Ripshit vs. AJC90 (6-0 KO)

[RipShit]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....0925#post130925 (http://showthread.php?p=130925#post130925)
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....1245#post131245 (showthread.php?p=131245#post131245)

No hate votes, feeding, dick riding
First to 5 votes, or 3-0 = KO
5 bars only, good luck


This shit be child play, put this bitch back to bed
My Osh Kosh verses drillin your Gerber head
You made the mistake of respondin yes, I drop the diss and progress
Suggest you take a rest like this be a bed without the break-fast
I'm rockin you to sleep, then I'm tossin the cradle
I'm scoopin up a win as if my verse be a ladle
A fable be your legend, no fairy tale ending
No savior to save you, only fists I be sending
I'm not worried about the outcome, cause I've already won
Its like blinkin or thinkin, I look at you, you run

[AJC90]

You think your cool and think your smart but your an american druggy workin in the local wal-mart.
thats my motto at least i'm not stackin selves 2morrow.
i think you need to bow down and kiss the ring
and take a lesson from a muhammad ali as he is a boxin king.
Picture perfect as 2pac said but guess what
he is dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
there is a President out there and he has had an affair with you coz you
look like a grizzly bear.
one last thing your not cool hangin around with nick dieseal your not worth a weasle

[Mc-Itty]

Shit was an even match, i seen both y'all the excat same level...

erm..i think u both shud NEVER IN UR LIFE rhyme things like ring..king...head..dead...unless ur workin on a multi...Overall both sides need improvement but ima go wit RipShit on dis..only cuz he had better structure...

Keep elevatin
WuN xXx

[TzVe Em]

shiTZ man gtz sum multiez on gd shit.. gd wrk guyz, keep ELEVERATING.

but RIPSHIT all catz,, GET DA LINKZ GUYZ!

[chappy]

You both usin simple rhymes, so up your vocab, n try to add some harder punches n multi's.

Ripshit gets my vote as he had better flow and vocab. holla if you need my vote in cats.

[L_Nino]

RIPSHIT:

This shit be child play, put this bitch back to bed
My Osh Kosh verses drillin your Gerber head

^^^ Ehhh...

You made the mistake of respondin yes, I drop the diss and progress
Suggest you take a rest like this be a bed without the break-fast

^^^ Decent..

I'm rockin you to sleep, then I'm tossin the cradle
I'm scoopin up a win as if my verse be a ladle

^^^ Aint feelin' this....

A fable be your legend, no fairy tale ending
No savior to save you, only fists I be sending

^^^ Ok...

I'm not worried about the outcome, cause I've already won
Its like blinkin or thinkin, I look at you, you run

^^^ Weak closer...


AJC90:

You think your cool and think your smart but your an american druggy workin in the local wal-mart.

^^^ Ehhh...

thats my motto at least i'm not stackin selves 2morrow.
i think you need to bow down and kiss the ring
and take a lesson from a muhammad ali as he is a boxin king.
Picture perfect as 2pac said but guess what
he is dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
there is a President out there and he has had an affair with you coz you
look like a grizzly bear.
one last thing your not cool hangin around with nick dieseal your not worth a weasle

^^^ EVERYTHING was weak in this verse b...I read it a couple times to find somethin' nice to say but, sorry....You should make ya lines longer (for better flow)/add personals/punches...


Consistency/Structure: TIE
Creativity: TIE
Enjoyable: TIE
Flow: RS
Metaphors: TIE
Multies: TIE
Personal: TIE
Punches: TIE
Vocabulary: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Overall: RipShit....Close/Weak battle..Both need to elevate..


VOTE: RIPSHIT

[CapZ]

Weak Battle Ya


Punches- Tie
Personals- Tie
Flow- Rs
Creative- Rs
Enjoyed- Rs
Multie- Tie
Met's- Tie
Vocab- Tie
Wordplay- Tie

Overall - Ripshit... Ehhh Both Need Ta Elevate Tho

`1`

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

This shit be child play, put this bitch back to bed
My Osh Kosh verses drillin your Gerber head

dats a str-8 opener but not da best........weak punch

You made the mistake of respondin yes, I drop the diss and progress
Suggest you take a rest like this be a bed without the break-fast

another weak punch......wasnt feelin dat

I'm rockin you to sleep, then I'm tossin the cradle
I'm scoopin up a win as if my verse be a ladle

ummmm.....better

A fable be your legend, no fairy tale ending
No savior to save you, only fists I be sending

nice....

I'm not worried about the outcome, cause I've already won
Its like blinkin or thinkin, I look at you, you run

weak outro.....


You think your cool and think your smart but your an american druggy workin in the local wal-mart.
thats my motto at least i'm not stackin selves 2morrow.

weak opener...very

i think you need to bow down and kiss the ring
and take a lesson from a muhammad ali as he is a boxin king.

wtf??......was dat a punch...

Picture perfect as 2pac said but guess what
he is dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ummmm......again wtf???

there is a President out there and he has had an affair with you coz you
look like a grizzly bear.
one last thing your not cool hangin around with nick dieseal your not worth a weasle

omg...dawggie...u need alot of work....

RipShit Yo verse was weak......ummmm.....

AJC90 Dawggie u need a lot of practice....yo verse was da weakest[/b]

Consistency/Structure: Rip
Creativity: Neither
Enjoyable: ummmm......Neither...but ill go wit Rip
Flow: Rip
Metaphors: Neither
Multies: Neither
Personal: Rip
Punches: Tie
Vocabulary: Neither
Wordplay: omg.....Neither
Overall: RipShit

My Vote::::Rip......Very Weak Battle.......Yall Need Practice.

[Zac the Ripper]

The breakdown:

RipShit:

This shit be child play, put this bitch back to bed
My Osh Kosh verses drillin your Gerber head

not a bad opener.. little simple though.

You made the mistake of respondin yes, I drop the diss and progress
Suggest you take a rest like this be a bed without the break-fast

once again, kinda simple...

I'm rockin you to sleep, then I'm tossin the cradle
I'm scoopin up a win as if my verse be a ladle

uh...

A fable be your legend, no fairy tale ending
No savior to save you, only fists I be sending

simple

I'm not worried about the outcome, cause I've already won
Its like blinkin or thinkin, I look at you, you run

good ender, but simple.

AJC90:

You think your cool and think your smart but your an american druggy workin in the local wal-mart.
thats my motto at least i'm not stackin selves 2morrow.

uh...

i think you need to bow down and kiss the ring
and take a lesson from a muhammad ali as he is a boxin king.

made no sense...

Picture perfect as 2pac said but guess what
he is dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

filler

there is a President out there and he has had an affair with you coz you
look like a grizzly bear.

uh...

one last thing your not cool hangin around with nick dieseal your not worth a weasle

uh...

Final thoughts:

Ripshit: just elevate. not a bad battle on your part, though.

AJC90: I'm gonna say this as nicely as I can.... WTF WAS THAT? dude, you need some practice.

The Categories:

fuck it... RipShit on all.

The vote:

RIPSHIT

[Inevitable]

Ripshit wins 6-0 KO.

*CLOSED