If U Actully 'Won Battles' I Bet Dey Wuz Lame-Wins-Bitch!``
``N C'mon Only Reason Y Peeps Even Readin Ya Verse Cuz Ma Fuckin Name-In-It!!!``

^^^ DAMN!! :cool:


Consistency/Structure: M
Creativity: TIE
Enjoyable: C
Flow: C
Metaphors: M
Multies: TIE
Personal: C
Punches: C
Vocabulary: M
Wordplay: C
Overall: CapZ


VOTE: CAPZ

[Mc-Itty]

Mako....ILL MULTIS!! ...sort ya structure though, overal shit was dope!!

CapZ...short an tight..shit was class

Aight fo a proper break down cuz some these votes is bullshit ..(fuckin dickryders lmao) ..mean peeps givin elements ta peeps hu dont even hav shit in their verses...damn lmao aight:

Structure: Capz
Personals: Tie
Punches: Capz
Flow: Capz
Vocab: Tie
Creativity: Capz
Enjoyable: Tie
Wordplay: Capz
Multis: Mako

Shit was close, y'all shud hav same amount of bars ta make this ish fair...i can see y peeps gave the punches vote ta Mako cuz he had mo lines...shit doesnt mean he had the hotter punches though...Was a real hot read, one the illest battles i read, close - ya both tied a lotta shit but cordin ta elements..

Vote: Capz

[Inevitable]

Capz wins 5-4.

*CLOSED