chappy Vs. L_Nino (0-3 KO)

[chappy]

5bar spit,
No crew votes,
No Dick riding,
No hate votes,
No feeding,
No biting,
No recycling.
1st to 5 or 3-0=KO.

My links:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....9236#post129236 (http://showthread....9236#post129236)

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10904 (http://showthread.php?t=10904)

You a cheatin bitch, comin out with your ‘two-in-one-bars’,
Callin T.I a biter when you were one, prolly ‘chewin-on-ours’*.
You gon’ spend all your life in the ‘recycling-hall-of-shame’,
‘Cos you can’t do shit, only show that ‘reciting’s-all-your-game’.
See you weren’t even hot at that, now you a ‘faded-biter’,
With the talent you got, you can only hope to be a ‘jaded-writer’.
You couldn’t spit heat even if you carried round a flame-thrower,
Lookin back on this you’ll see you’ll always be Pro-‘claimed-lower’.
You could be a lyrical waiter, and you still won’t be ‘servin-me’
See I’m a rhyming great, while your ass still be ‘learnin-b’.

This is weak, i took ages doin this n it's still weak, got a bit of writers block-sorry man


*He's been accused of biting, or has bit before.

[L_Nino]

1) Chappy is lame, Doesnt use HIS OWN HEAD, jus' likes to GIVE BRAIN...Now we know he like SUCKIN' DICK cuz HIS LIPS is how HE GOT HIS NICKNAME / (Chappy/Chapped lips)
NO COOL J's, Minus one L and I'm takin' JACK THE RIPPER's NAME how I RAPE & RIP DAMES...EXERCISE still COULDNT GET YOU FIT mayne, Do like 4th STRING QUARTERBACKS and QUIT gay cuz round here you gettin' NO PLAY IN THIS GAME /

2) YOU a PUSSY wit' ONE LIFE, NEVER FACED NOBODY DOPE otherwise YOU WOULDNT HAVE WON NINE...Like X-X-L PANTS, YOU COULDNT COME TIGHT & JUDGIN' BY YA WINS, YOU HAD NUTHIN' but BUMFIGHTS /
AINT YA KIN but YOU GETTIN' SONNED tyke, YOU still COULDNT SHINE wearin' DIAMONDS IN THE SUNLIGHT...You should ENVY ME and if Chappy's RAP's MVP then the VOTES WASN'T DONE RIGHT /

3) Ho plz, YOU ON A TEAM WIT' A BITER so of course YOU GON' CHEAT...& ya both weak, HE STOLE A VERSE & HIS NAME, My shit'll BRING 'EM OUT but tell ya homie, T.I. that YOU DONT KNOW ME /
Ya verse was ANESTHIC made EVERYBODY GO SLEEP & like LEAKY FAUCETS, YA FLOW WEAK...You dont know beef till you really in I.C.U & the only FRESH AIR you gettin' is comin'from the TUBES IN YA NOSE b /

4) Must LOVE ANAL SEX wit' YA MOUTH cuz YOU SPIT ASS...Act bad? I'll have YOU SEEIN' RED & YOU AINT LOOKIN' AT YA SIG FAG /
Kid's wack, Only CLAP he get is a BITCH SLAP or do like STRONG WINDS to TOUPEE's & PUSH HIS WIG BACK...And have you screamin'"GIMME A BREAK" but I AINT ADVERTISIN' KIT-KATS then BURY YOU wit' cha shit raps so maybe then PEOPLE'll DIG THAT /

[Zac the Ripper]

the breakdown:

chappy:

You a cheatin bitch, comin out with your ‘two-in-one-bars’,
Callin T.I a biter when you were one, prolly ‘chewin-on-ours’*.

an okay opener... youv'e done better.

You gon’ spend all your life in the ‘recycling-hall-of-shame’,
‘Cos you can’t do shit, only show that ‘reciting’s-all-your-game’.

dope.

See you weren’t even hot at that, now you a ‘faded-biter’,
With the talent you got, you can only hope to be a ‘jaded-writer’.

okay.

You couldn’t spit heat even if you carried round a flame-thrower,
Lookin back on this you’ll see you’ll always be Pro-‘claimed-lower’.

thought you had a set up with the first line... the second dragged it down.

You could be a lyrical waiter, and you still won’t be ‘servin-me’
See I’m a rhyming great, while your ass still be ‘learnin-b’.

a little simple, but a decent ender

Nino:

1) Chappy is lame, Doesnt use HIS OWN HEAD, jus' likes to GIVE BRAIN...Now we know he like SUCKIN' DICK cuz HIS LIPS is how HE GOT HIS NICKNAME / (Chappy/Chapped lips)
NO COOL J's, Minus one L and I'm takin' JACK THE RIPPER's NAME how I RAPE & RIP DAMES...EXERCISE still COULDNT GET YOU FIT mayne, Do like 4th STRING QUARTERBACKS and QUIT gay cuz round here you gettin' NO PLAY IN THIS GAME /

opener kicked ass. I've seen better from you, but this was dope.

2) YOU a PUSSY wit' ONE LIFE, NEVER FACED NOBODY DOPE otherwise YOU WOULDNT HAVE WON NINE...Like X-X-L PANTS, YOU COULDNT COME TIGHT & JUDGIN' BY YA WINS, YOU HAD NUTHIN' but BUMFIGHTS /
AINT YA KIN but YOU GETTIN' SONNED tyke, YOU still COULDNT SHINE wearin' DIAMONDS IN THE SUNLIGHT...You should ENVY ME and if Chappy's RAP's MVP then the VOTES WASN'T DONE RIGHT /

good line... kinda cutting it close to biting though. (listen to the hook of Hate It or Love It feat. The Game and G-Unit [the remix on the massacre] while you read this bar)

3) Ho plz, YOU ON A TEAM WIT' A BITER so of course YOU GON' CHEAT...& ya both weak, HE STOLE A VERSE & HIS NAME, My shit'll BRING 'EM OUT but tell ya homie, T.I. that YOU DONT KNOW ME /
Ya verse was ANESTHIC made EVERYBODY GO SLEEP & like LEAKY FAUCETS, YA FLOW WEAK...You dont know beef till you really in I.C.U & the only FRESH AIR you gettin' is comin'from the TUBES IN YA NOSE b /

first half was dope. the second was too, but it seemed almost filler.

4) Must LOVE ANAL SEX wit' YA MOUTH cuz YOU SPIT ASS...Act bad? I'll have YOU SEEIN' RED & YOU AINT LOOKIN' AT YA SIG FAG /
Kid's wack, Only CLAP he get is a BITCH SLAP or do like STRONG WINDS to TOUPEE's & PUSH HIS WIG BACK...And have you screamin'"GIMME A BREAK" but I AINT ADVERTISIN' KIT-KATS then BURY YOU wit' cha shit raps so maybe then PEOPLE'll DIG THAT /

XD un-fucking-believable ender

Final thoughts:

Chappy: you've done a lot better... please tell me this was an off day.

Nino: you seemed to be going easy on chappy, but still kicked ass. this wasn't your best either.

Categories:

Structure / Creativity: Chappy
Flow: Nino
Multies: Nino
Personal: Nino
Punches: Nino
Metaphors: tie
Overall: Nino

The vote:

L_NINO

[CapZ]

nice battle


PUNCHES- L
PERSONALS- L
Met's- Tie both had it
Multies- C
Creative- L
ENJOYED- L
INTRO/OUTRO- TIE
WORDPLAY- TIE
VOCAB- TIE

OVERALL- L NINO Just came harder good battle

`1`

[Syze]

Chappy:

"You a cheatin bitch, comin out with your ‘two-in-one-bars’,
Callin T.I a biter when you were one, prolly ‘chewin-on-ours’*."

^Quite nice.

" You gon’ spend all your life in the ‘recycling-hall-of-shame’,
‘Cos you can’t do shit, only show that ‘reciting’s-all-your-game’."

^Rhymed well, punch wasn't great.

" See you weren’t even hot at that, now you a ‘faded-biter’,
With the talent you got, you can only hope to be a ‘jaded-writer’."

^Decent.

" You couldn’t spit heat even if you carried round a flame-thrower,
Lookin back on this you’ll see you’ll always be Pro-‘claimed-lower’."

^Again, decent.

" You could be a lyrical waiter, and you still won’t be ‘servin-me’
See I’m a rhyming great, while your ass still be ‘learnin-b’."

^Theme of the day - decent - some nice rhymes here but no great punches...

L:

"1) Chappy is lame, Doesnt use HIS OWN HEAD, jus' likes to GIVE BRAIN...Now we know he like SUCKIN' DICK cuz HIS LIPS is how HE GOT HIS NICKNAME / (Chappy/Chapped lips)
NO COOL J's, Minus one L and I'm takin' JACK THE RIPPER's NAME how I RAPE & RIP DAMES...EXERCISE still COULDNT GET YOU FIT mayne, Do like 4th STRING QUARTERBACKS and QUIT gay cuz round here you gettin' NO PLAY IN THIS GAME /"

^Nice.

"2) YOU a PUSSY wit' ONE LIFE, NEVER FACED NOBODY DOPE otherwise YOU WOULDNT HAVE WON NINE...Like X-X-L PANTS, YOU COULDNT COME TIGHT & JUDGIN' BY YA WINS, YOU HAD NUTHIN' but BUMFIGHTS /
AINT YA KIN but YOU GETTIN' SONNED tyke, YOU still COULDNT SHINE wearin' DIAMONDS IN THE SUNLIGHT...You should ENVY ME and if Chappy's RAP's MVP then the VOTES WASN'T DONE RIGHT /"

^Fire.

"3) Ho plz, YOU ON A TEAM WIT' A BITER so of course YOU GON' CHEAT...& ya both weak, HE STOLE A VERSE & HIS NAME, My shit'll BRING 'EM OUT but tell ya homie, T.I. that YOU DONT KNOW ME /
Ya verse was ANESTHIC made EVERYBODY GO SLEEP & like LEAKY FAUCETS, YA FLOW WEAK...You dont know beef till you really in I.C.U & the only FRESH AIR you gettin' is comin'from the TUBES IN YA NOSE b /"

^Okay...

"4) Must LOVE ANAL SEX wit' YA MOUTH cuz YOU SPIT ASS...Act bad? I'll have YOU SEEIN' RED & YOU AINT LOOKIN' AT YA SIG FAG /
Kid's wack, Only CLAP he get is a BITCH SLAP or do like STRONG WINDS to TOUPEE's & PUSH HIS WIG BACK...And have you screamin'"GIMME A BREAK" but I AINT ADVERTISIN' KIT-KATS then BURY YOU wit' cha shit raps so maybe then PEOPLE'll DIG THAT /"

^OMG!

Chappy it wasn't bad but Nino ripped this as usual...

[Inevitable]

L Nino wins 3-0 KO.

*CLOSED