slimshadyLP vs. Raider (0-3 KO)

[slimshadyLP]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....0117#post130117 (showthread.php?p=130117#post130117)
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....0167#post130167 (showthread.php?p=130167#post130167)


unlim lines/bars
1 round
no d/r, biting and such.

KKZ can vote since this is a crew member battle.

ya said you would go first so ill be waiting........

[raider]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11123
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10515

here we go!

Battlin slim? Be like 'hittin a dutch' cuz imma be 'smokin-a-herb'
Dem 'garbage' lyrics yuh brought belong where your momz is on her 'work nightz'.... 'out-onda-curb'!!!
raider is livin pro0f dat slim aint even half-hard…bitch-watch
I'm ready 2 make dis new comer ‘re-tire', lyke ‘nascar-pit-stops’!!!
raider put a halt-to-yah-phony-shit, yah faulty-flow-blown-ta-bits
Must be 'crossed wit a mime' cuz your audio's-dont-exist!!
raider is neva-bent, cuz I`m colossal… it's clearly evident
slim shady sicker than my? Only when I export him poisonous medicine!
I admit… yur an insatiable-pro, yet raider still fatal-wid-flow
slim a ‘fake sucka’... like dolls wit inflatable-throats
When i waz 8, mah game was better than yours... like someone filled my craddle-wid-blow
Slim juss speak-only-nice, cuz he throw no punches… and acts like a preacher-in-fightes (Clearly reps Disciples!)
Thinks hes da armored leader-of-knights buh I'm kickin his ass back to tha ‘80s’ like in the ‘Heat-Of-The-Night’!!!!
I wouldn’t advise yah`ll to buy tha shit he’s sellin-yuh-folks...Juss read dis coward`s-dull-rhymez
Cuz knockin' down telephone-poles is da only way slim drops powerful-lines!!
I knoe dis kidd’s-scared-of-mah-verses, cuz mah spit’s-darin-N-worshipped
And tha only tyme dis ‘DJ’ be ‘movin a crowd’ is when he yells “its an Arabian-person”!!!
raider got dis shit on lock… Spittin science? More like kinked-ebonics
Ok, we friends…buh when I ‘give yuh da finger’ It aint no pinky-promise!!
raider Snipin-at-yuh-boy….as ‘holy’ as Christ-reppin`
Slim-steppin? Quick ta buy a ‘tyson’-chew-toy’ and call it a ‘mic’-presence!!
Fuckin up raider?...Shut yah mouth until mah pants-get-unzippin
Cuz I`m stopping dis ‘DJ’s system’ like yearly ‘cancelled-subscriptions’!!!

[slimshadyLP]

Funny ya mention disciples when Raiders reppin a dead football team, ya couldnt "score" a "touchdown" even if mah mom WAS out on da street,
too hot to handle ya "fumble" ya "balls" and "miss" the "pass" like you were covered in vaseline, the only way you could shut me down is pressin Ctrl, Alt, Delete//

Im naturally made and picked with skill like ripe fruit, ya ride Zacs dick and let him choose which crew to join like indian flutes,
bein in a seating compartment is the closest youll ever be to a rap booth, ya filled with chemicals like shampoo, cuz ya raps is artificial like bitches with fake boobs//

My rhymes crush Raider like the sound a doritos, cuz "spitting" waters ya best "fluid" "flow", cuz i got this fag scared to death like puppies at dog shows,
like a unsolved murder ya beatin me's just case closed, ya wouldnt hav any flow even if ya swallowed Beethovens gloves and his piano//

It appears Raiders 3 buds are closely knit, bitch ya know ya gay cuz when ya try and let em go they snap back like elastic rubberbands on his wrists,
Like 50, Buck, an Banks this the Gay-Unit, combine they names and whaddya git, The 'R'apid 'J'ack-off 'B'attallion, with 'G'ay 'E'ternal, 'R'elationships//

[/B]EXPLANTIONS
the only way you could shut me down is pressin Ctrl, Alt, Delete//
^^^ pressin those buttons on ur computer will bring up the shutdown button

ya ride Zacs dick and let him choose which crew to join like indian flutes,
^^^Zac made decisions for Raider to join TUE.

ya wouldnt hav any flow even if ya swallowed Beethovens gloves and his piano//
^^^Beethoven had FLOW on the piano.

The 'R'apid 'J'ack-off 'B'attallion, with 'G'ay 'E'ternal, 'R'elationships//
^^^Raider has 3 friends that he knows well o nthis site. I used the first letter on all there names and combined it make a that^^^. look at em. 1. RJB 2. GE=ghost emperor 3. R=raider.[B]

any other explanations just ask.
VOTEZ!!!!

[JD da MC]

Consistency/Structure: SSLP
Creativity: R
Enjoyable: R
Flow: R
Metaphors: SSLP
Multies: SSLP
Personal: SSLP
Punches: R
Vocabulary: R
Wordplay: R
Overall: Raider, he had better punches and flow

[Zac the Ripper]

the breakdown:

raider:

Battlin slim? Be like 'hittin a dutch' cuz imma be 'smokin-a-herb'
Dem 'garbage' lyrics yuh brought belong where your momz is on her 'work
nightz'.... 'out-onda-curb'!!!

lol... awesome opener.

raider is livin pro0f dat slim aint even half-hard…bitch-watch
I'm ready 2 make dis new comer ‘re-tire', lyke ‘nascar-pit-stops’!!!

good

raider put a halt-to-yah-phony-shit, yah faulty-flow-blown-ta-bits
Must be 'crossed wit a mime' cuz your audio's-dont-exist!!

okay.

raider is neva-bent, cuz I`m colossal… it's clearly evident
slim shady sicker than my? Only when I export him poisonous medicine!

lol

I admit… yur an insatiable-pro, yet raider still fatal-wid-flow
slim a ‘fake sucka’... like dolls wit inflatable-throats
When i waz 8, mah game was better than yours... like someone filled my craddle-wid-blow

last line kinda fell off.. rest was good though.

Slim juss speak-only-nice, cuz he throw no punches… and acts like a preacher-in-fightes (Clearly reps Disciples!)
Thinks hes da armored leader-of-knights buh I'm kickin his ass back to tha ‘80s’ like in the ‘Heat-Of-The-Night’!!!!

good

I wouldn’t advise yah`ll to buy tha shit he’s sellin-yuh-folks...Juss read dis coward`s-dull-rhymez
Cuz knockin' down telephone-poles is da only way slim drops powerful-lines!!

lol

I knoe dis kidd’s-scared-of-mah-verses, cuz mah spit’s-darin-N-worshipped
And tha only tyme dis ‘DJ’ be ‘movin a crowd’ is when he yells “its an Arabian-person”!!!

cool

raider got dis shit on lock… Spittin science? More like kinked-ebonics
Ok, we friends…buh when I ‘give yuh da finger’ It aint no pinky-promise!!

good

raider Snipin-at-yuh-boy….as ‘holy’ as Christ-reppin`
Slim-steppin? Quick ta buy a ‘tyson’-chew-toy’ and call it a ‘mic’-presence!!

good

Fuckin up raider?...Shut yah mouth until mah pants-get-unzippin
Cuz I`m stopping dis ‘DJ’s system’ like yearly ‘cancelled-subscriptions’!!!

not the best line you came up with before, but a good ender.

SSLP:

Funny ya mention disciples when Raiders reppin a dead football team, ya couldnt "score" a "touchdown" even if mah mom WAS out on da street,
too hot to handle ya "fumble" ya "balls" and "miss" the "pass" like you were covered in vaseline, the only way you could shut me down is pressin Ctrl, Alt, Delete//

feed, but who the fuck am I to talk? good opener

Im naturally made and picked with skill like ripe fruit, ya ride Zacs dick and let him choose which crew to join like indian flutes,
bein in a seating compartment is the closest youll ever be to a rap booth, ya filled with chemicals like shampoo, cuz ya raps is artificial like bitches with fake boobs//

a good line, but just for people who wonder, I wanna set this straight. I asked raider and RJB to come with me to the tue and told them to let me know if they didn't want to. once again, good line.

My rhymes crush Raider like the sound a doritos, cuz "spitting" waters ya best "fluid" "flow", cuz i got this fag scared to death like puppies at dog shows,
like a unsolved murder ya beatin me's just case closed, ya wouldnt hav any flow even if ya swallowed Beethovens gloves and his piano//

uh........

It appears Raiders 3 buds are closely knit, bitch ya know ya gay cuz when ya try and let em go they snap back like elastic rubberbands on his wrists,
Like 50, Buck, an Banks this the Gay-Unit, combine they names and whaddya git, The 'R'apid 'J'ack-off 'B'attallion, with 'G'ay 'E'ternal, 'R'elationships//

uh... a decent line, but not a good closer.

final thoughts:

raider: you did good, just work a little on your flow, I found myself falling away from a flow a few times reading it. but that may just be me.

sslp: you've gotten a lot better with your lines, but you still need to practice more.

Categories:

Consistency/Structure: slim
Creativity: raider
Enjoyable: tie
Flow: slim
Metaphors: raider
Multies: tie
Personal: tie
Punches: raider
Vocabulary: tie
Wordplay: raider
Overall: raider

the vote:

RAIDER

[CapZ]

the breakdown:

raider:

Battlin slim? Be like 'hittin a dutch' cuz imma be 'smokin-a-herb'
Dem 'garbage' lyrics yuh brought belong where your momz is on her 'work
nightz'.... 'out-onda-curb'!!!

lol... awesome opener.

raider is livin pro0f dat slim aint even half-hard…bitch-watch
I'm ready 2 make dis new comer ‘re-tire', lyke ‘nascar-pit-stops’!!!

good

raider put a halt-to-yah-phony-shit, yah faulty-flow-blown-ta-bits
Must be 'crossed wit a mime' cuz your audio's-dont-exist!!

okay.

raider is neva-bent, cuz I`m colossal… it's clearly evident
slim shady sicker than my? Only when I export him poisonous medicine!

lol

I admit… yur an insatiable-pro, yet raider still fatal-wid-flow
slim a ‘fake sucka’... like dolls wit inflatable-throats
When i waz 8, mah game was better than yours... like someone filled my craddle-wid-blow

last line kinda fell off.. rest was good though.

Slim juss speak-only-nice, cuz he throw no punches… and acts like a preacher-in-fightes (Clearly reps Disciples!)
Thinks hes da armored leader-of-knights buh I'm kickin his ass back to tha ‘80s’ like in the ‘Heat-Of-The-Night’!!!!

good

I wouldn’t advise yah`ll to buy tha shit he’s sellin-yuh-folks...Juss read dis coward`s-dull-rhymez
Cuz knockin' down telephone-poles is da only way slim drops powerful-lines!!

lol

I knoe dis kidd’s-scared-of-mah-verses, cuz mah spit’s-darin-N-worshipped
And tha only tyme dis ‘DJ’ be ‘movin a crowd’ is when he yells “its an Arabian-person”!!!

cool

raider got dis shit on lock… Spittin science? More like kinked-ebonics
Ok, we friends…buh when I ‘give yuh da finger’ It aint no pinky-promise!!

good

raider Snipin-at-yuh-boy….as ‘holy’ as Christ-reppin`
Slim-steppin? Quick ta buy a ‘tyson’-chew-toy’ and call it a ‘mic’-presence!!

good

Fuckin up raider?...Shut yah mouth until mah pants-get-unzippin
Cuz I`m stopping dis ‘DJ’s system’ like yearly ‘cancelled-subscriptions’!!!

not the best line you came up with before, but a good ender.

SSLP:

Funny ya mention disciples when Raiders reppin a dead football team, ya couldnt "score" a "touchdown" even if mah mom WAS out on da street,
too hot to handle ya "fumble" ya "balls" and "miss" the "pass" like you were covered in vaseline, the only way you could shut me down is pressin Ctrl, Alt, Delete//

feed, but who the fuck am I to talk? good opener

Im naturally made and picked with skill like ripe fruit, ya ride Zacs dick and let him choose which crew to join like indian flutes,
bein in a seating compartment is the closest youll ever be to a rap booth, ya filled with chemicals like shampoo, cuz ya raps is artificial like bitches with fake boobs//

a good line, but just for people who wonder, I wanna set this straight. I asked raider and RJB to come with me to the tue and told them to let me know if they didn't want to. once again, good line.

My rhymes crush Raider like the sound a doritos, cuz "spitting" waters ya best "fluid" "flow", cuz i got this fag scared to death like puppies at dog shows,
like a unsolved murder ya beatin me's just case closed, ya wouldnt hav any flow even if ya swallowed Beethovens gloves and his piano//

uh........

It appears Raiders 3 buds are closely knit, bitch ya know ya gay cuz when ya try and let em go they snap back like elastic rubberbands on his wrists,
Like 50, Buck, an Banks this the Gay-Unit, combine they names and whaddya git, The 'R'apid 'J'ack-off 'B'attallion, with 'G'ay 'E'ternal, 'R'elationships//

uh... a decent line, but not a good closer.

final thoughts:

raider: you did good, just work a little on your flow, I found myself falling away from a flow a few times reading it. but that may just be me.

sslp: you've gotten a lot better with your lines, but you still need to practice more.

Categories:

Consistency/Structure: slim
Creativity: raider
Enjoyable: tie
Flow: slim
Metaphors: raider
Multies: tie
Personal: tie
Punches: raider
Vocabulary: tie
Wordplay: raider
Overall: raider

the vote:

RAIDER

my vote^^ jus like that agreed..

`1`

[Inevitable]

Raider wins 3-0 KO

*CLOSED